1. Since you have no break in this map then please uncheck 'the letterbox in the break option'
2. Tick rate 2 seems more good to me. How about it?

1. 00:16:911 (3) - Umm, i think the whistle at this slider end is breaking your whistle rythim. Consider to remove it.
2. 00:21:661 (2) - New combo since it's beginning of new rythim?
3. 00:21:661 (2) - You miss a clap at this slider end? Since you have a clap at this slider end 00:23:661 (4) -
4. 01:00:911 (1) - I don't think having a clap here at the end is good. It breaks your clap consistencies and sounds off spot. Consider to remove it.
5. 01:04:911 (3) - ^ but at the start
6. 01:09:661 (2) - ^ at the slider end
7. 01:15:411 (3) - ^ at the slider end
8. 01:28:911 (1) - Because you add a finish at this slider start 01:26:911 (3) - so i think it's neccesary to create the follow up here to create a nice finish rythim. Consider changing the whistle to a finish at this slider start.
9. 01:30:911 (3) - Preferably this one too should change to finish at this slider start.
10. 01:32:911 (1) - This one too should change to finish at this slider start.
    
    Pattern and flow are fine and good, so i just do hitsound mod. Nice~

1. 00:13:661 (2) - Just like easy, it seems you miss a clap here at the end.
2. 00:19:911- How about adding a note overhere? There's a downbeat that you can hear at the back, so it's nice to add a note here. If you do this suggestion, don't forget to add a new combo on it and delete the new combo on the next note.
3. 00:51:911 (4) - The clap at this slider end is really surprised. It's sounds too loud and doesn't fit with the song. Try to lower the volume by 10% more so it can fit nicely with the music at the back.
4. 01:03:661 (2) - The whistle at this slider start should be clap if i looking into your hitsound rythim.
5. 01:17:161 (1) - I can hear the drum sound when this spinner end. Try to add a clap on this spinner with 25% volume at it's end.
6. 01:35:661 (4) - There's a cymbal sound here at this slider start, so why not add a finish on it?
   
   Same comment as easy. This diff has nice rythim, pattern and flow too. Well, hitsound can still be improved imo.

1. 00:09:661 (4) - I think the hitsound for the start of this slider should be finish, not clap nor whistle.
2. 00:10:661 (6) - ^
3. 00:14:161 (4) - Same as other diff. I think you need a clap here to make hitsound consistant.
4. 00:18:161 (5) - ^
5. 00:31:911 (3) - Remove the whistle here at the start please, doesn't good if it joined with clap.
6. 00:32:911 (5) - ^ but at the slider end.
7. 00:32:911 (5,6) - A very sudden jump. I'm surprised at this one. And this jump doesn't justify anything. Consider making a pattern that doesn't consist any jump. For example like this > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/327752
8. 00:38:911 (1) - Miss a whistle here at the start?
9. 00:43:661 (3) - Miss a clap here at the end?
10. 00:46:661 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another jump that doesn't justify anything again. It's not very surprising from before, but it's doesn't justifiy anything, like high pitch or high beat on the music. So consider to reduce the spacing of the jump or just delete the jump.
11. 00:54:911 (3) - Hmm, the new combo here become not consistant. Add a new combo here, then remove the new combo at 00:55:661 (1) -
12. 01:04:911 (1) - Remove the clap here please at the slider start. Doesn't fit if it joined with finish.
13. 01:11:411 (5,6) - Ctrl + r this to create mini jump to follow up previous jump? Don't forget to fix the hitsound.
14. 01:35:661 (2) - Same as hard, i think you need a finish hear to cover the cymbal sound at the back.
15. 01:39:661 (1) - What's the purpose of new combo here? It's not consistant with previous new combo. Consider to remove it.
16. 01:47:661 (6) - Remove the finish here at the start? It sounds very weak since the cymbal sound is on at 01:47:911-
    
    Hmm, nice pattern but the flow surprised me at some point. Also, i'm not sure with the hitsound too.

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello
hihi~
[General]
- Fine

[Skin]
- Reduce spinner-osu to a 1x1 png image fixed!
- The dimensions of the spinner-bg and spinner-metre should be the same as that is 1023x692 well actually according to ziin's spinner tutorial he said it's alright and plus I don't want to ruin the perfect stack with the BG when the spinner pops up. and it's not against ranking rules I believe :O or maybe I'm just blind >.>

[Easy]
- 00:08:411 ~ Remove clap and add whistle ? Fits more imo Fixed!
- 01:35:661 ~ Remove clap and whistle then add finish ? mmm~ nah it's ok the way it is now sounds good Fixed!

[Normal]
- 01:04:911 ~ Is the new combo necessary ? I would suggest removing it fixed!
- 01:35:661 ~ Remove clap and whistle then add finish ? same as before~

[Hard]
- I always disliked small circles ): they make me sad but I guess it's your choice also with a bigger circle size maybe the diff will be easier ? o:
- 01:35:661 ~ Remove clap and whistle then add finish ? same as before~
haha makes you sad?? well.. I think it's alright.. it has it's own sort of... feel to it? I don't know how to say it :<
Very nice overall, no real problems and good flow

lovhin456 wrote:

Recheck, no kds

[Hard]
- OD +1 ?
- 01:07:411 (1,2) ~ Could you stack these a little better ?

Call me back after you decide to change or not also get +12 sp before calling me back

1. I think AR-1 is more appropiate for calm song like this.

1. 01:35:661 (4) - You should use finish at this slider start since i hear a cymbal sounds there. If you add finish, whistle will be too loud, so remove the whistle.

1. 01:35:661 (2) - Same as normal.

Miya wrote:

A little mod before rebubble~

Easy

1. I think AR-1 is more appropiate for calm song like this.

sure
Normal

1. 01:35:661 (4) - You should use finish at this slider start since i hear a cymbal sounds there. If you add finish, whistle will be too loud, so remove the whistle.

no that's too much because there's another finish coming soon after I don't want that many finishes
Hard

1. 01:35:661 (2) - Same as normal.

same as normal
That's all, call me back once you're done with this mod.

wmfchris wrote:

I'm sorry, but:

- The preview image is missed.
- The .osz is damaged. When I download the file it gives me a file of 8KB only.

wmfchris wrote:

I'm sorry, but:

- The preview image is missed. uh.. it is?
- The .osz is damaged. When I download the file it gives me a file of 8KB only. fixed

wmfchris wrote:

Let's go.

- I just want ot know why spinner-osu.png is blank becoz it blocks nothing recently. to block out the words of spinner osu? I'm trying to keep the spinner as clean as possible that's why it's there. Also everybody has a different skin so skin mixing would look weird
- normal -sliderslide is put in the song but never used.
removed
the map looks fine.

MiLu wrote:

gratz ;D
chataaaaa uwaaaaaaaaaa