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Kawada Mami - u/n (Short Ver.)

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Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani


Overall:
Make the mp3 fade out or at least do something so it doesn't end so suddenly!

Insane:
00:37:495 (5) - The slightest of unsymmetrical

Hard:
k

Normal:
01:38:147 (1) - The slightest of unsymmetricals. It's mostly near the 1st two points.

Easy:
k

Moe~. Just get that mp3 fixed.
popner
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Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
01:03:256 (2) - make a symmetry?

[Hard]
at the beginning, follow guitar instead of vocal is better imo.
00:05:702 - add a note? feel empty here
00:22:495 (7) - increase volume or this circle will lose feeling of beat


[Insane]
same suggestion as Hard at the beginning.
HP-1 or fulfill the map. it is easily die even without a miss
00:26:245 (1) - unexpected jump because no vocal change here. Vocal change at 00:26:408
00:39:778 (2) - there is jump between 00:39:289 (5,1), so why not jump between 00:39:452 (1,2)k
00:41:734 (1) - there is vocal at 00:41:897, so change to other patterns?
00:52:332 (1) - this kind of slider (end on big white tick) cause a slip in downbeat, so better to use other pattern
01:22:250 (5) - delete? sounds weird
01:24:289 (4) - there is vocal at 01:24:452, so change to other patterns?
01:37:984 (1) - remove NC, and add NC at 01:38:310 (2) 01:38:962 (10)?


That's all I can find. GL~
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks all
updated ~
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

  1. +16 offset, resnap all notes after.
  2. mp3 cuts out way too suddenly. Apply fade out to the original mp3 so it doesn't sound so bad.
Easy:

00:44:669 (1,2,3) - Make the volume 50% like the other diffs?
01:09:289 (3) - Clap the end?
01:17:278 (1) - Clap the start?
01:38:147 (1) - Why not use the custom slider tick? It sounds strange now.

Normal:

00:14:995 (2) - Add a return since you seem to be following the vocal.

Hard

Good.

Insane:

  1. -1 HP Drain?

00:35:702 (2) - Kind of unexpected / hard to see. Consider moving it down / left to make it more visible.
00:39:452 (1) - Remove clap.
00:43:772 (3) - Delete? Seems strange, doesn't follow the song.
01:07:577 (6) - Note? Seems odd that this is empty when it's the start of the drum roll. Obviously you'll have to adjust 01:07:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - if you do this.
01:39:778 (3) - Clap?
01:39:859 (4) - Delete? Doesn't follow anything.
01:40:104 (5) - ^

Good Luck!
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you
updated ~
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
[Easy]
01:38:163 (1) – this is not symmetrical

[Normal]
-Okay, resnap all notes please
Other than that, everything else is good

[Hard]
Fine

[Insane]
00:31:315 (5) – x:400 y:176. Well … I think this note will be covered by 00:30:337 (1) anyway, try to think of other arrangement ?
00:56:750 (2,3,4,5,6) – if this is a star … don’t you think it’s a little … weird ? (especially 2 and 4)

That’s all, sorry for little poor mod ;w;
Good luck
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you
updated ~
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
IRC mod~

What's fixed :
  1. Adding spinner to most diff
  2. Fixed some awkward rythim in easy and normal
  3. Fixed new combo problem in hard
  4. Some hitsound mod
Overal the map is very good, and worth of bubble. Do some irc re-check too, so let's go~ Bubbled :3

