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Kakichoco - KiLLER LADY

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Mikarunoel131_DELETED
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 13. Oktober 2012 at 19:03:39

Artist: Kakichoco
Title: KiLLER LADY
Source: HachiojiP
Tags: 8#Prince q*Left Vocaloid Nico Douga Megpoid Gumi
BPM: 132
Filesize: 3348kb
Play Time: 02:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ghost Breaker (2,05 stars, 122 notes)
  2. Heart Breaker (3,58 stars, 156 notes)
  3. Soul Breaker (4,82 stars, 283 notes)
Download: Kakichoco - KiLLER LADY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi everybody =D
This is my new beatmap :D
I hope you like the sounds and the beatmap =D
It is RANKED x3 I cannot believe it ~(^w^~)
See you and have fun ^^



Song: KiLLER LADY
Original vocal : Megpoid Gumi ( Vocaloid )


Difficultys :

Soul Breaker ( Hard )

Heart Breaker ( Normal )

Ghost Breaker ( Easy )


Thanks to all People who helped me ^^
SPOILER
✿ special thanks to kurohana x3 You helped me everywhere every time :D Your my best friend :3
✿ special thanks to xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx =D You cheered me up and got a good friend to me :)
✿ special thanks to Sallad4ever You didn`t gave me up xD Thanks for that ^^
✿ special thanks to Andrea for ranking :D
✿ LKs
✿ ertyukjh010
✿ ryuu
✿ GamerX4life
✿ Philippines
✿ kosiga
✿ Flower
✿ popner
✿ -Nothing-To-Do-Here-
✿ wmfchris
And thanks to you ~(^w^~) for playing :)
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

If you have some suggestions write them into the threat =D
Help is always welcome ^^
star ~~

IRC mod
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
xD Ich mach was ich will ^^ Danke für den Stern du x3 Freu mich auf dein mod =D
You get a kudosu, because you made my timing kurohana x3 Thanks for that again x3
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

  1. women_music_vocaloid_short_hair_green_hair_megpoid_gumi_1024x768_wallpaper__wallfox_net: actually you don't need keep such a long name of BG pic and what's more, the BG itself is 800x600 instead of 1024x768
  2. combo colour #7 is different between the two diffs, please make them the same when you use same BG
  3. Kiaitimes should be start and end at downbeat, fix them plz
  4. Error: Heart Breaker 01:28:027 - two inherited lines on same place
    Error: Soul Breaker 01:28:027 ^
  5. two vocaloid on tags, consider delete one or change one to vocaloid2
[Soul Breaker]

02:05:766 (5) - clap?
not bad one

[Heart Breaker]

fine o.o

[diff spread]

sorry but I've to say your mapset is not that solid

I may treat your heart breaker as an Insane rather than a Hard

GL
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

  1. women_music_vocaloid_short_hair_green_hair_megpoid_gumi_1024x768_wallpaper__wallfox_net: actually you don't need keep such a long name of BG pic and what's more, the BG itself is 800x600 instead of 1024x768 fixed ^^
  2. combo colour #7 is different between the two diffs, please make them the same when you use same BG fixed =D
  3. Kiaitimes should be start and end at downbeat, fix them plz don`t know what you meant but changed something ^^
  4. Error: Heart Breaker 01:28:027 - two inherited lines on same place fixed xD ( I just didn`t saw that XDDD )
    Error: Soul Breaker 01:28:027 ^ ( same here )
  5. two vocaloid on tags, consider delete one or change one to vocaloid2
( deleted ^^ )

[Soul Breaker]

02:05:766 (5) - clap? fixed =D
not bad one

[Heart Breaker]

fine o.o THANK YOU x333

[diff spread]

sorry but I've to say your mapset is not that solid

I may treat your heart breaker as an Insane rather than a Hard
Aha , changed many things it is more than a hard now.

GL
Thanks for modding ^-^
ertyukjh010


Hello, :)

[Ghost Breaker]

00:58:936 - Unsnap inherited point
01:57:118 - Unsnap inherited point

[Soul Breaker]
00:58:936 - Unsnap inherited point
01:57:118 - ^

[Heart Breaker]
01:57:118 - Unsnap inherited point

Sorry, I cannot find a lot of problems. GJ
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hello, :)

[Ghost Breaker] ( fixed all )

00:58:936 - Unsnap inherited point
01:57:118 - Unsnap inherited point

[Soul Breaker]
00:58:936 - Unsnap inherited point
01:57:118 - ^

[Heart Breaker]
01:57:118 - Unsnap inherited point

Sorry, I cannot find a lot of problems. GJ
Thanks for teh star and for modding =D In fact , many inherited points aren`t snapped , because I got new bpm and so on a while ago |D Hope that isn`t that bad ---> thanks x3
ertyukjh010

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

thanks for modding x3 Just one question :
I have got many inheried points because of a new bpm. Is that bad ?
I don't sure is it rank. But it easier make a mistake. For example, the inherited point in the back of the circle, resulting in no effect.
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Ah thanks =D
ryuu
hi ~
i was introduced to the search for my favorite nico nico singers. and here i am :3

[Ghost Breaker]

Unsnapped green lines at:
01:40:755
01:42:118
01:42:573
02:11:664

i think you need to finish to the end this diff.

00:22:129 (2) - maybe this?

