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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. looks all fine

merchat7's Easy

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  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unused green line (It's not effect to player. but I suggest you should to remove it):
   00:48:031 -

1. 00:05:600 (3) - [suggest] let the slider ball set at turning point on 00:05:849 - . like this↓.
   
   before

   
   after

   
   if you want use this pattern:
   

   64,320,5600,2,0,B|80:280|56:256|56:256|124:232|132:176,1,180,4|2

2. 00:18:860 (1) - [arc issue] It's a kinda awkward for me. because it's not a rounded shape↓ .same as 00:20:186 (2,3,4) - etc.
   
   photo

   
3. 00:33:943 (2) - [suggest] same as 00:05:600 (3) - issue
   
   photo

   
   if you want use this pattern:
   

   80,136,33943,2,0,B|88:172|64:200|64:200|116:244,1,135,4|4

4. 01:01:291 (3,1) - It's awkward slider for me ~you can make the layout better~ like 01:05:269 (4) - 01:07:921 (3) - etc.
5. 01:09:247 (4,5) - [suggest] let (4)'s slider head and turning point's spacing more relationa to 01:10:904 (5) - like ↓
   
   before

   
   after

   
   

   224,316,69247,2,0,B|248:276|296:264|296:264|296:232|296:168,2,180,4|0|4
   308,352,70904,2,0,B|404:352,2,90,0|8|0

Normal

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 00:29:136 (4,5,2) -
2. 01:18:860 (6,1) -

1. 01:21:843 (7) - 這地方加NC吧 聽起來應該是斷落的開頭...

MPX's Hard

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  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:29:468 (1,2) - [arc issue] It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 00:29:965 (2) - I think you can make it layout better. ((e.g: move left 1 grid for 4th node (grid 3)?
2. 01:02:285 (5,7) - 01:02:617 (6,1) - [nazi] let those full stack for this pattern. please let those full stack. It's can let this pattern look clean.
   
   photo

   
   

   327,99,62285,2,0,B|354:74|366:24,1,80,8|0
   304,172,62617,2,0,B|332:232|324:280|308:312|284:336,1,160,4|0
   226,214,63114,2,0,B|307:187|327:100,1,160,8|0
   381,153,63611,6,0,B|333:156|289:180,1,80

3. 01:17:700 (1,2) - [notice] It's under the spinner text. It's will cause player confuse. so you should avoid it.

Insane

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  Hitsound
  (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  

1. 00:29:136 - 這地方的finish是故意做的嗎?? 可是說實話聽起來並不是很適合耶

1. 00:08:750 (2,3,4) - [suggest] 想辦法把(4)送到中間去吧 不然後面的pattern (00:09:413 (4,6) - )就會有一邊overlaps但是一邊沒有的問題
2. 00:17:700 (5,6) - [suggest] 這個是否作成對稱會好看些?
3. 00:34:440 (16,1) - [nazi] 把這個作成stack吧 這地方stack可以讓圖看起來不會那麼粗糙...
4. 01:23:832 (6) - [suggest]如果說前面的地方你作了NC 那我認為這個點也需要NC.

General

1. Change Audio Lead-In to 1500, because I think Audio Lead-In to 1000 is too fast.

merchat7's Easy

1. 00:25:821 (1) - Move last point to up 3 grids
2. 01:01:291 (3) - (nazi) Move to left 1 grid
3. 01:07:258 (2) - Remove finish in slider begin?

Normal

1. 00:24:164 (1) - Direction of slider is strange. Make to code below is better.
   

   312,276,24164,6,0,B|364:308|432:296,2,120,0|8|0

2. 00:29:302 (5) - I feel strange here. Maybe remove a note be better.
3. 00:34:109 (5) - It's overlap with (3). Player may surprise here.
4. 00:34:772 (1) - Copy (2), then make to this.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:51:843 (4,5) - Move last point of (4) to x:352 y:308, and move (5) to 2 grids be better.
6. 00:52:672 (6) - Same as 00:34:109 (5)
7. 00:56:816 (2) - I feel strange as well. change to 1 circle at 00:56:982 be better.
8. 01:10:573 (3) - Move to up 2 grids. If you're ok, don't forget to fix spacing between (3,4)
9. 01:21:843 (7) - Add NC

MPX's Hard

1. 00:00:297 - Add spinner? (Same as Easy diff)
2. 00:11:899 (4) - Remove finish in slider end
3. 00:17:866 (5) - Change slider to 2 circles?
4. 00:52:672 (6) - It isn't likely to match the rhythm. Move slider end at 00:53:004.

Insane

1. 00:29:136 (8,9,1) - It's spacing to 0.02x. Make (9,1) to stack (0.0x) with slider end of (8)
2. 00:32:120 (7,1) - Here as well, it's spacing to 0.01x. Make (1) to stack (0.0x) with slider end of (7)
3. 00:33:280 (11) - Add NC
4. 00:34:772 (16,1) - Make to stack (0.0x) with slider end of (16)
5. 00:54:993 - (Timing) Move at 00:55:324 be better.

• Easy

1. 00:50:683 (1) - This slider really looks strange. How bout a curve slider instead?
   
   
2. Bump your HP Drain +1.

• Normal

1. 00:02:948 (1,2) - Try to fix the curve of this slider.
   
