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DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size)

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Nagisawa
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Nagisawa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 октября 2012 г. at 22:56:39

Artist: DWB feat. Fade
Title: One Reason (TV Size)
Source: Deadman Wonderland
Tags: katty pie opening op
BPM: 109
Filesize: 2123kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,5 stars, 84 notes)
Download: DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size)
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Last edited by Nagisawa , edited 74 times in total.
Dellirium
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Joined October 2010
Dellirium
[General]
Ну, это сложно ещё назвать картой, так как бпм ты определила верно, а вот оффсет совсем неправильный. Я не мастер в определении, но если поставить 106, то вроде тикает нормально.
После этого можно сделать реснап нот, но там вроде бы всё сбивается, поэтому ноты тебе придётся двигать заново.
Ну и когда будешь делать, пользуйся Distance Snap'ом, потому что без него карта почти не читается.

Пока как-то так.
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Nagisawa

[Dellirium] wrote:

[General]
Ну, это сложно ещё назвать картой, так как бпм ты определила верно, а вот оффсет совсем неправильный. Я не мастер в определении, но если поставить 106, то вроде тикает нормально.
После этого можно сделать реснап нот, но там вроде бы всё сбивается, поэтому ноты тебе придётся двигать заново.
Ну и когда будешь делать, пользуйся Distance Snap'ом, потому что без него карта почти не читается.

Пока как-то так.
Спасибо:)
Даже не пришлось изменять скорость.

_
Обновила карту.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
м.. типа помочь решил.

[Общее]
мхм.. как-то мне не нравится киаи на полкарты ;_;

[Normal]
timing => resnap all notes ;_;
и да, с включеным дистанс снэпом (уже после реснапа) подвигай ноты ;_; дитсанция ну ооооочень не очень :<

[Hard]
он почему-то как-то отдельно вообще :O
да еще и пишет, что его никто не отправлял :D
такого лучше не допускать.
оффсет тут 106 выстави.,да :D и тоже реснап нот сделай (ПОСЛЕ НОВОГО ОФФСЕТА)

И да, вместо "спасибо" нужно давать кудосу. (give Kudosu) но давать кудосу можно только за полезные мод посты.

~

Собственно я все сказал вроде ;_; Если не забросишь мапку, я буду рад :3
удачи!~
StarDem
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Joined December 2010
StarDem
Судя по нормалу чувство ритма у тебя есть, но опыта игры в осу мало, играй больше в осу и научись проходить инсейны, а битмап что ты создала ужасный, вот для сровнения первую часть твоего нормала сделал играбельной Клик
DeletedUser_783518
DeletedUser_783518
Задаток есть, продолжай - получится.

Вот, немного подправил нормал, так вроде лучше звучит и попадает в ритм.

Download: DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV size) (Nagisawa) [Normal (Edited)].osu
Nagisawa
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Nagisawa

StarDem wrote:

Судя по нормалу чувство ритма у тебя есть, но опыта игры в осу мало, играй больше в осу и научись проходить инсейны, а битмап что ты создала ужасный, вот для сровнения первую часть твоего нормала сделал играбельной Клик

А по-моему это почти тоже что и было только всё вертикально, вроде.)
Нотя в середине, за пару моментов, спасибо, может к приму к изменению)
Nagisawa
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Nagisawa

Hanabishi_aka_iRecca wrote:

Задаток есть, продолжай - получится.

Вот, немного подправил нормал, так вроде лучше звучит и попадает в ритм.
А зачем нормал делать на 1/8? О_О
riffy
osu! Alumni
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riffy
какие все умные, а как насчет разъяснить?
гайдлайны хоть почитай на форуме 56
это конечно не выход из всех проблем, но если есть вопросы, то частично можно поискать там (если с англиским хорошо)
ну и Wiki по осу (на русском частично) http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/RU:Glossary не совсем о маппинге, но тут тоже есть.
КД за этот пост разумеется не давать :D
DeletedUser_783518
DeletedUser_783518
А зачем нормал делать на 1/8? О_О
Да не, я думал оффсет точнее определить, а он нормальный, забыл обратно убавить.
riffy
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riffy
Не делаешь инсейн, дак убери эту сложность. \:D/
Кстати о вертикальности... Ну угловатость не очень для карт (это больше дело стиля).
Я слишком спамлю этот тред? Ок... :<
звездочка \:3/
cRyo[iceeicee]
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cRyo[iceeicee]
(/ω＼)

