• [Lunatic]
  
  略微打了几批西

1. 00:05:169 (4) - 试试1.5xBPM
2. 01:45:397 (3) - 这个删了后把 01:45:567 (4) - 放到3的位置上如何？
3. 02:05:169 (1) - 这个第一次打我没读清 Distance Spacing 0.3x Ctrl对齐？

• [General]
  Fine.
  Feel that hitsound was so prooooo^^

• [thou's Easy]

1. AR+1

• [Twi's Normal]

1. AR+2
2. 01:37:556 (1) - 改为1/2短Slider
   

• [SuzumiyaSama's Hard]

1. 02:09:175 (4) - 改为单点

• [Lunatic]

1. 01:35:340 (5) - 改成单点打起来会舒服点？
2. 01:42:328 (1,2,3,4) - 改成左右来回的中跳？ 不过现在这样我觉得还不错
   
3. 02:05:339 (2,3,1) - 加上前面那个Slider 这边是个5连的节奏 不开DS开GS往左边移一格或者DS1.2 CTRL横对齐Slider的尾巴 会比较容易让人混出5连 好打也美观
4. 01:59:544 (5,6) - 使用45度角 然后 01:59:885 (1,2,3) - CTRL都斜对齐 我每次打这里都会出100 =w=
5. 02:26:987 (4) - 这个地方可以想办法搞出点花样来 比如:SVx1.5 做一个有特色的1/2长度单向slider 最后的绿线放单点/ 1/8长度的来回Slider到红线加绿线单点

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
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[Easy]
00:35:540 (1) - 结尾与前面的slider略重复已修改
00:38:267 (1,2) - 不觉得中间突的厉害不好看么.-.很难看么？
00:44:745 (2) - ^^
01:21:563 (2) - ^^
02:27:017 (2) - 内容不是对称的 slider也不要直接对称比较好没有修改

SPOILER

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Modding Queue
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[General]
这图重复传了2次
之前有张在坟里 如果不打算重复利用的话可以考虑删掉那个旧的 那張是full ver 雖然巨爛
你确定jpg上面写的不是“我爱cheng”？
另外歌词的话 效果不同没问题 可是副歌部分的歌词太没存在感了...高潮部分都有存在感爆表的发光效果..


[Easy]
00:35:540 (1) - 结尾与前面的slider略重复
00:38:267 (1,2) - 不觉得中间突的厉害不好看么.-.
00:44:745 (2) - ^
01:21:563 (2) - ^
02:27:017 (2) - 内容不是对称的 slider也不要直接对称比较好

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:32:472 (1,2) - 删掉1 把2提到前面的红线 好


[Hard]
00:09:631 (1,2,3) - 这里放慢意义不明啊... lol
00:41:677 (2,3) - 可以放的更外侧点 内侧会被当成slider只有一个来回 好
00:45:427 (1) - jump hard還是人性點
00:59:745 (1) - ^
01:06:563 (4) - 之前有物体半遮挡 改
01:51:052 (1) - ^ 改
02:03:154 (3) - ^ 這個算了/.\
01:08:779 (2) - 加个note 好
01:09:461 (4) - ^ 好
01:49:006 (3) - spacing ?怎么0.7x 改
02:23:267 (6,7,8) - 这里根本不好听嘛=-= /.\這個還行的樣子


[Insane]
00:58:892 (2) - 搞成2个slider？ lol 我喜歡現在這樣
01:02:642 (6) - add a note 太滿了..
01:21:904 (5) - ^ 好
02:07:500 (3) - 换成2个circle 好
--------------------------------------------------
Great Mapset !
嵌了中文歌词好 Good luck

eLtigreXXx wrote:

request from HydeSama & tigreXXx's Loli-nyan modding queue ~ ~

only suggestions

normal

00:38:267 (1) aesthetic http://puu.sh/ykP3 ok
00:39:631 (3) ^ ok
01:00:086 (1) finish ?
01:40:313 (5) new combo ?
01:13:722 (4) ^ ok
01:19:177 (4) ^ ok
00:38:267 (1)

hard
00:49:177 (2) finish ?
HP 6

lunatic
00:16:108 (5) finish ok

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from my mod Q ^.^


Easy

00:04:177 - 00:25:995 - I advise maped this interval too bcz 16.1% from the beginning it is too much

