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Request from my modding queue. Here's what I've found:
General
-> Your offset is way to early in Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties. cRyo's offset is correct. Change the offset to 174 in all difficulties.
-> Slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable. Change it to 1 in Easy, Hard, and cRyo's difficulties.
-> Add some tags.
-> Your map starts instantly. I guess that you don't know about Audio lead-in. It is located on song setup under the audio tab. Set the audio lead-in to 2 (or 2000 in notepad).
-> Make sure that the settings (besides the difficulty setting) as the same for ALL difficulties. You should definitrly read the FAQs (or wiki) for more infomation.
-> Your sound volumes percentages are awkward. Make your sound volumes in multiples of 5% (i.e. 5% 65% 40%, etc)
Easy
Normal
Hard
-> Approch Rate 8 is a bit too high for hard difficulty. Reduce it to 6 or 7.
cRyo
Okay, but 0.5 slider tick rate is unrankable.
Good Luck with your map. Your map needs a lot of work. You're going to need a dozens of mods.
General
-> Your offset is way to early in Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties. cRyo's offset is correct. Change the offset to 174 in all difficulties.
-> Slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable. Change it to 1 in Easy, Hard, and cRyo's difficulties.
-> Add some tags.
-> Your map starts instantly. I guess that you don't know about Audio lead-in. It is located on song setup under the audio tab. Set the audio lead-in to 2 (or 2000 in notepad).
-> Make sure that the settings (besides the difficulty setting) as the same for ALL difficulties. You should definitrly read the FAQs (or wiki) for more infomation.
-> Your sound volumes percentages are awkward. Make your sound volumes in multiples of 5% (i.e. 5% 65% 40%, etc)
Easy
Normal
Hard
-> Approch Rate 8 is a bit too high for hard difficulty. Reduce it to 6 or 7.
cRyo
Okay, but 0.5 slider tick rate is unrankable.
Good Luck with your map. Your map needs a lot of work. You're going to need a dozens of mods.
привет
Сразу бросается в глаза..
Тайминг же вронг!
вобщем я не уверена, я не про в тайминге, но попробуй оффсет 170
в любом случае он получше будет, чем то что есть
В изи используй дистанс снап везде. Главное слушай музыку, чтобы было в ритм
00:17:234 (2) - например вот этот слайд не звучит, потому что "завывание" начинается на его середине
старайся также делать слайды "ровными", но не в смысле линейными. А ровными, красивыми
примерно так..
располагай "зажимы" симметрично
В нормале также надо испольщовать дистанс снап
старайся чтобы в твоих картах не было каши
00:12:216 (3,4) - вот такого например
В харде я вообще не понимаю что к чему, так как сбит очень тайминг
А вот инс отличный, равняйся на него о.о
Я не знаю что написать конкретно если честно..
В общем мапай, со временем будет всё лучше и лучше
Сразу бросается в глаза..
Тайминг же вронг!
вобщем я не уверена, я не про в тайминге, но попробуй оффсет 170
в любом случае он получше будет, чем то что есть
если ты не знаешь
чтобы не двигать вручную все объекты, откров вкладку тайминг, и такм будет красным шрифтом выделено "resnap all notes"
В изи используй дистанс снап везде. Главное слушай музыку, чтобы было в ритм
00:17:234 (2) - например вот этот слайд не звучит, потому что "завывание" начинается на его середине
старайся также делать слайды "ровными", но не в смысле линейными. А ровными, красивыми
примерно так..
располагай "зажимы" симметрично
В нормале также надо испольщовать дистанс снап
старайся чтобы в твоих картах не было каши
00:12:216 (3,4) - вот такого например
В харде я вообще не понимаю что к чему, так как сбит очень тайминг
А вот инс отличный, равняйся на него о.о
Я не знаю что написать конкретно если честно..
В общем мапай, со временем будет всё лучше и лучше
Topic Starter
BeatofIke wrote:
Request from my modding queue. Here's what I've found:
General
-> Your offset is way to early in Easy, Normal, and Hard difficulties. cRyo's offset is correct. Change the offset to 174 in all difficulties.
-> Slider tick rate 0.5 is unrankable. Change it to 1 in Easy, Hard, and cRyo's difficulties.
-> Add some tags.
-> Your map starts instantly. I guess that you don't know about Audio lead-in. It is located on song setup under the audio tab. Set the audio lead-in to 2 (or 2000 in notepad).
-> Make sure that the settings (besides the difficulty setting) as the same for ALL difficulties. You should definitrly read the FAQs (or wiki) for more infomation.
-> Your sound volumes percentages are awkward. Make your sound volumes in multiples of 5% (i.e. 5% 65% 40%, etc)
Easy
Normal
Hard
-> Approch Rate 8 is a bit too high for hard difficulty. Reduce it to 6 or 7.
cRyo
Okay, but 0.5 slider tick rate is unrankable.
Good Luck with your map. Your map needs a lot of work. You're going to need a dozens of mods.
yes yes, i know x.x hard work
big thx u~
Topic Starter
пожалуй лучше мне вообще переделать хард и нормал. снова. Х))) спасибоHitomi May wrote:
привет
Сразу бросается в глаза..
Тайминг же вронг!
вобщем я не уверена, я не про в тайминге, но попробуй оффсет 170
в любом случае он получше будет, чем то что естьесли ты не знаешьчтобы не двигать вручную все объекты, откров вкладку тайминг, и такм будет красным шрифтом выделено "resnap all notes"
В изи используй дистанс снап везде. Главное слушай музыку, чтобы было в ритм
00:17:234 (2) - например вот этот слайд не звучит, потому что "завывание" начинается на его середине
старайся также делать слайды "ровными", но не в смысле линейными. А ровными, красивыми
примерно так..
располагай "зажимы" симметрично
В нормале также надо испольщовать дистанс снап
старайся чтобы в твоих картах не было каши
00:12:216 (3,4) - вот такого например
В харде я вообще не понимаю что к чему, так как сбит очень тайминг
А вот инс отличный, равняйся на него о.о
Я не знаю что написать конкретно если честно..
