Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's get started. Mod requested on my queue. i see from your other mod replies that you take the easy route and say no. when you read over my mod, i don't want that. if you ignore any of my suggestions, please give a reason why you ignored it. i did all this to help you, and i want you to return the favor. it'll make me a better modder in the future if you give me a reason why you ignored it.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
the timing is a bit too early. it should be 260(-10). i testplayed this and it plays perfectly. well don't want to change timing for now, because,,,, you can look at Kyshiro's mod and he says +6,,, I don't know who is right ^^b

[Easy]
Try to reach around 2 stars. the diff gap between easy and normal is big. ok~ will try
Maybe you can increase the AR and OD by 1. i think it'll flow a lot smoother to the song. well I think that's a bit fast, it's an Easy diff, don't want diff settings too high.
00:03:645 - add a circle here to start the rhythm. k
00:04:770 (2) - Unstack this because beginners might hit this too early. they might get nervous and might hit it too early or late. k
00:08:520 (2) - add a finish at the end. if you listen carefully, you'll hear the sound of the whistles. k
00:12:270 (1) - similar as above. k
00:16:020 (2) - make this a NC. the sliders is following the keyboard and the guitar starts here again. k
00:18:270 (1) - same as 00:08:520 but at the beginning. k
00:22:770 (2,3) - same as 00:04:770. well I don't think at this rhythm they will :p
00:36:270 (1) - i don't like the overlap on this. it really bothers me during gameplay. face it vertically so that it wont be a bother for me. seems no way around :<
00:49:582 (4) - replace this for a 1/2 slider starting 1 tick back. it'll play nicely with the guitar. k
01:02:895 (1,2) - same as 00:04:770. k
01:04:770 (1,2) - replace this for a slider. hitting (2) would be hard for beginners since it's at the red tick, and add finishes at both ends. if you ignore this, then add finishes at the circles to match the cymbals in the song. nice lol
01:10:957 (3,4,5) - this rhythm might throw off beginners because of the rhythm it's taking. i suggest that you replace 2 of the 3 notes for a slider to make it slightly easier for beginners to play. made slider afterwards~
01:15:832 (2) - replace this for a slider and end it till 01:16:395. it follows the guitar and that's where the drum hit. k
01:39:645 - since you have a repeat planted at the middle, add a circle here for consistency purposes with the notes. ~
01:40:770 (1,2,3) - replace this for a 1/1 slider. it'll make a nice circle to slider pattern. k
01:42:645 - add a circle here to keep the pattern going. k
01:47:520 (2) - add a finish with the clap to match the cymbals, or you can replace the clap for a finish. same reason. k
02:04:770 (1,2,3,4) - make a shape out of this. for example, you can make a diamond out of these 4 circles. k
02:38:895 - add a spinner here and end it till 02:41:145 to follow the long pause in the guitar. good
02:53:895 (2) - make this a NC. as you see, (1)'s rhythm is uneven as it follows the guitar. The reason i want you to do this is because the guitar goes back to its original rhythm. you're right lol
you're using too many 1/1 repeat and 2/1 sliders. if you can add 3/1 sliders maybe even 4/1 sliders, i think it'll be a fun diff. there's too many 1/1 gaps and that's why i mentioned that you should add 3 or 4/1 sliders, and add more finishes. you missed several finishes that goes with the cymbals with the song. go back to the song and add more finishes to match the cymbals. ^^b don'k know where fits 3/1 or 4/1

[Normal]
The settings look like if it were in an easy diff. Increase the HP by 1 and OD by 2. these settings would be perfect for a normal diff. increased od by 1~
00:00:270 (1) - to make it fun in the beginning, remove all repeats and add another 1/1 slider to where the 2nd repeat and the end is. sorry wanna keep sliding inside :<
00:06:270 (1) - to make it interesting, replace this for a 3/1 slider. maybe even a 4/1 slider. ;_; covers too much of the screen
00:40:020 (2) - *nazi* go 1 grid up at the end point to straighten this slider. k~
01:02:145 (1) - this note is too far near the middle. players might have a tough time getting to this note in time. spin big circles? ok then~
01:55:770 (1) - remove the finish at the end. it sounds weird and i find it unfitting with this part. k
02:01:395 (1) - add a finish on the repeat to match the cymbals in the song. k
02:29:895 (4) - remove the whistle. it ruins the consistency in whistles. k
02:52:645 (1) - this kind of rhythm would make players let go at the middle of the kick slider because the rhythm is uneven making the players feel uncomfortable. try to do something easier than this because this looks hard for players to clear. I think it's easy enough because can't think of things easier o.o 1/3 -> 1/2 rhythm is always hard, and I added NC next circle, maybe it can warn players
same comment as easy.

[Hard]
same as normal about the diff settings, but increase the HP by 2 and the OD by 1. hp7 hard? no ._.
00:29:145 (2) - to make it fun, do Ctrl+R for a smoother flow in the jump. next flows weird then...
01:25:770 (1,2,3,4) - idk about you but this confuses me. going back and forth with this kind of rhythm will throw me off during gameplay. to make it less confusing, re-arrange these notes to form a shape. i think it'll be funner than the current pattern. well I think this fits the music which goes back and forth too
01:29:145 (2) - same as 00:29:145. same as 00:29:145 ;_;
01:30:645 (2) - ^
01:58:395 (7) - align this to (5) and make this a curved slider lik e 95,6) for a smoother flow. the straight slider breaks the flow during gameplay. k~
03:00:270 (4) - same as 00:29:145.
03:41:895 (4) - make this a NC. the instrumental changes from here. ok~
03:43:770 (2) - same as 00:29:145. changed this part lol
03:45:270 (2) - ^
same comment as easy, and there's too many 1/2 kick sliders. if you do that too many times, it'll look boring for players to do. rearrange them to something else so that the pattern would look fun for players to do. ~

