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Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size)

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Yu-Izanagi-12
hey from my queue
Hard and Insane
slide ticker +1 sounds better
Miya
A little suggestion from me while in the game :)


SPOILER
20:16 <Yasora-chan> : nee
20:16 <Miya> : iya?
20:16 <Yasora-chan> : gimana nih jump nya menurut kak miya
20:16 *Yasora-chan is listening to (Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48449]
20:16 <Miya> : yg insane ya?
20:16 <Yasora-chan> : yap
20:16 <Miya> : bntr ya
20:16 <Yasora-chan> : yo
20:19 <Miya> : yasora
20:19 <Miya> : 00:06:366 (2) - kejauhan sama 1
20:19 <Miya> : ngerusak flow
20:21 <Yasora-chan> : wogh oke
20:21 <Miya> : coba deh liat miya main
20:21 *Miya is listening to (Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48449]
20:22 <Yasora-chan> : yee udah di fix @_@
20:22 <Yasora-chan> : gmn mau liat
20:23 <Miya> : lol
20:23 <Miya> : bntr
20:23 <Yasora-chan> : mau di update dl??
20:23 <Miya> : miya sih g rekomendasi ya gni : 00:18:032 (1,2) -
20:24 <Miya> : soalnya ngagetin
20:24 <Miya> : mending slider dlu baru jumo
20:24 <Yasora-chan> : ga cocok ;3;
20:24 <Yasora-chan> : dan udah pake spacing
20:24 <Miya> : cocok2 aja, soalnya rithym nya masih 1/2 tuh
20:26 <Yasora-chan> : k done
20:27 <Miya> : umm,kyknya dsni butuh note lagi deh yasora
20:27 <Miya> : 01:13:217-
20:27 <Miya> : nunggu rythim selanjutnya itu ngerusak flow kata miya
20:28 <Yasora-chan> : tapi disitu empty banget kata aku
20:29 <Miya> : tp kata miya lebih enak dimaenin kalo dstu kasih note
20:30 <Yasora-chan> : hmm oke
20:30 <Yasora-chan> : bagusnya ar9 atau 8 ya?
20:30 <Miya> : dicoba dlu deh kalo 9 gmn
20:32 <Yasora-chan> : kata kk miya, terlalu cepet ga?
20:32 <Yasora-chan> : soalnya kan yang nanti mainin orang lain >.<
20:32 <Miya> : kata miya ar 9 jauh lebih enak :)
20:33 <Yasora-chan> : oh okay :D ka niva jg bilang gt lol so, pake ar 9 ya :3
20:33 <Miya> : iya :D
20:34 <Yasora-chan> : yo kaka miya post aja ini log, itung2 modding
20:34 <Yasora-chan> : :3
20:34 <Miya> : ok, makasih kl gtu :3
Saturnalize
Here we go , Yasora-chan~ >u< (ga mau nulis mai waifu lagi, ntar rei marah ; A ;)

=Easy=
1. 00:00:995 (2) - Bagaimana kalo yang ini diganti pake 00:00:255 (1) yang udah diputar 180 derajat?
2. 00:25:810 (1) - Imo lebih baik kalo pake 00:24:329 (1) meski mungkin masalah spacing bisa terjadi.
3. 00:26:551 (4) - <Kalau yang diatas disetujui> Ini pindahin aja :I

=Normal=
1. 00:37:292 (3) - slidernya diganti aja imo?
2. 00:53:588 (1) - 2 grid tiny ke bawah?

=Hard=
1. 00:11:366 (3) - Ada potensi untuk membuat slider yang lebih baik, lho! Coba ubah, slider 3 ini terlihat terlalu polos tanpa dibuat pattern.
2. 00:40:069 (3) - Slider yang unik, hanya saja sedikit tidak cocok imo. Ubah?
3. 00:55:254 (1) - Apus NC (soalnya masih sepattern sama 00:54:699 (4) , sayang kalo tiba" ganti warna)
4. 00:55:995 (2) - Tambah NC
5. 01:16:551 (3) - Ga gitu mulus kelihatannya. Buat yang setara, pasti hasilnya lebih bagus.

=Miya=
Cantiq.

=Insane=
1. I agree with other, AR 8.
2. 00:02:106 (4,1,2,3,4) - Mau buat bintang ya? Benarkan sedikit.
3. 00:04:143 (5) - Stack ujung slider sama 00:03:958 (4) atau dibuat makin berjauhan. Overlapnya jelek imo.
4. 00:04:514 (1,2,3) - Entah kenapa terlihat seperti trap. Terserah sih, mau diapakan.