В общем мапай, со временем будет всё лучше и лучше
Hello!~ Here's my mod!~ (a request from my queue)
- [General]
- Delete the .osb file on your folder, it's not needed.
- Offset is inconsistent in the diffs, please use only 1 offset, and try finding someone who could check your current timing, it sounds off to me. Sorry I myself can't suggest any timing.
- Try finding a higher quality for your BG. (That's if you can, just please do.)
- Sliders in your map are quite messy, as if like random or made without design purposes. This guide can help you make awesome sliders, also a good guide for new mappers~
[Easy] - 00:04:509 - It really feels like there should be a note put here.
- 00:06:711 (1) - It would be better if you perfectly stack this circle to 00:05:060 (1) 's end.
[Hard] - 00:13:518 (1) - You should definitely not start a note on a Blue tick such as this one, also avoid it on red ones, but strictly on blue cause you may on red sometimes. Also avoid ending notes in a blue tick.
- General
- Delete the two .osb files in your folder.
- End your Kiai Properly for all diffs except cryo.
- Put a preview point on every diff please, make sure they're all the same.
- Remove epilepsy warning in cryo's diff.
- Full Submit.
- Easy, Normal, Hard
- Too many errors. x.x I suggest you
remapfix all the spacing and make sure you use Distance Snap. Make them all consistent.
- Cryo
- As for cRyo's, great diff. (:
I checked the map but it has a lot of errors, I'm not really patient for this xD. You should get a lot of mods, and then maybe I will be back for mod this, sorry ;_;
Hey, from my queue.
RED - Unrankable, you MUST to this.
Black - Optional.
[General]
You have two osb. files in your folder. Delete one of them.
It would be required to remove the other one also if you do not have any SBs in your map.
Inconsistency in AudioLeadin.
- [cRvo] : 2507
- [Easy] : 2007
- [Hard] : 1985.
- [Normal] : 1985.
Make all of them 2000.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [cRyo] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:362, until the end
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:427, until the end
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
Make them consistent.
Set preview point.
You'd better to set the end point of the Kiai time for each diffs.
[Easy]
Spacing in Easy (and sometimes Normal) MUST be consistent. Utilize "Distance Snap" and fix all the notes which are not snapped in consistent distance.
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at: 00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)
00:04:577 - Make another note here so that the first one who is playing this map can easily notice the rhythm.
00:08:981(5) - NC (New Combo)
01:02:926(1,2) - A little hard for Easy.
01:06:779(4) - NC
01:07:880(5,6) - These notes placement looks bad. IMO.
01:15:586(1,1) - Remove NC and either make the start point of these sliders completely overlapped or separated.
01:26:045(2,3) - Cannot recognize these rhythem patterns.
[Normal]
Too many unsnapped circles!
Resnap ALL notes by clicking Timing -> Resnap All Notes in Editor.
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at 00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)
00:06:225(1) - Remove NC.
00:11:179(1) - ^(Same as above).
00:13:381(2) - NC.
00:19:440(2) - It is bad idea to place notes under the slider, I think.
00:37:050(1) - Remove NC.
01:03:197(1) - ^ and ...
01:04:573(2) - NC.
01:06:775(5) - NC and ...
01:07:325(1) - Remove NC.
01:21:637(6) - NC and...
01:22:738(1) - Remove NC.
01:27:968(1) - Too short spinner.
[Hard]
Too many unsnapped circles!
Resnap ALL notes by clicking Timing -> Resnap All Notes in Editor.
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing points at:
00:00:276 (snap to 00:00:311)
00:22:475 (snap to 00:22:467)
00:49:747 (snap to 00:49:715)
00:53:427 (snap to 00:53:430)
00:03:889(1,2,1,2,3) - Cannot catch the rhythm. Remove these.
00:19:160(3) - This note placement looks ugly...
Well, too hard for me to mod this diff. Ask other professional modders.
[cRyo]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:07:154 (snap to 00:07:123)
00:46:718 (snap to 00:46:687)
00:48:920 (snap to 00:48:889)
01:10:533 (snap to 01:10:563)
Snap the unsnapped circles in this diff.
Don't use 1/8 beat snap divisor unless you are an experienced mapper.
No further comments.
Well, done and well done
.
Good luck to you and to your first map!!
RED - Unrankable, you MUST to this.
Black - Optional.
[General]
You have two osb. files in your folder. Delete one of them.
It would be required to remove the other one also if you do not have any SBs in your map.
Inconsistency in AudioLeadin.
- [cRvo] : 2507
- [Easy] : 2007
- [Hard] : 1985.
- [Normal] : 1985.
Make all of them 2000.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [cRyo] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:362, until the end
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:427, until the end
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
Make them consistent.
Set preview point.
You'd better to set the end point of the Kiai time for each diffs.
[Easy]
Spacing in Easy (and sometimes Normal) MUST be consistent. Utilize "Distance Snap" and fix all the notes which are not snapped in consistent distance.
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at: 00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)
00:04:577 - Make another note here so that the first one who is playing this map can easily notice the rhythm.
00:08:981(5) - NC (New Combo)
01:02:926(1,2) - A little hard for Easy.
01:06:779(4) - NC
01:07:880(5,6) - These notes placement looks bad. IMO.
01:15:586(1,1) - Remove NC and either make the start point of these sliders completely overlapped or separated.
01:26:045(2,3) - Cannot recognize these rhythem patterns.
[Normal]
Too many unsnapped circles!
Resnap ALL notes by clicking Timing -> Resnap All Notes in Editor.
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at 00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)
00:06:225(1) - Remove NC.
00:11:179(1) - ^(Same as above).
00:13:381(2) - NC.
00:19:440(2) - It is bad idea to place notes under the slider, I think.
00:37:050(1) - Remove NC.
01:03:197(1) - ^ and ...
01:04:573(2) - NC.
01:06:775(5) - NC and ...
01:07:325(1) - Remove NC.
01:21:637(6) - NC and...
01:22:738(1) - Remove NC.