[AR194]
why is the diff name "AR194"? i don't see a resemblance to the name. since this is a touhou map, re-name the diff to "Lunatic". If I name it "Lunatic", itll kind of be confusing as an approval diff. Needs a better name, anyways
00:32:332 (2) - Do Ctrl+R. Since this is going for app, doing this will give a nice challenge for players. I like my flow lol
01:38:520 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - keep the spacing even for this stream. it'll make players feel uncomfortable when they move their mouse/tablet. it's intentional as music goes faster(?)
01:49:395 (1,2) - remove the NC for (1). the instrumental is still going from this kick slider. (2) should be a NC because that's when the instrumental changes in the song. k
03:20:520 (5,6) - space out these notes for a nice challenge for players. it should look like this. sorry don't like that style - -b
03:28:770 (2) - Ctrl+R to make it fun for players? sure~
03:42:270 (2) - ^ ~
03:44:145 (3) - ^ ~
same comment as easy about the finishes, and the patterns can be better, but overall this diff isn't bad.

I guess that's it. GL

Thanks very much!~

喵～APP难度自动无视
全难度STR=1

[hard]
AR+1
00:35:520 (4) - remove it
01:22:770 - 其实这段开始的变奏可以把滑条速度适当提高的啦，这样会比较有效果

其实挑不出什么啊，就设这选曲我实在是不感冒

AoiX wrote:

喵～APP难度自动无视
全难度STR=1 我觉得2合适啊

[hard]
AR+1 AR7多好>_> HRDT方便
00:35:520 (4) - remove it 嗯
01:22:770 - 其实这段开始的变奏可以把滑条速度适当提高的啦，这样会比较有效果 喂

其实挑不出什么啊，就设这选曲我实在是不感冒

stress

Hi there ~~ m4m

[General]

1. Zun to tags
2. Easy和Normal难度感觉并不适合用STR2，建议降低到1
3. AlwaysShowPlayfield: 1 这个没专门用途就去掉吧，没必要凭空占用SB Load，防删BG也不是这么玩的…………

[Easy]

1. 00:42:270 (1) - 感觉这个加次折返会更好点？
2. 排版和节奏本身并没有什么可说的，但是我觉得……整个diff有一种很牵强的感觉……恩……怎么说呢……应该说这曲子其实很不适合把难度做到这么低，然后为了做一个Easy而硬生生的把节奏拉下来之后导致各种违和……其实要我说既然已经Lunatic for app了。。干脆就保留一个Lunatic难度都可以呢……
   
   如果一定要做Easy的话，我觉得难度在3星左右应该就足够了……这个实在是。。1.25。。太低了……

[Normal]

1. 00:16:020 (2) - 建议拆成2个slider
2. 00:49:395 (5) - 向前移动到红线并且加一个折返？感觉会好听点
3. 01:27:832 (4) - 感觉节奏上有点别扭。。。建议删掉，然后在01:28:020 - 放个note试试？
4. 01:37:770 (1) - 这个折返的感觉是没有压在鼓点上。。。建议用2个1/1slider
5. 01:42:270 (4) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:39:457 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这里的节奏调整建议～
   
2. 01:12:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 和上面类似的节奏建议
3. 01:28:207 (4,5) - 这里的三连感觉应该在红线上呢
4. 01:43:770 (1,2,3,4) - 真的不好听……
5. 01:52:395 (1,2,3) - 这里感觉倒是可以放个五连，因为有音乐支撑
6. 没有什么大的问题。。不过Kiai段的节奏和排列感觉太过单调（前后都是一样）。。。。恩。。怎么说呢。。如果可以的话还是想办法弄的多变一些？

[AR194]

1. 00:30:082 - 要是我的话会在这里加进三连……
2. 00:35:895 (3,4,5) - 这里建议把三连做到后面红线上……
3. 01:38:613 (6) - 感觉删掉的话节奏会更舒服
4. 01:43:770 (1,2,3) - 这个这个。。1/3感觉没有理由啊…………
5. 01:46:395 - 从这里开始的一大段stream其实只有一个建议—— 一直朝一个方向绕而且缺少变化的话其实挺无聊的………………
6. 02:52:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 求大跳……
7. 02:55:207 - 建议从这里开始stream
8. 03:17:145 (3) - 这个1/8也是感觉没理由……建议就白线上一个note干干净净的就正好
9. 03:19:207 (10,11,1) - 这里突然变间距看起来好别扭…………
10. 03:27:645 (5) - 这里依然是建议就改用一个note在白线上
11. 03:29:145 (3) - ^

差不多就这些了呢～～加油的说

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there ~~ m4m

[General]

1. Zun to tags no
2. Easy和Normal难度感觉并不适合用STR2，建议降低到1 嗯.. 一样比较好吧 normal我也觉得2好
3. AlwaysShowPlayfield: 1 这个没专门用途就去掉吧，没必要凭空占用SB Load，防删BG也不是这么玩的………… 那是啥= = 我也不知道为什么会有, 删了

[Easy]

1. 00:42:270 (1) - 感觉这个加次折返会更好点？加了个圈
2. 排版和节奏本身并没有什么可说的，但是我觉得……整个diff有一种很牵强的感觉……恩……怎么说呢……应该说这曲子其实很不适合把难度做到这么低，然后为了做一个Easy而硬生生的把节奏拉下来之后导致各种违和……其实要我说既然已经Lunatic for app了。。干脆就保留一个Lunatic难度都可以呢……
   
