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Aoba Ringo - Asgardh (Short Ver.) [Taiko|Osu]

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Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested in my queue ~


[Sekai's Easy]
00:17:404 (2) - one grid right so it lines up with 00:16:188 (4)
00:25:512 (4) - Move it down a bit.
00:27:945 (3) - Put this in the center of the previous slider.
00:48:215 (2) - Move this a bit to the left.
01:07:674 (7) - Move up a bit.



[Insane]
01:18:215 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:19:836 like in the other diffs.



Well mapped ~
Good luck ! >w<
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
ok fixed everything~ :3

My diff code~
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: song.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47111
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 19431
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Asgardh (Short Ver.)
Artist:Aoba Ringo
Creator:merchat7
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:Shirogane no Soleil -Successor of Wyrd-
Tags:CoverVersion Unmei no Keishousha soleil of silvery white marie MANYO littlewing skyfish hentai eroge game visual novel opening Miya -Sekai- Sekai ikari_kyon

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-960,"video.avi"
0,0,"background.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
6864,405.405405405405,4,1,1,70,1,0
19634,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
20039,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
21255,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
21661,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
22066,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
22472,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
22877,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
23282,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
23688,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
24093,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
24499,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
24904,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
25309,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
25715,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
26120,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
26526,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
26931,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
27336,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
27742,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
28147,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
28553,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
28958,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
29363,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
29769,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
30174,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
30580,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
30985,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
31391,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
31796,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
32201,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
32607,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
33012,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0
35445,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
39093,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
39499,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
42336,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
42742,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
47404,-100,4,2,2,40,0,1
47607,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
60174,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
60580,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
66661,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
67066,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
73350,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
73553,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
74769,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
75174,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
75985,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
76391,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
79228,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 240,240,160
Combo2 : 170,220,240
Combo3 : 255,225,160
Combo4 : 160,250,190

