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raririn
鬼畜的蘑菇._.
tutuhaha
root恩
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popner
Hi ~ Mod.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Pokie的Kiai在01:31:901结束改成在01:31:902结束

[Easy]
02:40:397 (1) - 转盘在02:44:070结束? Easy里长转盘紧跟note不太好(然后后面补note之类的就不一一细说

[Normal]
00:39:019 (4) - 这我觉得是1个圈再接slider http://puu.sh/x0Lj
02:55:090 (1) - 节操呢,懒得map空着不就好了
03:07:029 (4) - ctrl+j一下?

[Pokie]


[Insane]
鬼畜

Star & pian kd. GL~
Mystica
萌po
a32
from in-game pm
[General]
KIAI时间不一致 Insane最后一个时间点比其他的难度多1ms
[Easy]
01:07:029(2) - 这里clap应该放在01:06:723
01:27:417 - 这里空拍各种奇怪啊 不加个note?
02:05:193(2) 02:05:805(3) - 按照这一段附近的clap来看 应该加在02:05:499吧
02:08:560(1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏对新人来讲较难读,换两Slider好一些?
02:45:754(1) - 这个离Spinner太近了吧
[Normal]
01:07:029(4) - 把clap加在01:06:723?
01:58:458(7) - combo太长 加个NC
01:59:070(1) - Remove NC
02:05:805(4) - clap加在02:05:499
[Pokie]
Fine
[InsaneExtra]
00:46:519(1) - 这slider好猎奇
01:06:417(2) - 把clap加在01:06:723?
01:09:784(1,1,1,1) - 这梗挺好玩 虽然略难读 感觉比burai slider还难打怎么办
02:05:193(3) 02:05:805(4) - clap放在02:05:499?
02:38:560(3) - 你确定这不会被吐槽???
太鬼畜 瞎了
eikkaleyd
哈哈哈这和谐BG我笑翻了怎么办……2333

[General]
看到2ha的diff名没有?!不要在起跑起名线上输给别人!
要多中二有多中二 ;) 包您中二到满意

castling 王车易位
promotion 升变为后
swindles 逆转棋局
gambit 弃兵局
skewer 一子串击
——————————————————————————
好多浮云

[Insane]
00:10:703 (5) - 试试x280y252,不遮盖,而且头部对准前一个slider的尾部(顺便后一个1也移动一下
01:17:590 (3) - 我喜欢CTRL+R这个
01:26:008 (2) - ^,反正34都对称了
02:38:560 (3) - Nothing(咦
02:45:142 (4) - 推荐放在13连线中垂线上,和2也在一条直线上
awesome diff

[Pokie]
刷分难度【吃饼
02:42:540 (3,1) - 容易误解成1/1的间距
02:57:540 (1,2,1,2) - 朝向都一致不太好看,希望能两个一组换成相反朝向
03:10:091 (2) - CTRL+R吧

[Normal]
好鬼畜
00:39:019 (4) - 这个放红线很诡异,务必换白线上slider,而且你后面00:43:305 也没放东西嘛
00:53:100 (2) - 可删,这个diff里可删的note太多了,何必放满弄个4.5的normal呢,何必呢
01:23:101 (4) - 也是换白线,换发很多不提了
01:26:162 (5) - ^
后半段估计和前面一样一堆我要吐槽的多余note和红线slider……orz不写了,我想你也不太会改

E难度估计没什么好挑的
spboxer3

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. none~

Easy


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 多餘的綠線(雖然這不會影響到Ranked標準 但是我認為這個還是需要改 畢竟花不到多久時間):
    01:04:656
    02:05:575
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:42:846 (1) - 段落開頭~我建議加個finish會比較適合
  2. 01:02:438 - 到01:12:233 - 建議用50%~60%左右...
  3. 02:01:213 - 到02:11:009 - 同樣建議50%~60%
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:43:152 (2,4) - [suggestion] 把slider ball 對齊轉角處. 現在看起來有些偏差.

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 多餘的綠線(雖然這不會影響到Ranked標準 但是我認為這個還是需要改 畢竟花不到多久時間):
    02:05:576
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:42:846 (1) - 段落開頭處建議加個finish
  2. 01:02:438 - 到01:12:233 - 建議用50%~60%左右...
  3. 02:01:213 - 到02:11:009 - 同樣建議50%~60%
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 02:48:815 (3) - [suggestion] 調整slider ball在02:49:121 - 到折點處 像這樣

Pokie


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 多餘的綠線(雖然這不會影響到Ranked標準 但是我認為這個還是需要改 畢竟花不到多久時間):
    01:04:580 -
    01:05:805 -
    01:09:478 -
  2. 02:50:040 - break設置的位置和其他的diff不同 基本上我會建議用相同的...
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:02:438 - 到01:12:233 - 建議用50%~60%左右...
  2. 02:01:213 - 到02:11:009 - 同樣建議50%~60%
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 02:16:978 (1,2) - [suggestion] 是否把這個作成平行會比較好看些?
  2. 02:45:371 (1,1,2) - ※注意: spinner後面的text有壓住note...這會造成player很容易誤讀.

