1. Glory (4,9 stars, 1358 notes)

mrkyee wrote:

I DO NOT ACCEPT ANY GUEST DIFFS ! (changed my mind about it :S )

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  -Remove the following from the tags: reign of terror mrkyee rhapsody of fire.
  This is the name of the song and your name, there's no need for this to be in the tags.
  
  -You have no preview point yet(The music that starts playing when you select it or clicking the picture in your browser. I'd put it at 02:44:451 ( http://puu.sh/o28k )
  
  -Remove the .osb from the songfolder, there is no storyboard(Yet?) (Also don't forget to do a full upload to make this change work)

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  01:03:865 (1) - Stack this perfectly on the end of 01:04:570 (2)
  01:07:393 (2) - Just a minor thing but, try to keep the end point of the slider exactly in the middle of the end circle. This way it's way easier to check whether the slider is 100% symmetrical.(Can be done with every slider ofcourse)
  
  01:14:100 (5,6,7) - In this case you can just copy the first slider and do whatever you want with it(Ctrl+H for horizontal flip, Ctrl+J for vertical flip, Ctrl+Shirt+R to rotate and ctrl+< or > to flip 90 degrees)
  
  01:15:159 (1,2,3) - Same thing here, you can rotate them to get a perfect angle (For example, you could rotate (2) 45 degrees and (3) 90 degrees if you copy the first one)
  
  01:51:864 (1) - End this slider at 01:52:040
  02:11:806 (1) - Remove NC*
  02:12:159 (2) - Add NC
  02:14:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try using distance snap for streams to get the correct amount of spacing in between them. This also goes for the earlier streams, The distance varies between 0.65 and 0.90(Preferrably use tiny grid or even turning off grid snap when creating streams)
  
  02:33:686 (6) - NC
  03:01:745 (1,5) - Copy slider 1, select it and press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R to make a horizontal flip and reversing it.
  03:13:921 (6,7) - Here you can use the copying thing I explained earlier(I'm sure there are more sliders like this, I'll stop writing them down now. You get what I mean.
  
  04:31:870 (1,1) - make these sliders 1/4th longer and make them fit into the stream: http://puu.sh/o20v
  04:34:450 (3,4,1,2) - Same thing can be done here(Just a suggestion)
  04:59:943 (9,1) - Switch places, the higher sound starts at (9) right now.
  05:32:049 (1) - NC
  05:37:696 (1) - NC
  05:39:450 (3) - Remove NC
  05:43:686 (1) - Remove NC
  05:44:039 (1) - NC
  06:00:274 (5) - Try to make the corners on the slider ticks: http://puu.sh/o25t
  06:08:745 (3) - Slider till 06:09:097?
  
  All that's left is some work on those sliders and the spacing in the streams(And the hitsounds but that has been mentioned before).

SPOILER

Isuck.avi

• -Remove the following from the tags: reign of terror mrkyee rhapsody of fire.
  This is the name of the song and your name, there's no need for this to be in the tags. Done
  
  -You have no preview point yet(The music that starts playing when you select it or clicking the picture in your browser. I'd put it at 02:44:451 ( http://puu.sh/o28k ) Thanks for mentioning, i have read it several times in aimod but forgot it.
  
  -Remove the .osb from the songfolder, there is no storyboard(Yet?) (Also don't forget to do a full upload to make this change work)I will delete the osb.

• 01:03:865 (1) - Stack this perfectly on the end of 01:04:570 (2) Done
  01:07:393 (2) - Just a minor thing but, try to keep the end point of the slider exactly in the middle of the end circle. This way it's way easier to check whether the slider is 100% symmetrical.(Can be done with every slider ofcourse) I am grateful for this advice, resnapped some sliders
  
  01:14:100 (5,6,7) - In this case you can just copy the first slider and do whatever you want with it(Ctrl+H for horizontal flip, Ctrl+J for vertical flip, Ctrl+Shirt+R to rotate and ctrl+< or > to flip 90 degrees) Done
  
  01:15:159 (1,2,3) - Same thing here, you can rotate them to get a perfect angle (For example, you could rotate (2) 45 degrees and (3) 90 degrees if you copy the first one)Very thankfull for another good advice
  