Good luck >u<
Unknownable_old
Hello...
Modding from My Queue

[General]
Fine

[Easy]
00:25:810 (1) Ugly slider... Copy from 00:24:329 (1) and Flip Horizontally

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
00:10:810 (2) Delete whistle at the end of slider

[Miya]
Fine

[Insane]
OD -1

Loli Cjj wrote:

2. 00:02:106 (4,1,2,3,4) - Mau buat bintang ya? Benarkan sedikit.
In My Opinion
92,272,2106,1,8
136,48,2292,5,0
208,264,2477,1,0
48,148,2662,1,0
236,132,2847,1,8
00:07:847 (2) Delete whistle at the end of slider
Topic Starter
Yasora
Insane:
2. blah blah :
no >< that's not star pattern D:
mancuso_JM_
Hi! Mod Request from my Queue :P

[General:]

--> Everything looks good here.

[Easy:]

- Settings:
--> Increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick since the BPM is a bit high (AR+1)

00:38:773 (1): Add a Finish at Slider Beginning, to emphatisize the change of Stanza
00:39:884 (1): Fit better with Vocal if you make this Slider 1/2 bigger , also if you make that you can add a Finish at Slider end
01:17:292 (x): The Instrumental needs a emphatisize here, so try to add a Note or at least make a Slider and remove the Note in 01:17:662
01:20:254 (x): (^)
01:23:217 (x): (^)

[Normal:]

00:05:440 (2): To follow better the Rhythm and to make a Consecutive pattern, try to replace this note to a Slider. This Slider has to Start in 00:05:254 and finish here (00:05:440)
00:08:773 (5): It's better if you Replace this Clap at Slider Beginning to a Whistle. Fit better with Vocal and it's more consistent with your next patterns
01:12:477 (3): Reduce this Slider by 1/2, fit better with Vocal

[Hard:]

Settings:
--> Approach Rate is low and cause cofusion at the Hour to play the map since the BPM is a bit high, so try to increase it by 1 Tick (AR+1)

00:55:254 (5): To follow better the rhythm reduce this Slider by 1/2 and then add a Note in 00:55:625

[Miya:]

Settings:
--> Same as Hard Difficulty, the AR is a bit low and cause confusion when you play the map, try to increase it by 1 Tick (AR+1)

00:52:292 (7): Maybe you can add a New Combo, actually this combo is too long comparing with your other patterns, also I can percive a little change on music.

[Insane:]

Settings:
--> WOW!! The HP Drain Rate is very high, at least decrease it by 1 Tick (HD-1)
--> The same with Overall difficulty, try to decrease it by 1 Tick (OD-1)

00:03:866 (x): Add a Note to make a Triplet, fit perfect with Instrumental.

And That's all. Short mod since you have a Preety nice mapset :P
So, I have to shoot a Star and Good Luck with your map ;)
Miya
Kanari
Tiny little irc mod~

SPOILER
21:55 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : Hello~ You reqested for your map to be modded in my queue, but I cant be of any help to you
21:55 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : >< Your map is very well mapped
21:56 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : But on easy, for 00:39:884 (1) Maybe reverse it?
21:57 <Yasora-chan> : I guess no, weird to me ;w;v
21:57 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : And new combo on 01:23:588 (3) ? and if you did that remove new combo on 01:24:329 (1)
21:58 <Yasora-chan> : ok
suzutsukikanade
Mod requested in-game.

[General]
Nothing to point.

[Easy]
01:12:106 (1): Make this?



[Normal]
00:52:106 (4): Well, not exactly a big problem, but make that slider a little more straight?
01:00:625 (3,4,5): Like...this?
01:05:810 (3): Move third point to (x:140 y:120)
01:11:736 (2): Same as 00:52:106.
01:26:180 (1): I think this spinner should end in 01:28:403.

[Hard]
OD+1?
00:19:143 (4): Remove clap in repeat.
00:20:625 (4): ^
01:00:625 (4,5,6): Make this to follow better the rhythm.
01:26:180 (1): Same as normal.

[Miya]
Really nice diff.

[Insane]
00:46:921 (6): Remove one repeat.
00:58:588 (6,7,8): Like this?

Good map here, and nice song.
Good Luck!


ryuu
hello ~
from our queue.

[Easy]

00:36:180 (1) - maybe this?
00:48:403 (1,2,3) - put on the middle?
01:00:254 (1,2) - maybe this?

[Normal]

00:08:032 (4) - put start on end 00:06:551 (2)
00:20:625 (2) - maybe this?
00:31:736 (1) - maybe this?
00:38:773 (1,2) - put on the middle?
00:45:069 (1) - maybe this?
00:49:143 (3) - maybe this?
00:53:958 (2) - ^
00:55:810 (5) - maybe this?
00:59:514 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/rUqG
01:00:625 (3) - put on the middle? then 01:01:366 (4,5) - made the mirror image 00:59:514 (1,2).
01:03:588 (3) - put on the middle?
01:09:514 (3) - ^
01:18:773 (3,4) - maybe this?