[Soul Breaker]

Unsnapped green lines at:
01:35:300
01:40:755
01:42:118
01:42:573
02:11:664

00:18:947 (1) - maybe this?
00:34:856 (3) - maybe this?
00:48:493 (2) - maybe this?
00:53:947 (5) - put on the middle? (vertical)
00:56:902 (1) - remove nc?
02:01:220 (3) - 2nd slider point on x:116 y:128

[Heart Breaker]

Unsnapped green lines at:
01:35:300
01:40:755
01:42:118
01:42:573

AP -1

00:27:584 (1) - remove nc?
00:38:947 (1) - change form?
00:40:311 (4) - ^
02:02:811 (7) - x:384 y:180
02:03:493 (8) - x:440 y:120

nyan. that's all.
nico nico singers is luv ♥
star and good luck ~
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

[Ryuu] wrote:

hi ~ Hi x3
i was introduced to the search for my favorite nico nico singers. and here i am :3 I didn´t even know , someone would do that Oo Thanks ^.^

[Ghost Breaker]

Unsnapped green lines at: fixed all
01:40:755
01:42:118
01:42:573
02:11:664

i think you need to finish to the end this diff. finished x3

00:22:129 (2) - maybe this? jokay
[Soul Breaker]

Unsnapped green lines at:fixed all
01:35:300
01:40:755
01:42:118
01:42:573
02:11:664

00:18:947 (1) - maybe this? changed some to you suggestion
00:34:856 (3) - maybe this?
00:48:493 (2) - maybe this?
00:53:947 (5) - put on the middle? (vertical) jo
00:56:902 (1) - remove nc? jo
02:01:220 (3) - 2nd slider point on x:116 y:128 no

[Heart Breaker]

Unsnapped green lines at: fixed all
01:35:300
01:40:755
01:42:118
01:42:573

AP -1 Okay, because another player told me it would fit better to the song, too.

00:27:584 (1) - remove nc? fixed
00:38:947 (1) - change form? not really
00:40:311 (4) - ^
02:02:811 (7) - x:384 y:180 fixed
02:03:493 (8) - x:440 y:120 fixed

nyan. that's all.
nico nico singers is luv ♥
star and good luck ~
Thank you so much x3
GamerX4life
Hi
I know you didn't ask me for a mod, but I want to get better in modding, sooo


[Ghost Breaker]
  1. 00:28:947 (2) delete circle (it doesn't fit to the music)
[Soul Breaker]
  1. 00:21:675 (6) try this instead: http://puu.sh/uShK (better flow)
  2. 00:26:675 and 00:27:584 add circle and try this to make a pentagon out of them
  3. 01:18:266 add circle
  4. 01:37:811 (3) delete slider and add circle at 01:37:811 (better flow)
[Heart Breaker]
  1. 00:19:402 (6,7) delete them and add a slider instead
  2. 00:19:856 (8) do the opposite
  3. 01:09:402 (1) try this instead: http://puu.sh/uSpd
  4. 01:21:447 try this: http://puu.sh/uSqa (better flow)
  5. 01:57:584 try this: http://puu.sh/uSrh
  6. 02:00:538 hier mal nen Tipp (auf einmal deutsch xD): es fühlt sich besser an wenn du mit Slidern auf dem Beat anfängst und nicht auf ihnen landest/endest (das gabs auch einige male davor, aber hier stört es mich besonders)
Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

GamerX4life wrote:

Hi
I know you didn't ask me for a mod, but I want to get better in modding, sooo


[Ghost Breaker]
  1. 00:28:947 (2) delete circle (it doesn't fit to the music)
No
[Soul Breaker]
  1. 00:21:675 (6) try this instead: http://puu.sh/uShK (better flow) No
  2. 00:26:675 and 00:27:584 add circle and try this to make a pentagon out of them No
  3. 01:18:266 add circle Okay
  4. 01:37:811 (3) delete slider and add circle at 01:37:811 (better flow)
Okay
[Heart Breaker]
  1. 00:19:402 (6,7) delete them and add a slider instead No
  2. 00:19:856 (8) do the opposite I made something, donnu what you exactly mean
  3. 01:09:402 (1) try this instead: http://puu.sh/uSpd No
  4. 01:21:447 try this: http://puu.sh/uSqa (better flow) I like it how it is
  5. 01:57:584 try this: http://puu.sh/uSrh No
  6. 02:00:538 hier mal nen Tipp (auf einmal deutsch xD): es fühlt sich besser an wenn du mit Slidern auf dem Beat anfängst und nicht auf ihnen landest/endest (das gabs auch einige male davor, aber hier stört es mich besonders)
Ich mag sowas eig total gern xD Naja, jeder mag maps anders, aber habs wenigstens an der Stelle für dich geändert xD

Good Luck ;) Danke und auch für den mod^^
Kanari
Halloww~


[General]
- Change it to (Short Ver.) Remove the space from it.
- I think.... you can use a better background then that ?
- Check off enable countdown.
- .osb is not in use so remove it.