Download: DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV size) (Nagisawa) [12313].osu
Ryu_old
Ryu_old
BPM: 109
Offset: 10 068

Good luck :3
Nagisawa
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Nagisawa

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

(/ω＼)
i love it ^^ thx!)
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Nagisawa
Обновила карту ^^
Airi
31 posts
Joined March 2011
Airi
Привет няша ^^
Я сделала картинку, посмотри, может поставишь в карту, если понравится :3
Удачи~

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Nagisawa
264 posts
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Nagisawa

Airi wrote:

Привет няша ^^
Я сделала картинку, посмотри, может поставишь в карту, если понравится :3
Удачи~

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даа, в карту я с удовольствием поставлю, спасибо тебе!
я не могла найти нормальный арт с Широ! -_-
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa
и да
изменила полностью хард, обновила
K a Y e
467 posts
Joined September 2011
K a Y e
I now have the BackGrounds you asked from this thread p/1537226#p1537226
Thanks for requesting ^o^ Just choose over these varieties I have.

First Background
800x600
Second BackGround
800x600
Konei
2,959 posts
Joined March 2012
Konei
From modding Queue

I noticed that it is still WIP >.< I told in my queue don't to mod this - but I will now for you.


General

Give a name like "BG" to the background? It's strange reading: "00bxg3rx"

Set a preview point at Kiai time




Normal


There are objects which are not snapped (on no tick) please snap them.

00:40:442 (2) Not perfect stacked - fix it

Use Ai-MOD ( ctrl, shift, a) it shows you if something's wrong

00:14:185 (1) remove NC - see no reason for it

00:35:881 (1) ^

01:18:313 (2) again no perfect stack

01:23:538 (2,3) ^

01:28:696 (1) Short the spinner one tick



Hard

Set Slider tick rate to 1

00:18:013 (1) remove NC

00:19:377 set a break or make Spinner longer

00:35:464 (1, 1) remove NC

00:53:197 Irregular spacing

00:54:921 (3) Stack it with 2



cRyo

Nice but add Kiai

Dont you think the same pattern all the time gets odd? Consider vary a bit.



That's it I think :O

Good luck to your map *
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa
Konei

oh really
thx u~
BeatofIke
Beatmap Nominator
4,245 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Request from my modding queue. Here's what I've found:

General
-> Your offset is way to early in Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties. cRyo's offset is correct. Change the offset to 174 in all difficulties.
-> Slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable. Change it to 1 in Easy, Hard, and cRyo's difficulties.
-> Add some tags.
-> Your map starts instantly. I guess that you don't know about Audio lead-in. It is located on song setup under the audio tab. Set the audio lead-in to 2 (or 2000 in notepad).
-> Make sure that the settings (besides the difficulty setting) as the same for ALL difficulties. You should definitrly read the FAQs (or wiki) for more infomation.
-> Your sound volumes percentages are awkward. Make your sound volumes in multiples of 5% (i.e. 5% 65% 40%, etc)

Easy
:o

Normal
:o

Hard
-> Approch Rate 8 is a bit too high for hard difficulty. Reduce it to 6 or 7.
:o

cRyo
Okay, but 0.5 slider tick rate is unrankable.