  01:51:864 (1) - End this slider at 01:52:040Improves the flow, i agree
  02:11:806 (1) - Remove NC* Hmmm okay..
  02:12:159 (2) - Add NC Done
  02:14:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try using distance snap for streams to get the correct amount of spacing in between them. This also goes for the earlier streams, The distance varies between 0.65 and 0.90(Preferrably use tiny grid or even turning off grid snap when creating streams) Okay
  
  02:33:686 (6) - NC Done
  03:01:745 (1,5) - Copy slider 1, select it and press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R to make a horizontal flip and reversing it. Yes, the slider issue ;D
  03:13:921 (6,7) - Here you can use the copying thing I explained earlier(I'm sure there are more sliders like this, I'll stop writing them down now. You get what I mean. yup
  
  04:31:870 (1,1) - make these sliders 1/4th longer and make them fit into the stream: http://puu.sh/o20v Nah, i want to keep the 2/4th slider
  04:34:450 (3,4,1,2) - Same thing can be done here(Just a suggestion) Same here ^^
  04:59:943 (9,1) - Switch places, the higher sound starts at (9) right now. I must have been deaf mapping the stream part. Changed
  05:32:049 (1) - NC Hurhurhur
  05:37:696 (1) - NC Hurhurhur
  05:39:450 (3) - Remove NC Hurhurhur
  05:43:686 (1) - Remove NC Hurhurhur
  05:44:039 (1) - NC Hurhurhur equals done
  06:00:274 (5) - Try to make the corners on the slider ticks: http://puu.sh/o25t I loathe the slider form you've created, but you are right. I'll try to find a more elegant solution.
  06:08:745 (3) - Slider till 06:09:097? Actually good idea

LunaticMara wrote:

Hi.

[General]
- For mother of god, do not use an anime background for a song like this. It's not cool. Try to find something that fits with the song title, or the very least, the album cover. If i am able to find a better one, i'll replace it
- You don't need The Frozen Tears of Angels-tag, since you have it in the source already Actually no, other way around. You don't need The Frozen Tears of Angels in the source, since you have it in your tags already.I keep it, so you can see the album in the selection screen
- What are these other tags? Extra? That? stream? I believe that these are unnecessary.Seems legit.

[Glory]
01:58:570 (5) - Try to avoid unflow, even though that is a nice jump. I am going to keep it that way , but thanks for your remark
02:26:274 (1,2) - This looks pretty evil - replace this with a triplet? Changed
03:05:098 (6) - One grid up (lvl4) Thanks for Nazi-modding, but this is what the map needs!

Nice map, but try to get a new background for the maximum badass.

SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047

1. Remove mr kyee from tags because a) you are uploader so you don't need your own name in tags and b) osu! search works with words that 3+ letters long
2. 01:09:158 (1) - I hear five notes here, not three. What if you use 1/4 repeating slider instead?
3. 01:23:629 (1) - consider adding t2o repeats here, because just a single 1/4 slider plays not really good in stream
4. 02:08:806 (1) - starting from this moment, you put claps on 1st and 3rd ticks instead of 2nd and 4th. I advice you to use previous placement of claps to keep the rhythm constant
5. 02:20:100 (1) - add finish here and somewhere else, where it appears in music
6. 02:44:804 (1) - I recommend you to map through it (even something slow, I don't know) and start spinner from 02:47:627 according to vocals
7. 03:21:686 (1) - you don't need new combo here
8. 03:22:392 (1) - ^
9. 03:45:339 (2) - I don't really like its shape
10. 03:54:692 (1) - what I said about spinner before
11. 04:16:061 (3) - it comes after slow sliders, and I don't see any warning about its speed
12. 04:21:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - bad decision. Guitar sound is more quiet there compared to previous and next parts, so I would put some usual notes / sliders here instead of these triplets
13. 04:30:736 (2) - it's overlapped by HP bar a little
14. 04:31:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - slider sounds as incomplete "triplet" and this mini-stream starts from blue tick
15. 06:00:274 (5) - are you bored or what? Also, it's unsymmetrical

TicClick wrote:

First of all, open your diff in Notepad and change slider velocity to 2 manually:

SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047

After that, press CTRL+S in Notepad and update diff in editor with CTRL+L

1. Remove mr kyee from tags because a) you are uploader so you don't need your own name in tags and b) osu! search works with words that 3+ letters long
2. 01:09:158 (1) - I hear five notes here, not three. What if you use 1/4 repeating slider instead? accepted.
3. 01:23:629 (1) - consider adding t2o repeats here, because just a single 1/4 slider plays not really good in stream I like it that way
4. 02:08:806 (1) - starting from this moment, you put claps on 1st and 3rd ticks instead of 2nd and 4th. I advice you to use previous placement of claps to keep the rhythm constantthis change was done intentionally and i think it fits in there:s
5. 02:20:100 (1) - add finish here and somewhere else, where it appears in musicthanks done.
6. 02:44:804 (1) - I recommend you to map through it (even something slow, I don't know) and start spinner from 02:47:627 according to vocals hmmmm.... you're right,but i also think it's okay this way. I'll try something out ;D
7. 03:21:686 (1) - you don't need new combo here yes.
8. 03:22:392 (1) - ^ yes.
9. 03:45:339 (2) - I don't really like its shape accepted.
10. 03:54:692 (1) - what I said about spinner before
11. 04:16:061 (3) - it comes after slow sliders, and I don't see any warning about its speed changed slider vel.
12. 04:21:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - bad decision. Guitar sound is more quiet there compared to previous and next parts, so I would put some usual notes / sliders here instead of these triplets gonna keep them
13. 04:30:736 (2) - it's overlapped by HP bar a little done.
14. 04:31:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - slider sounds as incomplete "triplet" and this mini-stream starts from blue tick no.
15. 06:00:274 (5) - are you bored or what? Also, it's unsymmetrical

made it symmetrical. >Trying to find a better option.

Also, check snapping of green lines. Some inherited offsets are supposed to be at the same where the red ones are, but these green lines are off by few ms.

I don't really like it because of combo colours and stream spam, sorry. Not in my taste

1. 01:09:158 - 01:10:570 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) Maybe this way?
   
   
2. 02:37:392 (3) Since every single slider in this map is angular, you should make this slider angular as well.
   
   
3. In your Kiai's: For instance at 03:33:339 (1, 2) Maybe replace some of these with these ~
   
   
4. 06:00:980 - 06:01:509 (1) Replace that slider with this (Soz, noticed that right after posting)

BonkuraChan wrote:

Aight, here are some things that I would change:

1. 01:09:158 - 01:10:570 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) Maybe this way?want to keep it this way, since its the slow part.
   
   
2. 02:37:392 (3) Since every single slider in this map is angular, you should make this slider angular as well.haven't noticed wtf.....
   
   
3. In your Kiai's: For instance at 03:33:339 (1, 2) Maybe replace some of these with these ~ i love this sliders, no cance i change them

Not quite much , but still something.

Good Luck ~

Jebok wrote:

General
Make a sign before the game starts telling players to skip, as the entrance is long..? Like in THIS map.

Glory
01:07:393 (2) - 5 grids to the right? done.
01:18:423 - No new combo changed
01:18:687 - New combo okay
01:42:687 (4) - 1 grid up. I would also ctrl+r but that's up to you grid playcing was okay. Ctrl+r'd this
02:31:392 (3,4) - Those two notes aren't spaced too nicely. I think it would be better if you'd put 1,2,3 as a isosceles triangle, so the lengths from 1 to 3 are the same as from 2 to 3. And then place (4) so that 1 to 4 side length is the same as 2 to 4 side length. It seems a bit off currently, especially the (4). yes.
03:04:568 - New combo here no
03:15:686 - New combo no
03:16:392 - No new combo no
05:09:281 (7) - Place it somewhere nicer, like to the right of (6)? wtf it moved by itself, it was on the right....
05:13:635 (11) - 1 grid up okay
05:40:862 (3) - Is this even grid snapped..? Place it on the same x and y as (2) at 05:39:980. changed

1. 01:19:393 (1) - add clap?
2. 02:07:923 (4), 03:17:803 (4), 05:55:146 (6) - It's quite suprising, when suddenly a slow slider speed appear. Maybe make an warning SB
3. 02:22:216 until 02:47:627 - add kiai time?
4. 02:44:804 (1) - - add finish, but make sure you make inherited point at 02:47:627 's hitsounds volume to 70%
5. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:21:948 (1) - make this 1/8 slider? and make it repeated 6 times. It'll follows the music better imo
   
   SPOILER

   Timeline :
   
   > It's 6 times repeated.
   
   Slider Shape :
   
6. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:28:398 (1) - ^
7. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:59:943 (1) - ^
8. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 05:06:469 (1) - ^
9. 06:08:744 (3) - delete clap?