1. Skydevil's Nite (4,97 stars, 396 notes)
2. _-B l i n K-_'s Nite (4,89 stars, 455 notes)
3. Hard (4,7 stars, 298 notes)
4. Normal (2,43 stars, 140 notes)

SkyDevil wrote:

PUT US IN THE TAGS XD

SkyDevil wrote:

Random notes:
PUT US IN THE TAGS
Next up is mod:

Hyper
IRC modded

Blink's Nite (too lazy to write normal title)
In general: AR Is too high, lower it by 1
00:06:427 - Place this whole combo somewhere else so it wont overlap with the last slider
00:26:567 - Stack this beneath 1
00:50:135 - Make this slider curved
00:53:992 - Place this somewhere else but not here >W<
01:10:704 - Increase distance spacing between this and last slider
01:15:417 - Remove NC
01:32:129 - New Combo
01:43:699 - place this whole stream maybe under 6
01:58:911 - the spacing between this and 01:59:340 - is wayyyy too big >< Replace them
02:29:764 - New Combo

Anyway we need more mods~

_-B l i n K-_ wrote:

Also I really like SkyDevil's Difficulty, 1st run on it and http://puu.sh/ntzQ , Not the best but eh, it was a fun map

• 
  -You should write in the post which diffs are easy, normal, hard or insane
  
  -140BPM works fine, the .02 is useless
  
  -Try using a smaller grid, and watch the spacing, specially in the easier diffs.
  
  -Try to keep some consistency in your hitsounds. For example, in this case you can use a clap on the white lines, skipping 1 white line every time, starting on the big one.(Except for Skydevil's diff which is fine)
  
  -The sliders need lots of work. t/37194&start=0
  I mentioned a few sliders in the mod, not all by far.
  
  -Delete the .osb in the song folder since there is no storyboarding added.
  
  -Add Newgrounds to the source

• 
  Circle size -1
  00:02:571 (4,1,2) - Fix the spacing between 'em
  00:03:213 (1) - Like mentioned in general, try using a smaller grid to make this the right size: http://puu.sh/nQN6
  00:10:069 (1,2) - Make a slider here with reverse point in the middle of these 2: http://puu.sh/nQNw
  00:13:283 (2) - Extend this to 00:14:140 OR copy and paste 00:03:213 (1)
  00:16:926 (4) - Extend to 00:17:783 (You can use CTRL+SHIFT+S to scale it, make it accurate at possible)
  00:18:425 (1) - Extend to 00:19:282 ^
  00:21:854 (1) - Ugly
  00:39:851 - Add note at the same place as 00:41:565 (3) -
  00:40:279 (1) - Make a blanket over 00:41:565 (3) -
  00:42:422 (1,2) - These sliders can look way better, consider using arcs here.
  00:53:992 (1) - Again, fix it
  01:02:991 (1,2) - Put a temporary note in between these and blanket these sliders around it, then delete the note
  01:32:129 (3) - Watch the spacing
  01:32:129 (3) - Blanket these around (2)
  01:37:271 (1,2,3) - ^
  02:01:696 (4,5) - Too hard for easy, rather add a reverse to the slider and remove (5)
  02:19:265 (5,6) - Spacing
  02:22:694 (4) - Really gotta make those sliders perfect this is ugly

• 
  AR - 2
  Circle size -1
  00:04:713 (1,3) - (Might be a bit nazi modding) But really, you gotta make sliders look perfect, and don't forget to blanket them.
  00:07:070 (3) - ^
  00:08:570 (2) - ^
  00:11:569 (1) - ^
  00:12:855 (1) - ^ (I'll stop adding these sliders, you know what I mean)
  00:55:492 (1) - lolwut remove this ninja spinner
  01:17:131 (1) - Too short after the spinner for a normal. Rather remove the note and extend the spinner till 01:17:131
  01:17:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to prevent using the same combo more than 2 times, gets boring.
  01:29:558 (1) - Rather use a slider or nothing instead of this spinner as the note after it is too short behind it again.
  01:52:912 (1) - Rather just remove this, too much time between this one and the next note
  01:59:018 (5,6) - Set some spacing between these 2
  02:26:336 (1) - Ninja spinnneeeerrrr. No seriously remove it lol, too hard for a normal diff