Good Luck with your map. Your map needs a lot of work. You're going to need a dozens of mods.
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
привет
Сразу бросается в глаза..
Тайминг же вронг!
вобщем я не уверена, я не про в тайминге, но попробуй оффсет 170
в любом случае он получше будет, чем то что есть
если ты не знаешь
чтобы не двигать вручную все объекты, откров вкладку тайминг, и такм будет красным шрифтом выделено "resnap all notes"

В изи используй дистанс снап везде. Главное слушай музыку, чтобы было в ритм
00:17:234 (2) - например вот этот слайд не звучит, потому что "завывание" начинается на его середине
старайся также делать слайды "ровными", но не в смысле линейными. А ровными, красивыми

примерно так..
располагай "зажимы" симметрично

В нормале также надо испольщовать дистанс снап
старайся чтобы в твоих картах не было каши
00:12:216 (3,4) - вот такого например

В харде я вообще не понимаю что к чему, так как сбит очень тайминг

А вот инс отличный, равняйся на него о.о

Я не знаю что написать конкретно если честно..
В общем мапай, со временем будет всё лучше и лучше
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nagisawa

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue. Here's what I've found:

General
-> Your offset is way to early in Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties. cRyo's offset is correct. Change the offset to 174 in all difficulties.
-> Slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable. Change it to 1 in Easy, Hard, and cRyo's difficulties.
-> Add some tags.
-> Your map starts instantly. I guess that you don't know about Audio lead-in. It is located on song setup under the audio tab. Set the audio lead-in to 2 (or 2000 in notepad).
-> Make sure that the settings (besides the difficulty setting) as the same for ALL difficulties. You should definitrly read the FAQs (or wiki) for more infomation.
-> Your sound volumes percentages are awkward. Make your sound volumes in multiples of 5% (i.e. 5% 65% 40%, etc)

Easy
:o

Normal
:o

Hard
-> Approch Rate 8 is a bit too high for hard difficulty. Reduce it to 6 or 7.
:o

cRyo
Okay, but 0.5 slider tick rate is unrankable.

Good Luck with your map. Your map needs a lot of work. You're going to need a dozens of mods.

yes yes, i know x.x hard work
big thx u~
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nagisawa

Hitomi May wrote:

привет
Сразу бросается в глаза..
Тайминг же вронг!
вобщем я не уверена, я не про в тайминге, но попробуй оффсет 170
в любом случае он получше будет, чем то что есть
если ты не знаешь
чтобы не двигать вручную все объекты, откров вкладку тайминг, и такм будет красным шрифтом выделено "resnap all notes"

В изи используй дистанс снап везде. Главное слушай музыку, чтобы было в ритм
00:17:234 (2) - например вот этот слайд не звучит, потому что "завывание" начинается на его середине
старайся также делать слайды "ровными", но не в смысле линейными. А ровными, красивыми

примерно так..
располагай "зажимы" симметрично

В нормале также надо испольщовать дистанс снап
старайся чтобы в твоих картах не было каши
00:12:216 (3,4) - вот такого например

В харде я вообще не понимаю что к чему, так как сбит очень тайминг

А вот инс отличный, равняйся на него о.о

Я не знаю что написать конкретно если честно..
В общем мапай, со временем будет всё лучше и лучше
пожалуй лучше мне вообще переделать хард и нормал. снова. Х))) спасибо
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!~ Here's my mod!~ (a request from my queue)

  • [General]
  1. Delete the .osb file on your folder, it's not needed.
  2. Offset is inconsistent in the diffs, please use only 1 offset, and try finding someone who could check your current timing, it sounds off to me. Sorry I myself can't suggest any timing.
  3. Try finding a higher quality for your BG. (That's if you can, just please do.)
  4. Sliders in your map are quite messy, as if like random or made without design purposes. This guide can help you make awesome sliders, also a good guide for new mappers~

    [Easy]
  5. 00:04:509 - It really feels like there should be a note put here.
  6. 00:06:711 (1) - It would be better if you perfectly stack this circle to 00:05:060 (1) 's end.

    [Hard]
  7. 00:13:518 (1) - You should definitely not start a note on a Blue tick such as this one, also avoid it on red ones, but strictly on blue cause you may on red sometimes. Also avoid ending notes in a blue tick.
That's all!~ maybe for now, This map still needs a lot of work, Good luck on your first map anyway! :D
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nagisawa
Thanks you, Kirino! =3
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
actually I find there are some problems with offset and timing...
please at least fix them all then call me back to have a recheck.
you may post your map here for timing help.
t/13795
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Delete the two .osb files in your folder.

