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Orange Caramel - Magic Girl

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Mukufro
38 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
Mukufro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 20, 2012 at 8:52:36 AM

Artist: Orange Caramel
Title: Magic Girl
Source: Pledis Entertaiment
Tags: After School
BPM: 136.05
Filesize: 3691kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.76 stars, 155 notes)
  2. Hard (4.82 stars, 411 notes)
  3. Normal (4.06 stars, 259 notes)
Download: Orange Caramel - Magic Girl
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My second beatmap that i think isnt failed. :D
this is a kpop song from after school.. a group named orange caramel. orange is my life. Magic girl. please mod :D
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
Hi, from #modreqs :)

Noob mod with poor English =.=

red = You must fix.
blue = You should fix but still depend on you.
black = just suggestions that you can feel free to ignore.


General
  • [General]
  1. The size of is 550x379, which is unrankable (BG's size should be 1024x768 or 800x600 or... anyway 4:3)
  2. You should delete a file [Orange Caramel - After School (Teru21).osb] and fullsubmit.
  3. Please use single combocolor in all diffs ( current---> http://puu.sh/m8fm )
  4. maybe add "k-pop", "kpop" in tags?

Easy
  • [Easy]
  1. 00:16:693 (1head) - add finish?
  2. 01:11:820 (1) - ^
  3. 01:46:660 (3) - this slider touches the HP bar when playing +HardRock like this. fix it ---> http://puu.sh/m8jW
  4. 01:58:126 (4) - this also ^ like this ---> http://puu.sh/m8jV
  5. 02:10:034 (2) - touches the score when playing +HardRock like this ---> http://puu.sh/m8kD
  6. 02:17:090 (2) - touches HP bar +HardRock like this ---> http://puu.sh/m8lh
  7. 02:40:464 (2) - add whistle?
  8. 02:51:930 (1end) - add clap?
  9. 02:57:222 (1) - ^

Normal
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:14:929 (1) - add finish?
  2. 00:19:339 (4) - try using Ctrl+H? and it will frow better with the next combo imo.
  3. 00:28:600 (x) - add a note with clap here (x:252,y:268)?
  4. 00:59:030 (1) - add finish
  5. around 01:08:292 (5) - (rhythm suggestion) like this?
  6. 01:11:158 (1) - this spin's end should be [01:13:143] (same as Easy's)
  7. 01:57:906 (7end) - remove clap beause this sound is not from the song~ ...but with clap also sounds interesting. your choice
  8. 02:04:962 (7end) - ^
  9. 02:16:208 (x) - add a note with clap?
  10. 02:21:941 (1) - add clap?
  11. 02:46:197 (4,5,6,7,8) - umm... they don't look so good~ maybe (6) is at (x:472,y:104), (7start) is at (x:436,y:60), (8) is (x:264,y:100,stack on (4))?
  12. 02:57:663 (4) - touches HP bar +HardRock like this ---> http://puu.sh/m8yn
  13. 03:04:058 (1) - missing finish? owo

Hard
  • [Hard]
  1. OD +2
  2. 00:35:877 (6) - touches the score when playing +HardRock like this ---> http://puu.sh/m8A7
  3. 00:39:185 (6,1) - distance problem (too close)
  4. 00:47:344 (7,8) - ^
  5. 01:01:456 (6,7) - ^
  6. 01:49:748 (6,1) - ^
  7. 02:35:833 (15,16) - ^
  8. 00:56:164 (2) - *nazi* 1 grid up?
  9. 00:59:030 (1head) - add finish
  10. 01:10:276 (2) - *nazi* 1 grid down?
  11. 01:11:158 (1) - this spin's end should be [01:13:143] (same as Easy's)
  12. 01:53:423 (6) - stack on (1)
  13. 02:21:721 (1) - add clap?
  14. 03:06:043 (1) - missing finish?

That's all. Good luck!
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

  1. Missing Skin Files approachcircle.png reversearrow.png spinner-background.png spinner-approachcircle.png spinner-metre.png
  2. double osb files in map folder, delete them
  4. don't use various/multi colour set when you don't have a GD
skinning

  1. you used custom spinner meter, but the spinner background pic doesn't fit it, so maybe use a barely transparent one or change its colour
  2. rebuild your hitcircle.png pic =.=

Easy

00:11:180 (3) - avoid making slider this shape..will be better (on easiest diff)
00:29:041 (2) - this reverse arrow is partially covered by the last slider, which may be unrankable
01:58:126 (4) - off screen slider is not allowed

Normal

00:36:980 (4) - off srceen slider #2

Hard

00:35:877 (6) - off srceen slider #3
00:39:185 (6) - wait, this anti-jump is just so bewildering, I thought it was a 1/4 hit here
00:53:297 (4) - ^
01:07:409 (4) - ^
01:01:897 (1) - NC?
02:36:054 (1) - NC, for that you have had long stream before

good luck
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Hi hi~ request from my queue~
　
• : I think you must to fix.
• : Need to discuss.
• : Just suggest.
　
[ General ]
　
• What's tags "After School" mean >_< ?
• You need to fix the skin issue as LKs write
• You Source is wrong , Now : Pledis Entertaiment You should fix it to : Pledis Entertainment
• Some slider you that you make is very ugly... Read This!! I think it will help you so much ^_^
　
[ Easy ]
　
•00:51:533 - Add a note sounds better
•01:05:646 - ^
•01:11:820 (1) - Start at 01:11:489 - to follow the vocal
•02:02:095 - Add a note sounds better
•02:16:208 - ^
•02:43:551 (1,1) - They're too close , please change this partten
　
[ Normal ]
　
•02:31:643 (2,3) - Spacing issues
•02:44:874 (1) - Add finish start
•02:51:930 (1) - ^
•02:58:986 (1) - ^
　
[ Hard ]
　
•00:39:405 (1) - Spacing issues !!!!
•00:47:785 (8) - ^
•00:53:297 (4) - ^
•00:59:030 (1) - Add NC again because of New Combo Bug
•01:07:409 (4) - Spacing
•01:29:019 (1,2) - Is it too confution for players?
•02:09:593 (1) - Add NC again because of New Combo Bug
•02:34:289 (7) - NC here , this partten is too long
•02:36:054 (16) - Spacing
•02:46:197 (4) - Spacing
•02:51:930 (1) - NC again
•03:04:058 (1) - End at 03:05:602 - sounds better
　
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Nice map~
Good Luck :3
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