   
2. I suggest you try to fix all those weird slider to slider overlaps you got there. They don't look good. Not really a huge problem, but trying to avoid would help this map on getting ranked asap.

• Hard

1. 00:10:573 (1) - Remove new combo. Then put a new combo on the next note.
   
   
2. 00:12:562 (1) - Remove new combo too for this part.
   
   
3. 00:13:722 - You're missing a note here I believe. Put a new combo here if you do.
   
   
4. 00:13:888 (4) - If in case you won't add a note, new combo here.
   
   
5. 00:28:805 (6) - This slider can still be improved imo. Try to fix the blanket please.
   
   
6. 00:33:611 (1,2) - I don't really see a good reason for a slowdown on this point.
   
   
7. 00:37:424 (4) - Try to do a grid snap by moving this a lil bit.
   
   
8. Btw, this one is missing a 2nd kiai. Add a kiai on 01:06:595 and end it on 01:19:855 so that the kiai is consistent in all other diffs.
   
   
9. I'd bump OD, AR, and HP by -1. :O

• Insane

1. 00:25:987 - I highly suggest you add a note here.
   
   
2. 00:44:716 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This stream is spaced tightly. D: Please try to widen the space a bit. Use .2 or .3 Distance Snap.
   
   
3. 00:59:965 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't really see any good reason for an antijump here. Please make a new one.

1. Nothing

1. 00:18:197 (4) - Add whistle at the end
2. 00:25:821 (1) - Remove NC add it in the next note 00:26:816 (1)
3. 00:28:473 (1) - Remove NC add it in the xnext note 00:29:136 (1)
4. 00:55:987 (1) - Add clap at the end
5. 00:57:313 (2) - Remove clap at the begin, add it at the end
6. 00:58:639 (3) - ^
7. 01:01:291 (3) - Add clap at the end
8. 01:02:617 (1) - Remove clap at the begin, add it at the end
9. 01:14:219 (4) - Add clap

1. AR - 1
   
2. 00:02:948 (1) - Add finish at the begin
3. 00:16:540 (1) - Add clap
4. 00:16:871 (2) - Add clap at the end
5. 01:20:849 (5) - Add whistle

1. 01:05:932 (3) - Add clap at the begin
2. 01:09:247 (1) - Add clap in the reverse arrow

1. OD + 1
   
2. 00:00:297 (1) - Add whistle
3. 00:00:628 (3) - ^
4. 00:01:291 (5) - ^
5. 00:01:954 (7) - ^
6. 00:02:285 (8) - Add clap at the end
7. 00:02:617 (9) - ^
8. 00:02:927 (x) - Unnsnaped inherited section snap it to 00:02:948 (x)
9. 00:15:628 (3) - Add whistle
10. 00:15:794 (5) - ^ it sound werid without it

• [Insane]
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  First off, I think you may want to turn up the hit volume in the very beginning, like the first combo. That synth noise is so loud I can barely head the hitsounds, but after that where the vocals are the main focus I can hear it fine. (Maybe use Normal hits like MPX did in the hard.)
  
  00:03:777 (2) - I don't like how you have to jump into 2, It's very easy to misread that note and think it comes a few ticks later because of the vocals. (how she is saying wa-ta-shi on every other white tick.) So maybe put this note down with normal space to the end of the slider, and then you jump into 3. To me it makes a lot more sense. http://puu.sh/xdpV
  
  00:06:761 (2) - Reverse this slider maybe? The jump right now is fine, but it felt a lot better to have to jump to 3, rather than that really long jump to 2.
  
  00:13:059 (7) - Pull this up more so the jump is even?
  
  I don't want to touch the rest of the map cause it's so good/pretty ;^;. Nothing wrong as far as I see.

• [MPX's Hard]
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  00:07:258 (1) - remove new combo and add combo to 00:08:252 (3) - then remove new combo on 00:09:247 (1) - .
  00:38:915 (6,1) - remove combo from 1 then add to 6. To keep the combo pattern like you had previous.
  01:03:611 (1,2) - ^ swap combos and stuff
  01:14:385 (1,2) - ^
  01:22:589 (1,1) - Make the spinners like Nyquill did in the normal? Where the first one ends at 01:24:827, then the next starts at 01:25:158?
  
  Good beat placement, could only find those weird combo moments.

• [Normal]
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  00:16:540 (1) - I couldn't catch this note until I played it a second time. With the way the song is going that note is rather confusing. Consider adding something more oriented to the song.

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  for this one, you have two option :

1. 00:19:523 - Add a clap here, it sounds better with the Song itself.
2. 00:20:849 - ^
3. 00:21:512 - If you do these two clap here ^ Delete this one and add it at the end of the slider to keep the consistency.
4. 00:22:838 - Same as ^
   And...
5. As I see on 00:55:987 , add a clap on 00:18:860 & 00:20:186 - It will also keep the consistency with the two slider after.

1. The AR. (AR7)
2. 00:13:225 (6) - When playing, this slider seems really close to the other Slider (5). Can you move the slider for x:132 y:128?
3. 01:27:479 - Delete the Finish and put a Clap instead, also for 01:27:810 : Delete the clap & add a finish instead. It's better because it ends the song. '-'