Log
SPOILER
12:31 <Yasora> : congrats~
12:31 <Miya> : hhe, makasih yasora :3
12:31 <Miya> : ayo yasora juga jadi MAT x)
12:31 <Yasora> : tuh kan
12:31 <Miya> : lol
12:33 <Yasora> : bnr kata ak jg haha
12:33 *Yasora bakat jadi peramal *dor
12:33 <Miya> : lol
12:35 <Yasora> : nyan
12:35 <Miya> : nyan~
12:36 <Miya> : gmn nih modding queuenya yasora? >.<
12:36 <Yasora> : hmm
12:36 <Yasora> : kyk modding queue nya wmf mau ga?
12:37 <Miya> : woo, jadi yasora jadi modding tambahan gtu?
12:37 <Miya> : D:
12:37 <Yasora> : iyah... abis gmn lagi...
12:38 <Miya> : apa kyk elly?
12:38 <Yasora> : trsh :)
12:38 <Miya> : :o
12:38 <Miya> : jgn terserah donk =3=
12:39 <Yasora> : XD
12:39 <Yasora> : ya udah kyk elly jg gapapa
12:39 <Miya> : hmm hmm
12:39 <Miya> : ntar dlu deh harus diskusiin sama sekai jg >.<
12:39 <Yasora> : lol
12:40 <Yasora> : kk miya.... mod map ku dong *ditendang
12:41 <Miya> : :o
12:41 <Miya> : yg mana yasora?
12:41 *Yasora is listening to (Kawada Mami - u/n (Short Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/49356]
12:41 <Yasora> : si niva ga mau mod kyknya *sadd
12:42 <Miya> : hmm ok, nanti ya :3
12:42 <Yasora> : asik XD
12:43 <Yasora> : hiks pemilihannya lima bln lagi ;_;
12:44 <Miya> : jgn sedih >.<
12:44 <Miya> : ayo perbagus mod yasora selama 5 bulan lagi :D
12:45 <Yasora> : iyah ></
12:45 <Yasora> : bnykin total post jg :D
12:46 <Miya> : iya :D
12:50 <Miya> : eh
12:50 <Miya> : mau irc mod ga?
12:50 <Yasora> : blh :3
12:51 <Miya> : sip
12:51 <Miya> : dari easy ya
12:51 <Miya> : sekarang >.<
12:51 <Yasora> : ya
12:51 <Yasora> : ncip
12:51 <Yasora> : dah dibk
12:51 <Miya> : bntr
12:52 <Miya> : kq titlenya ganti?
12:52 <Yasora> : ga 0.0
12:52 <Miya> : oh
12:52 <Miya> : ga kbaca / nya
12:52 <Miya> : >.<
12:52 <Yasora> : creatornya 0.0
12:53 <Miya> : Yasora o.o
12:53 <Yasora> : bener kok lol
12:53 <Miya> : hmm
12:53 <Miya> : test play dlu deh
12:55 <Yasora> : monggo
12:55 <Miya> : hmm
12:55 <Yasora> : 0.0
12:56 <Miya> : miya ga saranin kyk gini di easy
12:56 <Miya> : 01:08:489 (2,3) -
12:56 <Miya> : dari white tick langsung ke red tick
12:56 <Yasora> : 0.0
12:56 <Miya> : soalnya bakal susah ditebak, apalagi sama beginner
12:56 <Yasora> : jadi harus gmn?
12:56 <Miya> : bntr
12:57 <Miya> : uploading
12:57 <Miya> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326618
12:57 <Miya> : liat ganti aja jadi slider
12:57 <Yasora> : oke bntr
12:57 <Miya> : itu lebih mudah di lewati sama newbie
12:59 <Miya> : intinya
12:59 <Miya> : kalo dari slider uda merah, jgn langsung pindah ke putih
12:59 <Yasora> : i see
12:59 <Miya> : ke merah lagi, soalnya polarity beda suka susah ditebak
12:59 <Miya> : sisany yasora bisa fix kan?
12:59 <Yasora> : yah
12:59 <Yasora> : bntr