[Ghost Breaker]
00:35:311 (1) - Reverse ?
00:46:220 (3) - Line this with (1)
02:05:311 (3) - Line with (2)


[Soul Breaker]
- HP Drain +1
00:36:447 (1) - Line with (3)
00:44:856 (2) - New combo.
01:28:138 - Unsnapped timing point
01:56:675 (4) - ^


Heart Breaker is fine~ ;D
Well mapped and nice song ^^
Good luck and star! >w<
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww~


[General]
- Change it to (Short Ver.) Remove the space from it. It worked x333 Wow Oo Osu! is not making that in my Listen To Your Heart beatmap |D strange <,<

- I think.... you can use a better background then that ? changed it now xD But Osu! Doesn`t change the picture of the map here in the beatmap list or in the threat TTvTT Why ?
- Check off enable countdown. Why ? But , okay
- .osb is not in use so remove it. Jokay

[Ghost Breaker]
00:35:311 (1) - Reverse ? No
00:46:220 (3) - Line this with (1) Ah , I get it xD okay
02:05:311 (3) - Line with (2) okay


[Soul Breaker]
- HP Drain +1 okay
00:36:447 (1) - Line with (3) okay
00:44:856 (2) - New combo. okay
01:28:138 - Unsnapped timing point okay
01:56:675 (4) - ^ okay


Heart Breaker is fine~ ;D Thanks x3
Well mapped and nice song ^^ I am a bit a new in mappen ^-^ So thanks a lot for that comment =DD
Good luck and star! >w<
Thanks x3
LKs
hi, the long overdue mod

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

This is an ordinary mod

  1. Personally recommend 1024x768 as bg size
[Ghost Breaker]

00:23:038 (3) - Add a clap and keep the finish seems no need
00:33:493 (1) - Not sure the spacing here
01:38:493 (2) - http://puu.sh/vU5H?
02:02:584 (3) - This curled slider doesn't seem easy for beginners imo

[Soul Breaker]

You may want to attend a slider construction class. A decent and beautiful slider style can actually improve your map

00:33:038 (1) - too odd shape
01:15:311 (4) - Why didn't you try a 3-node slider(yours is 4-node one) to get the slider more suitable
01:34:856 (2,4) - looks like evil claws, loool
01:41:902 (1) - tricky sldier track now is not recommended. reference: ranking criteria(access to osu! wiki)

[Heart Breaker]

00:35:311 (2) - http://puu.sh/vUe0 easy made slider


GL
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

LKs wrote:

hi, the long overdue mod

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

This is an ordinary mod

  1. Personally recommend 1024x768 as bg size
Okay , but now it is a bit blurred even after editing it with gimp...Ah , i hate it blurred , i am going to change that into the normal one like it was befor >,<

[Ghost Breaker]

00:23:038 (3) - Add a clap and keep the finish seems no need |D ?
00:33:493 (1) - Not sure the spacing here xD I just forgot to cvhange that, thanks =D
01:38:493 (2) - http://puu.sh/vU5H? something like that ^^
02:02:584 (3) - This curled slider doesn't seem easy for beginners imo You think so ? I am mostly playing easys with some similar things in them, but I changed it.

[Soul Breaker]

You may want to attend a slider construction class. A decent and beautiful slider style can actually improve your map
Hä ? xD Okay , I try to make better slider then ?

00:33:038 (1) - too odd shape eh ... ?
01:15:311 (4) - Why didn't you try a 3-node slider(yours is 4-node one) to get the slider more suitable Like it how it is , but made it look better, I guess
01:34:856 (2,4) - looks like evil claws, loool But I like this and wont change that :(
01:41:902 (1) - tricky sldier track now is not recommended. reference: ranking criteria(access to osu! wiki) So it is not allowed or is it allowed ? But it looks good and makes fun to play... Well I changed it , but it doesn`t look so good as befor TTvTT

[Heart Breaker]

00:35:311 (2) - http://puu.sh/vUe0 easy made slider


GL
Thanks ^^
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Folder seems clean. Good job.

  2. I'm not sure about your mapset, But I'll consider this one Ghost=Easy | Soul=Normal | Heart=Hard. Please tell me if I'm wrong.

  • Ghost Breaker
  1. 00:20:766 (1) - I don't think a new combo here is necessary, remove it. Then put a new combo on 00:22:129.

  2. 00:37:129 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm in any way, I suggest you turn this one into a slider or if you're willing to give challenge, a beat blanket. This suggestion also applies to the slider on 00:39:402 (2).

  3. 00:47:129 (1) - Please remove the new combo here since there seems to be no change in the rhythm, then add a new combo on the slider on 00:48:038. Then remove new combo on 00:50:766 because there's no change in the rhythm too, then add a new combo on the circle located on 00:51:675.

  4. 01:19:856 (1) - This is one weird slider. What about something like this, it plays better.

  5. 01:37:129 (4) - The new combo should be here, remove the new combo on 01:37:584.

  6. 01:39:402 (3) - Mark a new combo on this one. Then remove new combo on the slider in 01:41:902.

  7. 01:47:584 (1) - Remove new combo here then mark a new combo on the next note.

  8. 01:49:856 (1,1,1,1) - This new combo abuse is not good. I suggest use (1,2,1,2) instead.

  9. 01:57:129 (1) - Since your spinner ends too late for an Easy diff, please try to move this slider start at the center so players can hit it easily right after they finish spinning.

  10. 02:01:675 (2,3) - Strange sliders. I suggest to replace these sliders with this kind of slider.