01:27:968(1) - Too short spinner.
[Hard]
Too many unsnapped circles!
Resnap ALL notes by clicking Timing -> Resnap All Notes in Editor.
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing points at:
00:00:276 (snap to 00:00:311)
00:22:475 (snap to 00:22:467)
00:49:747 (snap to 00:49:715)
00:53:427 (snap to 00:53:430)
00:03:889(1,2,1,2,3) - Cannot catch the rhythm. Remove these.
00:19:160(3) - This note placement looks ugly...
Well, too hard for me to mod this diff. Ask other professional modders.
[cRyo]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:07:154 (snap to 00:07:123)
00:46:718 (snap to 00:46:687)
00:48:920 (snap to 00:48:889)
01:10:533 (snap to 01:10:563)
Snap the unsnapped circles in this diff.
Don't use 1/8 beat snap divisor unless you are an experienced mapper.
No further comments.
Well, done and well done
.Good luck to you and to your first map!!
A-tan's mod~
[General]
u need end kiaitime to 01:28:247 - = =.....
and
u not preview time~...
[Easy]
00:33:201 (1,2,3) - distance not uniform~
i think a little random~but ok~ no break rule~xD
[Normal]
01:17:788 - this slider.....not too beautiful...~
01:25:495 - this slider(end) no alignment line...~
[Hard]
00:04:164 - remove NC
00:06:229 - ^
00:06:779 - NC
00:07:605 - remove NC
00:09:256 - ^
00:14:210 - ^
00:22:467 - timing not alignment line.u need change 22475 to 22467~
00:49:577 - to 00:49:852 - timing not alignment line.
00:59:073 - remove NC
[cRyo]
u need to check in ur Inherited Points....too many point u not alignment line...
00:00:174 - spinner not alignment line....~
00:01:274 - ^
this diff is pertty good!~
Good luck~
[General]
u need end kiaitime to 01:28:247 - = =.....
and
u not preview time~...
[Easy]
00:33:201 (1,2,3) - distance not uniform~
i think a little random~but ok~ no break rule~xD
[Normal]
01:17:788 - this slider.....not too beautiful...~
01:25:495 - this slider(end) no alignment line...~
[Hard]
00:04:164 - remove NC
00:06:229 - ^
00:06:779 - NC
00:07:605 - remove NC
00:09:256 - ^
00:14:210 - ^
00:22:467 - timing not alignment line.u need change 22475 to 22467~
00:49:577 - to 00:49:852 - timing not alignment line.
00:59:073 - remove NC
[cRyo]
u need to check in ur Inherited Points....too many point u not alignment line...
00:00:174 - spinner not alignment line....~
00:01:274 - ^
this diff is pertty good!~
Good luck~
No taiko diff spotted. D:
I don't mod osu!standard diffs converted into taiko, just taiko-only diffs
I don't mod osu!standard diffs converted into taiko, just taiko-only diffs
Topic Starter
sorry!._______________.BrokenArrow wrote:
No taiko diff spotted. D:
I don't mod osu!standard diffs converted into taiko, just taiko-only diffs
cRyo - отличная работа;)
В Hard'e долго пытался к ритму привыкнуть,чет тяжело даётся...
В Hard'e долго пытался к ритму привыкнуть,чет тяжело даётся...
Topic Starter
это ты к тому, что надо переделать или к тому, что у тебя просто не получается?.__________.c-netik wrote:
cRyo - отличная работа;)
В Hard'e долго пытался к ритму привыкнуть,чет тяжело даётся...
Easy
00:13:935 (1,4,1) - сделай поровнее.
00:22:742 (1) - начало поставить в конец 00:18:889 (1) (может понра:) )
00:30:449 (4) - поставь сверху 00:28:247 (2)
00:47:513 (1) - сделай его короче а спинер 00:48:614 (1) начни на 00:48:614
00:57:421 - тоже можно ноту поставить
01:16:687 (1) - выровняй. поставь на начало 01:15:586 (2)
01:24:394 (1) - попробуй начать раньше на 1 деление(белое),и продли еще на 1 "возврат"
01:26:045 (2) - поставь чуть ниже чтоб не накладывались друг на друга
01:27:696 и 01:27:972 поставь по кругу,как "добивание получится норм)
З.Ы.
первый mod,так что можешь смело проигнорить))
00:13:935 (1,4,1) - сделай поровнее.
00:22:742 (1) - начало поставить в конец 00:18:889 (1) (может понра:) )
00:30:449 (4) - поставь сверху 00:28:247 (2)
00:47:513 (1) - сделай его короче а спинер 00:48:614 (1) начни на 00:48:614
00:57:421 - тоже можно ноту поставить
01:16:687 (1) - выровняй. поставь на начало 01:15:586 (2)
01:24:394 (1) - попробуй начать раньше на 1 деление(белое),и продли еще на 1 "возврат"
01:26:045 (2) - поставь чуть ниже чтоб не накладывались друг на друга
01:27:696 и 01:27:972 поставь по кругу,как "добивание получится норм)
З.Ы.
первый mod,так что можешь смело проигнорить))
Topic Starter
ну и ничего, что первый) всё же нормально написал)всё выравняла, стало ещё лучше :3
Поставь везде bpm 109,меньше проблем будет в ост диффами....А потом тебе и нормал и хард сделаем.
Topic Starter
по-моему оффсет и так норм. я его уже 100 раз меня и тот,который сейчас - мне нравится ._.