  2. End your Kiai Properly for all diffs except cryo.

  3. Put a preview point on every diff please, make sure they're all the same.

  4. Remove epilepsy warning in cryo's diff.

  5. Full Submit.

  • Easy, Normal, Hard
  1. Too many errors. x.x I suggest you remap fix all the spacing and make sure you use Distance Snap. Make them all consistent.

  • Cryo
  1. As for cRyo's, great diff. (:
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa
Okay, thanks for all!
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
I checked the map but it has a lot of errors, I'm not really patient for this xD. You should get a lot of mods, and then maybe I will be back for mod this, sorry ;_;
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nagisawa
i know, i know!)
no problem!)
Jayel
846 posts
Joined August 2010
Jayel
Hey, from my queue.

RED - Unrankable, you MUST to this.
Black - Optional.

[General]
You have two osb. files in your folder. Delete one of them.
It would be required to remove the other one also if you do not have any SBs in your map.

Inconsistency in AudioLeadin.
- [cRvo] : 2507
- [Easy] : 2007
- [Hard] : 1985.
- [Normal] : 1985.
Make all of them 2000.

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [cRyo] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:362, until the end
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:427, until the end
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
Make them consistent.

Set preview point.

You'd better to set the end point of the Kiai time for each diffs.

[Easy]
Spacing in Easy (and sometimes Normal) MUST be consistent. Utilize "Distance Snap" and fix all the notes which are not snapped in consistent distance.

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at: 00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)

00:04:577 - Make another note here so that the first one who is playing this map can easily notice the rhythm.
00:08:981(5) - NC (New Combo)
01:02:926(1,2) - A little hard for Easy.
01:06:779(4) - NC
01:07:880(5,6) - These notes placement looks bad. IMO.
01:15:586(1,1) - Remove NC and either make the start point of these sliders completely overlapped or separated.
01:26:045(2,3) - Cannot recognize these rhythem patterns.

[Normal]
Too many unsnapped circles!
Resnap ALL notes by clicking Timing -> Resnap All Notes in Editor.

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at 00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)

00:06:225(1) - Remove NC.
00:11:179(1) - ^(Same as above).
00:13:381(2) - NC.
00:19:440(2) - It is bad idea to place notes under the slider, I think.
00:37:050(1) - Remove NC.
01:03:197(1) - ^ and ...
01:04:573(2) - NC.
01:06:775(5) - NC and ...
01:07:325(1) - Remove NC.
01:21:637(6) - NC and...
01:22:738(1) - Remove NC.
01:27:968(1) - Too short spinner.

[Hard]
Too many unsnapped circles!
Resnap ALL notes by clicking Timing -> Resnap All Notes in Editor.

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing points at:
00:00:276 (snap to 00:00:311)
00:22:475 (snap to 00:22:467)
00:49:747 (snap to 00:49:715)
00:53:427 (snap to 00:53:430)

00:03:889(1,2,1,2,3) - Cannot catch the rhythm. Remove these.
00:19:160(3) - This note placement looks ugly...

Well, too hard for me to mod this diff. Ask other professional modders. :(

[cRyo]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:07:154 (snap to 00:07:123)
00:46:718 (snap to 00:46:687)
00:48:920 (snap to 00:48:889)
01:10:533 (snap to 01:10:563)

Snap the unsnapped circles in this diff.

Don't use 1/8 beat snap divisor unless you are an experienced mapper.

No further comments.

Well, done and well done :P.
Good luck to you and to your first map!!
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa
OMG, biig thanks youu!:33
Athena Tennos
1,038 posts
Joined February 2010
Athena Tennos
A-tan's mod~

[General]
u need end kiaitime to 01:28:247 - = =.....
and
u not preview time~...