  11. The rest seems fine. But I suggest you bump your Approach Rate +1.

  • Soul Breaker
  1. 00:33:038 (1) - This slider curve is weird. Try making sliders that have a simple curve like the one I suggested on [Ghost Breaker] about those Strange sliders that I said.

  2. 00:42:925 (6) - It's better to add a new combo here then remove new combo on the slider in 00:43:720.

  3. 00:53:947 (5) - This slider looks strange too. I highly suggest you follow my suggest about this kind of sliders for smoother and better gameplay.

  4. 01:27:584 (4) - Please move this one about 1 or 2 grids up to maintain consistent spacing.

  5. 01:38:058 - This empty space after this note feels awkward and weird. I highly recommend you map this empty space.

  6. 01:48:947 (1) - I don't see any good reason for a spinner here. Other than it's not a good place for a spinner, the spinner is too short for this diff. I strongly suggest to please replace this one with circles or sliders.

  7. 01:50:766 (1,1,1,1) - Another new combo abuse. :O Follow (1,2,1,2) instead.

  8. 02:01:220 (1) - You can still improve this slider blanket. If you would look closely at it on 02:00:766, you will see the little spaces are inconsistent. Please fix this one for better gameplay. Don't forget this suggestion also applies to 02:02:129 (3) since it's a duplicate of it's previous slider.

  9. 02:10:311 (1) - I highly suggest you start this spinner on 02:10:084 because it's too short for this diff.

  10. This diff quite looks better if you bump your Approach Rate and HP Drain +1.

  • Heart Breaker
  1. Why are you using the largest Circle? Please make it smaller. I suggest use the 2nd largest circle, much more better than the largest one.

  2. You better should use either Overall Difficulty 6 or 7. It is so hard to play with your spinners like in 00:28:266.

  3. 00:30:766 (3,4,5) - This overlap looks ugly in my opinion. Try this kind pattern, looks better for me.

  4. 00:38:947 (1) - Another weird slider. This slider has a high potential of becoming a Beat Blanket so I suggest you to make it look like one. Check this one out: Beat Blanket Suggestion. This suggestion also applies to the slider in 00:40:311. Do this for the sake of better gameplay.

  5. 00:39:629 (2,3) - I'm not really sure about this. I don't know if this is okay but I suggest you try to avoid this one as much as possible. Try to move the slider down until it doesn't overlap with the circle. It looks better for me.

  6. 00:41:447 (4) - This weird slider too has a potential of becoming a beat blanket. Please turn this thing into one.

  7. 00:43:720 (1) - This spinner is a really really short and so so hard to play. Please remove this one and fill up the empty space with circles and sliders.

  8. 00:49:402 (1,2,3) - I don't really like that this circles are overlapping with the previous slider. Please try to find a way to avoid this one.

  9. 00:49:856 (4) - Like all the other weird sliders, this also has potential to become a a beat blanket.

  10. 00:55:311 (3) - Mark a new combo here, then remove new combo on the next note.

  11. 00:58:493 (1) - I highly suggest you remove the new combo on this slider.

  12. 00:59:402 (1) - You shouldn't copy pasted this slider from the previous one because there's a new rhythm on this part. I strongly suggest you change the pattern of this slider so it doesn't play weird for users.

  13. 01:12:584 (1) - Make this spinner start on 01:12:356 so that players can have a bit of a time to spin easily.

  14. 01:15:993 - I feel like this empty space should be filled out. Please add a circle here.

  15. 01:19:629 - This empty space too. Add a note here.

  16. I also feel like a circle should be added on 01:38:720 and 01:38:947.

  17. If you happen to follow my suggestion above, the spinner that was on 01:38:720 should start in 01:39:175. Make sure it ends on 01:40:766.

  18. 01:44:629 (Stream Part)- Well since I assumed this diff is a Hard one, this streams are not good for this diff. I strongly suggest you replace some streams with a spinner slider *orz* instead.

  19. 01:56:675 (1) - Remove this new combo for this slider then add new combo on the next one.

  20. 02:00:766 (6) - A new combo should be marked on this note. Don't forget to remove the new combo on the next note.

  21. Overall Difficulty 7 fits this diff. Please change it.
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

Philippines wrote:

  • General
  1. Folder seems clean. Good job.

  2. I'm not sure about your mapset, But I'll consider this one Ghost=Easy | Soul=Normal | Heart=Hard. Please tell me if I'm wrong. You Okay, you are right ^^

  • Ghost Breaker
  1. 00:20:766 (1) - I don't think a new combo here is necessary, remove it. Then put a new combo on 00:22:129. Okay

  2. 00:37:129 (1) - This slider doesn't really fit the rhythm in any way, I suggest you turn this one into a slider or if you're willing to give challenge, a beat blanket. This suggestion also applies to the slider on 00:39:402 (2). Just changed the sliders a bit xD

  3. 00:47:129 (1) - Please remove the new combo here since there seems to be no change in the rhythm, then add a new combo on the slider on 00:48:038. Then remove new combo on 00:50:766 because there's no change in the rhythm too, then add a new combo on the circle located on 00:51:675. first one Okay ^^ second one, No, I think it looks better this way =)

  4. 01:19:856 (1) - This is one weird slider. What about something like this, it plays better. Jo

  5. 01:37:129 (4) - The new combo should be here, remove the new combo on 01:37:584. Okay^^