HD +1 AR -1Try but no change

1. Looks fine.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP+1 to fit with overall difficulty's setting.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:43:552 (1) - For me, I would perfer to stop the slider at 00:44:063 - with a finish (to fit with instrument) and then put a note at 00:44:404 - . This sounds better to me.
   2. 01:04:177 (2) - The rhythm sounds weird here. The main reason is the reverse of the slider doesn't fit the music very well. Would you make another rhythmic pattern?
   3. 02:20:540 (2) - ^Same.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:33:836 (2,3) - Place a whistle on (2)- and then remove the whistle on the beginning of (3)- to fit with music.
   2. 00:35:199 (4) - Just add a whistle here to fit with music.
   3. 01:36:904 (5) - A clap here?
   4. 01:42:358 (1) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider and the end of the slider respectively?
   5. 02:27:017 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider.

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:42:358 (6) - (bad gameplay) Would you change a position of this slider or remake the pattern? Because the comboburst of slider (6)- cover the slider path and slider tick of 00:43:552 (2) - which is not recommended in normal.
      
      Here.

      
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:43:722 (1,2,3,4) - I'm afraid that these slider are too difficult for newbie and too difficult compare to the whole difficulty. Would you simplify some of the 1/2 slider?
   2. 01:57:358 (1,2,3) - A bit nazi here but the spacing between 01:57:358 (1,2,3) - are inconsistent. You should use distance snap to snap it again.
   3. 02:06:904 (3,4,1) - ^Same.
   4. 02:09:631 (3) - I strongly recommend to reduce the spacing here. We should consider the ability of newbie. The spacing here seems too huge for them.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:26:677 (2) - Add a clap at the end of the slider to fit with instrunment.
   2. 00:32:642 (1) - A finish at the beginning of slider?
   3. 00:57:358 (1) - Change to SC2 clap at the beginning of the slider?
   4. 01:49:006 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the slider to fit with the finish of the background music.
   5. 02:07:926 (4) - I think you were missing a clap here. In addition, you can add a whistle on this note.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:09:631 (1,2,3) - I can't find any reason that it needs to change the speed of slider. Additionally, I prefer x0.75 rather than x0.5.It sounds much comfortable if you use x0.75. Anyway.
   2. 00:32:131 (1) - How about adding a new combo here because you reduce the spacing suddenly.So a new combo will help the player to read.
   3. 00:43:552 (3) - (design) I feel that the slider is collapsed when I see that. Would you make it like this, I think this may sounds better.
      
      Suggestion

      

      341,276,43552,2,0,B|335:229|310:201|260:192|214:198|175:226|177:282,1,240,4|8

   4. 01:36:904 (6) - I would add a new combo here becuase a new accent starts from here, so a new combo can fit the music.
   5. 02:23:267 (6,7,8) - Hum...I don't think 1/4 slider fit the music here.I guess simple 1/2 is much better than now. Well, leave this to you.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:04:858 (3,4) - Remove the finish sound on (3)- and then add it on (4)-
   2. 01:36:052 (3) - Remove the finish at the end of the slider? It doesn't fit the music at all.
   3. 01:49:006 (4) - A finish at the end of the slider?