12:59 <Miya> : sip
13:01 <Miya> : 01:38:163 (1) -
13:02 <Miya> : miya kasih codenya di pm ya
13:02 <Yasora> : oke
13:03 <Miya> : dah
13:03 <Miya> : check pm ya
13:03 <Yasora> : ya bntr ~
13:03 <Miya> : waa ga ada spinner nih? o.o
13:04 <Miya> : eh, ini mp3nya cut2an ya? :o
13:05 <Yasora> : yah lol
13:05 <Miya> : euu, fade outnya kurang bagus >.<
13:05 <Miya> : ntar dlu deh
13:05 <Miya> : btw
13:05 <Yasora> : ga di fadeout
13:05 <Yasora> : emang gt
13:05 <Miya> : bnran?
13:05 <Miya> : kurang bagus akhirnya >.<
13:05 <Yasora> : serius dem allah
13:05 <Yasora> : *demi
13:06 <Miya> : hmm ok deh
13:06 <Miya> : btw
13:06 <Yasora> : ya?
13:06 <Miya> : 00:09:468 (1) - 1 gird up please
13:06 <Miya> : nazi >.<
13:06 <Yasora> : lol oke
13:06 <Miya> : ga simetris sama 00:11:424 (2) -
13:06 <Yasora> : 0.0
13:06 <Yasora> : bntr cek pm yang tadi dl
13:06 <Miya> : ok
13:07 <Miya> : eh seriusan ga ada spinner?
13:07 <Miya> : kt miya bisa dikasih spinner :(
13:07 <Yasora> : biarin lah... toh ga smua map hrs ada spinner
13:07 <Yasora> : dah nih
13:08 <Miya> : hee, skornya sama semua mau? :|
13:08 <Miya> : player pada bisa protes
13:08 <Yasora> : gapapa toh waktu itu ada bbrp map yg ga ada spinner jg lol
13:08 <Miya> : ok boleh ga ada spinner, asal emng lagunya ga ada tempat yg cocok buat spinner
13:08 <Miya> : tapi ini bisa :(
13:08 <Yasora> : emng ga ada kan? :o
13:08 <Yasora> : hee
13:08 <Miya> : ada
13:09 <Yasora> : dmn?
13:09 <Miya> : diantara 00:44:685-
13:09 <Miya> : sampe 00:47:294-
13:10 <Yasora> : mau disitu?
13:10 <Yasora> : yakin?
13:10 <Miya> : yes, dengerin aja suara bgnya
13:10 <Miya> : ada suara suuutt gtu
13:10 <Yasora> : lol
13:10 <Miya> : kan :3
13:11 <Yasora> : dah nih
13:11 <Miya> : sip
13:11 <Miya> : diff yang lain juga?
13:11 <Yasora> : ga :o
13:11 <Miya> : kalo ga ada spinner jg bisa ditaroh disitu
13:12 <Miya> : hmm yg normal ga ada spinner tuh
13:12 <Yasora> : emang :o
13:12 <Miya> : insane jg
13:12 <Miya> : taruh dsitu donk >.<
13:12 <Yasora> : yap :o
13:12 <Yasora> : ga ah yang insane mah
13:12 <Yasora> : haha
13:13 <Miya> : hmm, yakin nih? banyak loh player insane yg suka dpt SS :(
13:13 <Miya> : nanti pada protes karena harusnya ranking 1 malah jadi rank 2
13:13 <Yasora> : biarin :3
13:13 <Miya> : yee jgn gtu donk, itu namanya ga fun >.>
13:15 <Miya> : mau apa ga jadinya nih?
13:15 <Yasora> : kl di insane sih ga..
13:15 <Miya> : hmm, kurang meyakinkan, tapi lanjut aja dl deh
13:16 <Yasora> : yg lain jg ga protes mau ada spinner apa ga T_T;;
13:16 <Miya> : 01:00:011 (1) - di repeatnya gmn kasih finish?
13:16 <Yasora> : dah
13:17 <Miya> : masalahnya ini loh yasora
13:17 <Miya> : Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores. However, if a spinner just doesn't fit