  6. 01:39:402 (3) - Mark a new combo on this one. Then remove new combo on the slider in 01:41:902. Okay

  7. 01:47:584 (1) - Remove new combo here then mark a new combo on the next note. It doesn`t look so good I think, no |D

  8. 01:49:856 (1,1,1,1) - This new combo abuse is not good. I suggest use (1,2,1,2) instead. Okay^^

  9. 01:57:129 (1) - Since your spinner ends too late for an Easy diff, please try to move this slider start at the center so players can hit it easily right after they finish spinning. I ended the spinner a bit earlier ^^

  10. 02:01:675 (2,3) - Strange sliders. I suggest to replace these sliders with this kind of slider. lI like them how they are xD

  11. The rest seems fine. But I suggest you bump your Approach Rate +1.
Okay^^

  • Soul Breaker
  1. 00:33:038 (1) - This slider curve is weird. Try making sliders that have a simple curve like the one I suggested on [Ghost Breaker] about those Strange sliders that I said. changed

  2. 00:42:925 (6) - It's better to add a new combo here then remove new combo on the slider in 00:43:720. Okay

  3. 00:53:947 (5) - This slider looks strange too. I highly suggest you follow my suggest about this kind of sliders for smoother and better gameplay. But I like it TT.TT

  4. 01:27:584 (4) - Please move this one about 1 or 2 grids up to maintain consistent spacing. Okay

  5. 01:38:058 - This empty space after this note feels awkward and weird. I highly recommend you map this empty space. changed

  6. 01:48:947 (1) - I don't see any good reason for a spinner here. Other than it's not a good place for a spinner, the spinner is too short for this diff. I strongly suggest to please replace this one with circles or sliders. changed

  7. 01:50:766 (1,1,1,1) - Another new combo abuse. :O Follow (1,2,1,2) instead. yokay^^

  8. 02:01:220 (1) - You can still improve this slider blanket. If you would look closely at it on 02:00:766, you will see the little spaces are inconsistent. Please fix this one for better gameplay. Don't forget this suggestion also applies to 02:02:129 (3) since it's a duplicate of it's previous slider. changed a liittle, I guess

  9. 02:10:311 (1) - I highly suggest you start this spinner on 02:10:084 because it's too short for this diff. Okay

  10. This diff quite looks better if you bump your Approach Rate and HP Drain +1. okay ^^

  • Heart Breaker
  1. Why are you using the largest Circle? Please make it smaller. I suggest use the 2nd largest circle, much more better than the largest one. Okay^^

  2. You better should use either Overall Difficulty 6 or 7. It is so hard to play with your spinners like in 00:28:266. Okay

  3. 00:30:766 (3,4,5) - This overlap looks ugly in my opinion. Try this kind pattern, looks better for me. Okay

  4. 00:38:947 (1) - Another weird slider. This slider has a high potential of becoming a Beat Blanket so I suggest you to make it look like one. Check this one out: Beat Blanket Suggestion. This suggestion also applies to the slider in 00:40:311. Do this for the sake of better gameplay. changed a bit

  5. 00:39:629 (2,3) - I'm not really sure about this. I don't know if this is okay but I suggest you try to avoid this one as much as possible. Try to move the slider down until it doesn't overlap with the circle. It looks better for me. I think I let it be and wait for other suggestions

  6. 00:41:447 (4) - This weird slider too has a potential of becoming a beat blanket. Please turn this thing into one. hmm

  7. 00:43:720 (1) - This spinner is a really really short and so so hard to play. Please remove this one and fill up the empty space with circles and sliders. changed

  8. 00:49:402 (1,2,3) - I don't really like that this circles are overlapping with the previous slider. Please try to find a way to avoid this one. changed

  9. 00:49:856 (4) - Like all the other weird sliders, this also has potential to become a a beat blanket. hmm

  10. 00:55:311 (3) - Mark a new combo here, then remove new combo on the next note. Okay

  11. 00:58:493 (1) - I highly suggest you remove the new combo on this slider. Okay

  12. 00:59:402 (1) - You shouldn't copy pasted this slider from the previous one because there's a new rhythm on this part. I strongly suggest you change the pattern of this slider so it doesn't play weird for users. That one is like she sings ^^ I like that^^

  13. 01:12:584 (1) - Make this spinner start on 01:12:356 so that players can have a bit of a time to spin easily. Okay

  14. 01:15:993 - I feel like this empty space should be filled out. Please add a circle here. Okay

  15. 01:19:629 - This empty space too. Add a note here. No

  16. I also feel like a circle should be added on 01:38:720 and 01:38:947. changed

  17. If you happen to follow my suggestion above, the spinner that was on 01:38:720 should start in 01:39:175. Make sure it ends on 01:40:766. Okay

  18. 01:44:629 (Stream Part)- Well since I assumed this diff is a Hard one, this streams are not good for this diff. I strongly suggest you replace some streams with a spinner instead. One spinner added

  19. 01:56:675 (1) - Remove this new combo for this slider then add new combo on the next one. Okay

  20. 02:00:766 (6) - A new combo should be marked on this note. Don't forget to remove the new combo on the next note. Okay