• 
  AR - 1/2
  Circle Size -1
  00:07:070 (3) - Let this slider end perfectly on (1)'s end (Turn off grid snap)
  00:09:212 (6) - Sliders can be tidied up a bit, Like making the end grid of the slider be perfectly in the center of the circle of the slider's end.*This way is also better to make sliders look perfect.
  00:11:569 (1) - ^
  00:30:852 (4) - ^
  00:32:995 (3,4) - Put this at the exact center of 00:32:138 (1,2) (Make sure (4) is exactly at the end spot of (1,2)
  00:40:279 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Select these all ad move them up a bit, so that (3,4) is on the end of slider(1,2)
  00:41:779 (1,...) This stream has too much spacing. Here's a nice tip Shiirn tought me:(Might want to turn off grid snap again)
  Use half the spacing at 1/2(White line, red line, white line, red etc..) of what you use at 1/1(Every white line)
  Same goes for using half the spacing of 1/2 for 1/4(Every line at 1/4th beat snap divisor)
  This is for keeping the flow/speed a bit the same during the diff.(You can use a bit higher spacing, but not too much like now)
  
  00:56:349 (1,3) - Put these exactly on the end of the sliders
  01:43:485 (6,1,...) - put some spacing between 1 and 6 (And you should use the tip i just gave you on the stream)
  02:26:764 (2,...) - Stream spacing
  02:29:764 (1,...) - ^

• 
  This diff doesn't have the same note colors, copy another diff's .osu in notepad, copy the color part and paste it in your .osu file
  00:04:070 (3) - Move this note to the middle of (2): http://puu.sh/nQZu
  00:07:284 (5) - Just like the other diffs the sliders could use a bit of work: http://puu.sh/nQZZ At these sliders it's important they end exactly on the same height.
  00:12:855 (1) - You can use the middle points for this slider to make it look better: http://puu.sh/nR0y
  00:37:708 (5) - Remove finish
  00:39:422 (1) - Same as mentioned before
  00:43:279 (2,3) - Distance between the sliders should be equal and (2) should be exactly at the center of 3: http://puu.sh/nR1r
  00:51:635 (2,3,4) - Jumps are fine here, but use less spacing
  01:00:848 (3,4) - Try making the end of (3) a blanket for (4)
  01:04:276 (4) - Make a decent arc out of this
  01:05:776 (5) - ^
  01:07:704 (1) - ^
  02:01:696 (1,2,3,4) - A bit ugly, make the distance between all notes more even

Kyshiro wrote:

General:

• 
  -You should write in the post which diffs are easy, normal, hard or insane ~Isn't necessary
  
  -140BPM works fine, the .02 is useless ~Agreed AYU FIX IT NAO
  
  -Try using a smaller grid, and watch the spacing, specially in the easier diffs. ~HurrDurr
  
  -Try to keep some consistency in your hitsounds. For example, in this case you can use a clap on the white lines, skipping 1 white line every time, starting on the big one.(Except for Skydevil's diff which is fine) ~YAY
  
  -The sliders need lots of work. t/37194&start=0
  I mentioned a few sliders in the mod, not all by far. ~Derp, I thought my sliders were fine ><
  
  -Add Newgrounds to the source ~IKR AYU FIX IT NAO

Skydevil's Nite:

• 
  This diff doesn't have the same note colors, copy another diff's .osu in notepad, copy the color part and paste it in your .osu file ~Whoops
  00:04:070 (3) - Move this note to the middle of (2): http://puu.sh/nQZu ~
  00:07:284 (5) - Just like the other diffs the sliders could use a bit of work: http://puu.sh/nQZZ At these sliders it's important they end exactly on the same height.
  00:12:855 (1) - You can use the middle points for this slider to make it look better: http://puu.sh/nR0y
  00:37:708 (5) - Remove finish
  00:39:422 (1) - Same as mentioned before
  00:43:279 (2,3) - Distance between the sliders should be equal and (2) should be exactly at the center of 3: http://puu.sh/nR1r
  00:51:635 (2,3,4) - Jumps are fine here, but use less spacing
  01:00:848 (3,4) - Try making the end of (3) a blanket for (4)
  01:04:276 (4) - Make a decent arc out of this
  01:05:776 (5) - ^
  01:07:704 (1) - ^
  02:01:696 (1,2,3,4) - A bit ugly, make the distance between all notes more even

That's it. If you have any questions, contact me in game.

~Kyshiro

SkyDevil wrote:

Kyshiro wrote:

General:

• 
  -You should write in the post which diffs are easy, normal, hard or insane ~Isn't necessary
  
  -140BPM works fine, the .02 is useless ~Agreed AYU FIX IT NAO
  
  -Try using a smaller grid, and watch the spacing, specially in the easier diffs. ~HurrDurr
  
  -Try to keep some consistency in your hitsounds. For example, in this case you can use a clap on the white lines, skipping 1 white line every time, starting on the big one.(Except for Skydevil's diff which is fine) ~YAY
  
  -The sliders need lots of work. t/37194&start=0
  I mentioned a few sliders in the mod, not all by far. ~Derp, I thought my sliders were fine ><
  
  -Add Newgrounds to the source ~IKR AYU FIX IT NAO

Skydevil's Nite:

• 
  This diff doesn't have the same note colors, copy another diff's .osu in notepad, copy the color part and paste it in your .osu file ~Whoops
  00:04:070 (3) - Move this note to the middle of (2): http://puu.sh/nQZu ~
  00:07:284 (5) - Just like the other diffs the sliders could use a bit of work: http://puu.sh/nQZZ At these sliders it's important they end exactly on the same height.
  00:12:855 (1) - You can use the middle points for this slider to make it look better: http://puu.sh/nR0y
  00:37:708 (5) - Remove finish
  00:39:422 (1) - Same as mentioned before
  00:43:279 (2,3) - Distance between the sliders should be equal and (2) should be exactly at the center of 3: http://puu.sh/nR1r
  00:51:635 (2,3,4) - Jumps are fine here, but use less spacing
  01:00:848 (3,4) - Try making the end of (3) a blanket for (4)
  01:04:276 (4) - Make a decent arc out of this
  01:05:776 (5) - ^
  01:07:704 (1) - ^
  02:01:696 (1,2,3,4) - A bit ugly, make the distance between all notes more even

That's it. If you have any questions, contact me in game.

~Kyshiro

~Will finish later. OMG AYU GO UPDATE MY MAP NAO.

LunaticMara wrote:

GOTTAGOFAST

[_-B l i n K-_'s Nite]
The map seems quite linear... Add some more curves to it!
00:30:852 (4) - Will look better if you do this; http://puu.sh/nKEu
00:41:779 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think this stream has too large spacing - check if you can lower that
00:49:492 (2,4) - To the same thing as I suggested on 00:30:852
01:13:061 - Maybe you should add a note right here, it sounds really sexy in there
01:43:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same thing as 00:41:779
02:08:124 - Add note here?
02:14:980 - ^
02:29:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - And the large spacing again...

01:41:771 (5) - Maybe you should just copy the previous slider instead?
02:15:409 (1,2,3,4) - Same as the one in 00:44:565

Kyshiro wrote:

-Add Newgrounds to the source

Kyshiro wrote:

M4M request for easy and hard.