   如果一定要做Easy的话，我觉得难度在3星左右应该就足够了……这个实在是。。1.25。。太低了……

stress... 星数不好控制啊, 想做简单难度, 结果就太简单了

[Normal]

1. 00:16:020 (2) - 建议拆成2个slider no
2. 00:49:395 (5) - 向前移动到红线并且加一个折返？感觉会好听点 不喜欢那个节奏lol
3. 01:27:832 (4) - 感觉节奏上有点别扭。。。建议删掉，然后在01:28:020 - 放个note试试？...不太好吧
4. 01:37:770 (1) - 这个折返的感觉是没有压在鼓点上。。。建议用2个1/1slider 嗯
5. 01:42:270 (4) - ^ 这里倒是有鼓点, 算了

[Hard]

1. 00:39:457 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这里的节奏调整建议～ - -干嘛用一样的不好玩了就
2. 01:12:457 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 和上面类似的节奏建议
3. 01:28:207 (4,5) - 这里的三连感觉应该在红线上呢 会吗/.\
4. 01:43:770 (1,2,3,4) - 真的不好听…… 有1/3还不放太不够意思了
5. 01:52:395 (1,2,3) - 这里感觉倒是可以放个五连，因为有音乐支撑 stress
6. 没有什么大的问题。。不过Kiai段的节奏和排列感觉太过单调（前后都是一样）。。。。恩。。怎么说呢。。如果可以的话还是想办法弄的多变一些？嗯, 不过再说吧lol

[AR194]

1. 00:30:082 - 要是我的话会在这里加进三连…… 这都加 节操呢
2. 00:35:895 (3,4,5) - 这里建议把三连做到后面红线上…… no._.
3. 01:38:613 (6) - 感觉删掉的话节奏会更舒服 k
4. 01:43:770 (1,2,3) - 这个这个。。1/3感觉没有理由啊………… 有
5. 01:46:395 - 从这里开始的一大段stream其实只有一个建议—— 一直朝一个方向绕而且缺少变化的话其实挺无聊的……………… 明明都在改变方向转!! /stress
6. 02:52:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 求大跳…… 这节奏跳下去不舒服lol
7. 02:55:207 - 建议从这里开始stream no... 什么心态...
8. 03:17:145 (3) - 这个1/8也是感觉没理由……建议就白线上一个note干干净净的就正好 ._.是1/6, 听25%就知道了 ...不过我也觉得有没什么好点的梗代替一下, 确实有点不顺
9. 03:19:207 (10,11,1) - 这里突然变间距看起来好别扭………… /.\那也是跟音乐变速啦
10. 03:27:645 (5) - 这里依然是建议就改用一个note在白线上
11. 03:29:145 (3) - ^

差不多就这些了呢～～加油的说

呼

thanks for modding

here my mod (sorry for late )

Normal
CS +1 *
AR -1 *
02:11:504 (1) NC? why?

Hard
AR too fast -1 *
01:01:395 spinner to near with slider please fix
02:27:082 ^

AR194
HP+1 *
02:27:082 spinner to near with hit circle please fix

*suggestion

frans_niko wrote:

here my mod (sorry for late )

Normal
CS +1 *
AR -1 * no
02:11:504 (1) NC? why? ok removed

Hard
AR too fast -1 * ok
01:01:395 spinner to near with slider please fix I don't think it a problem you can stop spinning earlier
02:27:082 ^ ^

AR194
HP+1 *
02:27:082 spinner to near with hit circle please fix I don't think it a problem you can stop spinning earlier

*suggestion

Thanks for modding anyways

but many people cannot earlier because to like spinning T_T

edit: it will unrankable maybe
edit2: Loli Cjj said to me that people cannot get the ryhtme if the spinner to near with the hit circle / slider

frans_niko wrote:

but many people cannot earlier because to like spinning T_T

well compared to spinning, prople would rather get no combobreak imo, lol

and this thing in hard/insane diffs are not unrankable, you can see some ranked maps (orz there are many, idk)

see this map (randomly selected lol) http://osu.ppy.sh/s/47690

edit2: then she is wrong too, unless you do this in Easy/Normal and spinner is very short

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Easy]
AR+1
00:36:270 (1) - 感觉上跟前面那个换个形状比较好 毕竟背景音乐也有所变化
01:20:895 (1) - ^
00:49:582 (4) - delete clap
01:47:520 (2) - delete finish
01:57:270 (1) - delete newcombo
02:08:895 (2,3) - 都往后推2格(timing)
02:25:020 (1) - finish


[AR194]
HD+1?
00:02:520 (10) - not stack completely?
01:32:145 (2) - ^
03:12:270 (2) - ^
03:13:770 (2) - ^
01:36:082 (8,9,1) - spacig error
03:19:207 (10,11,1) - ^
03:08:520 (6) - seems like hidden
--------------------------------------------------
其他两个diff没问题
Wonderful Mapset

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Easy]
AR+1 no...
00:36:270 (1) - 感觉上跟前面那个换个形状比较好 毕竟背景音乐也有所变化
01:20:895 (1) - ^ 不会摆了放弃...
00:49:582 (4) - delete clap no...
01:47:520 (2) - delete finish k
01:57:270 (1) - delete newcombo k
02:08:895 (2,3) - 都往后推2格(timing) 不好- -
02:25:020 (1) - finish k


[AR194]
HD+1? it'll make hp drain too much when no stream
00:02:520 (10) - not stack completely?
01:32:145 (2) - ^
03:12:270 (2) - ^
03:13:770 (2) - ^故意的, 自动叠的不自然
01:36:082 (8,9,1) - spacig error
03:19:207 (10,11,1) - ^ 变速串而已
03:08:520 (6) - seems like hidden 还好吧
--------------------------------------------------
其他两个diff没问题
Wonderful Mapset

thanks for modding

好数了一下 现在有38个mods

来看看能不能攒到53个

路过的都看下modder list, 没mod过的都来帮个忙啊

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Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)






Then, Good Luck! 39th mod post here!