Insane


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 多餘的綠線(雖然這不會影響到Ranked標準 但是我認為這個還是需要改 畢竟花不到多久時間):
    00:08:560
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:02:438 - 到01:12:233 - 建議用50%~60%左右...
  2. 02:01:213 - 到02:11:009 - 同樣建議50%~60%
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:09:784 (1,1,1,1) - 呵呵 碉堡了... 注意阿 這個有機率被nuke掉的... 就某BAT之前跟我說的... slidertick能夠幫助讀圖 但是你這個slider沒有tick可以看位置 所以這有很大的機會被nuke...
  2. 02:38:560 (3,1) - 同樣是很危險的pattern... 雖然我真的覺得很神 但是... 你懂的>_>
    雖然是這樣說但是如果情況允許我還是會給過的... 畢竟這些都是神梗

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

論壇星沒辦法給 就給個普通的star吧...
Pokie
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed some thanks for moding update
x847606653
Hi.._.
嘛,just suggestions.

两种color combo有点瞎,考虑加一点?
02:50:040开始的break time都拉一样长度?

Easy
AR-1?
01:06:417(2) 前面长白线差一拍,这样的节奏在e没问题么?
02:05:193(2) 前面长白线差一拍。。
02:14:989(4) 第二点(28.148),第三点(84.204),第四点(144.184)?

Normal
OD+1?
01:52:642(4) 第二点(500.84)?

Pokie
01:07:335(1) 第三点(24.168)?
03:10:397(3) 第三点(384.208)?

Insane
HD10,OD10瞎了
00:46:519(1) 换成一个resever+circle?
01:18:662(3) 第二点(104.176)第三点(152.172)?

鬼畜你好,鬼畜再见._.
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed some...ODHP那个我忘弄回来了。。
ertyukjh010


request from game PM
好像遲了很久lol 近來有點懶懶的

[Easy]

AR-1 在Easy中AR4是非常高的
[Layout]
03:00:295 (2,4) - 感覺這兩個Slider對稱,會比現在歪了的好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328950
[rhythm]
00:08:560 (1,2) - 就算破壞排版我也要說,這裡的節奏明顯需要Ctrl+R才Fit
00:11:009 (1,1) - ^
01:06:111 () - Add note;從 01:02:438 開始都是長白線開始,這裡突然延遲了1/1 beat,對於新玩家是非常的不適應
01:31:825 () - Add note? 就像 03:14:682 (1) 這樣,感覺只是噴星星是不夠的;改的話其餘3個難度都一拼改
02:04:886 (2) - 與 01:06:111 存在著相同的問題
02:08:560 (1,2,3,4) - 用Slider代替,3/2 beat是非常難理解對於新玩家來說;就算對於老玩家1.26mod也是很容易吃100分
03:09:784 (1) - 這裡突然有個轉盤很奇怪,直到03:12:080為止都是歌詞,所以搬到03:12:233這裡開始,這裡開始都是拖著唱(我不知道是不是這樣叫?),直到03:14:682結束;簡單來說就是Pokie處理這裡的方法比較好
[Hitsound]
02:59:989 (1) - 這種最基本的長白線竟然都漏了Finish.....
[Setting]
01:04:656 - Useless inherited point
02:05:575 - ^
要我說的話這個Easy的節奏做得很沒有誠意,就是單純為了方便下Clap,所以都是白線2、4的Slider

[Normal]

OD+2 不要用這個方法來降低難度,難度是多少就是多少,要是難度之間不平衡就該考慮節奏是不是太困難
[Layout]
00:40:703 (2) - 這種我通常是畫對稱,本身對稱來做弧形的話,整體看起上來也會比較好看 雖然美觀這種東西因人而異就是 這是我的版本:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328957 我將結束方向向著下個Note
[rhythm]
00:42:233 (3,4) - 用Slider代替;對於Normal來說,連續2個circle再接著2個Slider是非常困難,而且這個圖的Bpm還非常高,請用心的在新玩家角度出發,而不是單純為了難度才做
01:12:693 (2) - 在01:12:846開始,節奏會比較好聽和自然;就像 01:17:744 (3) 也是從這裡展開
01:26:162 (5) - 在01:26:315開始;不然01:26:315突然少了1個音會很奇怪很遺和
02:13:917 (2) - 同樣地改從02:14:070開始,02:13:917要add note要怎樣都可以,只要您喜歡
02:29:529 - 現在的節奏很奇怪,1/2 beat的音從這裡開始,到02:30:142結束,不過紅線開始的話,我寧可改放1/1 beat還比較適合 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328968
02:32:897 (1) - 在02:33:815結束
02:33:968 (2) - 在02:34:121開始;就像02:35:040 (2,1)這樣紅線接紅線,這樣才合符節奏
03:09:784 (1) - 同Easy
[Hitsound]
03:04:886 (1) - 除去Finish,就像 02:15:907 (1) 和 01:17:131 (1)
03:09:784 - 這裡少了個Finish,感覺add note比較好
[Setting]
Normal有一大堆不對齊的Timing線,雖然不是必要,要是您有空就調整一下吧
00:12:846
00:33:050
00:42:540
00:42:846
00:52:642
01:02:438
01:05:346
01:10:091
01:10:397
01:10:703
01:11:009
02:01:214
02:03:357
02:04:887
02:09:479
02:11:009
02:20:805
02:40:244
02:44:683
02:55:091
02:59:989
03:09:785
03:13:458