13:17 <Miya> : anywhere in the song, then there's no need to force one.
13:17 <Miya> : kalo emng ada tempat yg fit sama spinner kenapa ga?
13:18 <Yasora> : tapi nanti kl add spinner di insane
13:18 <Yasora> : star ratingnya lebih rendah dari hard
13:18 <Miya> : ye gpp kali
13:18 <Miya> : dari judulnya aja udah keliatan
13:18 <Yasora> : nanti jadi hard nya yg dipaling bawah
13:18 <Miya> : terus kenapa?
13:18 <Yasora> : kn jelek
13:18 <Miya> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39356
13:19 <Miya> : itu hardnya dibawah
13:19 <Miya> : insaneny diatas hard
13:19 <Miya> : gpp kali, orang juga ga akan protes
13:20 <Miya> : ya udah deh, kalo g mau, tapi minta pendapat MAT lain dlu sblum miya bubble >.<
13:20 <Miya> : kl yg lain approve, miya jg ok
13:20 <Yasora> : udah nih...
13:21 <Miya> : ok deh sip :3
13:21 <Miya> : hmm, kyknya easy cuman gtu aja deh
13:21 <Yasora> : trs skrng apa lg? o.o
13:21 <Yasora> : oke
13:21 <Miya> : lanjut ke normal ya
13:21 <Yasora> : oke
13:21 <Miya> : emm bentar
13:21 <Miya> : mending yasora update dlu deh
13:21 <Miya> : biar keliatan spinnernya
13:21 <Yasora> : oke
13:22 <Yasora> : dah
13:23 <Yasora> : o.o
13:23 <Miya> : disuruh makan >.<
13:23 <Miya> : nanti dlu ya
13:24 <Yasora> : oke o.o
13:36 <Miya> : back
13:36 <Miya> : lanjut?
13:36 <Miya> : :3
13:36 <Yasora> : bntr owo
13:37 <Miya> : o.o
13:37 <Miya> : ok deh, bilang2 ya kalo mau lanjut
13:37 <Yasora> : test ini dl XD
13:37 *Yasora is playing ClariS - Kokoro no Inryoku [ada deh]
13:38 <Yasora> : udah
13:38 <Yasora> : monggo dilanjut
13:39 <Miya> : ok
13:40 <Miya> : oh ya kelupaan di easy
13:40 <Miya> : gmn kalo ar -1
13:40 <Miya> : soalnya perbedaan sama normal ga jauh beda
13:41 <Yasora> : 0.0
13:42 <Yasora> : kyknya jgn deh.. nnti pd protes lagi suruh naikkin ar gara2 bpm nya gede
13:42 <Miya> : kalo gitu normalnya ar +1
13:42 <Yasora> : blh lah kl itu mah
13:42 <Miya> : sip :3
13:43 <Miya> : dah>
13:43 <Miya> : ?
13:43 <Yasora> : udah
13:43 <Miya> : 00:15:011 (2) - ini flownya kurang bagus, susah nebak iramanya ke note selanjutnya >.<
13:43 <Miya> : saran miya kasih 1 repeat di slider itu
13:43 <Miya> : 1 repeat lagi
13:43 <Yasora> : lol
13:44 <Yasora> : dah
13:44 <Miya> : sip :3
13:45 <Miya> : emm
13:45 <Miya> : 01:11:098 (2) -
13:45 <Miya> : ini juga
13:45 <Miya> : tambah 1 repeat lagi
13:45 <Miya> : tp fix spacingnya ya
13:46 <Yasora> : udah
13:46 <Miya> : 01:13:707 (2) -
13:46 <Miya> : ini jg
13:46 <Yasora> : orz
13:47 <Yasora> : dah
13:47 <Miya> : hmm
13:47 <Miya> : ini juga sih
13:47 <Miya> : 01:16:641 (2) -
13:48 <Miya> : tapi gmn kalo kasih note aja di 01:17:131-
13:48 <Miya> : ?
13:48 <Yasora> : oke 0.o
13:49 <Yasora> : dah