[Hard]

00:33:588 (2) - bend a little?
00:39:143 (1) - maybe this?

[Miya]

fine for me.

[Insane]

00:06:736 (3) - maybe this?
00:18:403 (2) - x:172 y:264
00:19:143 (5) - x:348 y:144
00:49:329 (5) - x:456 y:164
00:54:514 (3) - x:388 y:28

that's all.
star and good luck ~
Nichiyouki


Hi, Yasora-chan

My mod from request

General

  1. Nothing

Easy

  1. 00:33:958 (2) - Move last point to down 3 grids
  2. 00:55:810 (2) - Move 2nd point to right 3 grids
  3. 00:45:069 (1) - Remove finish?
  4. 01:03:958 (3) - Move to right 1 grid

Normal

  1. 00:19:884 (1) Make to http://puu.sh/swVT , will be better?
    268,72,19884,6,0,B|252:40|216:28,2,65,8|0|0
  2. 00:55:810 (5) - Make to this
    148,160,55810,2,0,B|80:140|56:76,1,130,0|8
  3. 00:59:514 (1) - Move to x:84 y:244?
  4. 01:04:699 (1) - Move 2nd to up 2 grids, and move 3rd point to left 3 grids
  5. 01:09:884 (4) - Move to down 1 grid

Hard

  1. 00:26:551 (2) - Make to http://puu.sh/sx21 .
    292,64,26551,2,0,B|332:96|316:156|316:156|300:204,1,150,8|0
  2. 00:39:143 (1,2) - Make to this, will be better.
    268,160,39143,6,0,B|252:208|284:256|340:260|368:240,1,150,8|0
    424,224,39699,2,0,B|460:208|496:228,1,75,0|8
  3. 00:42:847 (1) - Make to this.
    404,188,42847,6,0,B|388:232|420:272|420:272|440:328,1,150
  4. 00:46:921 (4) - Move 4th point to up 1 grid
  5. 01:19:884 (3) - Move 3rd point to up 1 grid
  6. 01:21:736 (1) - Move to up 1 grid

Miya

  1. 01:00:069 (2,3) - Move to right and up 1 grid
  2. 01:03:403 (3) - Move to left 1 grid

Insane

  1. 00:07:847 (2) - Change whistle is clap in slider end
  2. 01:26:180 (9) - Add finish

That's all, that I can find them.

Good luck~
Miya
Colin Hou
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:329 (6) - finish, and no clap
  2. 00:50:625 (1) - as this is right on vocal, try making 00:51:736 (2,3,4,1) more working with that. (btw new combo on 00:53:958 (2) not (1)
  3. 01:02:106 (1,2,3) - stack broken, stack leniency +2 plz.
  4. 01:04:514 (1,2) - switch new combos
  5. 01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495.
[Insane]
  1. 01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495.
[Miya]
  1. 00:28:032 (4,5,6) - whistles to finishes
  2. 01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495.
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:403 (1,2,3) - quite out of music. just use notes(circle/slider) on 'na' 'se' 'ka' 'i' plz (you did quite good in Easy diff btw
  2. 01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495.
oh, don't forget to move the last section. good luck!
Topic Starter
Yasora

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:29:329 (6) - finish, and no clap ok
  2. 00:50:625 (1) - as this is right on vocal, try making 00:51:736 (2,3,4,1) more working with that. (btw new combo on 00:53:958 (2) not (1) change to something
  3. 01:02:106 (1,2,3) - stack broken, stack leniency +2 plz. right
  4. 01:04:514 (1,2) - switch new combos nope, combo in (1) is notice to players, that repeater slider is long and many. then beside that, the repeater is through the long white tick :3 so, fit with new combo imo
  5. 01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495. k
[Insane]
  1. 01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495. k
[Normal]
  1. 00:28:403 (1,2,3) - quite out of music. just use notes(circle/slider) on 'na' 'se' 'ka' 'i' plz (you did quite good in Easy diff btw k
  2. 01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495. k
oh, don't forget to move the last section. good luck!
thanks~
Miya
fixed all :3
thank you for modding~

Download: Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Miya].osu
BeatofIke
STAR~
Scorpiour
M4M~~~