Topic Starter
ааа, блин, я что-то совсем уже поплыла))
так и так ведь везде бмп 109
так и так ведь везде бмп 109
mod req <3
red - need to fix
blue - no need, but take a look
black - only suggestion
this needs some improvement, so don't give up :>
General
Kiai time is off, start at 00:53:018 and end at 01:28:247 (make sure changing in every diff)
Easy
General - Slider Tick Rate 0,5 is unrankable, use 1
- HP Drain Rate -1
00:27:696 (1,1) - well, you need to fix that >.<
00:05:128 - add notes
00:08:981 - ^
00:16:687 - ^ i don't see sense in this break
00:22:742 (1,2) - spacing
00:28:247 (2,3,4) - ^
00:47:513 (1) - delete spinner and add notes, i think that fits better
00:53:018 - add note and set finish
00:59:623 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:02:926 - add notes
01:10:632 - add note and set finish (look at spacing)
01:13:935 (1,2) - overlap and spacing, change it
01:16:687 (1) - delete note and 01:15:586 (2) one more repeat
01:16:962 - add note, set finish
could look like this http://puu.sh/xICB but look at spacing
01:22:192 (3,1,2,3) - spacing
- HP Drain Rate -1
00:27:696 (1,1) - well, you need to fix that >.<
00:05:128 - add notes
00:08:981 - ^
00:16:687 - ^ i don't see sense in this break
00:22:742 (1,2) - spacing
00:28:247 (2,3,4) - ^
00:47:513 (1) - delete spinner and add notes, i think that fits better
00:53:018 - add note and set finish
00:59:623 (2,3,4) - spacing
01:02:926 - add notes
01:10:632 - add note and set finish (look at spacing)
01:13:935 (1,2) - overlap and spacing, change it
01:16:687 (1) - delete note and 01:15:586 (2) one more repeat
01:16:962 - add note, set finish
could look like this http://puu.sh/xICB but look at spacing
01:22:192 (3,1,2,3) - spacing
Normal
00:13:935 (2,3) - spacing
00:16:687 (1,2) - spacing
00:24:944 (1,2) - stack correctly
00:57:972 (1,3,1) - overlap, change it
01:03:201 (1) - sounds off, delete 01:02:926 (3) and 01:03:201 (1) on 01:02:926 (look at spacing)
01:09:531 (4) - unsnapped slider end, change it
01:11:183 (1) - ^
01:15:036 (1) - ^
01:17:788 (1,2) - spacing
01:21:641 (6) - unsnapped slider end
01:22:742 (7,1) - spacing
01:25:495 (1) - unsnapped slider end
01:26:596 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - they don't fit the song
00:16:687 (1,2) - spacing
00:24:944 (1,2) - stack correctly
00:57:972 (1,3,1) - overlap, change it
01:03:201 (1) - sounds off, delete 01:02:926 (3) and 01:03:201 (1) on 01:02:926 (look at spacing)
01:09:531 (4) - unsnapped slider end, change it
01:11:183 (1) - ^
01:15:036 (1) - ^
01:17:788 (1,2) - spacing
01:21:641 (6) - unsnapped slider end
01:22:742 (7,1) - spacing
01:25:495 (1) - unsnapped slider end
01:26:596 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - they don't fit the song
Hard
General - Slider Tick Rate 0,5 is unrankable, use 1
00:04:164 (1,1) - remove new combo
00:18:063 (2,3) - spacing
00:22:880 (1) - no, start at 00:22:742, then fix spacing >.<
00:26:183 (2,3) - confusing overlap
00:26:596 (1) - sounds off to me, end at 00:27:146
00:27:972 (1) - ^
00:31:137 (2) - move to 00:30:999, look at spacing
00:31:550 (1) - sounds off
00:35:403 (2,1) - spacing
00:47:513 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:614 (2) - new combo
00:49:715 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:605 (4) - remove 1 repeat
00:53:843 (2) - sounds off
00:56:045 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:58:797 (4,5,6) - ^
01:02:238 (1,2,3) - sounds off
01:07:329 (1,2) - ^
01:16:687 (1,2) - hidden note, change it
01:21:917 (1,2) - ^
lot of sliders sounds off >.< better fix them
00:04:164 (1,1) - remove new combo
00:18:063 (2,3) - spacing
00:22:880 (1) - no, start at 00:22:742, then fix spacing >.<
00:26:183 (2,3) - confusing overlap
00:26:596 (1) - sounds off to me, end at 00:27:146
00:27:972 (1) - ^
00:31:137 (2) - move to 00:30:999, look at spacing
00:31:550 (1) - sounds off
00:35:403 (2,1) - spacing
00:47:513 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:614 (2) - new combo
00:49:715 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:605 (4) - remove 1 repeat
00:53:843 (2) - sounds off
00:56:045 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:58:797 (4,5,6) - ^
01:02:238 (1,2,3) - sounds off
01:07:329 (1,2) - ^
01:16:687 (1,2) - hidden note, change it
01:21:917 (1,2) - ^
lot of sliders sounds off >.< better fix them
cRyo
hitsounds 5%? but why?
red - need to fix
blue - no need, but take a look
black - only suggestion
this needs some improvement, so don't give up :>
Hi , from my queue
Easy
mono tone is this diff looks bad , try to add them like this pattern would be great
and add some finish
00:06:779 (3) - spacing from (2) is too far , reduce to 0.8
00:13:935 (4) - new combo
00:18:614 (1) - move to x:64 y:140 for spacing
00:20:540 (3) - don't place on the 00:21:091 (1) -
00:22:742 (1,2) - no twos note in the same point , unrankable
00:27:696 (1,3) - ^
00:53:018 (1) - add new combo , bug
01:01:825 (4) - new combo
emm, many spacing issues , you should stick with 0.8 spacing in this diff (because most spacing you use is 0.8)
Normal
adding clap , you should stick with the pattern or its sound from the song. like I suggest in easy diff, arrange it once will be better much !
00:17:238 (2) - move to x:136 y:196 , spacing
01:09:807 (4) - end slider at 01:10:628
01:11:183 (1) - end slider at 01:12:008
01:15:036 (1) - end slider at 01:15:862
Hard
00:05:678 (7) - looks hard from under hitburst , move out to other position plzz
some suggestion , many sliders shouldn't end at blue tick , it doesn't need to end at that point because the sound doesn't follow with them
you should arrange all of slider,which end at blue tick,to white tick again
for example : 00:49:715 (3) - should end at 00:50:265 , you should try listening in 25% playback , you will hear the sound at white tick
cRyo
why use all of 5% volume?? , it's weird ;o
just that, others are fine
good luck
Easy
mono tone is this diff looks bad , try to add them like this pattern would be great
and add some finish
00:06:779 (3) - spacing from (2) is too far , reduce to 0.8
00:13:935 (4) - new combo
00:18:614 (1) - move to x:64 y:140 for spacing
00:20:540 (3) - don't place on the 00:21:091 (1) -
00:22:742 (1,2) - no twos note in the same point , unrankable
00:27:696 (1,3) - ^
00:53:018 (1) - add new combo , bug
01:01:825 (4) - new combo
emm, many spacing issues , you should stick with 0.8 spacing in this diff (because most spacing you use is 0.8)
Normal
adding clap , you should stick with the pattern or its sound from the song. like I suggest in easy diff, arrange it once will be better much !