13:49 <Miya> : kyknya dsni juga perlu note tambahan
13:49 <Miya> : 01:12:565-
13:49 <Miya> : iramanya kurang klop
13:49 <Yasora> : jgn deh,, tambah aneh
13:49 <Yasora> : 1/1 biar mudah di ikutin
13:49 <Miya> : ok deh gpp
13:50 <Yasora> : ada lagi?
13:50 <Miya> : ada
13:50 <Miya> : itu baru flow check doank
13:50 <Yasora> : ngacak jg gapapa kok '3'
13:50 <Yasora> : se-nemu nya aja lol
13:51 <Miya> : miya lebih suka urut, biar lebih fokus :3
13:51 <Yasora> : hoo ic owo
13:51 <Miya> : emm
13:51 <Miya> : 00:15:011 (2) - lupa whistle di start?
13:51 <Yasora> : udah
13:52 <Miya> : 01:00:337 (1) - sama kyk easy, finish di start?
13:53 <Yasora> : dah
13:54 <Miya> : 00:53:815 (3) -
13:55 <Miya> : bisa geser ga start pointnya ke 188 256
13:55 <Miya> : terus end pointnya ke 320 256
13:55 <Yasora> : dah
13:56 <Miya> : kq kiai time ga new combo dsini 01:18:924 (2) - ?
13:56 <Miya> : >.<
13:56 <Miya> : kasih newcombo aja yasora
13:56 <Miya> : trus hapus dsni nc nya
13:56 <Miya> : 01:19:902 (1) -
13:56 <Yasora> : kan udah tersentuh 1 kiai nya 0.0
13:57 <Miya> : aneh liatnya o.o
13:57 <Yasora> : lol
13:57 <Yasora> : oke
13:57 <Miya> : trus nc disni 01:21:533 (5) -
13:57 <Miya> : hapus nc dsni 01:22:185 (1) -
13:57 <Yasora> : kan bagus jadi 1-2-3-1-2-3 0.0
13:58 <Yasora> : eh
13:58 <Miya> : skrg jg jadi 1 2 3 4 1 2 3 4
13:58 <Miya> : >.<
13:58 <Yasora> : lupa ga diapus nc nya tadi -_-;;
13:58 <Miya> : lol
13:58 <Yasora> : bntr
13:58 <Yasora> : mos nya mulai edan
13:58 <Miya> : :o
13:58 <Yasora> : udah
13:59 <Miya> : hmm
13:59 <Miya> : kyknya itu aja deh dari normal
13:59 <Miya> : ke hard ya
13:59 <Yasora> : oke owob
14:00 <Miya> : 00:11:587 (2) - lebih keren di stack di bawah 00:11:098 (1) -
14:00 <Miya> : >.<
14:00 <Miya> : lebih enak flownya
14:00 <Yasora> : oke 0.0
14:00 <Yasora> : udeh
14:01 <Miya> : sip :3
14:02 <Miya> : umm
14:02 <Miya> : 00:41:587 (3) - gmn klo nc juga dsni?
14:02 <Miya> : kirain miya itu 1/2
14:03 <Yasora> : oke
14:03 <Yasora> : trap
14:03 <Yasora> : haha
14:03 <Miya> : emng >.<
14:03 <Yasora> : udeh nih
14:03 <Miya> : hardnya kyk normal + o.o
14:04 <Yasora> : masa 0.0
14:04 <Yasora> : licin loh
14:04 <Miya> : iyah
14:04 <Yasora> : biarlah
14:04 <Yasora> : lol
14:04 <Miya> : iya
14:04 <Miya> : komen aja
14:04 <Miya> : :P
14:04 <Yasora> : lol
14:04 <Yasora> : ada lagi?
14:05 <Miya> : bist lebih susah hp od +1 donk
14:05 <Yasora> : ga ah 0.0
14:05 <Miya> : knp? terlalu rendah kt miya
14:06 <Miya> : klo ga mau od aja +1
14:06 <Yasora> : jadi 4.94 0.0
14:06 <Miya> : hoo, ya udah
14:06 <Yasora> : lol di malay ada anak yg bangga2in diri.. ank baru kyknya *oot
14:07 <Miya> : narsis >.>
14:07 <Miya> : eh
14:07 <Miya> : 01:00:011 (5) - kyk diff lain
14:07 <Miya> : finish :3