[HitObjects]
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216,332,8485,2,0,B|260:276|208:236|160:196|204:128,1,200,2|2
320,48,10107,6,0,B|388:52|404:116,2,99.9999999999999,2|0|2
240,40,11323,1,0
160,52,11728,2,0,B|92:56|76:120,2,99.9999999999999,2|0|2
156,132,12945,1,0
100,188,13350,6,0,B|116:256|176:244|232:224|268:320,1,200,2|2
332,312,14566,1,0
376,244,14972,2,0,B|396:116|280:68,1,200,2|2
220,60,16188,2,0,B|156:56|128:128,1,99.9999999999999,0|2
120,184,16999,1,0
128,264,17404,2,0,B|140:328|216:344,1,99.9999999999999,2|0
252,292,18215,1,2
329,319,18620,2,0,B|348:268|316:212|255:191|208:225,1,200,0|2
168,156,19836,5,4
160,76,20242,2,0,B|92:84|88:152,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
72,212,21053,1,8
144,248,21458,2,0,B|196:308|234:275|272:248|336:308,1,200,2|8
364,228,22674,1,0
348,148,23080,6,0,B|292:96|196:96|152:160,1,200,2|2
116,204,24296,1,0
80,276,24701,2,0,B|108:336|184:332,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
232,304,25512,2,0,B|204:244|128:248,2,99.9999999999999,8|0|4
312,288,26728,5,8
356,220,27134,2,0,B|376:160|336:112,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
280,176,27945,1,0
252,252,28350,2,0,B|244:316|300:344,2,99.9999999999999,8|0|8
196,196,29566,5,0
136,252,29972,2,0,B|76:164|116:60,1,200,8|8
196,56,31188,1,0
276,64,31593,2,0,B|328:92|372:72|372:72|368:132|448:160,1,200,8|8
428,232,32809,5,4
360,276,33215,2,0,B|316:320|252:304,1,99.9999999999999,2|0
288,228,34026,1,0
264,152,34431,2,0,B|204:172|208:240,2,99.9999999999999,0|2|0
276,68,35647,5,0
356,72,36053,2,0,B|464:88|484:228,1,200,8|8
468,288,37269,1,0
400,328,37674,2,0,B|304:376|204:328,1,200,8|8
176,172,39296,6,0,B|263:170|263:170|292:176|292:176|388:176,1,200,4|8
444,216,40512,1,0
384,268,40918,2,8,B|296:269|296:269|268:264|268:264|172:264,1,200,8|8
124,212,42134,1,0
116,132,42539,6,0,B|144:76|224:76,1,99.9999999999999,4|8
276,76,43350,2,0,B|336:76|364:128,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
436,144,44161,1,0
400,216,44566,2,0,B|404:276|380:308|380:308|336:324|264:300,1,200,8|8
256,192,47404,6,0,B|224:232|140:212,1,99.9999999999999,4|8
104,156,48215,2,0,B|136:116|220:136,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
280,108,49026,2,0,B|352:100|416:152|424:224,1,200,0|8
360,268,50242,1,0
284,288,50647,6,0,B|236:332|190:299|144:264|80:304,1,200,8|8
60,224,51863,1,0
56,144,52269,2,0,B|48:76|172:32|212:104,1,200,8|8
143,155,53485,1,0
224,180,53891,6,0,B|257:241|381:197|373:129,1,200,8|8
308,88,55107,2,0,B|260:44|196:80,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
136,76,55918,2,0,B|64:96|64:184,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
36,216,56728,1,0
96,272,57134,6,0,B|168:344|304:296,1,200,12|0
308,228,58350,1,8
280,152,58755,2,0,B|220:140|180:160|180:160|160:128|96:112,1,200,8|8
44,180,59972,1,8
72,256,60377,6,0,B|88:320|200:336|260:257,1,200,4|0
320,268,61593,2,0,B|332:212|280:180,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
204,176,62404,2,0,B|192:116|257:97|312:84|304:0,1,200,8|8
224,20,63620,5,0
144,36,64026,2,0,B|80:40|52:120,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
76,168,64836,1,8
76,248,65242,2,0,B|120:320|164:296|208:264|260:336,1,200,0|8
308,268,66458,1,0
316,188,66863,2,0,B|320:112|392:104,1,99.9999999999999,4|8
448,104,67674,2,0,B|444:180|372:188,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
316,188,68485,6,0,B|264:248|156:220|160:140,1,200,0|8
248,132,69701,1,0
184,76,70107,6,0,B|224:16|344:44|340:124,1,200,12|8
420,104,71323,1,0
480,156,71728,2,0,B|536:276|416:352,1,200,12|8
360,336,72945,6,0,B|312:364|256:336,1,99.9999999999999,0|8
184,352,73755,2,0,B|176:284|236:260|236:260|236:164,1,200,2|2
180,116,74972,1,4
240,64,75377,2,0,B|352:40|436:108,1,200,2|2
256,192,76593,12,4,79836
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
About that spinner, I'll leave it like that for now, my intention was to follow vocal there so I want the two spinners to have the same length. Since the other diffs have just one spinner, for my Normal, I decide to change to follow instrument instead. However, since it's just extending that second spinner by 1/1, I may change it, but I'll think about this for now.

Thanks for mod, updated easy!
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
Well, hello there... I forgot about you, sorry for the delay XD. I'm just gonna leave suggestions since there just a few things to be improved... the rest is perfect.

[General]
All of you (except Miya, you can skip this :P) are using the same hit sound in kiai mode... I know it's a custom clap sound, but try to add the soft whistle sound so it doesn't sounds so repetitive... Insane most of all.

Told you that it was going to be short since everything looks perfect. I hope you take this in consideration.
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
I do not think the default whistle sound good with this song, please suggest another custom whistle sound if you feel the current one is repetitive/blends with soft-hitnormal. I really can't think of any sounds that would fit here except for closed-hihat which is currently used.
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
http://hs.sushi971.com/

I dunno... but you can search here... if you want.
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
from queue