00:17:238 (2) - move to x:136 y:196 , spacing
01:09:807 (4) - end slider at 01:10:628
01:11:183 (1) - end slider at 01:12:008
01:15:036 (1) - end slider at 01:15:862
Hard
00:05:678 (7) - looks hard from under hitburst , move out to other position plzz
some suggestion , many sliders shouldn't end at blue tick , it doesn't need to end at that point because the sound doesn't follow with them
you should arrange all of slider,which end at blue tick,to white tick again
for example : 00:49:715 (3) - should end at 00:50:265 , you should try listening in 25% playback , you will hear the sound at white tick
cRyo
why use all of 5% volume?? , it's weird ;o
just that, others are fine
good luck
hi from my mod Q ^.^
1) хм ну так-то BG должно быть размером 1024х768 и в формате .JPG
2) так-то киаи тайм надо где-то закончить лучше здесь 01:28:247
cRyo
Диффа хорошая, но лучше оставить клапы по белым тикам которые следуют за большим белым и перед ним. Так хоть ритм появляется так спам клапов неочень.
00:33:614 - стакни лучше
00:53:293 - начни звук с этого места
01:21:917 - и тут лучше стакни
HARD
поставь Distance Spacing 1.0 и выровни спейсинг по всей мапе потому-что очень много косяков в этом( очень много >.<)
00:05:128 - добавь нотку
00:05:678 - тут новое комбо
00:07:605 - этот слайдер можно двойным сделать, а то дырка большая
00:08:981 - тут вот это попробуй звучит намного лучше http://puu.sh/xTQ7
00:11:458 - это место лучше сделай так http://puu.sh/xTPm
00:13:935 - добавь нотку
00:16:412 - тут лучше слайдер до белого тика ф ноту удали
00:17:513 - тут удали слайдер и поставь ноту на большой белый тик
00:23:568 - добавь нотку
00:24:944 - ^
00:32:238 - сделай 4 ноты стримом
00:44:761 - добавь нотку
00:47:513 - сделай слайдер двойным
01:00:173 - добавь ноту
01:00:724 - ^
01:01:825 - ^
01:05:128 - ^
01:05:678 - ^
01:07:329 - закончи слайдер на белом тике
01:08:155 - добавь ноту
01:08:293 - подвинь на большой белый тик
01:10:907 - добавь ноту и на след синий тик тоже
01:14:761 - ноту добавь
01:15:999 - здесь можно сделать так http://puu.sh/xTX7
01:20:816 - сделай слайдер короче до красного тика и добавь ноту на большой белый тик
01:22:605 - тут можно такое комбо сделать http://puu.sh/xTYf
01:23:981 - сделай этот слайдер чуть длинее и поставь на белые тики
И это только основной ритм(без хс, стаков и спейсинга) если хочешь могу помодить потом ещё раз более детально, а так исправляй пока, что есть)) удачки ~~
1) хм ну так-то BG должно быть размером 1024х768 и в формате .JPG
2) так-то киаи тайм надо где-то закончить лучше здесь 01:28:247
cRyo
Диффа хорошая, но лучше оставить клапы по белым тикам которые следуют за большим белым и перед ним. Так хоть ритм появляется так спам клапов неочень.
00:33:614 - стакни лучше
00:53:293 - начни звук с этого места
01:21:917 - и тут лучше стакни
HARD
поставь Distance Spacing 1.0 и выровни спейсинг по всей мапе потому-что очень много косяков в этом( очень много >.<)
00:05:128 - добавь нотку
00:05:678 - тут новое комбо
00:07:605 - этот слайдер можно двойным сделать, а то дырка большая
00:08:981 - тут вот это попробуй звучит намного лучше http://puu.sh/xTQ7
00:11:458 - это место лучше сделай так http://puu.sh/xTPm
00:13:935 - добавь нотку
00:16:412 - тут лучше слайдер до белого тика ф ноту удали
00:17:513 - тут удали слайдер и поставь ноту на большой белый тик
00:23:568 - добавь нотку
00:24:944 - ^
00:32:238 - сделай 4 ноты стримом
00:44:761 - добавь нотку
00:47:513 - сделай слайдер двойным
01:00:173 - добавь ноту
01:00:724 - ^
01:01:825 - ^
01:05:128 - ^
01:05:678 - ^
01:07:329 - закончи слайдер на белом тике
01:08:155 - добавь ноту
01:08:293 - подвинь на большой белый тик
01:10:907 - добавь ноту и на след синий тик тоже
01:14:761 - ноту добавь
01:15:999 - здесь можно сделать так http://puu.sh/xTX7
01:20:816 - сделай слайдер короче до красного тика и добавь ноту на большой белый тик
01:22:605 - тут можно такое комбо сделать http://puu.sh/xTYf
01:23:981 - сделай этот слайдер чуть длинее и поставь на белые тики
И это только основной ритм(без хс, стаков и спейсинга) если хочешь могу помодить потом ещё раз более детально, а так исправляй пока, что есть)) удачки ~~
Hi from my queue. o/
Thats all. Good luck. ^^
General
Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [cRyo] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:362, until the end
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:427, until the end
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
- [cRyo] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:362, until the end
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
- [Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:427, until the end
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:53:295, until the end
AudioLeadIn
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [cRyo] : 2507
- [Easy] : 2007
- [Hard] : 1985
- [Normal] : 1985
- [cRyo] : 2507
- [Easy] : 2007
- [Hard] : 1985
- [Normal] : 1985
- no preview point
- Unsnaped things at:cRyo00:01:276 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
01:00:175 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:09:805 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
01:14:759 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:07:154 (snap to 00:07:123)
00:46:718 (snap to 00:46:687)
00:48:920 (snap to 00:48:889)
01:10:533 (snap to 01:10:563)EasyUnsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)NormalUnsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:53:295 (snap to 00:53:293)
01:09:262 (snap to 01:09:256)HardUnsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:00:276 (snap to 00:00:311)
00:22:475 (snap to 00:22:467)
00:29:123 (snap to 00:29:073)
00:49:747 (snap to 00:49:715)
00:53:427 (snap to 00:53:430)
00:55:274 (snap to 00:55:219)
Easy
- hp2, ar2, od2
- 00:13:385 - note?