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:884 - i'd like to add a note here with clap~
  2. 00:12:847 - ^
  3. 00:15:810 - ^
  4. 01:26:180 (1) - i suppose u can end this spinner a tick prior like other diffs.
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:514 (3,1,2,3) - the beats here heard weird...try this ?
  2. 00:24:329 (3,4) - i suppose u can put reverse first and then slider.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:810 (1) - imo, it may be not a good choice to end a slider on downbeats (reverse also somtimes), especially the downbeat starts a new section but not end.
  2. 00:12:106 (4) - from above opinion, i'd like to move next NC to here~
  3. 00:30:069 - add a note here?
  4. 00:35:069 (2) - a reverse slider maybe better~
[Miya]
  1. 00:43:958 (7) - clap here is heard weird and i suppose u needn't a beat here, so suggest to move it to next red line and remove clap
  2. 01:10:069 (5,6,7,8) - similar to above, the beats here should be on red lines and clap is uncessary or it will make your hitsounds mess.
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:625 (3,4) - i suppose it's better to change it to a 1/2 slider and then another 1/2 slider or 2 notes
  2. 00:03:032 (1) - same as i mentioned in hard diff, end a slider on downbeat is weird here.
  3. 00:03:588 (3) - also weird because of the beats before.. i suppose u'd better adjust the beats here.
  4. 00:19:514 (1) - it's nearly invisible due to the video and overlap...
  5. 00:53:958 (2) - NC here for kiai begin
  6. 01:05:810 (2) - NC for new section
  7. 01:07:106 (5) - ctrl+r could make the flow better
that's all and good luck :)
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Hi

Easy

01:26:180 (1) - end this at 01:28:495.

Normal

01:13:032 (4) - turn the volume up to 30% , it's so quiet here

Hard

00:32:477 (2) - move 2 grid down (lv4)
01:13:032 (1) - turn the volume up to 35% , I can't hear this hit.

Miya

00:40:069 (4) - add whistle?
00:53:125 (x) - it could be better to add a green timing to reduce volume to 40%.
01:04:977 (x) - ^
01:12:662 (3) - add whistle?

Insane

01:04:699 (T) - Timing is useless.
01:05:625 (T) - ^
01:13:032 (1) - Raise the volume to 50%

good luck!
Miya
Thank you for the mod. :)
Just reduce the timing point volume.

Download: Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Miya].osu
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks all
updated ~
Leorda
Hello

[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:05:440 (1) - Using too much repeating slider can makes beginners go confusing for normal diff
01:04:699 (1) - Move to previous red tick for following vocal?


[Hard]
01:04:514 (1) - How about split these slider into 2 slider? Having 1 slider with many repeating slider is boring, IMO


[Insane]
00:16:736 (2) - The tail slider seems touch the HP Bar
00:23:403 (4) - The head slider seems touch the HP Bar


Natsu is so moeeeee
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you
updated
wmfchris
~

[Insane]
00:34:699 (2) - place around (176, 316) so that it looks symmetrical to previous (6) and not like a bent straight line between (1,2).
00:41:273 (5) - place around (164,128); I believe the stream can be placed with more equally spreaded and symmetrical style.
00:55:254 (5,9) - the clap don't really work well here imo...
01:07:847 (7,8) - clapping on (8) rather than ending of (7)

sometimes clapping constantly may not be really good as the music don't fit with such a strong clap very well. There're also some 1/1 breaks that can be filled up reasonably imo.

[Miya]
00:41:366 (8) - hidden repeats I think it have to be moved somewhere else

fine diff; the only problem is still about the clap where it still sounds odd around 0:40 ~ 0:50

[Hard]
OD + 1 --- it's in typical hard range so OD6 would be common...
01:05:069 (1) - it's odd to break the combo in such a 1/4 stream... remove NC here and NC at (2); remove NC at 01:06:736 (1) -

[Normal]
00:43:773 (4) - I prefer avoiding 1/2 sliders with more than 1 reverse tick in easier diffs, you can consider patterns like x x x--- x x from here.
00:46:736 (4) - ^

In overall the arrangement isn't that bad, the only real problem for me is that the clap really goes odd in some places.

anyway good luck :3
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks for mod, updated
for clap hitsounding, I just following the drum sound and my feeling ;_;
Miya
I don't feel the clap is odd. It's very consistant imo.
Thank you for the mod. Fixed that hidden repeat.

Download: Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Miya].osu
Topic Starter
Yasora
updated
Saten
[General]
Custom claps would be nice
And maybe a smaller file size on the video.

[Insane]
00:03:588 (3,4,5) - Is that spacing on purpose? =w=
00:26:736 (5,6,1) - NC on (5)
00:46:921 (7) - Might be confusing with 2 repeats, but it's your call~
00:53:588 (1) - imo a normal-finish fits better~
00:55:254 (5,6,7,8) - so evil, but alright~
01:08:403 (1,2) - NC on (2)
01:13:032 - abit louder? like +10%~
01:13:958 - ^

[Miya]
01:12:662 (3) - Finish
01:24:514 (3) - NC?
01:28:495 - a timing section with 5% just like the rest of the mapset?