  21. Overall Difficulty 7 fits this diff. Please change it. Okay^^
Cygnus
If you're saying that [Heart Breaker] is an Insane Difficulty, you should create a Hard Difficulty then. Don't say no, this is part of the rules in the current guidelines. But if you're lazy making a Hard Diff, I suggest you try to lessen some weird jumps in you 'Insane' and I think it'll be fine to be called as Hard Difficulty.
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

Philippines wrote:

If you're saying that [Heart Breaker] is an Insane Difficulty, you should create a Hard Difficulty then. Don't say no, this is part of the rules in the current guidelines. But if you're lazy making a Hard Diff, I suggest you try to lessen some weird jumps in you 'Insane' and I think it'll be fine to be called as Hard Difficulty. Okay, than it is an hard, I guess =) Thanks for your mod x3
Cygnus

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

[*]01:44:629 (Stream Part)- Well since I assumed this diff is a Hard one, this streams are not good for this diff. I strongly suggest you replace some streams with a spinner instead. One spinner added

I meant replace this one with sliders. orz D:
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

Philippines wrote:

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

[*]01:44:629 (Stream Part)- Well since I assumed this diff is a Hard one, this streams are not good for this diff. I strongly suggest you replace some streams with a spinner instead. One spinner added

I meant replace this one with sliders. orz D: No problem, I changed some things in the map now ^^
kurohana
mod req <3

General

delete .osb file in the folder
otherwise everything ok

Heart Breaker

00:17:584 (2,3) - stack correctly
00:19:856 (8) - hm? is that so?
00:31:220 (4) - ctrl+r
00:31:675 (5) - ^
00:34:856 (7) - hm, maybe this? http://puu.sh/xJxC but fix spacing after this >.<
01:12:129 (1) - remove nc
01:21:902 (2) - gr... same as 00:34:856 (7)
01:33:266 (8) - hidden note

Soul Breaker

01:06:675 (2) - slider is unpropotional, try this http://puu.sh/xJBG
01:07:584 (3) - copy ^ and then turn it and so on...
01:52:584 (1,1) - remove nc
02:01:902 (2) - nazi: 23 grids down (nrghh, look this http://puu.sh/xJDv ) plays better ^^

Ghost Breaker

00:18:947 (1) - ideeeeaaaa! copy 00:15:311 (1,2,3) - and paste on 00:18:947 then mirror and ctrl+r ^^ looks good :3
00:28:947 (1) - delete note, fits better
00:29:402 (3) - ^ and then new combo on this note and 4 grids left (on your favorite line ^^) looks better :3
00:33:038 - add note
00:35:311 (1) - finish at the end
00:38:947 (1) - spacing :<
00:46:675 - add note
00:48:947 (1) - remove nc
01:03:947 (1) - ^
01:41:902 (3) - nc
01:44:856 (5) - ^
01:45:311 (1) - remove nc
01:47:584 (1) - ^
01:48:038 (2) - nc
01:51:675 (1) - remove nc

red - need to fix
blue - no need, but take a look
black - only suggestion

nc problems, ja? try new combo on almost every long white line (on the timeline), but it should fit the music ^^
if you fix this you get a star from me~~ :3
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
danke an all die, die mir sterne gaben ^^
thanks to all who gave me stars ^^
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

kurohana wrote:

mod req <3

General

delete .osb file in the folder Yo
otherwise everything ok

Heart Breaker

00:17:584 (2,3) - stack correctly yes, dear kurohana-Rustypsilon-horsto-chan :3 We are good friends x3
00:19:856 (8) - hm? is that so? Ja, der soll so ^^
00:31:220 (4) - ctrl+r No ^^
00:31:675 (5) - ^ No, with ganz viele Airplanes xDDD
00:34:856 (7) - hm, maybe this? http://puu.sh/xJxC but fix spacing after this >.< Wau x3
01:12:129 (1) - remove nc Yes
01:21:902 (2) - gr... same as 00:34:856 (7) Jo
01:33:266 (8) - hidden note changed

Soul Breaker

01:06:675 (2) - slider is unpropotional, try this http://puu.sh/xJBG Ahijak Yep
01:07:584 (3) - copy ^ and then turn it and so on... Yuhuuuu yippie ya yei xD
01:52:584 (1,1) - remove nc Joo
02:01:902 (2) - nazi: 23 grids down (nrghh, look this http://puu.sh/xJDv ) plays better ^^ notice XD


Ghost Breaker

00:18:947 (1) - ideeeeaaaa! copy 00:15:311 (1,2,3) - and paste on 00:18:947 then mirror and ctrl+r ^^ looks good :3 no ^^`
00:28:947 (1) - delete note, fits better Jokay
00:29:402 (3) - ^ and then new combo on this note and 4 grids left (on your favorite line ^^) looks better :3 Jokay
00:33:038 - add note Jokay
00:35:311 (1) - finish at the end Jokay Rustypsilon
00:38:947 (1) - spacing :< oh noooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo xD changed
00:46:675 - add note No Santa, I am killing just for fun xD
00:48:947 (1) - remove nc Okay
01:03:947 (1) - ^ objection blast! YESSS!
01:41:902 (3) - nc Okayy xD
01:44:856 (5) - ^ No
01:45:311 (1) - remove nc No, Wanne xD
01:47:584 (1) - ^ Yes x3 AND : Do you need the ULTIMATE FLAVOUR ????
01:48:038 (2) - nc No, FLAVOUR burn
01:51:675 (1) - remove nc Yes Santa Rustypsilon ^^

red - need to fix
blue - no need, but take a look
black - only suggestion

nc problems, ja? try new combo on almost every long white line (on the timeline), but it should fit the music ^^
if you fix this you get a star from me~~ :3
kurohana