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

1. Still allowing single difficulty for approval? don't know haha
2. Gonna write it here first. Seems your claps aren't placed regularly, ignore parts of my clap mod if you've your own thought.

Easy

1. Red line notes for Easy x_x..

00:33:832 - Lack of a support from music, move it to 00:34:020 - for a more suitable rhythm for Easy sounds weird to me...
01:42:645 (4) - Obvious unequal spacing ok
02:10:395 - Rhythm's pattern suggestion ;_; can't see

SPOILER

02:59:895 - Why not finish while kiai starts D:? ok

Normal

1. O_O 500m scores for Normal!!

01:03:270 (1) - Though a downbeat here, switch the new combo to 01:04:770 (4) - ok~
01:31:020 (6) - Move to save level with 01:30:270 (4) - duno...

SPOILER

Hard

1. D: Missing claps here and there!

00:10:770 (4) - Can't actually read as a double reverse silder.. Rhythm are inconsistency with previous part too. Suggest to remove one reverse (Repair clap for it, too)
00:19:020 (3) - Aww I hate these ;_; Players can't read where you like to place such sliders. It's confusing.
00:40:020 (3,1,2) - Example, ^their pattern don't even have any difference. But rhythm is. So that's how these sliders misleading how do we read your pattern. o.o changed something like these
01:03:832 (2) - Better not to stack it. Check 00:29:145 (2,3) - , you used to stack for 1/1 rhythm. But current one is 1/2. Once again, it may cause the same issue as previous line. Try this pattern?

SPOILER

01:23:707 (4) - , 01:24:082 - Feel like missing claps, or adding claps like 01:35:707 (4,5,6) - ok
01:40:395 - Clap ok
02:28:770 (4) - , 02:30:082 (5) - Both adding whistles at the end hmm no...
02:36:270 (2,3) - , 02:36:832 (4,5) - , 02:37:395 (6,7) - Ctrl+R (For switching hitsounds' position) I think it's fine o.o
02:46:770 (2,3) - , 02:47:332 (4,5) - , 02:47:895 (6,7) - ^
03:04:207 - Missing clap
03:29:520 - Clap?
03:36:832 - Missing clap
03:46:207 - ^

And once again. I hate those double reverse sliders ;_; orz

AR194

1. Quite nonsence with 4000m scores for first half of your map, as your rhythm aren't placed frequently (Except streams part). Plus sliderticks are soooo noisy x_x
2. Everything were great before your last kiai comes lol XD

00:01:957 (7) - Delete clap, sounds unnecessary with two 1/4 claps.
00:06:645 - Clap
00:14:332 (4) - Remove clap, 00:14:520 (6) - Clap, 00:14:801 (9) - Remove clap, 00:14:895 (10) - Clap
00:17:895 - Obvious sounds from music, add a clap here
00:22:395 - ^
00:26:613 (8,9) - Switch claps, 00:26:989 (12) - Remove clap
01:22:301 (2,4) - Remove clap, too harsh for whole stream's clap (For first half of kiai only)
01:23:801 (7) - ^
01:26:801 (5,7) - ^
01:29:988 (7) - O_O eh, why no claps here.
01:31:395 (5) - ^
01:34:582 (7) - Seems fine to add a clap here too
01:40:582 (7) - ^
01:48:082 - Clap
01:49:207 (9) - ^
01:49:395 (11) - Why not starting a new combo here ?

I may give up modding claps for streams part, hahahaha.

02:13:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ahhhhmyears! Lower volume for this stream! Please!
02:55:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - No claps here? fixed most of the claps XD

Then, Good Luck! 39th mod post here!

Thanks very much!~

OK, it's Demetori


[AR194]
AR+185
01:06:832 (2,3) - I feel music is still moving on, make them to non-stacked? For example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353245
01:36:176 (9) - that spacing doesn't look tidy
02:27:645 (1) - Since you chose 3 circles for triplet, if you chose a slider for triplet, I won't point its huge spacing. But spacing 3.81x is harsh in this case imo. Maybe change their{02:27:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3)} formation?
03:19:301 (11) - that spacing doesn't look tidy

Great job


[Hard]
01:42:270 (6) - NC

Nothing else


[Normal]
00:19:020 (3,4,5) - Perhap 2 grids up
00:49:395 (5) - You forgot to add finish to its end
01:55:770 (1,2) - Try this code
03:15:270 (2,3,4) - Make them more separated
03:25:395 (5) - Maybe 1 grid down
03:41:895 (1) - Make its shape same with 03:42:645 (2) ?