[Easy]
00:33:201 (1,2,3) - distance not uniform~
i think a little random~but ok~ no break rule~xD :P

[Normal]
01:17:788 - this slider.....not too beautiful...~
01:25:495 - this slider(end) no alignment line...~

[Hard]
00:04:164 - remove NC
00:06:229 - ^
00:06:779 - NC
00:07:605 - remove NC
00:09:256 - ^
00:14:210 - ^
00:22:467 - timing not alignment line.u need change 22475 to 22467~
00:49:577 - to 00:49:852 - timing not alignment line.
SPOILER
00:59:073 - remove NC

[cRyo]
u need to check in ur Inherited Points....too many point u not alignment line...
SPOILER
00:00:174 - spinner not alignment line....~
00:01:274 - ^
this diff is pertty good!~

Good luck~
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nagisawa
Athena, thanks you!:33

updated!
BrokenArrow
2,237 posts
Joined June 2010
BrokenArrow
No taiko diff spotted. D:
I don't mod osu!standard diffs converted into taiko, just taiko-only diffs :P
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa

BrokenArrow wrote:

No taiko diff spotted. D:
I don't mod osu!standard diffs converted into taiko, just taiko-only diffs :P
sorry!._______________.
c-netik
20 posts
Joined March 2012
c-netik
cRyo - отличная работа;)
В Hard'e долго пытался к ритму привыкнуть,чет тяжело даётся...
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa

c-netik wrote:

cRyo - отличная работа;)
В Hard'e долго пытался к ритму привыкнуть,чет тяжело даётся...
это ты к тому, что надо переделать или к тому, что у тебя просто не получается?.__________.
c-netik
20 posts
Joined March 2012
c-netik
Дальше уже дело твоё;)Но карта норм
c-netik
20 posts
Joined March 2012
c-netik
Easy
00:13:935 (1,4,1) - сделай поровнее.
00:22:742 (1) - начало поставить в конец 00:18:889 (1) (может понра:) )
00:30:449 (4) - поставь сверху 00:28:247 (2)
00:47:513 (1) - сделай его короче а спинер 00:48:614 (1) начни на 00:48:614
00:57:421 - тоже можно ноту поставить
01:16:687 (1) - выровняй. поставь на начало 01:15:586 (2)
01:24:394 (1) - попробуй начать раньше на 1 деление(белое),и продли еще на 1 "возврат"
01:26:045 (2) - поставь чуть ниже чтоб не накладывались друг на друга
01:27:696 и 01:27:972 поставь по кругу,как "добивание получится норм)

З.Ы.
первый mod,так что можешь смело проигнорить))
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa
ну и ничего, что первый) всё же нормально написал)всё выравняла, стало ещё лучше :3
c-netik
20 posts
Joined March 2012
c-netik
Поставь везде bpm 109,меньше проблем будет в ост диффами....А потом тебе и нормал и хард сделаем.
Nagisawa
264 posts
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Topic Starter
Nagisawa
по-моему оффсет и так норм. я его уже 100 раз меня и тот,который сейчас - мне нравится ._.
c-netik
20 posts
Joined March 2012
c-netik
не оффсет а бмп)
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nagisawa
ааа, блин, я что-то совсем уже поплыла))
так и так ведь везде бмп 109
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
mod req <3

General

Kiai time is off, start at 00:53:018 and end at 01:28:247 (make sure changing in every diff)

Easy

General - Slider Tick Rate 0,5 is unrankable, use 1
- HP Drain Rate -1
00:27:696 (1,1) - well, you need to fix that >.<
00:05:128 - add notes
00:08:981 - ^
00:16:687 - ^ i don't see sense in this break
00:22:742 (1,2) - spacing
00:28:247 (2,3,4) - ^
00:47:513 (1) - delete spinner and add notes, i think that fits better
00:53:018 - add note and set finish
00:59:623 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:02:926 - add notes
01:10:632 - add note and set finish (look at spacing)
01:13:935 (1,2) - overlap and spacing, change it
01:16:687 (1) - delete note and 01:15:586 (2) one more repeat
01:16:962 - add note, set finish
could look like this http://puu.sh/xICB but look at spacing
01:22:192 (3,1,2,3) - spacing