[Hard]
00:16:180 (4,1) - NC on (4)
01:05:069 (7) - finish at the end

[Normal]
01:04:329 (4,1) - NC on (4)

[Easy]
00:26:551 (2) - 1 grid down
00:27:662 (2) - 1 grid up
00:28:032 (3) - finish at the end
01:03:588 (2) - 1 grid down
01:12:106 (1) - finish on repeat

Good luck =w=/
Topic Starter
Yasora
arigatou /w\
updated
Melophobia
from my modding queue

[Easy]
00:06:180 - why not use higher volume than previous part?
00:09:884 - add note
00:39:884 (1) - add repeat because of downbeat
00:45:440 (2) - felt empty, try to add clap on repeat of this slider
01:24:884 (1) - finish doesnt fit here>< at least remove it from the beginning plz TAT

[Normal]
00:06:180 - why not use higher volume than previous part?
00:28:032 (5,1,2,3) - add finishes to these like you did on Easy?
00:53:588 - volume is too low, 70% is better imo (in Easy, it's 70%)
01:13:588 - it would be better to remove clap, it follows nothing

[Hard]
00:06:180 - same as Normal
00:27:292 (4) - kinda ugly
00:53:588 - same as Normal, 70% is better~
01:13:588 (3) - it would be better to remove clap, it follows nothing
01:22:292 (2) - stack it under (3)'s end
01:25:625 (3) - add one more repeat and add finish its end
01:26:180 (1) - if you follow ^, adjust beginning of this =3=

[Miya]
* name this to Miya's Hard ?
00:06:180 - same as Normal
00:16:551 (5) - add finish at the beginning
00:51:921 (6) - add finish
00:59:514 (11) - ^
01:00:810 (5) - ^
01:03:773 (5) - ^
01:08:403 (11) - ^
01:12:662 - use lower volume plz
01:13:958 (7) - add clap or shift to normal sound

[Insane]
00:06:180 - same as Normal
00:03:032 (1) - add finish at the end

that's all, good luck!
Miya
Thank you for modding guys. Revise some hitsound~

Download: Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size) (Yasora) [Miya].osu
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks all
updated
Star Stream
From my queue

[General]
  1. Offset -6~10
  2. reduce volume by 20% plz, it's pretty noisy especially with Miya's diff
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:884 - add a circle? compare with previous notes, feels too empty
  2. 00:12:847 - ^
  3. 00:15:810 - ^
  4. 00:25:810 (1) - remove NC, like these 00:18:773 (1,2,1,2,3) -
  5. 00:37:662 (1) - ^
  6. 00:45:440 (2) - the arrow is not fit with music at all, i'd use 2/1 slider and add a circle

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:699 (3) - NC to follow your combo rhythm
  2. 00:08:032 (4) - ^
  3. 00:15:069 (3,1) - switch NC, you put NC on downbeats
  4. 01:05:810 (3) - NC here, re-started lyrics
  5. 01:13:403 (5) - 1 grid left to be symmetry with 01:13:032 (4) - ?
[Hard]
  1. 01:06:736 (1) - remove NC
[Miya]
  1. 00:28:032 (4) - replace with 2 circles and NC at 00:28:217 - to emphasize this strong beats
  2. 01:12:662 (3) - NC to ^
  3. 01:24:514 (3) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:477 (1,4) - remove whistle from 00:07:662 - and add on 00:07:477 - and 00:08:773 -
  2. 00:10:440 (1,2,3) - remove whistle from 00:10:625 - and add on 00:10:440 - and 00:10:995 - and 00:11:736 -
  3. 00:13:403 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:16:366 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 00:24:329 (2) - move up to y:244 will be more soft jump
  6. 01:07:106 (5,7) - ctrl+r (don't drag) will be really fun
  7. 01:14:329 - ~ same whistle sounds suggestion with 00:07:477 (1,4) -
Good luck
Miya
I don't agree with your new combo pattern because i want to put new combo consistantly every 2 stanza.
So no change with my diff. Thank you :)
phonic
As your request from my queue


General

  1. BG not beautiful, Is better to use this or this

Easy

  1. 00:39:884 (1) - This suggestion
  2. 00:40:625 (x) - Add finish
  3. 01:24:884 (3) - Remove new combo?

Normal

  1. 00:35:254 (x) - Add note?
  2. 01:24:514 (3) - Add new combo
  3. 01:25:625 (1) - Remove new combo

That's all
Topic Starter
Yasora
@phonic: sorry I don't want to change the BG. I guess more cool my bg than yours :'>
then, thanks for mod
Sync
Hey, just thought I would poke in and say a few things.

I was looking over Insane and there are a lot of structural problems.