14:07 <Yasora> : oke owo
14:07 <Yasora> : udeh
14:07 <Miya> : emm
14:08 <Miya> : gmn kalo yg 1/4 slider jadiin triplet aja?
14:08 <Yasora> : yg mana? 0.0
14:08 <Miya> : contoh 01:39:794 (2) -
14:09 <Yasora> : hoo sbnrnya sih lebih bagus 2 circle aja
14:09 <Yasora> : 1/2
14:09 <Miya> : tapi 1/4 juga masuk tuh o.o
14:09 <Miya> : ini jg
14:09 <Miya> : 00:39:305 (1) -
14:09 <Yasora> : 1/2 aja ya ngikutin drum XD
14:09 <Miya> : hhe, ntar bener2 kyk normal + :|
14:10 <Miya> : ya udah deh biarin aja
14:10 <Miya> : ok, kyknya oke semua deh
14:10 <Miya> : lanjut ke insane
14:12 <Yasora> : oke
14:12 <Miya> : omg insanenya
14:12 <Yasora> : (tes)[tes]
14:12 <Miya> : susah >.<
14:12 <Yasora> : hee ga jalan 0.0
14:12 <Yasora> : eh??
14:12 <Miya> : duh bnran deh
14:12 <Yasora> : nmnya insane ya susah zzz
14:12 <Miya> : hardnya kasih triplet biar lebih balanca
14:12 <Miya> : balance*
14:13 <Yasora> : typo lol
14:13 <Miya> : >.<
14:13 <Yasora> : ya ya bntr
14:13 <Yasora> : udeh
14:13 <Miya> : sip
14:14 <Miya> : aduh
14:14 <Miya> : spacingnya fix yasora
14:14 <Miya> : 01:28:870 (8,9,1) -
14:14 <Yasora> : lah knp? udah 1.0x
14:14 <Yasora> : 0.0
14:14 <Miya> : eh
14:15 <Miya> : kq dsni berantakan ya?
14:15 <Miya> : o.o
14:15 <Yasora> : ga tau >.<
14:15 <Yasora> : bntr
14:16 <Yasora> : dah
14:16 <Miya> : sip :3
14:17 <Miya> : 00:55:609 (3) - emm endnya naik 1 grid donk
14:17 <Miya> : biar stacknya lebih pas
14:17 <Yasora> : oke
14:17 <Yasora> : udeh
14:18 <Miya> : 01:00:337 (1) - kyk diff lain
14:18 <Yasora> : lol
14:18 <Miya> : >.<
14:18 <Yasora> : udeh
14:19 <Miya> : hmm
14:20 <Yasora> : 0.0
14:20 <Miya> : 00:41:750 (1) - kq kyknya disini kurang feelnya ya? gmn kalo kasih finish di end?
14:20 <Yasora> : udeh
14:21 <Miya> : hmm
14:21 <Yasora> : o.o
14:21 <Miya> : kyknya sgtu aja deh
14:21 <Yasora> : oke o.o
14:21 <Yasora> : aplod?
14:21 <Miya> : coba update
14:21 <Miya> : yap
14:21 <Miya> : btw
14:21 <Miya> : ke toilet dlu ya
14:21 <Miya> : >.<
14:21 <Yasora> : lol
14:26 <Miya> : yasora
14:26 <Miya> : easy
14:27 <Miya> : 00:52:837 (2) -
14:27 <Miya> : lebih baik dilurusin sama 1 deh
14:27 <Yasora> : O.o
14:27 <Miya> : tanggung banget liatnya
14:27 <Yasora> : udeh
14:29 <Miya> : sip easy mantap
14:31 <Yasora> : 0.0
14:31 <Miya> : hmm, normal kurang yakin sama yg mau kiai nya sih, tapi ok aja deh
14:31 <Miya> : :3
14:33 <Yasora> : 0.0
14:33 *Yasora ktularan wcx
14:33 <Miya> : ktularan?
14:33 <Miya> : o.o
14:33 <Yasora> : bikin emot "0.0"
14:35 <Miya> : lol
14:36 <Miya> : hmm
14:36 <Miya> : dah
14:36 <Miya> : update lagi gih
14:36 <Yasora> : oke owo
14:37 <Yasora> : dah
Yasora
2,702 posts
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Topic Starter
Yasora
yayyyyyy
thank you miya-sama