[Easy]
00:36:270 (1) - To avoid overlap with previous slider, change it like this? http://puu.sh/DLpG
00:49:395 (4) - Add finish to its end


Should have my star, great mapset.

ykcarrot wrote:

OK, it's Demetori


[AR194]
AR+185
01:06:832 (2,3) - I feel music is still moving on, make them to non-stacked? For example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353245 oh sure
01:36:176 (9) - that spacing doesn't look tidy well that's intentional
02:27:645 (1) - Since you chose 3 circles for triplet, if you chose a slider for triplet, I won't point its huge spacing. But spacing 3.81x is harsh in this case imo. Maybe change their{02:27:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3)} formation? well, for 1/3 I think that spacing is ok, 120 bpm many people can single tap lol
03:19:301 (11) - that spacing doesn't look tidy

Great job


[Hard]
01:42:270 (6) - NC ok~

Nothing else


[Normal]
00:19:020 (3,4,5) - Perhap 2 grids up ok
00:49:395 (5) - You forgot to add finish to its end ok
01:55:770 (1,2) - Try this code weird imo..

Code and Screenshot

400,208,115770,6,0,B|372:180|372:180|372:44|372:44|344:16,2,210,4|0|8
480,128,117270,2,0,B|452:100|452:100|316:100|316:100|288:72,2,210,0|0|8

03:15:270 (2,3,4) - Make them more separated ok

Position and Screenshot

2 - x:384 y:240
3 - x:472 y:308
4 - x:364 y:332

03:25:395 (5) - Maybe 1 grid down ok
03:41:895 (1) - Make its shape same with 03:42:645 (2) ? no lol


[Easy]
00:36:270 (1) - To avoid overlap with previous slider, change it like this? http://puu.sh/DLpG ok~
00:49:395 (4) - Add finish to its end ok~


Should have my star, great mapset.

Thanks

dragonxcz wrote:

M4M

[Easy]

00:07:770 (1,2) - Don't stack it. (confusing for new players) I think stacking is ok~
00:22:770 (2,3) - ^
01:30:270 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/DOyZ This slider instead of notes. good~
02:05:520 (2) - Note is overlaped by 02:03:270 (2) that's fine o.o
02:10:395 (1,2) - Fits bad. i think that's fine..
02:35:895 (1,2) - Use same sliders.?
02:53:895 (1) - Finish is very loud! Consider adding green points: Offset 173707 (50% volume);Offset 174082 (80% volume). ok~
03:17:895 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/DOKC Don't use linear sliders so often. ok~

[Normal]

00:36:270 (1,2,3,4) - Very confusing for new players. Try this http://puu.sh/DOOw no... o.o
01:34:020 (3) - CTRL+J
01:42:270 (4,1,2) - http://puu.sh/DORJ fixed
02:30:645 - Note here. ok

Easy and Normal are very hard for new players I think.

[Hard]

01:04:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/DPdE
01:46:770 (1) - Move 3rd point at x:180 y:268
02:10:020 (2) - Remove NC
Don't make so much linear sliders, it's ugly.

[AR194]

00:02:520 (10) - Stack?
00:16:770 (5) - Map is very fast, so this kills flow.
00:20:520 (8) - http://puu.sh/DPp2 fixed
00:26:520 (1) - NC x:216 y:192
00:26:613 (2) - x:184 y:168
00:26:707 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - start at x:151 y:150
00:27:270 (9) - Try this slider http://puu.sh/DPvz Green points: Offset 27270 (60% Volume;Slider Velocity 0,5) fixed
Offset 28113 (30% Volume;Slider Velocity 0,5)
Offset 28301 (60% Volume;Slider Velocity 1)
00:45:457 - Note here. (+NC)
00:45:551 - ^ (Without NC)
00:45:645 (1) - Remove NC if you follow ^
02:28:020 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Bad pattern. orz
02:59:801 (1) - Remove NC
03:00:082 (3) - NC
03:53:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/DPJ4 Try some stuff at the end. fixed

thanks for modding~

Hi from my queue o/

General

The map is so noisyyyy @.@ Please decrease the volume!

Easy and Normal are fine!

Hard

02:02:520 (2) - 1 grid down, 3 grid right
02:11:520 (4) - I don't like this slider's shape... can you change it? (It's just a suggestion)

AR194

00:02:520 (10) - Don't stack with 00:02:145 (9) please, I retried the map a lot of times and I missed it all the times :°
01:36:082 (8,9) - Why different spacing?
02:28:020 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is very confusing

Sorry for shit modding but this map is very good, why isn't it approved yet?
Check out my map if you want t/87094

Byee :3

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from my queue o/

General

The map is so noisyyyy @.@ Please decrease the volume!

Easy and Normal are fine!

Hard

02:02:520 (2) - 1 grid down, 3 grid right ok~
02:11:520 (4) - I don't like this slider's shape... can you change it? (It's just a suggestion) I like lol

AR194

00:02:520 (10) - Don't stack with 00:02:145 (9) please, I retried the map a lot of times and I missed it all the times :° well I can clear it without miss lol
01:36:082 (8,9) - Why different spacing? it's intentional ;D
02:28:020 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is very confusing well I tried to make it something else, can't find good pattern that fits orz

Sorry for shit modding but this map is very good, why isn't it approved yet? well I can't find MATs, nowadays many MATs afk, like sp3, DJPop orz
Check out my map if you want t/87094

Byee :3

Thanks for modding :3 gonna check your map

Brace yourself, long long hitsound mod coming in.

First of all,

General
Add those hitsounds. They work perfect with this kind of music. http://puu.sh/ExnE
Reduce the slider-tick to 1. It really sounds annoying. Or at least mute the sound.

AR194
Note that I do this mod with the above mentioned hitsounds.