[General]
  • fine
[Sekai's Easy]
  • 00:46:593 - add note? I can understand why you hadn't put note here, but it isn't perfectly silent. so I feel this long break a little unsatisfactory.
    01:00:377 (1,1) - blanket 01:09:701 (2) perfectly. it looks so bad
    01:16:593 (1) - turn up the volume. I think there is no reason to silent this note.
[Normal]
  • AR -1
    00:24:093 (2,3) - how about replace with slider? because to put circles continually on red tick is hard to read rhythm
    00:44:161 (1) - end at 00:45:580 is better in two reason: following drum sound, and taking more interval to the next note.
    01:16:593 (1) - finish sound of the end is too low. volume +10%?
[Miya's Hard]
  • how about add soft-sliderslide like as normal-sliderslide?
    00:06:864 (1) - finish sounds little loudly. reduce volume
    00:06:864 ~ 00:19:836 - there are only finish sounds, how about add whistle on backbeat?
    00:28:553 (6,7) - little more farther
    00:48:215 (3) - 1 grid left
    00:57:539 (1,2,3,4,5) - why suddenly make so big jump here? player will be confused. consider to reduce the distance, especially between 00:57:742 (2,3).
    00:58:553 (5,1) - too far, imo
    00:59:566 (2,3) - ^
    01:10:107 (1,2) - ^
    01:10:715 (3,4) - ^
    01:11:728 (6,7) - ^
    01:12:336 (8,9) - ^
    01:16:796 (1) - reduce volume guradually
[Insane]
  • 00:10:107 (2,3) - according to previous section(00:06:864 (1,2)), I think it should be more closer.
    00:12:336 (7,8) - too far
    00:15:580 (6,1) - this placement is hard to aim. I think you should put (1) on the right side of (6), but if don't, how about reverse selection with (1)?.
    00:43:350 (3) - flip horizontal?
    01:15:782 (3) - I think this note doesn't follow music. replace with 2/4 slider.
Last edited by h-728 , edited 1 time in total.
zaczac
409 posts
Joined September 2011
zaczac
Hi ~ from Laurier's Modding Team ///


[General]
  1. i guess it's clear.



[Sekai's Easy]
  1. SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 ? (If you think not change,You can ignore this)
  2. 00:49:026 (3) - spacing issue (Prev x0.87... I think too far)
  3. 00:58:755 (3,4,1,2) - It looks not bad.but It's better to make this.(suggestion)
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
    336,152,58755,2,0,B|280:136|244:176|244:176|228:124|172:116,1,200,8|8
    164,196,59972,1,8
    84,188,60377,6,0,B|76:236|116:288|188:292|228:252,1,200,4|0
    300,288,61593,2,0,B|320:232|280:196,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
  4. 01:09:701 (2) - spacing issue...(Prev x0.9)
  5. 01:19:228 - This green line move to 01:19:431 please.(follow vocal.missing voice to 01:19:431 )

[Normal]
  1. 00:46:391 (1) - this slider is difficult for beginner...(Timing isn't easy) This slider delete and spinner move to 00:46:999? (Sugesstion)
  2. 01:02:404 (4) - stack to (2)?(suggestion) I feel narrow.


[Miya's Hard]
  1. 00:37:066 (3,4) - add a clap?(suggetion) Default hitsound clap is noisy.please use a S:C2 hitsound clap.fits back music.
  2. 00:59:769 - add a whistle(slider end). This is break pattern.But fit whistle here imo(Suggestion)
  3. 01:19:836 - this finish is noisy.please reduce spinner volume.



[Insane]
  1. 00:15:580 (6) - why this slider bent? But copy and paste,and turn over to (5) please.That it will be solved.

    SPOILER
  2. 00:36:053 (2,3,4,5) - make this?(suggestion) It looks will be better flow.
    SPOILER
    476,288,36053,2,0,B|400:280|364:208,1,142.499995753169,4|2
    312,328,36661,2,0,B|332:360|368:376,1,71.2499978765846,8|2
    232,364,37066,1,8
    232,364,37269,2,0,B|212:332|176:316,1,71.2499978765846,8|2
  3. 00:42:336 (9) - make this?(suggestion)It looks better.
    SPOILER


sorry,I'm poor modder.... :(
Hope your help ~ Good luck!
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya

h-728 wrote:

[Miya's Hard]
  • how about add soft-sliderslide like as normal-sliderslide? :arrow: I have told merchat about this, but merchat won't add it.
    00:06:864 (1) - finish sounds little loudly. reduce volume :arrow: I don't think so
    00:06:864 ~ 00:19:836 - there are only finish sounds, how about add whistle on backbeat? :arrow: I don't think it's neccesary since the music is calm in this part, adding whistle is making the hitsounds more noiser
    00:28:553 (6,7) - little more farther :arrow: Spacing error, fixed
    00:48:215 (3) - 1 grid left :arrow: fixed
    00:57:539 (1,2,3,4,5) - why suddenly make so big jump here? player will be confused. consider to reduce the distance, especially between 00:57:742 (2,3). :arrow: Because it's fit with the music. The jump is not in insane level, it's so it can be interesting to play
    00:58:553 (5,1) - too far, imo :arrow: jump
    00:59:566 (2,3) - ^
    01:10:107 (1,2) - ^
    01:10:715 (3,4) - ^
    01:11:728 (6,7) - ^
    01:12:336 (8,9) - ^ :arrow: ^ jump
    01:16:796 (1) - reduce volume guradually :arrow: Doesn't fit with the music

