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Mutsuhiko Izumi - Jet World

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Gens
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 06 de abril de 2009 at 02:29:11 p.m.

Artist: Mutsuhiko Izumi
Title: Jet World
Source: Guitar Freaks 2nd Mix
BPM: 138
Filesize: 2462kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (2.19 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Expert (4.89 stars, 225 notes)
  3. Extreme (5 stars, 358 notes)
  4. Normal (3.64 stars, 130 notes)
  5. Practice (1.07 stars, 84 notes)
Download: Mutsuhiko Izumi - Jet World
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This song is rather popular between Bemani games. It has appeared in many games from Bemani, and it has been most recognized in DDR (Extreme version? I haven't played much DDR to be honest). I took it from GuitarFreaks 1st Mix because that's where I knew about it first. Hopefully someone can add tags so those DDR fans don't miss this map.

Enjoy!
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TheRagnarok
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Gens
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Sorry if i'm being harsh, but I don't take nazi spacing so well.
I already have 3 maps ranked, and everything was just by my own instinct. (1 was authentic, though :P)
...
Basically, kind of a big deal.
I DO NOT USE DISTANCE SNAP (Feels like it just breaks the real spirit of the game... :( )

And, by all that means, I made only "a few" of the changes you requested. Basically on Practice and Beginner.

...Okay, the countdown thing I had to fix it. Okay, my bad.

But the slider tick rate is set to honor a game: The original in fact.
Feels good anyway.

Really, mostly of Practice and Beginner was intended to look like iNiS with Ouendan. (Besides the Circle Size)
And, Spacing in Practice and Beginner should not be important, unless is a rrREEAALLY big jump.


Way to go! Everyone here needs a nazi to help them.
(Sorry If I really was that harsh. :< )
TheRagnarok
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TheRagnarok
No worries, it's all fair game. Honestly, I realized halfway through that I might be critiqing against your style. I'm no BAT, I and I can't say I have a firm grasp on what's technically correct in map making. And hey, if you have a couple maps ranked with your style already, then you probably know what's best.

Best of luck! :)

Gens
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Gens wrote:

02: Fixed some Itty-Bitty spacing...
I ended up fixing some spacing anyway. Normal and Expert tough.
I really think that Practice and Beginner don't need to follow exactly Distance snap. No Major problems.

And... about the style... ;P
I know how Beatmaps have something rankable or not.
My beatmaps out there haven't got any style from me. Thanks anyway. :D
But yeah, BATs always forgive Maps for beginners. Of course, if they don't have too much jumps. :p

- - -

So...
we need another mod coming!
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Gens
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vytalibus wrote:

Normal:
01:17:04 (1,2,3,4,5) - They're too close. You might want to change the patterns of the notes here, or probably even change them altogether.
Fixed. My Bad.

Expert:
00:34:54 (2,3,4) - A bit confusing. Consider proper placement.
Nope. That's the point. It isn't hard if you know the song.
01:05:84 (2,3,4) - Same problem.
^

Extreme:
01:16:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whoa, death-inducing stream. Might be passable though.
I don't know what to say, except: It stays there. :)
Thanks!
Metroid
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Beginner

00:13:889(5) - Why is it on a blue tick? It sounds better on a white tick. Remove this 1/4 to the right of the timeline please and not it for all other combos like that.
00:38:780(1) - Move this so it touches the slider beforehand please...
00:49:215(1) - Nice odd jump, are you trying to make n00bs fail? make it not as much a jump or not a jump at all?
Note that on the next combo and the two sliders like that at the end.
01:10:085 - same as 00:38:780(1)

Normal (needs spacing)

00:10:954(1) - It's to close to the slider beforehand, you're spacing shows this.
00:11:606(3) - Move a small 4 grid lvl unit to the left as that's how the spacing is going.
Note those two thought the lvl. and space it with .8 distance snap please.
01:17:041(the whole combo) That;s a little to hard to try at in a normal difficulty. change it please.

Expert
00:19:215(1) - I personally see that jump from a triplet stacks to the slider a little much, maybe lesson it?
00:55:438 - A mini break please, it sounds like the song ends there.