Normal

00:13:935 (2,3) - spacing
00:16:687 (1,2) - spacing
00:24:944 (1,2) - stack correctly
00:57:972 (1,3,1) - overlap, change it
01:03:201 (1) - sounds off, delete 01:02:926 (3) and 01:03:201 (1) on 01:02:926 (look at spacing)
01:09:531 (4) - unsnapped slider end, change it
01:11:183 (1) - ^
01:15:036 (1) - ^
01:17:788 (1,2) - spacing
01:21:641 (6) - unsnapped slider end
01:22:742 (7,1) - spacing
01:25:495 (1) - unsnapped slider end
01:26:596 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - they don't fit the song

Hard

General - Slider Tick Rate 0,5 is unrankable, use 1
00:04:164 (1,1) - remove new combo
00:18:063 (2,3) - spacing
00:22:880 (1) - no, start at 00:22:742, then fix spacing >.<
00:26:183 (2,3) - confusing overlap
00:26:596 (1) - sounds off to me, end at 00:27:146
00:27:972 (1) - ^
00:31:137 (2) - move to 00:30:999, look at spacing
00:31:550 (1) - sounds off
00:35:403 (2,1) - spacing
00:47:513 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:614 (2) - new combo
00:49:715 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:605 (4) - remove 1 repeat
00:53:843 (2) - sounds off
00:56:045 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:58:797 (4,5,6) - ^
01:02:238 (1,2,3) - sounds off
01:07:329 (1,2) - ^
01:16:687 (1,2) - hidden note, change it
01:21:917 (1,2) - ^
lot of sliders sounds off >.< better fix them

cRyo

hitsounds 5%? but why?

red - need to fix
blue - no need, but take a look
black - only suggestion

this needs some improvement, so don't give up :>
Nagisawa
264 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Nagisawa
your'e mod is cool! thanks you!:3
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,737 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Hi , from my queue

Easy
mono tone is this diff looks bad , try to add them like this pattern would be great
and add some finish
00:06:779 (3) - spacing from (2) is too far , reduce to 0.8
00:13:935 (4) - new combo
00:18:614 (1) - move to x:64 y:140 for spacing
00:20:540 (3) - don't place on the 00:21:091 (1) -
00:22:742 (1,2) - no twos note in the same point , unrankable
00:27:696 (1,3) - ^
00:53:018 (1) - add new combo , bug
01:01:825 (4) - new combo
emm, many spacing issues , you should stick with 0.8 spacing in this diff (because most spacing you use is 0.8)

Normal
adding clap , you should stick with the pattern or its sound from the song. like I suggest in easy diff, arrange it once will be better much !
00:17:238 (2) - move to x:136 y:196 , spacing
01:09:807 (4) - end slider at 01:10:628
01:11:183 (1) - end slider at 01:12:008
01:15:036 (1) - end slider at 01:15:862

Hard
00:05:678 (7) - looks hard from under hitburst , move out to other position plzz
some suggestion , many sliders shouldn't end at blue tick , it doesn't need to end at that point because the sound doesn't follow with them
you should arrange all of slider,which end at blue tick,to white tick again
for example : 00:49:715 (3) - should end at 00:50:265 , you should try listening in 25% playback , you will hear the sound at white tick :)

cRyo
why use all of 5% volume?? , it's weird ;o
just that, others are fine

good luck :P
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi from my mod Q ^.^

1) хм ну так-то BG должно быть размером 1024х768 и в формате .JPG

2) так-то киаи тайм надо где-то закончить лучше здесь 01:28:247

cRyo

Диффа хорошая, но лучше оставить клапы по белым тикам которые следуют за большим белым и перед ним. Так хоть ритм появляется так спам клапов неочень.