Lizsig wrote:

[Miya's Hard]
  1. 00:37:066 (3,4) - add a clap?(suggetion) Default hitsound clap is noisy.please use a S:C2 hitsound clap.fits back music. :arrow: I want to keep my hitsounds consistencies.
  2. 00:59:769 - add a whistle(slider end). This is break pattern.But fit whistle here imo(Suggestion) :arrow: Sounds awkward since there's no other whistle in this part
  3. 01:19:836 - this finish is noisy.please reduce spinner volume. :arrow: Okay, reduced by 20%


Thank you for the mod :3
http://puu.sh/Hm6k
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
Ty for mods! Change lot of stuff, both mods were quite helpful.

@Crok425
Hmm, have an idea now, but will test it later, thanks for showing me the link, may kudosu your post if I manage to get the idea to work.
Crok425
262 posts
Joined October 2010
Crok425
Cool, I hope it works.
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Tur00
Hi, From Queue.

[easy]
Look the distance of snap in times the distance change.~

00:25:512 (4) - for the litle overlap i think that is better if this note are
SPOILER
00:26:728 (1,4) - this overlap is little hard to the newbies players try move this slider
SPOILER
00:53:485 (4) - 1 grid up
01:02:404 (3,1,2) - if you can change this objects . to that dont disturbed the space of the hp bar~ i think.

[Normal]

00:35:445 (1) - try move the points of the slider.
SPOILER

Only it Good lvl.

[Hard]

00:35:039 - here add a hitcircle with "whistle" to follow the "tutuuu" xd.
00:38:080 - change this slider for a hitcircle.
00:44:668 - hitcircle
00:49:026 - change this circle for a slider that end in 00:49:228.
00:54:093 - hitcircle.
00:55:512 - change this circle for a slider that end in 01:00:073 sound better .
00:59:972 - to this slider delete the reverse arrows to that the slider end in 01:00:174
01:00:377 - if you choice make ^ here put a hitcircle """the preview and this mod is for follow the rhythm"""
SPOILER

That's All
Good luck ~
Star~
Very good map ^^
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
Thanks for mod and star, fixed what you mention in Normal.
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya

espiritur00 wrote:

[Hard]

00:35:039 - here add a hitcircle with "whistle" to follow the "tutuuu" xd. :arrow: I don't follow the tutuu rythim there, so no.
00:38:080 - change this slider for a hitcircle. :arrow: Doesn't make sense, why are you mentioning this?
00:44:668 - hitcircle :arrow: Doesn't follow anything
00:49:026 - change this circle for a slider that end in 00:49:228. :arrow: It doesn't follow anything imo
00:54:093 - hitcircle. :arrow: For what? Doesn't follow anything
00:55:512 - change this circle for a slider that end in 01:00:073 sound better . :arrow: huh?
00:59:972 - to this slider delete the reverse arrows to that the slider end in 01:00:174 :arrow: Why? for me this rythim is more good
01:00:377 - if you choice make ^ here put a hitcircle """the preview and this mod is for follow the rhythm"""
SPOILER
Sorry, nothing fixed.
But thank you for the mod :)
DarkDunskin
1,875 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Oh come on, seven Pages with lots of Mods? This is a joke right?
I'll do my best improving your map~

So here it is, your requested Mod from King's Lair:

[i_k's Taiko]
    1. 00:06:864 (1) - Remove Finish.
    2. 00:10:107 (1) - ^
    3. 00:18:215 (1) - ^
    4. 00:18:620 (1) - ^
    5. 00:19:127 - Add Note + Clap.
    6. 00:27:945 (1) - Remove Finish.
    7. 00:29:566 (1) - ^
    8. 00:31:188 (1) - ^
    9. 00:32:809 (1) - Add Finish.
    10. 00:35:445 (6) - Add Finish, remove Clap.
    11. 00:36:053 (1) - Add Finish.
    12. 00:37:674 (1) - Remove Finish.
    13. 00:40:918 (1) - ^
    14. 00:44:161 (1) - Add Finish.
    15. 00:59:566 (1) - Remove Finish.
    16. 01:00:377 (2,3) - Add Finish on (2), delete (3).
    17. 01:00:681 - Add Note here when you deleted (3).
    18. 01:08:485 (1) - Remove Finish.
    19. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
    20. 01:21:458 (1) - ^
    21. 01:23:080 (1) - Add Finish.
    A bit weird Big Don Placement but overall quite okay.