[Pokie]

00:14:300 - 我是不是看到歌名寫著"仆"甚麼wwww
HP+1? 感覺HP有點低
OD倒是可以扣1,因為裡面有196bpm的5連打,還有就是方便我SS
[rhythm]
01:15:754 (1,2) - 拆開感覺怪怪的,合拼為1個Slider?? 就像 01:25:091 (3) 這樣
[Hitsound]
01:12:233 (1) - 基本的長白線卻漏了Finish.... 您們是怎樣的,EZ沒了第3段開始,Hard沒了第1段;別給我看到ins少了第2段的
02:59:989 (1) - 為甚麼是Soft的Finish? 如果堅持用Soft的話,或者前兩段也改用Soft吧?又或者跟著Easy和Normal難度用Normal hitsound

[Insane]

Insane怎樣放都可以啦 其實是mod了9分鐘懶了(炸
[Setting]
跟Normal一樣一堆的不對齊
00:03:663
00:12:846
00:33:050
00:42:540
00:51:724
01:04:581
01:06:111
01:08:867
01:27:387
01:27:540
01:27:999
01:28:152
01:28:458
01:28:765
01:28:918
01:29:071
01:29:224
01:29:377
01:30:601
03:14:760 - 這個的不對齊,導致Kiai不一致orz

That all :)
NatsumeRin
[General]
It's kinda strange to have a kiai time difference... that... Insane's last kiai ends 1ms later.

[Easy]
01:06:418 (2) - just simply start at 01:06:111 ? Easy players may not understand this beat well (though it fits nice)
02:03:356 - add a note?
02:04:886 - same thing, maybe you'd like to just keep your idea though.
02:31:520 (3) - start this 1/2 later (as a 1/1 slider), then make 02:32:285 (4,5) - a slider too?

[Normal]
00:39:019 (4) - seems you want to follow the vocal here, but the following beats doesn't really fit.. simply start 1/2 later?
01:00:447 (2) - starts at a strange place...
01:10:856 (5) - starts 1/2 earlier?
02:08:559 (1) - 中文说这个吧不然表达不清。既然你想很明确的两个一组,就索性1,2同形,34构成的整体也和12同形,一条斜线刷下来,气势好太多。
02:29:988 (4) - if possible, make the end a circle? (it's a finish where a part ends, so a slider's end is kinda not enough)
02:33:968 (2) - a circle here and another slider start from 02:34:274 - ?
02:48:815 (3,4,5) - make it more...straight? (in a line where 3 turned ...)

[Pokie]
00:52:029 (8) - maybe you have your reasons.. but... ends 1/2 earlier seems just better?
02:30:295 (4) - change to 2 circles?

[Insane]
第一段很好只是你太喜欢0.5x了,这在我看来可能是得治……
00:46:519 (1) - 不要为了折红点而折红点比较好。。。?
01:09:784 (1) - 这真心是个我也不敢泡的桥段,虽然真的很不错。
01:51:111 (4) - 个人感觉结尾如果三连带进更给力
02:38:560 (3) - 如果是我的话这基本必死,是你的话,活路也不大。
02:41:621 (1) - 这梗用的不错我喜欢
KanaRin
做完了笨蛋

http://puu.sh/BzJ8

Taiko Oni Level. 9*+
Topic Starter
No_Gu

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
It's kinda strange to have a kiai time difference... that... Insane's last kiai ends 1ms later.fix

[Easy]
01:06:418 (2) - just simply start at 01:06:111 ? Easy players may not understand this beat well (though it fits nice)这里map的时候失误了没听到鼓。。确实应该有
02:03:356 - add a note?k
02:04:886 - same thing, maybe you'd like to just keep your idea though.k
02:31:520 (3) - start this 1/2 later (as a 1/1 slider), then make 02:32:285 (4,5) - a slider too?k