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

kurohana wrote:

mod req <3

General

delete .osb file in the folder Yo
otherwise everything ok

Heart Breaker

00:17:584 (2,3) - stack correctly yes, dear kurohana-Rustypsilon-horsto-chan :3 We are good friends x3
00:19:856 (8) - hm? is that so? Ja, der soll so ^^
00:31:220 (4) - ctrl+r No ^^
00:31:675 (5) - ^ No, with ganz viele Airplanes xDDD
00:34:856 (7) - hm, maybe this? http://puu.sh/xJxC but fix spacing after this >.< Wau x3
01:12:129 (1) - remove nc Yes
01:21:902 (2) - gr... same as 00:34:856 (7) Jo
01:33:266 (8) - hidden note changed

Soul Breaker

01:06:675 (2) - slider is unpropotional, try this http://puu.sh/xJBG Ahijak Yep
01:07:584 (3) - copy ^ and then turn it and so on... Yuhuuuu yippie ya yei xD
01:52:584 (1,1) - remove nc Joo
02:01:902 (2) - nazi: 23 grids down (nrghh, look this http://puu.sh/xJDv ) plays better ^^ notice XD


Ghost Breaker

00:18:947 (1) - ideeeeaaaa! copy 00:15:311 (1,2,3) - and paste on 00:18:947 then mirror and ctrl+r ^^ looks good :3 no ^^`
00:28:947 (1) - delete note, fits better Jokay
00:29:402 (3) - ^ and then new combo on this note and 4 grids left (on your favorite line ^^) looks better :3 Jokay
00:33:038 - add note Jokay
00:35:311 (1) - finish at the end Jokay Rustypsilon
00:38:947 (1) - spacing :< oh noooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo xD changed
00:46:675 - add note No Santa, I am killing just for fun xD
00:48:947 (1) - remove nc Okay
01:03:947 (1) - ^ objection blast! YESSS!
01:41:902 (3) - nc Okayy xD
01:44:856 (5) - ^ No
01:45:311 (1) - remove nc No, Wanne xD
01:47:584 (1) - ^ Yes x3 AND : Do you need the ULTIMATE FLAVOUR ????
01:48:038 (2) - nc No, FLAVOUR burn
01:51:675 (1) - remove nc Yes Santa Rustypsilon ^^

red - need to fix
blue - no need, but take a look
black - only suggestion

nc problems, ja? try new combo on almost every long white line (on the timeline), but it should fit the music ^^
if you fix this you get a star from me~~ :3
allright horst leon-chan :3 good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Thanks again for the mod kurohana and I like your humor xD as always xDD
kosiga
Hi~ Mikarunoel131 ;)

thank you for the request :D

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. Song folder - mp3 - Sound quality is a little bad :cry: I will hear a little noise. It is recommended to change the sound quality. ↓
    http://puu.sh/zxti I do not cut it. When you use it, please cut it and please adjust the offset. If you can not cut, please tell me.
  2. Song Setup - Artist - 「Kakichoco」 - I think that 「Kakichoko」 is right :3
  3. Song Setup - combo colors - so many combo colors o.o Is it so necessary? but it is not a problem :P
    You are using the similar colors in the color combo consecutive. for ex: 1,2 similar colors....7,8 similar colors. This is not recommended x3
    Example of the turn: ↓
    code
    Combo1 : 252,175,124
    Combo2 : 242,87,242
    Combo3 : 72,65,222
    Combo4 : 0,255,128
    Combo5 : 232,139,47
    Combo6 : 154,65,226
    Combo7 : 58,209,222
    Combo8 : 0,128,64
  4. KIAI TIME - 2nd kiai time end 02:11:220 - my suggestion: change to 02:09:856. because it is put in the middle of a spinner in the normal diff. I do not think it is a good idea ><;

[Ghost Breaker]
  1. 00:43:606 - Unnecessary green line. better to remove it.
  2. 00:49:856 (4,1) - This pattern is not bad. but if I put in this way : http://puu.sh/zxF3 ( 00:51:220 - Because I think not put a note here, and can emphasize next note )
  3. 01:00:311 (4,1) - This stacking pattern i can not be recommended in the easy diff x.x
  4. 01:23:493 (1,2,3) - There is not the problem even if you use the red line. but put three consecutive circle is not a good idea in the easy :o i recommend that repeat slider to change ><
  5. 01:56:675 - Unnecessary green line
  6. 01:57:129 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  7. 02:05:311 (3,4) - square form: 3:x160,y12, 4:x244,y56
  8. 02:07:129 (2) - should not overlap >< Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/zy2r
    200,140,126220,6,0,B|165:194|214:262,1,120,0|8
    303,252,127129,2,0,B|346:194|312:140,1,120,2|8
[Soul Breaker]
  1. 00:29:402 (1) - remove clap to start of the slider. i prefer not put here :D
  2. 00:30:311 (2) - Why not use a form of symmetry? try symmetry form. 00:29:402 (1) - Ctrl+c,v,h,r
  3. 00:33:038 (1,2) - spacing too close (0.59x) it is better to use DS0.8x
  4. 00:43:606 - Unnecessary green line
  5. 01:20:311 (3) - remove clap. i prefer not put here :D
[Heart Breaker]
  1. 00:43:266 (2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/zyiA ( and green line 00:43:606⇒00:44:061. 00:43:720⇒00:44:288 )
  2. 00:47:584 (1) - remove NC and 00:48:038 (2) - add NC and 00:48:493 (1) - remove NC is better
  3. 01:09:175 (8) - add NC and 01:09:856 (1) - remove NC and 01:10:311 (2) - add NC ? ( beautiful NC pattern ? )
  4. 01:12:356 (1,1) - note after the spinner is too far imo. If you think you want to place the spinner, had better close the note. but I think that you do not need to put a spinner. please think about such a simple pattern ;) http://puu.sh/zyp0
  5. 01:15:538 (5) - Please try a symmetrical pattern with 01:13:720 (1)
  6. 01:30:538 (5,1) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/zysR
  7. 01:38:720 (7,8) - change the order of the note. I think to use a jump pattern here is not bad :D
  8. 02:02:356 (5) - add NC
good map :3 Star~☆

Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Mikarunoel131 ;)

thank you for the request :D

here my mod ~

[General] changed most things
  1. Song folder - mp3 - Sound quality is a little bad :cry: I will hear a little noise. It is recommended to change the sound quality. ↓
    http://puu.sh/zxti I do not cut it. When you use it, please cut it and please adjust the offset. If you can not cut, please tell me.
  2. Song Setup - Artist - 「Kakichoco」 - I think that 「Kakichoko」 is right :3
  3. Song Setup - combo colors - so many combo colors o.o Is it so necessary? but it is not a problem :P
    You are using the similar colors in the color combo consecutive. for ex: 1,2 similar colors....7,8 similar colors. This is not recommended x3
    Example of the turn: ↓
    code
    Combo1 : 252,175,124
    Combo2 : 242,87,242
    Combo3 : 72,65,222
    Combo4 : 0,255,128
    Combo5 : 232,139,47
    Combo6 : 154,65,226
    Combo7 : 58,209,222
    Combo8 : 0,128,64
  4. KIAI TIME - 2nd kiai time end 02:11:220 - my suggestion: change to 02:09:856. because it is put in the middle of a spinner in the normal diff. I do not think it is a good idea ><;

[Ghost Breaker] changed some
  1. 00:43:606 - Unnecessary green line. better to remove it.
  2. 00:49:856 (4,1) - This pattern is not bad. but if I put in this way : http://puu.sh/zxF3 ( 00:51:220 - Because I think not put a note here, and can emphasize next note )
  3. 01:00:311 (4,1) - This stacking pattern i can not be recommended in the easy diff x.x
  4. 01:23:493 (1,2,3) - There is not the problem even if you use the red line. but put three consecutive circle is not a good idea in the easy :o i recommend that repeat slider to change ><
  5. 01:56:675 - Unnecessary green line
  6. 01:57:129 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  7. 02:05:311 (3,4) - square form: 3:x160,y12, 4:x244,y56
  8. 02:07:129 (2) - should not overlap >< Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/zy2r
    200,140,126220,6,0,B|165:194|214:262,1,120,0|8
    303,252,127129,2,0,B|346:194|312:140,1,120,2|8
[Soul Breaker] jokay
  1. 00:29:402 (1) - remove clap to start of the slider. i prefer not put here :D
  2. 00:30:311 (2) - Why not use a form of symmetry? try symmetry form. 00:29:402 (1) - Ctrl+c,v,h,r
  3. 00:33:038 (1,2) - spacing too close (0.59x) it is better to use DS0.8x
  4. 00:43:606 - Unnecessary green line
  5. 01:20:311 (3) - remove clap. i prefer not put here :D
[Heart Breaker] changed some
  1. 00:43:266 (2) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/zyiA ( and green line 00:43:606⇒00:44:061. 00:43:720⇒00:44:288 )
  2. 00:47:584 (1) - remove NC and 00:48:038 (2) - add NC and 00:48:493 (1) - remove NC is better
  3. 01:09:175 (8) - add NC and 01:09:856 (1) - remove NC and 01:10:311 (2) - add NC ? ( beautiful NC pattern ? )
  4. 01:12:356 (1,1) - note after the spinner is too far imo. If you think you want to place the spinner, had better close the note. but I think that you do not need to put a spinner. please think about such a simple pattern ;) http://puu.sh/zyp0
  5. 01:15:538 (5) - Please try a symmetrical pattern with 01:13:720 (1)
  6. 01:30:538 (5,1) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/zysR
  7. 01:38:720 (7,8) - change the order of the note. I think to use a jump pattern here is not bad :D
  8. 02:02:356 (5) - add NC
good map :3 Star~☆ Thanks ^^

Good luck~ :) Thank you^^
Flower
iroseka's mod from tha queue
Surprise that I love the song - or maybe is because your map is awesome? :)
Sorry for poor mods cause I can't find big problems > <

[Easy]
02:11:070 (1) - Can be put one beat earlier and make a return.

[Normal]
00:36:298 (1,2,3,4) - The note shape is not so good...?
00:42:775 (1) - NC off
00:43:571 (3) - DS

[Hard]
No problems (?) - maybe?
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