00:01:582 (3) - add clap
00:01:863 (6) - remove clap
00:02:145 (9) - add finish
00:03:738 (2) - remove clap
00:04:020 (5) - add clap
00:04:770 (7) - ^
00:05:520 (3) - ^
00:05:895 (4) - remove clap from end
00:06:270 (5) - add clap
00:07:020 (3) - ^
00:07:770 (5) - ^
00:08:988 (2) - remove clap
00:09:270 (5) - add clap
00:10:020 (6) - ^
00:10:770 (3) - ^
00:11:895 (6) - add finish
00:12:270 (1) - add finish and clap
00:13:020 (4) - add clap
00:16:770 (5) - ^
00:17:520 (6) - finish to end
00:18:270 (3) - clap + finish
00:18:645 (4) - clap to end
00:19:770 (7) - clap
00:20:520 (8) - ^
00:21:270 (1) - ^
00:22:770 (4) - ^
00:23:520 (7) - ^
00:24:270 (3) - ^
00:25:863 - add a note here.
00:26:520 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - wrong. very wrong. remove everything from 8-14 and listen VERY closely to the music. Do you notice the 1/3 pattern? I noticed that at 100% speed! This must be fixed. Take this as reference. http://puu.sh/Exts
00:28:770 (1) - finish
00:32:332 (2) - ^
00:33:270 (1) - ^
00:36:832 (2) - ^
00:39:082 (6) - ^
00:36:832 (2) - remove clap
00:37:395 (3) - add clap to start, remove from end, add finish to end.
00:37:957 (4) - remove clap from end
00:39:082 (6) - remove clap
00:42:832 (4) - finish
00:46:770 (1) - finish
00:46:863 (2) - remove clap
00:47:145 (5) - add clap
00:47:332 (6) - remove clap, add finish
00:47:520 (1) - clap
00:48:082 (5) - ^
00:48:832 (3) - ^
00:49:207 (4) - finish + clap
00:49:395 (6) - remove clap from start

- the next part is a repitation so fix that yourself -

01:22:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - remove the claps.
01:23:801 (7) - ^
01:23:895 (8) - ^
01:24:082 (10) - add clap
01:25:301 (7) - remove clap
01:26:801 (5,6,7,9) - remove claps
01:28:395 (5,6) - ^
01:28:582 (7) - add clap + finish
01:29:895 (6,7) - remove claps
01:30:082 (8) - add clap
01:31:395 (5) - remove clap
01:32:801 (5,6,7,9) - remove claps
01:34:020 (3) - remove clap from start, add clap and finish to end
01:34:395 (5,6) - remove claps
01:34:582 (7) - add clap + finish
01:35:801 (5,6,7,9) - remove claps
01:35:988 (7,8,9) - what's with the spacing?
01:38:801 (7,8,9,11) - remove claps
01:40:020 (3) - add finish to end
01:40:582 (7) - add clap + finish
01:41:895 (6,7) - remove claps
01:42:082 (8) - add clap
01:43:207 (4,7) - add finishes.
01:43:770 (1,2,3) - remove claps from start, add to end.
01:44:988 (5) - remove clap
01:45:270 (1) - add clap
01:45:832 (3) - add clap to start
01:46:020 (4,5) - remove claps
01:46:488 (7) - ^


Ahh, I've had enough. Check the rest for yourself.
TiP: listen to the music in the editor at 25% speed and listen closely to the beat. Remove all claps you added which are not present in the music and add claps to places you missed out. Do this for ALL diffs.

This map should not be ranked before you sort out your hitsounds.

@Tenshi-nyan:

about that hitsound pack: yea great hitsounds, I added clap and finish, hitnormal is too quiet imo ;_;

00:26:520 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ... I listened in 25% and it'sl right? o.o

00:25:863 - more like two notes :3

00:22:770 (4) - I didn't add claps to spots like this slider's head, because it sounds as a relatively low part (than sliderend) in music, to provide distinction, I think no clap is better.

01:32:801 (5,6,7,9) - WHY REMOVE THIS

01:35:988 (7,8,9) - intentional slowdown stream

yea I looked through the claps :3 fixed most things except above.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

This map should not be ranked before you sort out your hitsounds. no, this won't get ranked, not just because I can't find bubble, I'm bored with this song now. when it reaches 53 mods, I'll set to +53 and let it go graveyard.

also, this is my last intention to rank my map, I have 14 maps unsubmitted already, so I'll most likely upload and let it die after now.

update tomorrow (remember full submit)

Hi ! From my modding queue (liked the song so even if the draining time was a bit long i decided to have a look ) !

Easy

Nothing to say !

Normal

- AR 4 ?

00:16:020 (2) - Maybe could you remove a reverse and add a circle under the end of the slider instead ? Imo it would fit more a Normal, and here it's quite unexpected as all previous small sliders only had one reverse ^^
00:46:770 (1) - Same here, and there are few more in the map that you will see if you wanna follow this suggestion Though, I have to say that the ones in the Kiai time were more expected and did fit well the map ^^

Hard

00:30:082 (4) - Maybe follow the distance snap for this one ?
This diff is just perfect !

AR194

Couldn't find anything wrong !


Well good luck, starred !

Atema wrote:

Hi ! From my modding queue (liked the song so even if the draining time was a bit long i decided to have a look ) !

Easy

Nothing to say !

Normal

- AR 4 ? lol ok

00:16:020 (2) - Maybe could you remove a reverse and add a circle under the end of the slider instead ? Imo it would fit more a Normal, and here it's quite unexpected as all previous small sliders only had one reverse ^^ That's fine ^^
00:46:770 (1) - Same here, and there are few more in the map that you will see if you wanna follow this suggestion Though, I have to say that the ones in the Kiai time were more expected and did fit well the map ^^ ok~

Hard

00:30:082 (4) - Maybe follow the distance snap for this one ? lol ok
This diff is just perfect !