Name the diffs like I said before, it IS necessary

Easy:
Circle Size-1 (Said this before, use the largest) I guess I really messed this one up, lol xP.
Keep the spacing as consistent as possible, like using x1.0 spacing all the time, right now its a bit between 0.80~1.4
This is very important in the easy diff's. Woops...
00:06:427 (1) - Why is that 2nd part of the slider line so long? Lol, forgot to edit some sliders after I changed the slider velocity xD
00:08:141 (1) - ^ ^
00:14:355 (3,1) - This needs spacing done.
00:35:994 (1,3) - Copy (3) and paste at (1), 3 looks better, in such cases, always use this technique I thought I did that.. fixed.
00:38:994 (1) - Put this one above the middle of 3 for a blanket effect. nice one
01:02:562 (5,1) - Spacing, and just try to prevent these useless overlappings. damnit >w<[B]
01:09:204 (4) - In the easy diff such notes shouldn't be covered under sliders. [b]I thought it was nice, but I corrected it. c:
01:33:843 (1) - Goes out of the playing screen. lol, I thought it was in...
01:59:982 (2) - Wtf, just make this an arc slider like the other ones. fail

Hard:
00:05:142 (2,4) - Put these in between 00:04:713 (1,3) ? Looks/flows better. Indeed. done.
00:06:427 (1) - Work on those sliders, I keep saying this. lol...
00:08:570 (2) - Clap on begin of slider done
00:10:284 (2) - Clap done
00:18:854 (2) - 1 Grid left @ Small grid done
00:19:282 (3) - 1 Grid down @ Tiny grid done
00:41:779 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Lol dat spacing, Try using 0.8 I'm new to streams D: done
00:43:279 (2) - Clap at begin of slider. done
You're missing alot of claps, fix em.
01:09:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing done
01:18:845 (2,4, Etc) - these claps are wrong fixed
01:30:629 (1) - Spacing done
01:52:912 (1,2,3) - Less spacing, The spacing isn't even either. done
01:56:340 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:29:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing I'm new to streams D: done

Kyshiro wrote:

Name the diffs like I said before, it IS necessary

SkyDevil wrote:

Kyshiro wrote:

Name the diffs like I said before, it IS necessary

I'm redoing this sence

Name the diffs like I said before it IS really unnecessary and probably no one would look at it

Done.

SkyDevil wrote:

Kyshiro wrote:

General:

• 
  -You should write in the post which diffs are easy, normal, hard or insane ~Isn't necessary
  
  -140BPM works fine, the .02 is useless ~Agreed AYU FIX IT NAO
  
  -Try using a smaller grid, and watch the spacing, specially in the easier diffs. ~HurrDurr
  
  -Try to keep some consistency in your hitsounds. For example, in this case you can use a clap on the white lines, skipping 1 white line every time, starting on the big one.(Except for Skydevil's diff which is fine) ~YAY
  
  -The sliders need lots of work. t/37194&start=0
  I mentioned a few sliders in the mod, not all by far. ~Derp, I thought my sliders were fine ><
  
  -Add Newgrounds to the source ~IKR AYU FIX IT NAO

Skydevil's Nite:

• 
  This diff doesn't have the same note colors, copy another diff's .osu in notepad, copy the color part and paste it in your .osu file ~Whoops
  00:04:070 (3) - Move this note to the middle of (2): http://puu.sh/nQZu ~no
  00:07:284 (5) - Just like the other diffs the sliders could use a bit of work: http://puu.sh/nQZZ At these sliders it's important they end exactly on the same height. ~~djbasdjkasbdjasbdjb MY SLIDERS ARE FINE ARTWORK ><
  00:12:855 (1) - You can use the middle points for this slider to make it look better: http://puu.sh/nR0y ~kay ><
  00:37:708 (5) - Remove finish ~okay
  00:39:422 (1) - Same as mentioned before ~okay
  00:43:279 (2,3) - Distance between the sliders should be equal and (2) should be exactly at the center of 3: http://puu.sh/nR1r ~adjnakdajn no
  00:51:635 (2,3,4) - Jumps are fine here, but use less spacing ~kay
  01:00:848 (3,4) - Try making the end of (3) a blanket for (4) ~owo no
  01:04:276 (4) - Make a decent arc out of this ~decent enough to me
  01:05:776 (5) - ^ ~kay
  01:07:704 (1) - ^ ~kay
  02:01:696 (1,2,3,4) - A bit ugly, make the distance between all notes more even ~uhu