    [Sekai's Easy]
      1. 00:36:053 (2) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
      2. 00:44:161 (3) - Add Finish.
      3. 00:53:891 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
      [Normal]
        1. 01:10:107 (1) - Not sure if these sharp edge Sliders fit here. Maybe replace with Soft curved Sliders?
        2. 01:11:728 (3) - ^ Same here.
        [Miya's Hard]
        Okay this fine for me.

        [Insane]
[*] 00:11:931 (6,7) - I'd flip the order of these Sliders approaching. Ctrl+r both first and then Ctrl+r (7) to fix spacing with the following notes.

Okay couldn't help much, but that was expectable after so many Mods.
Good luck~

EDIT: Oh shit, forgot Timing Points in Easy Mod, wait a sec XD

EDIT 2: Alright, fixed haha.
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
The red points on the sliders in Normal were intend to follow the drums, but I realize they weren't following properly so I change the shape. For Insane, I prefer my current pattern.

Thanks for mod!
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP

DarkDunskin wrote:

[i_k's Taiko]
    1. 00:06:864 (1) - Remove Finish.
    2. 00:10:107 (1) - ^
    3. 00:18:215 (1) - ^
    4. 00:18:620 (1) - ^
    5. 00:19:127 - Add Note + Clap. nice
    6. 00:27:945 (1) - Remove Finish.
    7. 00:29:566 (1) - ^
    8. 00:31:188 (1) - ^
    9. 00:32:809 (1) - Add Finish. I dont want to make that silent part dirty the don is enough I think <:
    10. 00:35:445 (6) - Add Finish, remove Clap. the guitar or something has like a pull up sound, so katsu fits better
    11. 00:36:053 (1) - Add Finish.simmilar as 2 up
    12. 00:37:674 (1) - Remove Finish.
    13. 00:40:918 (1) - ^
    14. 00:44:161 (1) - Add Finish.
    15. 00:59:566 (1) - Remove Finish.
    16. 01:00:377 (2,3) - Add Finish on (2), delete (3).
    17. 01:00:681 - Add Note here when you deleted (3). Ill move the (3) from up to here, but no finish
    18. 01:08:485 (1) - Remove Finish.
    19. 01:19:836 (2) - ^
    20. 01:21:458 (1) - ^
    21. 01:23:080 (1) - Add Finish.
    A bit weird Big Don Placement but overall quite okay.
o:
*3*

@merchat sorry Im not on my best mood right now >< will try to mod this when I can
Yu-Izanagi-12
314 posts
Joined March 2012
Yu-Izanagi-12
Hey from my queue and don't kudos
Wow over 100 post and no rank(or even a bubble) somethings wrong and i don't think its you
The map is good
expect a star soon(im out of kudos right now)
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

somethings wrong and i don't think its you
of course its not merchat he is awesome
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
@Yu-Izanagi-12
Haven't really been looking for mats, but I wait for higher star priority as bubble beatmap with low star priority apparently won't get check anymore or very low chance. Looking forward to your star :)

@ikari_kyon
lol, thanks
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
Greetings from the Moway Modding Queue!

[Sekai's Easy]

00:29:566(1,2)- Move these left by one.
01:08:485(1,2)- This slider must be made symmetrical so that it blankets (2) perfectly.
01:10:107-Same as before, make this slider symmetrical so it blankets the previous beat.


[Normal]

This difficulty looks good

[Miya's Hard]
00:38:080 (6)- Maybe something like this?
00:56:830 (9,10,11,12)-Seems overmapped to me, it plays okay but doesn't fit the music.
01:06:762 (11)-Remove this beat

All of the claps in the chorus are a little bit weird. Maybe you forgot to use the custom sampleset?

[Insane]
00:11:120(4,5)- A bit overmapped, single beats should work fine, and match the music a bit better.
01:15:782(3,4)-Maybe shorten these by one tick?
01:16:593(1,1)-Lower volume by a bit, I tried it with 40% on the first spinner and 30% on the second spinner and it sounded a bit better to me.

I couldn't find a lot that was wrong with these, seems like a lot of people have modded this map. I like all of the difficulties. Good luck!
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
00:11:120(4,5) - I don't conisder this overmapped, white & red ticsk follow instrument, blue ticks follow vocal.
01:15:782(3,4) - Even through, end of (3) doesn't follow anything, I've try countless patterns and this is the one that play best for me

Agree with volume change for spinners, apply to Normal as well, ty for mod!
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya

Moway wrote:

[Miya's Hard]
00:38:080 (6)- Maybe something like this? :arrow: Nope i prefer my pattern.
00:56:830 (9,10,11,12)-Seems overmapped to me, it plays okay but doesn't fit the music. :arrow: No, even it's overmapped, it fits the music well.
01:06:762 (11)-Remove this beat :arrow: I don't agree with this. The stream will play bad.