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:15:767 (4) - The flow will be much better if you can add a reverse on slider (4)-. By the way, you don't need to adjust the spacing if you add it.
   2. 01:10:995 (1) - I personally don't like the shape of the slider.Yes, only personally.
   3. 01:59:915 (1,2,3) - I would increace the spacing between (1.2.3) to fit with the spacing between slider 01:59:574 (5,6) - .
   4. 02:05:369 (2,3,1) - ^Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:10:995 (1) - I guess you were missing a clap at the end of the slider. Please fix it if yes.
   2. 01:35:881 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remove all finish please. They don't fit the music at all and there are no accent point, so a finish shouldn't be here imo.
   3. 01:49:517 (2) - A finish would be nice here.

Megurine Luka wrote:

/from PM


[Easy]

00:26:677 (2) - Easy一上来就叠对新手来说太苦手lol，最好还是放在其他地方。已修改
00:30:086 (1) - 尾巴有点overlap前面的slider，可以试试看（369,248）这个位置已修改
00:38:267 (1) - 可以再圆润一点，现在这样有点丑233，
试试看：
img已修改
下一个也是已修改
00:44:745 (2) - 一样~稍微圆润一点比较好，不然感觉怪怪的已修改
00:45:597 (1) - 建议用三点式slider，不然显得歪不歪直不直的...已修改
00:49:177 (1) - 头上可以加个fin已修改
01:00:086 (1) - 不正嗯，是歪的，第二个sliderpoint应该稍微下来一点已修改
01:16:449 (1) - ^已修改
01:19:177 (4) - +NC已修改
01:32:813 (1,2) - 摆成这样试试看，保持1的尾巴和2的头与中间的circle距离一致：
img已修改
01:38:097 (1) - 把头放到和前两个circle形成等腰三角形的地方：
img已修改
01:40:654 (4,5) - 不要因为红线就不敢下啊233，现在这样还不如让这俩跟Vocal压红线，不然太怪了不觉得很奇怪啊
02:05:540 (1) - 和之前一样，调整一下形状已修改
02:13:722 (4) - +NC已修改
02:17:813 (2) - 做一个包围1尾巴的形状：
img已修改
02:24:631 (4,5) - 4和23做等边三角形，5放到2的位置上
img
如果考虑到后面不想动太多位置的话，可以45反一下已修改

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from queue.

[thou's Easy]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP+1 to fit with overall difficulty's setting.Fixed
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:43:552 (1) - For me, I would perfer to stop the slider at 00:44:063 - with a finish (to fit with instrument) and then put a note at 00:44:404 - . This sounds better to me.Fixed
   2. 01:04:177 (2) - The rhythm sounds weird here. The main reason is the reverse of the slider doesn't fit the music very well. Would you make another rhythmic pattern?No change
   3. 02:20:540 (2) - ^Same.No change
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:33:836 (2,3) - Place a whistle on (2)- and then remove the whistle on the beginning of (3)- to fit with music.Fixed
   2. 00:35:199 (4) - Just add a whistle here to fit with music.Fixed
   3. 01:36:904 (5) - A clap here?No change
   4. 01:42:358 (1) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider and the end of the slider respectively?No change
   5. 02:27:017 (2) - Add a whistle at the beginning of the slider.Fixed

Megurine Luka wrote:

/from PM

[General]

看了一下应该没有太大问题lol

[Hard]

00:41:677 (2) - 做这样试试看：

00:43:381 (2) - 这个note有点多余的感觉
01:21:563 (4) - NC
01:31:449 (1,2,3,4) - 有点overlap，可以拉开一点没问题
02:03:154 (3) - 移到尾巴和02:02:642 (1) 重叠的地方
02:05:199 (8) - NC

[Lunatic]

00:12:699 (2,3,4) - 其实可以跟hard一样，这几个slider拉开一点o^ob
00:16:108 (5) - NC
00:17:472 (4) - 试试看（200,176）
00:21:478 (x) - 节奏上来说这里可以加一个circle和前面的三连做一个对称，也可以显得更顺畅一点。
00:25:313 (5,6,7,8) - 额...形状有点扭曲，看看菱形？
00:27:358 (1) - 把开口朝2，就像：