When constructing sliders, make sure that their start-points are on heavier beats than the end points. It's important to stress the beats. This happens quite a lot in and it really needed to be addressed. Take a look at what I said on a different post, it might help clear things up:

"... there is one huge structural problem that itched at me while playing and modding -- you're placing sliders incorrectly. When following the beat (this does not apply to standalone vocals/melody), slider ends need to be on lighter beats than the start point, as noted above most of the time. Not following this rule makes combo-placement hard and imprecise; combos detail a change in the music. Whether it be a new stanza/downbeat, transition, or a dramatic section of the music, ending sliders on them don't allow you to emphasize them accordingly."
This is a very common mistake mappers tend to make and it is a huge detriment to the intuitiveness of the map. I want you to through your difficulties and fix it whenever it happens. Doing this will make your map better. Plain and simple.

I'll point out a few instances. Remember, this is on Insane.

00:01:366 (1) - Your beat placement is incorrect. You should not be ending slider-ends on downbeats likes this because it does not stress the beat enough. Plain and simple, it's bad structure. Remove the repeat and add a hit circle at 00:01:736 (6) along with a new combo.

00:03:032 (1) - Again, you're ending sliders on a downbeat. I suggest deleting this slider, making 00:02:847 (8) into a 1/2-beat slider, and adding a hit circle at 00:03:217 (1) with a new combo. Timeline Reference

00:04:143 (6,1) - Ending sliders on heavier beats than what their start-points are on is bad beat-placement.

Also, take note of what I said about combos. All of your combos should make sense. Take a close look at your combo patterns and fix them accordingly.

Now, with that being said, when you believe that your map is the best it can possibly be and that every note, combo, hitsound, and anchor node are there for a reason, PM me and I'll take another look.
Miya
Many mapper has do the same thing like this. So it will not be a problem. Besides this is not in guidelines and rule. So this not supposed to be to taking it seriously.
Topic Starter
Yasora
just fixed what you said in insane >< (the 3 mods)
I don't feel that wrong if ended the slider in the downbeat. I just following the vocal and really feel the rhythm.
I'm very support what miya said.
about hitsounding I following the drum sound and some rhythm to make the hitsound isn't boring.
and about comboing, the others modder and some MATs aren't too much notice that. so, I think that has no problem.
thank you Sync (:
Sync
It's bad beat placement and does not represent the music properly. As this is a rhythm game, I believe that beat-placement is one of the most important factors. I will only bubble a map if it is up to my standards. I'm willing to go and point every single instance of it out via IRC if you're willing to work with me, Yasora. It will take a lot of work. I will not go out of my way to unbubble this if a different map doesn't see this as a problem (though they should).

Thanks for understanding.
Miya
just search for other MAT, yasora >.>
other MAT will not look this as a problem.
Topic Starter
Yasora
orz ;_;
so sad
those
Hi. After a month of not looking at this map and gaining more modding experience, I'm giving you a little bit of my insight.

13:36 <those> : The idea that non-downbeat sliders are prominent is a problem.
13:36 <those> : It's okay to have them, but a lot of these sliders are misplaced in time.
13:37 <those> : In addition, current orientation and positioning of these sliders creates a very untidy feel.
13:37 <those> : It's partially AR9's fault, as well.

To summarize, your Insane needs a bit of work and improvement. The placement of the objects in space and time are a little awkward to play.
Topic Starter
Yasora
:|
oh well..
I will remap my insane