All of the claps in the chorus are a little bit weird. Maybe you forgot to use the custom sampleset? :arrow: I don't like custome sample set. So i use the default one.
Sorry, no change >.<
Thank you for the mod however.
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
none
[Easy]
00:43:350 (2) - 1 grid down
00:55:918 (3) - 1 grid down
01:04:836 (3,4) - I suggest such placement↓
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:48:620 (2) - 2 grid up and 4 grid right.

[Hard]
00:21:863 (7) - 1 grid up and left because of small displacement.↓
SPOILER
01:18:215 - volume down?
nice map!

[Insane]
no problem, and nice map!!

[Taiko]
don=d kat=k
00:18:823 (1) - d
00:26:120 (3) - d
01:18:823 (3) - k
01:21:863 (1) - d
01:22:472 (1,2,3) - ddk
01:23:688 (3) - k
01:24:701 (2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion↓
SPOILER

good luck!!
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
K follow what you mention for Normal, thanks, update later.
Yoru-hide
68 posts
Joined April 2011
Yoru-hide
HI! Here some from Yoru-SAN's mod queue~

Miya's Hard:

Approach Rate 6.

00:39:499 - add note?

00:57:539 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks like Insane, you must make it easier.
00:58:553 (5,1) - ^

I sink all jumps like that 01:10:107 (1,2) not needed at Hard diff. And please add hitsounds.

Insane:

01:16:188 (4) - heard some weird, but i don't know what to do with that..

Good luck ! And sorry for so tiny mod :D
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
Hm, tried lot of patterns and this is what sound best atm. However notice something so fix that, kudosu'd for this. Thanks for mod!

To guest mappers:
Please update, fix something in tags, or update one of the diff and copy the tags from it
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Thanks for modding :3

SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: song.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47111
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 19431
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Asgardh (Short Ver.)
Artist:Aoba Ringo
Creator:merchat7
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:Shirogane no Soleil -Successor of Wyrd-
Tags:CoverVersion Unmei no Keishousha soleil of silvery white marie MANYO littlewing little wing skyfish hentai eroge game visual novel opening Miya -Sekai- Sekai ikari_kyon

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,-960,"video.avi"
0,0,"background.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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19634,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
20039,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
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47404,-100,4,2,2,40,0,1
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60174,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
60580,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
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75985,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
76391,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
79431,-100,4,1,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 240,240,160
Combo2 : 170,220,240
Combo3 : 255,225,160
Combo4 : 160,250,190

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240,40,11323,1,0
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pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
hi there~

Sekai's Easy:

00:16:999 (5) - add NC
00:34:026 (3) - IMO, add whistle here? since the song is a little more upbeat here, it might sound nice :?
01:06:863 (6) - add NC
01:08:485 (1) - remove NC

Normal: fine

Miya's Hard:

00:34:634 (4) - add whistle?
01:13:350 (1) - hm, maybe regular soft finish might fit better here, since this hitsound makes kind of an abrupt stop, but the song continues from the previous part :?

Insane:

01:01:999 (7) - add NC
01:05:242 (5) - add NC
01:08:485 (7) - add NC?
01:08:891 (1) - remove NC?

nice map, good luck :)
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
Sorry, I follow more the vocal for new combos than stanza and I think the pattern won't look as good as I design the pattern to be more for just one combo rather than two.

Thanks for mod through, awaiting guest diff replies.
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
pushed back from 12days ago, SO SORRY ABOUT MY LATENESS :cry:
from n y a - 's queue

[General]
  1. Its better to remove 'hentai' from the tags xD


[Sekai's Easy]

Slider shape, Circle placement
  1. 00:11:323 : move this to x244 y24?
  2. 00:12:945 : move this to x164 y163?
  3. 00:35:647 : move the nc to 00:36:053 ?
Rhythms
nothing~



[Normal]
nothing ~


[i_k's Taiko]

  1. 00:57:134 : K ?
  2. 00:57:742 : ^
  3. 00:58:553 : ^
  4. 01:00:377 : D

[Miya's Hard]

Slider shape, Circle placement
  1. 00:13:958 : move this to x100 y48 ?
Rhythms
  1. 00:59:161: finish?
  2. 01:03:620 : ^
  3. 01:05:242 : ^

[Insane]

00:06:864: two inherit timing? consider to move the green line

Slider shape, Circle placement
  1. 00:06:864 : move the 2nd anchor point to x100 y52?
  2. 00:24:904 : move this to x268 y76?
Rhythms
  1. 00:31:188 : clap?
thats all I can find, rank good luck :)
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
Fix everything in Insane, but 00:24:904 as this is copy paste of 00:23:688 (2,3) -

Thanks for mod!
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Nagisawa
Hey~
from my Q!