AR194

Couldn't find anything wrong !


Well good luck, starred !

Thanks for modding & star!

o.o

hi there. as requested in my queue

[General]
whistles for kiai time!
make(rename) to Normal/Hard/Insane/Lunatic(AR194) mapset


[Easy]
00:13:020 (2) - do not skip big white line. add reverse on this slider or make longer. it's up to you.
00:32:895 (2) - nazi
00:33:832 (3) - wouldn't be really hard for easy. so try this http://puu.sh/EIsP
00:43:770 (3) - change into slider?
02:03:270 (2,2) - overlap
03:11:895 (1) - http://puu.sh/EIwj

[Normal]
more feels like Hard :/
00:28:770 (1) - make better blanket slider for (2)'s start?
00:34:770 (4,1) - nazi
00:38:895 (6) - add reverse
00:48:270 (3) - ^
00:49:395 (5) - ^
01:07:770 (2) - nazi: central point: 1 grid left
01:11:895 (6) - add reverse
01:34:020 (3,3) - overlap
you have only two crossing sliders. adn it isn't looks reallly good maybe avoid crossing them?

[Hard]
AR +1
00:00:832 (1,1) - don't overuse new combos.
00:29:145 (2,3) - hard to read/play
00:30:645 (2,3) - ^
01:05:332 (2,3) - nazi
02:28:207 (2) - i really hate this stack here. so confusing :<
02:37:957 (2) - nazi