Extreme
Basically Either make it not so crazy or get peppy approval cause that's just to much for anybody.
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Zerostarry
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Here since the beginning
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minyeob
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[Beginner]
38:780(1),(2),(3),(4),(5)Arrange them. Their spacing is not same. Here's an example.
42:250(1),(2),(3),(4),(5) Same as above.

[Normal]
1:01:389 (6) Move left a bit.
1:19:652 (3) New combo.

[Expert]
34:539 (2)~(5) Hard to understand this....
1:01:855(2)~(5) Same as above.

[Extreme]
57:911(1),(Green 1~6) Select them all then move right a bit.(1 grid)

Edit: You got a minyeob star.


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Gens
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okie, thanks.
:3
:3
:3

The only thing I didn't understood was:

minyeob wrote:

[Normal]
1:01:389 (6) Move left a bit.
I think you mean 1 grid up?

oh, and about the [Expert] thing, I think i'll change it because I finally have some other creative way to put them on popular demand.

anyway, thanks again.
:3
:3
:3

EDIT: oh yeah, about Extreme I relocated them in another way. Hope you don't mind...
Larto
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Extreme:
00:17:04 (3) - New Combo
00:32:69 (3) - ^
00:36:17 (3) - ^

Expert:
00:40:51 (1) - Remove a repeat here or move the next slider closer.

Normal:
Call it Hard (maybe) :B

Beginner:
Fine

Practits:
Also is fine.


CAN YOU SPOT THE HIDDEN MESSAGE?
Gens
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Larto wrote:

Extreme:
00:17:04 (3) - New Combo
00:32:69 (3) - ^
00:36:17 (3) - ^

Expert:
00:40:51 (1) - Remove a repeat here or move the next slider closer.
DO-DO-DO-...whatever.
*slap*
okay, okay...
DO-DO-DO-DOOOOOONE!!

Larto wrote:

Normal:
Call it Hard (maybe) :B
I can call it Advanced to follow the diff names of GF :B

CAN YOU SPOT THE HIDDEN MESSAGE?
Damn you and your secret messages.
yeah I did.
Yuukari-Banteki
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[Beginner]
00:17:91 (1) - why the sudden spacing jump?
00:42:25 (1) - isnt quite symmetrical
00:56:17 (1,2,3) - line this up vertically with 1
01:15:30 (1,2,3,4) - line this up horizontally with 2


[Beginner]
00:45:73 (1) - this is too far away from 6
01:03:12 (1) - spacing?
these are just the ones that are COMPLETELY unintuitive but i think your map could really benefit from some distance snapping
01:17:04 (1) - spacing?


[Normal]
00:59:65 (5,6) - slider overlap is messy
01:20:52 (1) - a bit long for my tastes


[Expert]
00:05:30 (1) - this is kinda hidden under 1
00:07:04 (1) - ^
00:10:51 (1,1) - ^
00:19:21 (1) - ^
00:20:95 (1) - ^
00:22:69 (1) - ^
00:24:43 (1) - ^
00:34:32 (1) - looks bad half-hidden under 1 and 2
01:05:62 (1) - ^


[Extreme]
00:12:69 (1) - this looks really bad with that slight curve, try straightening it
00:15:84 (6,7) - align with 4,5
00:25:08 (2) - make this end on the end of the green 1
00:34:75 (7) - stack on fading 1
01:06:06 (7) - ^
man this is intense and crazy~ i love it :D
Gens
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:<

your post was kinda nazi-ish, but oh well... I didn't removed the jumps, but I reduced them. Hope they are good.
But anyway, thanks :D
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Gens
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D:!

Thanks, some suggestions were really helpful.


is this slanted for a reason?
yesh, to make it more noob-friendly.

move 1/4 later
D: I think it's fine.

slider overlap is ugly
D: I think it's pretty.
Larto
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:Bubbled.

Yes, the last spinner on Extreme IS a bit short, but if something breaks your combo, it's not that.
Also, the 2000 bonus thingy is only a GUIDELINE tyvm
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Really nice map,
nothing to say after modding
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