00:28:040 (4) - （416,233）...233!
00:31:790 (2) - 最好还是折返slider...明明音阶式向上现在这样有种突然被打断的感觉
00:39:120 (4) - 和35做等腰三角，比如（272,160）
00:42:699 (2) - 同之前
00:45:938 (3) - 放在2的尾巴后面，也就是和45做等腰三角形的位置

00:47:472 (4) - （256,344）
00:52:586 (4,5,6,7) - 这里用斜一点的正方形感觉更好
00:57:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串的摆法我有点没看懂，不过按照我的想法可以这么摆：
00:57:699 (3) - （408,240）
00:58:381 (7) - （224,128）
00:58:552 (8) - （216,128）
这样o.o，也就是说所有抬几度高音的地方都是跳，所有抬一度音的地方就是左边那个往左延伸的地方。OTL不知道这么说好不好理解。

总之就是这样
01:36:222 (7,8,9) - （392,296）开始
01:45:427 (3,4) - 和12组菱形，现在的spacing梗略坑

01:58:381 (6) - （208,344）
02:01:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - 略丑...组个梯形啥的？
02:14:233 (4,6,8) - 放成这样：

02:20:114 (4) - CTRL+R
02:22:415 (2) - （152,160）

总体来说还不错，就是细节的排列上有些凌乱:3 加油啦！

kanpakyin wrote:

Request is taken from queue.

[General]

1. Looks fine.

[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:09:631 (1,2,3) - I can't find any reason that it needs to change the speed of slider. Additionally, I prefer x0.75 rather than x0.5.It sounds much comfortable if you use x0.75. Anyway.
   2. 00:32:131 (1) - How about adding a new combo here because you reduce the spacing suddenly.So a new combo will help the player to read.
   3. 00:43:552 (3) - (design) I feel that the slider is collapsed when I see that. Would you make it like this, I think this may sounds better.
      
      Suggestion

      

      341,276,43552,2,0,B|335:229|310:201|260:192|214:198|175:226|177:282,1,240,4|8

   4. 01:36:904 (6) - I would add a new combo here becuase a new accent starts from here, so a new combo can fit the music.
   5. 02:23:267 (6,7,8) - Hum...I don't think 1/4 slider fit the music here.I guess simple 1/2 is much better than now. Well, leave this to you.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:04:858 (3,4) - Remove the finish sound on (3)- and then add it on (4)-
   2. 01:36:052 (3) - Remove the finish at the end of the slider? It doesn't fit the music at all.
   3. 01:49:006 (4) - A finish at the end of the slider?

Quite good.

[Lunatic]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:15:767 (4) - The flow will be much better if you can add a reverse on slider (4)-. By the way, you don't need to adjust the spacing if you add it.
   2. 01:10:995 (1) - I personally don't like the shape of the slider.Yes, only personally.
   3. 01:59:915 (1,2,3) - I would increace the spacing between (1.2.3) to fit with the spacing between slider 01:59:574 (5,6) - .
   4. 02:05:369 (2,3,1) - ^Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:10:995 (1) - I guess you were missing a clap at the end of the slider. Please fix it if yes.
   2. 01:35:881 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Remove all finish please. They don't fit the music at all and there are no accent point, so a finish shouldn't be here imo.
   3. 01:49:517 (2) - A finish would be nice here.

這個diff感覺就是放得不夠大膽和有點亂. 不過整體來看還算可以

Kinzo wrote:

From my mod queue ~
Beginner modder here, i can be wrong

Twi's Normal :

00:43:037 (1,2) - I'm not sure, but i think it's too hard for normal diff, confusion beginner hmm,i'll keep it. lol

Suzumiya's Hard :

00:31:617 (3) - I think clap here sound better miss a clap here, thanks

Lunatic :

I can't find something
Nice one for me ~

Good luck ~

nold_1702 wrote:

Sorry for my delay.

From CLANNAD Modding Queue


Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.