00:33:614 - стакни лучше
00:53:293 - начни звук с этого места
01:21:917 - и тут лучше стакни

HARD

поставь Distance Spacing 1.0 и выровни спейсинг по всей мапе потому-что очень много косяков в этом( очень много >.<)

00:05:128 - добавь нотку
00:05:678 - тут новое комбо
00:07:605 - этот слайдер можно двойным сделать, а то дырка большая
00:08:981 - тут вот это попробуй звучит намного лучше http://puu.sh/xTQ7
00:11:458 - это место лучше сделай так http://puu.sh/xTPm
00:13:935 - добавь нотку
00:16:412 - тут лучше слайдер до белого тика ф ноту удали
00:17:513 - тут удали слайдер и поставь ноту на большой белый тик
00:23:568 - добавь нотку
00:24:944 - ^
00:32:238 - сделай 4 ноты стримом
00:44:761 - добавь нотку
00:47:513 - сделай слайдер двойным
01:00:173 - добавь ноту
01:00:724 - ^
01:01:825 - ^
01:05:128 - ^
01:05:678 - ^
01:07:329 - закончи слайдер на белом тике
01:08:155 - добавь ноту
01:08:293 - подвинь на большой белый тик
01:10:907 - добавь ноту и на след синий тик тоже
01:14:761 - ноту добавь
01:15:999 - здесь можно сделать так http://puu.sh/xTX7
01:20:816 - сделай слайдер короче до красного тика и добавь ноту на большой белый тик
01:22:605 - тут можно такое комбо сделать http://puu.sh/xTYf
01:23:981 - сделай этот слайдер чуть длинее и поставь на белые тики

И это только основной ритм(без хс, стаков и спейсинга) если хочешь могу помодить потом ещё раз более детально, а так исправляй пока, что есть)) удачки ~~ ;)
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Hi from my queue. o/

General

Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [cRyo] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:362, until the end
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:427, until the end
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
AudioLeadIn
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [cRyo] : 2507
- [Easy] : 2007
- [Hard] : 1985
- [Normal] : 1985
  1. no preview point
  1. Unsnaped things at:
    cRyo
    00:01:276 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
    01:00:175 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:09:805 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
    01:14:759 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).

    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:07:154 (snap to 00:07:123)
    00:46:718 (snap to 00:46:687)
    00:48:920 (snap to 00:48:889)
    01:10:533 (snap to 01:10:563)
    Easy
    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)
    Normal
    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)
    01:09:262 (snap to 01:09:256)
    Hard
    Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
    00:00:276 (snap to 00:00:311)
    00:22:475 (snap to 00:22:467)
    00:29:123 (snap to 00:29:073)
    00:49:747 (snap to 00:49:715)
    00:53:427 (snap to 00:53:430)
    00:55:274 (snap to 00:55:219)

Easy

  1. hp2, ar2, od2
  2. 00:13:385 - note?
  3. 00:16:687 (4,2) - try to avoid this kind of overlaps on easy
  4. 00:22:742 (1) - this slider is looks awful, try to do it better
  5. 01:19:440 - place note here
  6. 01:23:843 (1) - use 2 slider instead of this, sliders with 2 repeats are hard for beginners sometimes
  7. 01:28:247 (1) - remove NC
  8. fix your sliders endpoint and too many straight slider. o.o
  9. use hitsound on every 2nd beat, they are useful.

Normal

  1. hp4, ar5, od4 <--this is the original normal setup
  2. 00:46:412 (1,2) - overlap
  3. 00:52:467 (3,1) - ^
  4. 01:02:375 (1,2,3) - try to avoid stacking on normal, they are hard for beginners at some cases
  5. 01:11:183 (1,3) - overlap
  6. 01:24:944 (8) - NC?
  7. 01:25:219 (1) - remove NC
  8. again watch out for the slider's end point.