- 00:16:687 (4,2) - try to avoid this kind of overlaps on easy
- 00:22:742 (1) - this slider is looks awful, try to do it better
- 01:19:440 - place note here
- 01:23:843 (1) - use 2 slider instead of this, sliders with 2 repeats are hard for beginners sometimes
- 01:28:247 (1) - remove NC
- fix your sliders endpoint and too many straight slider. o.o
- use hitsound on every 2nd beat, they are useful.
Normal
- hp4, ar5, od4 <--this is the original normal setup
- 00:46:412 (1,2) - overlap
- 00:52:467 (3,1) - ^
- 01:02:375 (1,2,3) - try to avoid stacking on normal, they are hard for beginners at some cases
- 01:11:183 (1,3) - overlap
- 01:24:944 (8) - NC?
- 01:25:219 (1) - remove NC
- again watch out for the slider's end point.
Hard
- I personaly hate the silenced sliders. The music is still goes there. o.o
- hp6
- 00:05:678 (7) - this note is hard to see due overlapping.
- 00:08:706 (1) - remove nc
- 00:11:458 (1) - ^
- 00:13:385 (1) - end at white thick?
- 00:23:981 (1) - remove NC?
- 00:25:495 (1) - ^
- 00:27:421 (1) - ^
- 00:27:972 (1) - ^
- 00:31:550 (1) - ^
- 00:34:577 (1) - remove NC
- 00:37:329 (1) - ^
- 00:38:155 (2,4) - stack them correctly
- 01:02:238 (1) - This is sounds bad for me. ._. Also remove NC
- 01:06:779 (1) - remove NC?
- 01:16:687 (1) - ^
- 01:18:339 (1) - ^
- 01:21:917 (1) - ^
- 01:28:109 (1) - ^
cRyo
- 00:33:340 (4,5) - stack these completely?
- 01:12:560 (1,2) - ^
- 01:21:505 (2,3) - ^
some slider's endpoint is not completely at the center.
Thats all. Good luck. ^^
Hi~Nagisawa
here my mod from our mod queue~
[cRyo]
00:48:958 - I can't understand why you decreased the hitsound volume there. honestly it makes me feel very strange.(the others diff's ellipsis)
01:23:294 (5) - (nazi)1 grid right. make it in the one line with (1,2,3,4).
I like this diff!
[Hard]
00:10:357 (7,9) - overlap a bit.
00:15:586 (1) - make a more beautiful shape? http://puu.sh/y6RX
00:16:962 (2) - you can stack the start of slider with 00:18:063 (4) -
00:22:192 (5) - x:296 y:368? it's more beautiful and relaxed to ready IMO.
00:26:458 - why decreased the hitsound volume?
00:27:972 - ^
00:27:284 (1,2) - you should resnap them to 00:27:146 - .and notice the spacing with 00:26:596 (1) -
00:27:834 (1) - ^ to 00:27:696 -
00:28:797 - add a note
00:28:935 - ^
00:34:027 (2) - stack more accurate with 00:35:403 (2) -
00:48:614 (1) - it's hard to read because it is so close to 00:47:513 (5) - .
00:51:641 (2,3) - overlap a bit.
00:53:430 (1) - from some suggestions.you can stack it with the start of 00:52:192 (3) - .and i think the note should putting in 00:53:293 -
00:53:706 (2) - put it in 00:53:568 - ,and end in 00:53:843 -
wow..there are so many unsnapped point on Kiai time.Try to check them by yourself >~<
[Normal]
00:51:917 (2) - notice the spacing.
00:52:467 (3) - a bit overlap with 00:53:568 (1) - and wrong spcing. put it on a right place like x:276 y:172?
01:04:577 (1) - some closed to 01:02:926 (3) -
01:16:137 (2) - so closed to 01:15:036 (1) -
01:19:440 (2) - ^
01:27:696 (5) - this slider should end in 01:27:696 -
[Easy]
`HP-2 AR-2
00:09:531 (7) - Let it be straight
00:13:385 (4) - stack it with 00:12:284 (2) - ?
00:27:146 (1) - to closed to 00:26:596 (5) - and some far to 00:28:247 (2) -
00:35:953 (1,2) - make them symmetric?
01:28:247 (1) - 3 grid right and 1 grid down
good map~ good luck
here my mod from our mod queue~
[cRyo]
00:48:958 - I can't understand why you decreased the hitsound volume there. honestly it makes me feel very strange.(the others diff's ellipsis)
01:23:294 (5) - (nazi)1 grid right. make it in the one line with (1,2,3,4).
I like this diff!
[Hard]
00:10:357 (7,9) - overlap a bit.
00:15:586 (1) - make a more beautiful shape? http://puu.sh/y6RX
00:16:962 (2) - you can stack the start of slider with 00:18:063 (4) -
00:22:192 (5) - x:296 y:368? it's more beautiful and relaxed to ready IMO.
00:26:458 - why decreased the hitsound volume?
00:27:972 - ^
00:27:284 (1,2) - you should resnap them to 00:27:146 - .and notice the spacing with 00:26:596 (1) -
00:27:834 (1) - ^ to 00:27:696 -
00:28:797 - add a note
00:28:935 - ^
00:34:027 (2) - stack more accurate with 00:35:403 (2) -
00:48:614 (1) - it's hard to read because it is so close to 00:47:513 (5) - .