done just 1 hour owo)b
Miya
Little suggestion in irc :3

Sumarry :
  1. Fixing the stream when approach kiai time.
  2. Adding more jump due to inconsistencies.
  3. Adding last note in before last spinner.
log
10:49 <Yasora> : tolong play test dong
10:49 *Yasora is listening to (Milky Bunny - I Wish (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48449]
10:50 <Miya> : hmm, ok
10:50 <Miya> : bntr ya
10:50 <Yasora> : oke
10:52 <Miya> : wah
10:52 <Miya> : terakhirnya ada anti jumpnya ya?
10:52 <Yasora> : pas miss pas nge-lag @_@
10:52 <Yasora> : iyah
10:52 <Miya> : pantesan kurang enak terakhir ngejumpnya >.<
10:53 <Yasora> : variasi trap
10:53 <Yasora> : lol
10:53 <Yasora> : anyway
10:53 <Yasora> : itu stream pas mau kiai nya enak ga?
10:53 <Yasora> : kurang meyakinkan
10:53 <Miya> : enak aja
10:53 <Miya> : coba sih play test lagi
10:55 <Miya> : mmm
10:55 <Yasora> : wogh
10:55 <Yasora> : ak baru nyadar agnes jadi bat
10:55 <Miya> : :o
10:56 <Miya> : uda dari kemaren
10:56 <Miya> : lol
10:56 <Miya> : btw
10:56 <Miya> : mending dijadiin satu deh
10:56 <Yasora> : ya?
10:56 <Yasora> : yang mn?
10:56 <Miya> : 00:53:125- tambah circle disini
10:56 <Miya> : terus jadiin satu stream
10:56 <Yasora> : oh oke
10:56 <Miya> : lebih enak dimaenin :3
10:57 <Yasora> : ncip owo)b
10:57 <Yasora> : ada lagi?
10:57 <Miya> : ada
10:57 <Miya> : kt miya jump terakhirnya mending di tinggin spacingnya
10:58 <Yasora> : owo
10:58 <Yasora> : ?
10:58 <Yasora> : ho ic :o
10:58 <Miya> : 01:14:699 (2,3,4,5,6) -
10:58 <Yasora> : loh itukan pake ds
10:58 <Yasora> : @_@
10:58 <Miya> : di scalenya 1.365 x
10:59 <Miya> : ya gpp kalo mau di jump
10:59 <Miya> : asal lainnya jg ikut di jump
10:59 <Yasora> : @_@
10:59 <Miya> : 01:17:292 (1,2,3,4,5) -
10:59 <Miya> : itu juga bisa ctrl+shift+s
10:59 <Miya> : ini jg
11:00 <Miya> : soalnya yasora ngejump dsni >.<
11:00 <Miya> : 01:23:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
11:00 <Yasora> : owo
11:00 <Miya> : oh ya
11:00 <Yasora> : ?
11:00 <Miya> : terakhirnya mending spinnernya dipendikin 1/4
11:01 <Miya> : trus dikasih note dengan finish disini 01:26:180
11:01 <Miya> : 01:26:180-
11:01 <Yasora> : ho ic
11:01 <Yasora> : dah
11:02 <Miya> : dah, itu aja mungkin yang g enaknya :3
11:02 <Yasora> : sip owo)b
11:02 <Yasora> : masukkin trit aja
11:02 <Miya> : hmm ok >.<
Topic Starter
Yasora
arigatou /w\
updated~
DJPop
Patterns are fine for me, mostly are hitsound & timing mods.


~All diffs~
01:26:273 (1) - (nazi) end at 01:28:526 (1/6 snap)
I accidentally noticed it was ended earlier than bass drum sound...


~Easy~
00:29:329 (3) - use normal hitsound on the end of slider
00:41:736 - use normal hitsound
00:42:106 - remove this timing
00:53:588 - use normal hitsound
00:53:958 - remove this timing
01:12:106 (1) - add finish at middle
01:12:662 - use soft hitsound
01:13:032 - remove this timing
01:13:958 - use normal hitsound
01:14:329 - ^
01:14:699 - remove this timing
01:24:329 (2) - add finish at the end
01:24:514 - use soft hitsound
01:24:884 (3) - add finish at start and middle
01:25:625 - use normal hitsound

~Normal~
00:05:440 (4) - add clap at the end
00:18:403 - move this timing to 00:18:217
00:53:588 - use normal hitsound
00:53:958 - remove this timing
01:12:662 - use soft hitsound
01:13:032 - remove this timing
01:13:958 - use normal hitsound
01:14:329 - ^
01:14:699 - remove this timing

~Hard~
00:05:254 (6) - remove clap
00:19:143 (4) - remove clap at the middle
00:20:625 (4) - ^
00:41:736 - use normal hitsound
00:42:106 - remove this timing
00:42:106 (2) - remove finish, extend its repeat by 1, add clap at middle
00:42:662 (3) - remove this note
00:42:847 (1) - move to 00:43:032, add clap at the end
00:43:403 (2) - remove this note
00:50:625 (6) - add finish at start
00:53:588 - use normal hitsound
00:53:958 - remove this timing
01:10:810 (6) - remove clap
01:12:662 - use soft hitsound
01:13:032 - remove this timing
01:13:958 - use normal hitsound
01:14:329 - ^
01:14:699 - remove this timing

~Miya~
00:53:588 - use normal hitsound
01:05:440 - ^

~Insane~
00:53:588 - use normal hitsound
00:53:773 - remove this timing
01:12:662 - use soft hitsound
01:14:329 (1) - use normal hitsound
01:20:810 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:995 (2) - add new combo
Miya
Sorry DJPop, i don't think normal finish sound isn't good when mixed with the soft one. :(
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks djpop
updated ~
Mercurial
General
Going for bubbling /o/

Normal
00:04:699 (3) NC for consistency with previous combos.
00:07:292 (3) Vocal Rhythm Changes needs a NC.
00:16:180 (2) For symmetry, 1 grid down, 1 grid left.
00:24:329 (3) NC
00:37:292 (3) ^
01:06:551 (4,5) If you swap the place of the Circle and the Kickback slider, you'll get a better rhythm imo... anyway, if you make this change, remove the clap at the finish of the slider and put it in the start of the slider. And make this symmetry http://puu.sh/wxl3
01:08:403 (1) Remove NC.
01:09:143 (2) 1 grid up for consistency with the next slider.