Hard

  1. I personaly hate the silenced sliders. The music is still goes there. o.o
  2. hp6
  3. 00:05:678 (7) - this note is hard to see due overlapping.
  4. 00:08:706 (1) - remove nc
  5. 00:11:458 (1) - ^
  6. 00:13:385 (1) - end at white thick?
  7. 00:23:981 (1) - remove NC?
  8. 00:25:495 (1) - ^
  9. 00:27:421 (1) - ^
  10. 00:27:972 (1) - ^
  11. 00:31:550 (1) - ^
  12. 00:34:577 (1) - remove NC
  13. 00:37:329 (1) - ^
  14. 00:38:155 (2,4) - stack them correctly
  15. 01:02:238 (1) - This is sounds bad for me. ._. Also remove NC
  16. 01:06:779 (1) - remove NC?
  17. 01:16:687 (1) - ^
  18. 01:18:339 (1) - ^
  19. 01:21:917 (1) - ^
  20. 01:28:109 (1) - ^

cRyo

  1. 00:33:340 (4,5) - stack these completely?
  2. 01:12:560 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:21:505 (2,3) - ^
    some slider's endpoint is not completely at the center.

Thats all. Good luck. ^^
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
Hi~Nagisawa
here my mod from our mod queue~

[cRyo]
00:48:958 - I can't understand why you decreased the hitsound volume there. honestly it makes me feel very strange.(the others diff's ellipsis)
01:23:294 (5) - (nazi)1 grid right. make it in the one line with (1,2,3,4).
I like this diff!

[Hard]
00:10:357 (7,9) - overlap a bit.
00:15:586 (1) - make a more beautiful shape? http://puu.sh/y6RX
00:16:962 (2) - you can stack the start of slider with 00:18:063 (4) -
00:22:192 (5) - x:296 y:368? it's more beautiful and relaxed to ready IMO.
00:26:458 - why decreased the hitsound volume?
00:27:972 - ^
00:27:284 (1,2) - you should resnap them to 00:27:146 - .and notice the spacing with 00:26:596 (1) -
00:27:834 (1) - ^ to 00:27:696 -
00:28:797 - add a note
00:28:935 - ^
00:34:027 (2) - stack more accurate with 00:35:403 (2) -
00:48:614 (1) - it's hard to read because it is so close to 00:47:513 (5) - .
00:51:641 (2,3) - overlap a bit.
00:53:430 (1) - from some suggestions.you can stack it with the start of 00:52:192 (3) - .and i think the note should putting in 00:53:293 -
00:53:706 (2) - put it in 00:53:568 - ,and end in 00:53:843 -
wow..there are so many unsnapped point on Kiai time.Try to check them by yourself >~<

[Normal]
00:51:917 (2) - notice the spacing.
00:52:467 (3) - a bit overlap with 00:53:568 (1) - and wrong spcing. put it on a right place like x:276 y:172?
01:04:577 (1) - some closed to 01:02:926 (3) -
01:16:137 (2) - so closed to 01:15:036 (1) -
01:19:440 (2) - ^
01:27:696 (5) - this slider should end in 01:27:696 -

[Easy]
`HP-2 AR-2
00:09:531 (7) - Let it be straight
00:13:385 (4) - stack it with 00:12:284 (2) - ?
00:27:146 (1) - to closed to 00:26:596 (5) - and some far to 00:28:247 (2) -
00:35:953 (1,2) - make them symmetric?
01:28:247 (1) - 3 grid right and 1 grid down

good map~ good luck :)
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,473 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Hi :3 request from CLANNAD mod queue

[General]
Why don't have Video ? i've found a video in Here
You can try to download it and add in your map ! (well just suggestion :3)

[Easy]
00:08:430 (5) - nc
00:12:284 (2,4) - don't do like this , it will make confuse !
00:15:586 (2) - put it on 44,208
00:18:339 (1,2) - overlap on (4) , please move it to be beatiful :3 (or use slider(s) to instead of these)
00:21:091 (6) - What spacing
00:22:742 (1) - ugly slider ._. !
00:25:495 (3,4) - spacing
00:30:449 (5,6) - ^ (and please nc at (6) )
00:33:201 (2) - holy __ please ctrl+R it you're mapping Easy diff ! (and move it with a good spacing)
00:38:155 (3) - spacing
00:40:357 (1,1) - very weird spinners that's not make sense in your music and rhythm ! if you don't know how to map this part , just keep it in a break time .
01:03:476 (2,3,4) - spacing


well i don't want to mod another diff(s) , some problem is just like the problem in Easy , please choose one spacing (just one) to map !


good luck
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