00:51:641 (2,3) - overlap a bit.
00:53:430 (1) - from some suggestions.you can stack it with the start of 00:52:192 (3) - .and i think the note should putting in 00:53:293 -
00:53:706 (2) - put it in 00:53:568 - ,and end in 00:53:843 -
wow..there are so many unsnapped point on Kiai time.Try to check them by yourself >~<
[Normal]
00:51:917 (2) - notice the spacing.
00:52:467 (3) - a bit overlap with 00:53:568 (1) - and wrong spcing. put it on a right place like x:276 y:172?
01:04:577 (1) - some closed to 01:02:926 (3) -
01:16:137 (2) - so closed to 01:15:036 (1) -
01:19:440 (2) - ^
01:27:696 (5) - this slider should end in 01:27:696 -
[Easy]
`HP-2 AR-2
00:09:531 (7) - Let it be straight
00:13:385 (4) - stack it with 00:12:284 (2) - ?
00:27:146 (1) - to closed to 00:26:596 (5) - and some far to 00:28:247 (2) -
00:35:953 (1,2) - make them symmetric?
01:28:247 (1) - 3 grid right and 1 grid down
good map~ good luck
Hi :3 request from CLANNAD mod queue
[General]
Why don't have Video ? i've found a video in Here
You can try to download it and add in your map ! (well just suggestion :3)
[Easy]
00:08:430 (5) - nc
00:12:284 (2,4) - don't do like this , it will make confuse !
00:15:586 (2) - put it on 44,208
00:18:339 (1,2) - overlap on (4) , please move it to be beatiful :3 (or use slider(s) to instead of these)
00:21:091 (6) -What spacing
00:22:742 (1) - ugly slider ._. !
00:25:495 (3,4) - spacing
00:30:449 (5,6) - ^ (and please nc at (6) )
00:33:201 (2) - holy __ please ctrl+R it you're mapping Easy diff ! (and move it with a good spacing)
00:38:155 (3) - spacing
00:40:357 (1,1) - very weird spinners that's not make sense in your music and rhythm ! if you don't know how to map this part , just keep it in a break time .
01:03:476 (2,3,4) - spacing
well i don't want to mod another diff(s) , some problem is just like the problem in Easy , please choose one spacing (just one) to map !
good luck
[General]
Why don't have Video ? i've found a video in Here
You can try to download it and add in your map ! (well just suggestion :3)
[Easy]
00:08:430 (5) - nc
00:12:284 (2,4) - don't do like this , it will make confuse !
00:15:586 (2) - put it on 44,208
00:18:339 (1,2) - overlap on (4) , please move it to be beatiful :3 (or use slider(s) to instead of these)
00:21:091 (6) -
00:22:742 (1) - ugly slider ._. !
00:25:495 (3,4) - spacing
00:30:449 (5,6) - ^ (and please nc at (6) )
00:33:201 (2) - holy __ please ctrl+R it you're mapping Easy diff ! (and move it with a good spacing)
00:38:155 (3) - spacing
00:40:357 (1,1) - very weird spinners that's not make sense in your music and rhythm ! if you don't know how to map this part , just keep it in a break time .
01:03:476 (2,3,4) - spacing
well i don't want to mod another diff(s) , some problem is just like the problem in Easy , please choose one spacing (just one) to map !
good luck
Hi~ From my queue
Everything is suggestion so you can ignore this
Good luck xD
Everything is suggestion so you can ignore this
SPOILER
General
You have 2 osb files delete one or if you don't want to add SB, delete osb files all
Easy
00:32:100 (1) - NC
00:32:651 (1) - delete NC
00:47:513 (1) - delete spinner and add some sliders or notes
Normal
00:39:807 (3) - delete note and replace 00:39:807 (1) - this spinner
01:12:559 (3) - unsnapped slider
01:21:641 (6) - NC
01:28:522 (9) - delete note
Hard
You need to fix some notes to get a right beat
00:16:962 (2) - one more repeat
00:22:742 - how about this timing patern?
00:26:596 - ^
00:32:512 (4) - you made straight patern? then fix
00:53:568 (2,3,4,1) - plz in right snap ,it's confused @.@
cRyo
00:13:386 (1) - add clap in front of slider
00:20:404 (2) - changing as 2 notes here?
00:24:119 (1) - NC
01:23:294 (5) - 1 grid right?
You have 2 osb files delete one or if you don't want to add SB, delete osb files all
Easy
00:32:100 (1) - NC
00:32:651 (1) - delete NC
00:47:513 (1) - delete spinner and add some sliders or notes
Normal
00:39:807 (3) - delete note and replace 00:39:807 (1) - this spinner
01:12:559 (3) - unsnapped slider
01:21:641 (6) - NC
01:28:522 (9) - delete note
Hard
You need to fix some notes to get a right beat
00:16:962 (2) - one more repeat
00:22:742 - how about this timing patern?
00:26:596 - ^
00:32:512 (4) - you made straight patern? then fix
00:53:568 (2,3,4,1) - plz in right snap ,it's confused @.@
cRyo
00:13:386 (1) - add clap in front of slider
00:20:404 (2) - changing as 2 notes here?
00:24:119 (1) - NC
01:23:294 (5) - 1 grid right?
Good luck xD
Hi,mod request from my queue
[cRyo]
00:48:889 - Volume 5% -> 15%
Cool map!
[Hard]
There are too many part which doesn't suit song.
00:08:981 (5) - NC
[Normal]
00:19:440 (2) - Spacing is too close.
01:06:779 (4) - Spacing is separate.
01:12:559 (3) - slider end point into 01:14:485
01:25:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't suit music.
01:28:522 (9) - delete note.
[Easy]
00:33:201 (2) - Spacing is separate.
01:01:825 (1) - slider start point add finish.
That's all.
[cRyo]
00:48:889 - Volume 5% -> 15%
Cool map!