General
nothing~

Sekai's Easy
00:06:864 - volume 50 % to 00:19:431 -
00:45:782 - add note + finish

Normal
no promlem for me~

Miya's Hard
01:02:404 (7) - nc
01:06:458 (8) - ^

Insane
nothing~
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[General]
  1. Its better to remove 'hentai' from the tags xD
what?

[i_k's Taiko]

  1. 00:57:134 : K ? why? there are clearly listenable bass effects here
  2. 00:57:742 : ^ and here
  3. 00:58:553 : ^ and here
  4. 01:00:377 : D gimme a why please
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
From my queue I'm late sorry~

If you hate dis mod, ignore this

Sekai's Easy


00:16:188 (4) - : NC?

01:06:458 (5) - : ^

Normal


Clear

Miya's Hard


Clear

Insane


Clear...;;

Oh... sorry i can't find anymore :o :o

Good luck!
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
Hi, merchat7

My mod from your request in nich95's modding / mod4mod Queue
(Sorry, I'm late mod ><)

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Sekai's Easy

  1. 00:47:607 - Why Use volume in kiai time is lower than normal time?
  2. 01:00:580 - ^
  3. 01:07:066 - ^ If you would like fix it. I suggest increasing sounds is 75 - 80%.
  4. 01:10:107 (1) - Finish sound is too loud. May be reduce the volume is 40%, like the previous finish sounds.
  5. 01:11:728 (3) - ^

Normal

  1. Good diff.

Miya's Hard

  1. 01:13:150 (1) - I felt a strange sound from the music here. Using clap instead of using finish.

Insane

  1. I don't find the problem.

That's all that I can find them.
nice map, give a star ;)

Good luck for rank~
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
merchat7
Lot of mods today :o Thanks for the mods, can't give kudosu yet since all the mods are for the guest diffs

@nich95
Thank you for your star


Edit: Still waiting on guest diffs replies, after i force myself to try improving hitsound, I'll pm them.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Sekai's Easy]
  1. Since most are nazi, I'll send you the diff with the mod done http://puu.sh/Pr1W
  2. [Rhythm]
    1. 01:10:107 (3) - 1/2 shorter+Finish
    2. 01:11:728 (5) - ^
  3. [Graphic]
    1. 00:27:134 (2,3) - Bad blanket, nazi it?
    2. 00:33:215 (2,3) - ^
    3. 00:47:404 (1,2) - ^
    4. 00:52:269 (3,4) - ^
    5. 00:59:972 (4,1) - ^
    6. 01:02:404 (3,1) - ^
    7. And so
  4. [Hitsounds]
    1. 01:15:377 (4) - Finish at the end, remmber to lower the volume
[Normal]
  1. [Rhythm]
    1. 00:08:080 (2,3) - Since it's a Normal and 00:06:864 (1) - follow the Mo~, why don't make this follow the -chi-mu~?
    2. 00:18:215 (3) - Try this? ( I don't that much the shape of the slider too )
    3. 00:27:945 (4,5) - Uhm, i like this better in that part

[i_k's Taiko]
  1. 00:08:485 (2,3,4) - Move to 00:08:688 (2,3,4) - ? voice seems better mapped like this...
  2. 00:11:323 (2,1) - Move to 00:11:526 (2,1) -
  3. 00:12:539 (3) - Move to 00:12:336 (3) -
  4. 00:12:742 (x) - Add d
  5. 00:32:809 (1) - Make it a K ?
  6. There are a lot of D over a cymbal sound... since K seems similiar to a cymbal as sound, can you try using K over cymbals?
[Miya's Hard]
  1. [Rhythm]
    1. 00:10:107 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm, seems you're following voice ... but voice is like