Hard
00:05:810 (1) Remove NC
00:42:106 (2) NC for vocals.
00:42:847 (4) Remove NC and put NC in 00:43:588.
00:50:625 (6) NC
00:51:736 (1) Remove NC
00:53:217 (1) Revove NC Again, this combo MUST follow the previous combo. The Kiai must start with a NC.
00:56:551 (1) Remove NC
01:00:069 (3) NC

Miya
I was expecting a "ZOMG SUPER INSANE AND GOD (Yeah, GOD) PATTERNS MAP", but I expected too much I think, I can't find anything, but this mapping is very basic, annoying and bored to play.

Insane
00:10:440 (7) NC
00:13:403 (7) ^ Watch out, the vocals/rhythm changes deserves a NC, ALWAYS.
00:16:366 (7) ^
00:56:551 (1) Remove NC
01:08:403 (1) ^

Good Luck on Rank it.
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you
updated again ~
Miya
Yasora is not asking me to make super insane diff. But she ask me to make a second hard diff ._.
Mercurial
So just name it "Miya's Hard", and everybody will be happy.
Miya
hmm, ok. Yasora please renane my diff,
Topic Starter
Yasora
renamed
you happy now?
Mercurial
Yes.
DJPop
Some additional mods.


~Normal~
00:05:995 (1) - no NC
00:06:551 (2) - NC
00:07:292 (1) - no NC
00:08:032 (2) - NC

~Hard~
00:50:625 (6) - NC
00:51:736 (1) - no NC
00:53:217 (1) - ^
00:53:958 (2) - NC
00:58:773 (1) - no NC
00:59:699 (2) - NC
01:02:106 (1) - no NC
01:02:847 (2) - NC
01:06:736 (1) - no NC


no kds
Topic Starter
Yasora
ok fixed all =w= thank you
updated ~
DJPop
Bubble
Topic Starter
Yasora
arigatou ><///
Miya
Yay :D
Aleks719
Video
Video contains noiseless audio and it (audio) takes free space. Remove it from videofile, please
Insane
01:09:051 - add note
01:09:236 (4) - remove note (wrong 1/4 placement, relisten music)
01:13:032 (1,2) - add finishes here? there are not sound in music, but imo, they fit.
01:12:662 (5) - put nc to here from previous note, fits more
01:26:273 (1) - idk why end of spinner snapped on 1/3. Especially with 5%. Better to snap on 1/1. this suggestion for all diffs

Miya's Hard
Well, diff seems made-on-knee-for-one-hour, repetitive patterns and rhythms. It's rankable, but to be honest, i waited more :(

Easy
AR -1? not sure, but imo, ar3 seems fast
Miya
The song itself is repetitive Aleks :<
It's not unrankable too.
Aleks719

Miya wrote:

The song itself is repetitive Aleks :<
It's not unrankable too.
where did i say it's unrankable?
Well, Yasora's diffs looks more interesting orz
Miya
It's just an aditional diff. And i've just back from long afk when i map this diff. >.<
Don't expect it too high.
Topic Starter
Yasora

Aleks719 wrote:

Video
Video contains noiseless audio and it (audio) takes free space. Remove it from videofile, please will fix tomorrow, because my net is bad now T_T
Insane
01:09:051 - add note ok
01:09:236 (4) - remove note (wrong 1/4 placement, relisten music) ok
01:13:032 (1,2) - add finishes here? there are not sound in music, but imo, they fit. nope, that's weird to me.. really :(
01:12:662 (5) - put nc to here from previous note, fits more ok
01:26:273 (1) - idk why end of spinner snapped on 1/3. Especially with 5%. Better to snap on 1/1. this suggestion for all diffs ok..

Easy
AR -1? not sure, but imo, ar3 seems fast nope, too low if ar2.. since the bpm is a bit high, that's ok using ar3 imo
thanks aleks ^^;
Miya
Audio removed from video. Download here > http://puu.sh/zL60
Topic Starter
Yasora
makasih ya...

tomorrow I will upload it in another place TvT~

done~
Aleks719
All fixed, so.. Ranked!
Miya
Wow, o.o
Congratz Yasora :3
Akemi_Homura
Congratzzz~! :3
xiceyx
Awesome map great job! I love fairy tail :D
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks aleks =w=~ and everyone
also, before ranked aleks ask me to show my photo ;w;
Nichiyouki
Congratz~
Kanari
Congrats ~ >w<
Soul Rhythm
Congratz~ :)
YTYuyu
gogo Ya-chan :D
phonic
Congratz \:D/
Meowcenaries
congrats on ranked map
Rei Hakurei
mau ranked tapi ada foto dulu lol~ wkwkwkwk gw pantau langsung disebelah Yasora itu proses rankingnya
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