[Hard]
There are too many part which doesn't suit song.
00:08:981 (5) - NC
[Normal]
00:19:440 (2) - Spacing is too close.
01:06:779 (4) - Spacing is separate.
01:12:559 (3) - slider end point into 01:14:485
01:25:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't suit music.
01:28:522 (9) - delete note.
[Easy]
00:33:201 (2) - Spacing is separate.
01:01:825 (1) - slider start point add finish.
That's all.
Oh hi there
[General]
* White combo color + Kiai time + White BG = Eyes hurt for players. You should change it the combo color....
* This map hasn't set the preview point
[Easy]
00:45:862 (1) - Too soon from spinner for easier diff, otherwise, beginners cannot reach this while gameplay
00:46:412 (2) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners
00:53:568 (2) - Spacing error
[Normal]
* In this diff, I saw some spacing that inconsistent. Make sure you use distance snap.....
00:44:210 (1) - A bit too far from spinner.....
01:21:641 (6) - Unsnapped tail slider
01:25:219 (1) - ^
[Hard]
* The volume for this diff is too loud >.<
* I saw that some object are always snap at blue tick. If you saw that, you should fix it.....
00:00:276 - Useless timing section
00:23:981 (1,2,3) - Move to 00:24:118 for following vocal
00:27:559 (2) - Snap it at white tick
[cRyu]
* http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332960 Look at right side, is that useless? If useless, remove three of them
00:48:889 - Why this timing section makes the part sound go quiet?
This map needs more work, get more mod to make this map better. Good luck <3
[General]
* White combo color + Kiai time + White BG = Eyes hurt for players. You should change it the combo color....
* This map hasn't set the preview point
[Easy]
00:45:862 (1) - Too soon from spinner for easier diff, otherwise, beginners cannot reach this while gameplay
00:46:412 (2) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners
00:53:568 (2) - Spacing error
[Normal]
* In this diff, I saw some spacing that inconsistent. Make sure you use distance snap.....
00:44:210 (1) - A bit too far from spinner.....
01:21:641 (6) - Unsnapped tail slider
01:25:219 (1) - ^
[Hard]
* The volume for this diff is too loud >.<
* I saw that some object are always snap at blue tick. If you saw that, you should fix it.....
00:00:276 - Useless timing section
00:23:981 (1,2,3) - Move to 00:24:118 for following vocal
00:27:559 (2) - Snap it at white tick
[cRyu]
* http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/332960 Look at right side, is that useless? If useless, remove three of them
00:48:889 - Why this timing section makes the part sound go quiet?
This map needs more work, get more mod to make this map better. Good luck <3
Easy
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:45:862 - It's a bit soon for newbie.
01:05:403 - start at 01:05:128 and end at 01:05:678.
Normal
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:14:485 - spacing error
00:17:238 - ^
00:53:018 - add a NC
00:53:568 - remove NC
01:21:641 - Unsnapped slider
01:25:219 - Unsnapped slider
Hard
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:00:276 - timing is useless
00:27:559 - a bit sudden
Add some jumps is a good way to make your diff more fun,but you should keep consistent spacing in the other notes.
I mean that you use 0.6x 0.8x 1.0x in a disordered way,so make the pattern looks not so good in some sections.
cRyo
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:01:276 - Unsnapped spinner
00:48:958 - raise the volume to 20%
01:00:175 - Unsnapped slider
01:09:805 - ^
01:14:759 - ^
Good luck!
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:45:862 - It's a bit soon for newbie.
01:05:403 - start at 01:05:128 and end at 01:05:678.
Normal
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:14:485 - spacing error
00:17:238 - ^
00:53:018 - add a NC
00:53:568 - remove NC
01:21:641 - Unsnapped slider
01:25:219 - Unsnapped slider
Hard
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:00:276 - timing is useless
00:27:559 - a bit sudden
Add some jumps is a good way to make your diff more fun,but you should keep consistent spacing in the other notes.
I mean that you use 0.6x 0.8x 1.0x in a disordered way,so make the pattern looks not so good in some sections.
cRyo
Preview point has not been set yet.
00:01:276 - Unsnapped spinner
00:48:958 - raise the volume to 20%
01:00:175 - Unsnapped slider
01:09:805 - ^
01:14:759 - ^
Good luck!
-Nothing-To-Do-Here-
Hi.
Hard:
00:11:871 (2,3,4,5) - все на один тик правее
00:13:385 (1) - до белого тика продолжить надо тебе что бы ритм чувствовать я мог.
00:22:605 (1) - на один тик левее,продолжить до красного
00:23:293 (2) - на один тик левее , теперь продолжить до белого
Вообще раз мне нечем заняться , исправлю этот хард и залью.
Upd : http://puu.sh/AdFz < что-то вроде этого , исправил только самые грубые ошибки , дальше сам/сама домапаешь или оставишь так
P.S.Открыть в текстовом редакторе свою диффу , открыть то что я линканул , скопировать то что в моем линке и вставить с заменой в диффу которая у тебя на винте.WARNING!В моем линке хард соответственно открывать у себя нужно тоже хард.Да если решишь оставить то что я исправил , не забудь переставить пару моментов.
Вроде все.
Hard:
00:11:871 (2,3,4,5) - все на один тик правее
00:13:385 (1) - до белого тика продолжить надо тебе что бы ритм чувствовать я мог.
00:22:605 (1) - на один тик левее,продолжить до красного
00:23:293 (2) - на один тик левее , теперь продолжить до белого
Вообще раз мне нечем заняться , исправлю этот хард и залью.
Upd : http://puu.sh/AdFz < что-то вроде этого , исправил только самые грубые ошибки , дальше сам/сама домапаешь или оставишь так
P.S.Открыть в текстовом редакторе свою диффу , открыть то что я линканул , скопировать то что в моем линке и вставить с заменой в диффу которая у тебя на винте.WARNING!В моем линке хард соответственно открывать у себя нужно тоже хард.Да если решишь оставить то что я исправил , не забудь переставить пару моментов.
Вроде все.