Byakugan249 wrote:

Niva-san o/. alright let's get started. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like iit.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
There's no specific source where this song is from? Yes, it's an album-exclusive track actually (:

[Normal]
Since this is the easiest diff in the song, how about decreasing the CS by 1 so that it'd be easier for players to hit the notes? >_<
00:20:651 (4) - move this circle down a bit so that there'd be an even gap between the end of (3) and the beginning of (1). i think doing this would make it flow a lot smoother during gameplay since (2) is at the middle of (1,3). Yep~
00:24:401 (6) - the clap sounds unfitting with this part and it might bother other players, so remove the clap because it doesn't match anything. Err... Removed the one on 01:47:135 (4) instead :3
00:30:612 (1) - move this spinner up by 1/4. since this is the easiest diff, putting the spinner at the 1/4 tick might surprise players making them spin a bit too late. I want to follow the music more, actually >_<
00:37:995 (1,1) - this note is too far near the middle. since this is the easiest diff, players may have a tough time getting to this note after the spinner is complete. Fixed~
01:06:588 (2) - add a whistle here. it'll be consistent wit your previous patterns.
01:07:526 (4) - ^ Only did the first (to make it consistent with Hard)
01:08:112 (1) - same as 00:30:612. and same as 00:37:995. Uhm, not really sure, leaving as is for now ._.
01:22:057 (2) - the finish does fit, but the problem is that it's too loud. i think 50 or 60% works fine as it matches the cymbals, so decrease the volume to that. Hard uses this as well xD
01:23:112 (1) - same as 00:30:612.
01:32:370 (1) - same as 00:37:995. Uhm, not really pleased with the current arrangement... Changed anyway ._.
01:45:495 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. it'll act as the cymbals in the song since there's a drum in this part. Yep~
01:46:901 (3) - same as 00:24:401.
02:00:612 (1) - same as 00:30:612.
02:07:995 (1) - you forgot to add a whistle at the end. add it to keep the consistency in the whistles. Yep >_<
02:17:604 (1) - same as 00:30:612. Uhm, want to keep the 1/4 here :3
02:23:463 (2) - same as 02:07:995.
02:30:495 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. you'll hear the cymbal's volume rising as adding it here will act as the big clash. Done both~
02:32:487 (1) - same as 00:30:612.
02:47:370 (1,1) - same as 00:37:995. Moved upward a bit, not really sure though ._.

[Hard]
00:07:760 (6) - *nazi* stack this perfectly on (4). it'll be consistent with your previous stacks during gameplay. Manual stacking, this is to made (4) perfectly placed on the top of previous slider's start :3
00:50:182 (8) - maybe add a whistle at the end to match the vocals since you did it on the next slider, and it'll give off a nice whistle pattern during gameplay.Okay~ (this has been noticed by some modders previously actually, also added it to similar parts (: )
00:52:291 (3) - flip this slider like this. it'll blanket that wave slider in the map. Kept as is because personally I wanted it to flow good with (4) >_<
00:57:682 (8) - same as 00:50:182.
01:05:182 (8) - same as above but at the repeat arrow.
01:07:995 (5) - how about moving this to the left side. that slider overlap bothers me during gameplay. Yep~
01:12:682 (9) - add a whistle at the beginning. same reason as 00:50:182 about the whistles. The whistle here has a pattern, actually (no whistle on dark blue combo, whistle on light blue :3)
01:39:870 (1) - although this is manual stacking, stack this perfectly so that it'd be consistent with your previous stacks in the map. I want to make (8) perfectly centered >_<
01:47:135 (4) - same as 00:24:401 in normal. Yep~
01:50:182 (9) - you forgot to add a clap at the repeat arrow. add it so that it'd be consistent with the clap pattern.
01:53:932 (8) - ^
01:57:682 (9) - ^ These three is intentional (really :3)
02:04:245 (3) - make this a NC. it'll be consistent with the normal diff's arrangement. Yep~
02:11:745 (1) - same as 01:39:870.
02:26:745 (1) - ^ These two's manual stacking are also intentional (:

if you can add more whistles and claps, then this map will be fun and entertaining for players. anyways Star and GL

Niva wrote:

That was unexpected o.o ...

Xakyrie wrote:

Niva wrote:

That was unexpected o.o ...

Why would you be surprised, it was bound to happen soon, the map is becoming increasingly difficult to mod for modders xD

Niva wrote:

That was unexpected o.o ...

Thanks Kawayi Rika ^_^

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EDIT : @Byakugan249 + Xakyrie - thanks both for the support ^_^
I'm still surprised Kawayi Rika give a bubble out of nowhere actually, I was just posting on his queue randomly >_<