[General]

Nothing~


[Lunatic]

00:13:975 - Please listen in 25%,a accent here,but you didn't add any objects here :/ Try to do this with a finish with the slider 's end and head.Or two notes with finishs. good XD

00:15:168 (2) - I think here's missing a note too :/ ^

00:16:105 (8) - For me,it's no trouble to read this,but I have to doubt this since it to near the pervious triplet slider,put it away,like this nice

00:22:412 (2,3) - Too far IMO,since (3) isn't a NC so I think it's not necessary to put (3) so far away from (2) even though it's readable. change to two notes

00:24:884 (3) - Same as 00:13:975,try to put it in your consideration. ditto

00:25:992 (1,2,3,4) - This part is a start of vocal,and it leave a hard sound(vocal),so I think you may change the time section on 00:25:906 to a normal samplset.And whistle all the slider heads.It sounds better for me. I think this map dosn't need normal hitsound... so you know

00:58:889 (2) - The pervious note stack this slider cause players hard to ecpect if it has 2 reverses or 1 or 3 or etc.Unstack it or make changes to make this 2 reverses slider more readable and expectable. you're right

01:35:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I am not asking you not to map slider/stream jumps but not fit here.Play really weird. reduce the spacing?

01:43:378 - I think here's should be a object too. But I can't find other way...

01:44:742 (3,5) - Hmm...To hidden~Put them like this? ok

01:52:924 (6) - Stack it better on the end of 01:51:901 (1) .(New coordinate:x231,y184) (NAZI) ^

02:10:992 (1,2,3) - 1/4 spacing > 1/2 spacing :/......You know? I know >_>

02:13:889 (2,3,4) - Check this triplet in test mode,it's not exactly on the end of 02:13:378 (4).Put them on x292,y212).(NAZI) ^



[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]

Useless Time sections:
37838
103293


02:14:400 (4) - Unsnap note,snap it by moving it. fixed

Nothing found but I think you may make it better feel.There's no any jump in fast part like 00:47:810 (1,2,3,4) etc.
And the map is too linear :/
If you are still alive,try not to map so linear everytimes,such as this time,this song isn't fit linear style :/


[Twi's Normal]

Hmmm......Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.

Why no any finishs S:1 in the whole map?
Try to add some finishs S:1 ,such as

00:27:355 (1) - head and reverse

00:39:628 (3) - reverse

00:41:674 (5) - head and end

00:49:855 (2) - head

I am too lazy to point them ALL out,try to find them by yourself. ok...

02:09:628 (3) - This slider 's end is ugly enough you know :/?? changed >_>

No any other complaint.


[thou's Easy]

Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.

AR-1

Useless Time sections:
109003


That's all I could find~

Good map for a newbie.

Chloe wrote:

lunatic

02:13:889 (2,3,4,5,6) - 和 02:10:650 (8,9,1) - 我建议这种相同的梗DS统一吧 前者1.4 后者1.6 打着别扭 我覺得還行...

比起以前难度又提升了QAQ

还有 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个是双刀的梗吗QAQ 打了十几遍都打不好 快看shiirn那張almagest...
全程slider开头F好重口@@

nold_1702 wrote:

[thou's Easy]

Start time not consistant,easier diff doesn't mean you have to shorten it's play time.I think you SHOULD consistant them.No change

AR-1Try but no change

Useless Time sections:
109003Fixed

Kinzo wrote:

Thou's Easy :

01:37:583 (6) - I think a slider is better http://puu.sh/PgnwFixed

- t e n n y a - wrote:

from my queue ~ hello amamiya yuko-san ~

[Easy]
D.S 0.8 - 1.0 please, the bpm is pretty fast and beginner will get confused .w.No change,I think 1.2 is not very hard for beginner
slider shape, circle placement

1. 01:58:037: how about move this 5 grid up ?Fixed~

Rhythms

1. 01:20:537: move the nc to 01:21:560?No change