your first bubble
Vass_Bass
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Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
oh, bubbled, okay
Kurai
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
Kurai
Modding Miya's first bubble ~ !

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:207 (1) - The clap hitsound on the tick may be confusing for some players because the player used to click all notes which have claps. That's why the player may think he have to hit something, but he has to do nothing because it is on the tick. That's kinda confusing.
    So reduce it by 1/1 and add a note at 00:36:859. It makes more sense and is more intuitive.
  2. 00:57:076 (1) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:522 (1) - A 1/2 slider doesn't really fit here, I see what you wanted to do however the vocals are a bit shifted from the music here so following make the pattern sound awkward. Since you can't really follow the voice, you should follow the background music instead (even if the vocals are predominant).
    Thus do something like this ? :
    SPOILER
  2. 01:16:641 (2) - I find the last reverse unintuitive, I actually didn't expect this slider to have 2 reverses. Remove the last reverse then ?
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:881 (5) - I find this stack really awkward, I mean the player have to wait at the same area of the screen for 3/2 before having to hit this slider. It would be more logical to espace these notes. It would flow better because it really flow awkward here. >w<
  2. 00:16:968 (5) - ^
  3. 00:30:337 (1) - Can you try making a better curve here ?
  4. 00:40:609 (3,1,2,1) - This kind of patterns are combo breakers. I mean they are very hard to read, too hard for a Hard difficulty in my opinion (In Hard difficulties, all patterns need to be intuitive, keep in mind that Hard difficulty players aren't really pro >w<).
  5. 00:58:544 (2) - I think 3 1/2 notes would fit better here :
    SPOILER
  6. 01:21:696 (3) - 1/2 doesn't sound well here, remove this slider and add a circle at 01:21:859 or just add a reverse on 01:21:207 (2) ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:218 (4,5) - I assume you wanted to follow the vocals here right ? Well, it doesn't fit pretty well, I suggest you this pattern instead :
    SPOILER
  2. 00:31:642 (1) - The end of this slider is too close from the left border of the playfield, , that not really comfortable to play. :/
    Besides the hitburst is cut, that looks awkward. Please make another slider pointing in another direction.
Yasora
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Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you
updated ><~
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
Okay, those were just minor fixes so I'll go ahead and rank it now ~ !
Akemi_Homura
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Joined February 2011
Akemi_Homura
gratz~ Yasora chan~ ><
Yasora
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Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank youuuu moe kurai /owo)/
and thank you akemi chan~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Yay congratz on the rank Ya-chan ;)
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Nymph
lol shana so moe~
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
more shana =w=/ gratz Yasora moe~
IGame0verxI
IGame0verxI
congratz Yasora! D:
Miya
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Joined June 2011
Miya
waw o.o

Kurai really rank this. Congratz Yasora~ :D
AIR315
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Joined May 2011
AIR315
Congratz~
Meowcenaries
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Meowcenaries
grats
NAI_old_1
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NAI_old_1
good!
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