[Normal]
00:39:019 (4) - seems you want to follow the vocal here, but the following beats doesn't really fit.. simply start 1/2 later?K
01:00:447 (2) - starts at a strange place...K
01:10:856 (5) - starts 1/2 earlier?这里背景音乐我觉得足够强啊这里跟个vocal把叮叮叮叮去了反而感觉不舒服
02:08:559 (1) - 中文说这个吧不然表达不清。既然你想很明确的两个一组,就索性1,2同形,34构成的整体也和12同形,一条斜线刷下来,气势好太多。姜还是老的辣
02:29:988 (4) - if possible, make the end a circle? (it's a finish where a part ends, so a slider's end is kinda not enough)K
02:33:968 (2) - a circle here and another slider start from 02:34:274 - ?K[/color是
02:48:815 (3,4,5) - make it more...straight? (in a line where 3 turned ...)

[Pokie]
00:52:0B9 (8) - maybe you have your reasons.. but... ends 1/2 earlier seems just better?
02:30:295 (4) - change to 2 circles?知心大姐姐说她都改了

[Insane]
第一段很好只是你太喜欢0.5x了,这在我看来可能是得治……开头本来就不太适合快SV而且你看后面音乐史快的我觉得这样也不会有多大问题
00:46:519 (1) - 不要为了折红点而折红点比较好。。。?K
01:09:784 (1) - 这真心是个我也不敢泡的桥段,虽然真的很不错。求先过。
01:51:111 (4) - 个人感觉结尾如果三连带进更给力K
02:38:560 (3) - 如果是我的话这基本必死,是你的话,活路也不大。K
02:41:621 (1) - 这梗用的不错我喜欢
等kanaBG到了。。。
climbb65588
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
刚刚拿来打了一下, 01:58:458 (5,6,7,1) - 好像这样是unrank的啊

还有, 01:06:417 (2) - 这里有点看不清

233 好图不过这combo color可能会被黑就是了

don't give kd thx
Topic Starter
No_Gu

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

刚刚拿来打了一下, 01:58:458 (5,6,7,1) - 好像这样是unrank的啊哪里unrankable

还有, 01:06:417 (2) - 这里有点看不清确实是不过感觉放这里蛮好玩的

233 好图不过这combo color可能会被黑就是了

don't give kd thx
update taiko BG。ready for now
NatsumeRin
Poker then Chess and next let's play Mahjong.

立直!
wmfchris
ロン!

截糊的來了!!
Topic Starter
No_Gu
都一边去别打扰我岭上开花
SapphireGhost
Another one!

[General]
- That first break is so long... can you try to map part of it? It'll be a lot less waiting for the player.
- Some difficulties don't play video for me... is it just me?

[Insane]
01:57:233 (4,1,2) - It's a bit hard to tell (2) is a slider with hitbursts on, can it be moved somewhat to prevent this?
01:58:611 (6,7,1) - Worried about hidden repeat arrow here, try to make sure it doesn't happen.

[Pokie]
02:50:040 - Break should start here like on Gu's difficulties.

[Easy]
03:09:785 (1,1) - I think a new player might not expect the last note...

Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. Just let me know when you've made changes.
Low
I thought that you ranked and unranked it for a second.
Topic Starter
No_Gu

SapphireGhost wrote:

Another one!

[General]
- That first break is so long... can you try to map part of it? It'll be a lot less waiting for the player.make the same sense as NR's Poker Face
- Some difficulties don't play video for me... is it just me?seems so

[Insane]
01:57:233 (4,1,2) - It's a bit hard to tell (2) is a slider with hitbursts on, can it be moved somewhat to prevent this?I already put some patterns which are similar to these.I think It's not to hard to tell this.
01:58:611 (6,7,1) - Worried about hidden repeat arrow here, try to make sure it doesn't happen.fixed

[Pokie]
02:50:040 - Break should start here like on Gu's difficulties.yes

[Easy]
03:09:785 (1,1) - I think a new player might not expect the last note...no better idea about this.and maybe a challenge here is fine?

Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. Just let me know when you've made changes.
thanks

Jacob wrote:

I thought that you ranked and unranked it for a second.
haha what do you mean
SapphireGhost
LKs



NatsumeRin
yo.
Yasora
congrats~ o_o
x847606653
屁股瞑目了
Akemi_Homura
Congratz~~
Scorpiour
不堪入墓
cRyo[iceeicee]
_Kiva
congrats nopigu
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
神note颜色, 看我黑1
miss_master_old
congrats
GUMI<3
Pokie
我來燒紙的
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No_Gu
thanks wwwww
Let's see who is the winner
Suimya
gratz o3o
YTYuyu
Ooh 2nd checkmate got ranked. I bet if someone maps this again, Sapphi will be the one to rank it :P. anyways congratz on the rank ;)
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