That's it. If you have any questions, contact me in game. ~nope

~Kyshiro

1. bpm 140.00? offset 6-8 for me, resnap notes after changing
2. rules wrote: diff names should be consistent (easy-normal-hard, normal-hard-ins)
3. so you should rename Easy to Normal, and it's enough for that level I think

1. 00:01:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - larger spacing in the middle =__=
2. 00:20:139 (1) - the spacing is totally wrong
3. 01:40:699 (1) - 2 grids up (3) 2grids down
4. 01:55:376 - so empty
5. 02:08:124 - add note

1. lol straight patterns

1. some sliders should be made more smooth, example:
2. 00:43:708 (3) - adjust the shape of this slider : http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot416.jpg
3. 00:44:993 (3,4) - If you want to make a diamond pattern: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot417-0.jpg
4. 01:22:702 (5) - don't use the spinner here, it doesn't fit the song imo, how about: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot418.jpg
5. 02:16:060 (4) - ?

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi, saw this song on #mod reqs ~Hey first time i ever saw someone mod actually something through mod reqs

nice storyboard ~ikr

General

1. bpm 140.00? offset 6-8 for me, resnap notes after changing ~Agreed, those .02 doesnt matter, and the offset should be 1285
2. rules wrote: diff names should be consistent (easy-normal-hard, normal-hard-ins) ~yeah, someone probably shud make a normal
3. so you should rename Easy to Normal, and it's enough for that level I think ~Agree~!

Skydevil's Nite

1. some sliders should be made more smooth, example: ~ D:
2. 00:43:708 (3) - adjust the shape of this slider : http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot416.jpg ~fix
3. 00:44:993 (3,4) - If you want to make a diamond pattern: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot417-0.jpg ~No.
4. 01:22:702 (5) - don't use the spinner here, it doesn't fit the song imo, how about: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot418.jpg ~fixed a little bit
5. 02:16:060 (4) - ? ~Fix

Good luck~ ~Arigatou x3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi, saw this song on #mod reqs

nice storyboard

General

1. bpm 140.00? offset 6-8 for me, resnap notes after changing
2. rules wrote: diff names should be consistent (easy-normal-hard, normal-hard-ins)
3. so you should rename Easy to Normal, and it's enough for that level I think

Hard

1. 00:01:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - larger spacing in the middle =__=
2. 00:20:139 (1) - the spacing is totally wrong
3. 01:40:699 (1) - 2 grids up (3) 2grids down
4. 01:55:376 - so empty
5. 02:08:124 - add note

_-B l i n K-_'s Nite

1. lol straight patterns

Skydevil's Nite

1. some sliders should be made more smooth, example:
2. 00:43:708 (3) - adjust the shape of this slider : http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot416.jpg
3. 00:44:993 (3,4) - If you want to make a diamond pattern: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot417-0.jpg
4. 01:22:702 (5) - don't use the spinner here, it doesn't fit the song imo, how about: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot418.jpg
5. 02:16:060 (4) - ?

Good luck~

Ayu wrote:

Thanks for your mod, Did all what you said except for changing the BPM. I don't think anyone really cares that much about a digit being 0.02 higher and since my analyzer said ,02 I thought I would just use it~

SkyDevil wrote:

Ayu wrote:

Thanks for your mod, Did all what you said except for changing the BPM. I don't think anyone really cares that much about a digit being 0.02 higher and since my analyzer said ,02 I thought I would just use it~

-coughs- If really no one cares, why not delete the small digit?

Ayu wrote:

Because In that case, I'd have to re-upload everything etc which costs me more energy than leaving as it is, but I'll remove it soon anyway because I think MAT's/BAT"s will nazi about it.