[AR194]
od -1 impossiburu to play streams now
wow. so crazy.
looks clear

~~~~~~~

that's a nice map u have here, gl~

M4M here ~~~~

Easy
00:42:270 (1) - why don't finish at the start ? same 00:46:770 (1) -
01:04:770 (1) - also ^ and 01:09:270 (2) -
01:11:895 (5) - at the end either ^
okay , lazy to mod hitsound , I'm sorry -_-''
You should find and add some hitsounds a bit more at the position which is the background music actually sounds off.
01:16:770 (3) - straight slider is not cute , try to make them curved
01:46:770 (1,2,3) - actually, the rhythm should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356619 , move (2) back 1/2 beat and shorten it also
02:09:457 (3) - I would make 1/2 slider here instead of your current note
02:10:020 (4) - add note here
03:29:895 (1) - I personally feel odd from this linear slider again, try making curved them ?

Normal
00:00:270 (1) - add new combo
00:42:270 (1) - curve a bit like this so this will match up with (2) and make it better flow
00:47:707 (2) - what about this slider's tail?
01:47:332 (1) - again, as mentioned in easy diff , move back 1/2 beat but do not increase or decrease length of slider for this
02:29:895 (4) - whistle at the end doesn't fit imo , add it at the start instead also add 02:30:645 (5) - here either

Hard
02:01:582 (10,1) - unexpected jump here , try to reduce the range a bit
03:02:145 (3) - move to x:384 y:84 , there is no reason to make it jump here
03:44:895 (1,2) - this jump is too huge for this point, compared to other position like here

AR194
wow approval diff. If I were you, I would remove this diff as well cuz it's so difficult to make an approval diff in ranked map set in these day.
00:27:270 (15) - this slider must end at 00:28:207 , the current you are using is doesn't hit any sound in the background. also please end this slider with soft hitsound instead cuz it's a bit odd sound at the end here.
02:27:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - prepare to get downvote from these notes I bet. Try to make slider or something else which makes it easier to read and hit ? , 2009 mapping is not appropriate in these day I think.
02:49:113 (8) - I will add note it whether I can find a good way or not to place note because It sounds really obviously. so you should consider it once~
03:34:676 (4,5) - this distance is very hard to stream it, reduce them a bit~
03:38:145 (1) - ctrl+r please cuz it's near edge of screen so people will determine to hit at repeated point instead of the current

Overall is ok , you should improve your some missing hitsound more ,the rest about note or position I think it's fine

Good luck for Ranking !

Frostmourne wrote:

wow approval diff. If I were you, I would remove this diff as well cuz it's so difficult to make an approval diff in ranked map set in these day.

no

I don't even care about ranked or not now

I don't map for rank, I map for song

even if it can't be ranked, having a totally undermapped [Hard] as the highest diff (so it doesn't go over the score limit) it totally wrong

I'd rather map a Lunatic diff and let it grave

ranking is 99.98% less important as mapping to music

ok checking other mods now

edit:

Frostmourne wrote:

- -'' okay , sorry for mention like that.
I just care modder a bit that waste their time to help your map for ranking. they also include me want to see this map to be ranked one day so. Then please don't let it to grave is better though

"become mat and bubble my map plz"

well i also wasted a lot of stars, that's quite fair. 233

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

wow approval diff. If I were you, I would remove this diff as well cuz it's so difficult to make an approval diff in ranked map set in these day.

no

I don't even care about ranked or not now

I don't map for rank, I map for song

even if it can't be ranked, having a totally undermapped [Hard] as the highest diff (so it doesn't go over the score limit) it totally wrong

I'd rather map a Lunatic diff and let it grave

ranking is 99.98% less important as mapping to music

ok checking other mods now

- -'' okay , sorry for mention like that.
I just care modder a bit that waste their time to help your map for ranking. they also include me want to see this map to be ranked one day so. Then please don't let it to grave is better though

Hi ~ from my q

[AR194]

00:08:520 - remove finish
00:09:270 - add finish
00:12:270 - ^
00:13:582 - remove finish
00:17:988 - add note here
00:18:270 - add finish
00:20:145 - ^
00:20:895 - ^
00:25:395 - ^
00:25:582 - remove finish
00:28:770 - add finish
00:32:332 - ^
00:33:270 - ^
00:36:832 - ^
00:39:082 (6) - ^
00:42:832 - ^
01:04:770 - ^
01:05:332 - ^

[Hard]

00:49:395 - add finish
00:49:582 - remove finish
02:32:895 - add finish
03:05:613 - add note here
03:35:145 - remove finish
03:35:895 - add finish

[Normal]

00:49:395 - add finish
00:49:582 - remove finish
01:01:770 - add finish

[Easy]

Fine

Nice map, good luck ~

M4M from my queue

Close to perfection, only nazishit I found, only give KDS if you really think this is helpful

[Easy]
02:35:895 (1,2) - Same shape for them pls
02:56:895 (2,3) - ^ + flip

[Normal]
00:00:270 (1) - maybe this?
00:25:770 (3) - a friend of mine had problems ranking this kind of sliders, just want to mention
00:28:770 (1,2) - same shape for them pls
01:33:270 (2,3) - ^
01:55:770 (1,2) - ^
02:08:895 (3,4,5) - the time inbetween them might be hard to read for a newbie, set NC so that reading becomes easier

[Hard]
02:11:520 (4) - SV change here is hard to read, maybe NC to make clear there is a change?

[AR194]
Maybe swap the 1/6 sliders you use for 1/8? the 1/6 thing bugs me since it doesn't follow the music. :/
00:28:770 (1,2) - would look better if 1 would end properly in 2
00:30:270 (4,5) - same here
02:22:020 (1,2,3,4) - would look nice if you could rotate 2-4 each by- 5° summing up (so 2 by -5°, 3 by -10° and 4 by -15°)
02:28:957 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - uhm, i guess the 1/4 don't follow the music directly and I personally find them quiet irritateing
03:19:207 (10,11,1) - remove NC from 1, NC at 10?
03:47:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - go for something more circle-like? (ctrl+shift+d)

That's all, good luck

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


lol Nice song~~~
good luck! star~

I think your map is perfect, sorry but I can't do anything

hi there
mod time via my queue

[General]
delete .osb file and fullsubmit?

[Easy]
00:14:520 (1) - tell me a good reason why NC here
00:49:020 (3,4) - delete this and add a slider, imo its will be much better and easier to play beginners
01:11:520 (4,5) - ^
02:40:957 - up volume to 15%, 5% is unrank maybe.

[Normal]
AR-1
pretty clean here but you use many sliders with 2 repeats. it's so boring, but rankable, and i don't want to force you remap

[Hard]
OD-1 for better diff spread?
00:48:832 (1,2,3) - don't like this pattern D: use this or smf similar? => http://puu.sh/FfcW i think this will be more funny to play
01:03:270 (1,2) - check this stack, looks bad when I play this
01:51:270 (6) - NC?
i see here timing section with 5% volume, maybe fix this in the same way as Easy?

[AR194]
why you don't rename this to Lunatic/Extra (Stage)? more pretty and players (who bad read full info of the map lol) will be know - this is approved diff
also pretty clean here.

don't give kd for this useless mod~ /me runs

orz 前几个实在没话说了 很好 不过hard ar+1我觉得会好一些
主要在AR194了
01:46:770 这条绿线音效我改为s后觉得好听了…… 可以试试
02:28:020 这块的ds你想表达什么？ 0.0
1.33这蛋疼的ds……
03:23:895 这条绿线我觉得可以把vol设为70%~75%
很好的map0.0

Hi!

[Easy]

1. 00:23:520 (3) - Instead of stacking,why don't you put this at x:412 y:328? It will create a nice pattern and the flow would be nicer!
2. 00:32:895 (2) - I sugest you to allign this with 00:31:770 (1) - ,by moving it 2 grids down
3. 01:20:895 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:19:770 (4) -
4. 02:53:895 (1) - 3 grids up to make the blanket with 02:52:582 (1) - better?

[Normal]

1. 00:04:395 (1) - Move the new combo to 00:03:457 (3) - ? I personally think this suits better with the music's rhythm here
2. 00:19:020 (3) - Because of the position of 00:19:395 (4) - i suggest you to move this 1-2 grids up to make 00:18:270 (1,2,3,4) - a better diamond-shaped pattern
3. 02:09:457 (4) - New combo here to emphatize the "change" of rhythm?

[Hard]

1. 00:07:582 (2) - Put this at the perfect center? I know you are using the distance snap here,but it would be definitely better to put this note there.
2. 00:36:645 (2,3) - Put them at x:152 y:92 to make them equidistant to 00:36:270 (1,4) - ?
3. 00:47:707 (5,6) - 1 grid down to allign these notes with 00:47:332 (4) -
4. 01:49:395 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:49:957 (2) -
5. 02:43:395 (5) - New combo here

[AR194]

1. 00:36:832 (2) - CTRL+R to make the dropoff with 00:36:270 (1,2) - better?
2. 02:36:457 (2) - ^

And that's it. Good luck with your map ^^

为啥要改ar⑨呢，ar8不是挺好的

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

enough, go grave now

真的嗎oAo
我還想為這圖做個gd的說

挖出来rank了吧，感觉你留的那张rank不能代表你的图啊

angelfix wrote:

挖出来rank了吧，感觉你留的那张rank不能代表你的图啊

0,0 传不了图啊, 而且没空

代表我的图有radio free zerg就可以了:3