      (yes, it have yellow ticks...) but approximable to
    2. 00:35:242 (5) - Move to 00:35:039 (5) - to follow the same sound in the 00:34:634 (4) end instead of a soft note
    3. 00:45:478 (9) - I can't hear nothing here... sure you can map with a stream?
    4. 00:53:485 (8,9,10,11,12) - half of this stream is overmapped and this is an hard ...
    5. 00:56:526 (8,9,10,11,12) - Similar problem
    6. 00:58:958 (x) - Since 00:57:539 (1,2,3,4,5), a note here is expected (Add a note)
    7. 01:06:458 (8,9,10,11,12) - same as
    8. 00:53:485 (8,9,10,11,12) -
      [img][img]http://puu.sh/Pq1i[/img][/img]
    9. 01:14:566 (4) - Move to 01:14:769 to follow voice instead of soft notes
    10. 01:15:782 (6) - really play better like
  2. [Hitsound]
    1. 00:47:404 - the standard clap stays bad, here
[Insane]
  1. [Rhythm]
    1. 00:10:613 (x) - You did follow some really soft steams, and you did follow the stream before the slider, so why don't follow this stream to by adding the note there?
    2. 00:50:242 (1) - Make this 1/4 longer? the slidertick will suffice for the voice, while you do something like you did at 00:09:904 (1,2), 00:13:147 (1,2) -
    3. 01:15:782 (3) - the voice is on blue tick, and slidertick don't cover it... so I guess you can just do this

      or this if you really want that soft note
    4. 01:18:215 (1) - After that, could you add 2 spinners like this? ( the second one end on cymbal sound )
    5. http://puu.sh/PpKk
  2. [Graphic]
    1. 00:23:080 (1) - A more relaxed curve? like 00:23:688 (2,3) - and maybe make it as they form a simil-tornado or so
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  3. [Hitsound]
    • Hitsounds volume seems high in some parts.... and why you're using more than half of the standard Soft set as Custom Normal?
Miya
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Just using1 mod from Haku. Thank you~
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merchat7
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HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi wrote:

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  1. [Rhythm]
    1. 00:08:080 (2,3) - Since it's a Normal and 00:06:864 (1) - follow the Mo~, why don't make this follow the -chi-mu~? Since this is the calmest part of the song for me, I wanted to avoid using 1/2 here.
    2. 00:18:215 (3) - Try this? ( I don't that much the shape of the slider too ) Pretty much same thing as above here, I did this slider shape to emphasize that there is a sound on the red tick, I think it fits the song well.
    3. 00:27:945 (4,5) - Uhm, i like this better in that part I feel the drum is stronger than the vocal, so I choose to follow it instead since it's a simpler rhythm, star rating is already quite high (4.28) for such a calm song, increasing it more I think will not be good.
[Insane]
  1. [Rhythm]
    1. 00:10:613 (x) - You did follow some really soft steams, and you did follow the stream before the slider, so why don't follow this stream to by adding the note there? I don't agree that 00:10:005 is a soft sound, I listen to both place at 100% and I can clearly hear a sound at 00:10:005, but for 00:10:613, I could barely hear it. I also try adding a note there and trying some other rhythm, but it feel really off to the vocal. I do not think I want to do 1/4 jump for this song.
    2. 00:50:242 (1) - Make this 1/4 longer? the slidertick will suffice for the voice, while you do something like you did at 00:09:904 (1,2), 00:13:147 (1,2) - But I can't hear any sound on 00:50:546, I rarely ever overmap so I don't think I will do this.
    3. 01:15:782 (3) - the voice is on blue tick, and slidertick don't cover it... so I guess you can just do this
      or this if you really want that soft note I've already try something like this, but it didn't play nice to me, but I have an idea now so did that.
    4. 01:18:215 (1) - After that, could you add 2 spinners like this? ( the second one end on cymbal sound ) Just extend the second spinner to end on big white tick.
  2. [Graphic]
    1. 00:23:080 (1) - A more relaxed curve? like 00:23:688 (2,3) - and maybe make it as they form a simil-tornado or so Improved slider shape a bit, but I do not want to do a pattern like that. For me 00:23:080 (1) is like a pause then the music "restart" 00:23:688 (2). When I do your pattern, it feel like the music restart at 00:23:080 instead. Just a feel thing.
  3. [Hitsound]
    • Hitsounds volume seems high in some parts.... and why you're using more than half of the standard Soft set as Custom Normal? I wanted to silent the sliderslide at the beginning, but not for any other parts, since I already used both s:c1 and s:c2, I had to convert a normal sample set to soft.
Ty for mod and star!
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