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Rhapsody Of Fire - Reign Of Terror

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Topic Starter
mrk_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Montag, 18. Juni 2012 at 22:58:56

Artist: Rhapsody of Fire
Title: Reign of Terror
Tags: thatguy0815 The Frozen Tears of Angels Metal powermetal
BPM: 170
Filesize: 9862kb
Play Time: 06:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Glory (4,9 stars, 1358 notes)
Download: Rhapsody of Fire - Reign of Terror
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st Beatmap: [Approval Only] 07/04/12 PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD

Glory Difficulty: 100% The map is done so far.

I DO NOT ACCEPT ANY GUEST DIFFS, but i recognize them!
Here Winber1's Extradifficulty:[Winber1's Terror]
winber1
Ok. This seems to work. I have a lot of red lines but most of them i just used so that the main beat is on the large white tick. They aren't all that necessary for osu! but I just like having them there.

I made a new difficulty for you to see what I did because it's gonna be annoying for me and for you the take all of these red lines down.

This is a truly awesome song i must say tho. it actually has inspired me to map this, but i probably don't have time and you probably don't really want another insane map.

if something seems wrong just tell me. I do do timing help sometimes, but not much, but still i consider my self quite adept at figuring these things out.

Download: Rhapsody Of Fire - Reign Of Terror (mrkyee) [offset stuff].osu
TicClick
Fixed and timed until the end.
EDIT: reencoded to 192, checked in few random places and found it suitable enough even after reencoding. Anyway, be careful and try to get somebody skilled to check it again, since I don't wanna do it the 2nd time.
Reduktion_old
Nice :3
Topic Starter
mrk_old
although it's not ready yet, thank you :>
Hate
I hope this map will be approved soon <3
-libili
like it <3

and its not playable with AR 8 !!
winber1

mrkyee wrote:

I DO NOT ACCEPT ANY GUEST DIFFS ! (changed my mind about it :S )
This better not mean you aren't accepting my guest diff anymore D:, because i finished it. tho it may lack some hitsounding but idk what hitsounds to use.

Also i apologize for that timing, as it definitely fails after a while. However what you originally asked me (the offset of the first red timing section) works just fine for me. I changed around a few red timing sect ions later in the song if you want to look at them, but you should probably get someone else to check the timing, since 1) I'm lazy 2) I don't trust my universal offset that well and 3) I am probably not the best at timing (tho i can do quite well if i gave myself a little more time, which i didn't really do while trying to help you).

Download: Rhapsody Of Fire - Reign Of Terror (mrkyee) [Winber1's Terror].osu
Mismagius
*random checking/playing a map*


First try~

I hope I'm not reviving something you want graved! (in that case, I'm sorry)

Anyways, found your signature and was quite curious about the map. First thing: Album should go on Tags, not Source; and your name and the artist don't have to go to tags since they're already in other areas.

I found the map quite interesting - You have a pretty nice style and it worked well for this song. Just some small things I noticed while playing:

You shouldn't spam new combos on some parts, like 01:26:453 (1,1,1,1) - here. New combos should stay for a "pattern" in the song, and using it in a single note is almost always unnecessary.

Also, could you maybe tone 01:35:276 (1,2,3) - down a bit? I mean, you can still keep the jumps, but just make them a bit smaller - surprised me a bit while playing and I didn't find it very flowing with the song.

You should consider adding some hitsounds to 02:14:453 (1) - this stream (and the others in similar parts), since it feels a bit empty right now - it's nice to play, however it doesn't feel as nice without any hitsounds.

04:40:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - About this, you should move 04:40:902 (1,2,3,4,5) - somewhere else, since the 300s from the other stream overlap this one and it's a bit awkward/surprising to play for the first time.

Also, you should consider using some hitsounds for the solo :V (I know the map is not finished, but just telling you it sounds not so good with the normal soundset)

Anyways, great map, found it quite fun, and you seem to have a nice future mapping. If I accidentally bumped something you were waiting for graveyard, I'm sorry D: But this map is very nice and I think you should work on it some more so you can get it ranked.

Call me when possible if you need some help!
Topic Starter
mrk_old
Yes, i am still working at this project and you are right that my map lacks definitely hitsounding as i am still trying to find the right hitsound soundset and since it's my first map, i consider hitsounding itself as a very difficult issue.

I will try to fix the problems you listed as soon as possible and thank you for your opinion on my map :>
Kyshiro
I. Love. This. Song.

*NC = New Combo in case you didn't know this yet

General:

  • -Remove the following from the tags: reign of terror mrkyee rhapsody of fire.
    This is the name of the song and your name, there's no need for this to be in the tags.

    -You have no preview point yet(The music that starts playing when you select it or clicking the picture in your browser. I'd put it at 02:44:451 ( http://puu.sh/o28k )

    -Remove the .osb from the songfolder, there is no storyboard(Yet?) (Also don't forget to do a full upload to make this change work)
Glory:

  • 01:03:865 (1) - Stack this perfectly on the end of 01:04:570 (2)
    01:07:393 (2) - Just a minor thing but, try to keep the end point of the slider exactly in the middle of the end circle. This way it's way easier to check whether the slider is 100% symmetrical.(Can be done with every slider ofcourse)

    01:14:100 (5,6,7) - In this case you can just copy the first slider and do whatever you want with it(Ctrl+H for horizontal flip, Ctrl+J for vertical flip, Ctrl+Shirt+R to rotate and ctrl+< or > to flip 90 degrees)

    01:15:159 (1,2,3) - Same thing here, you can rotate them to get a perfect angle (For example, you could rotate (2) 45 degrees and (3) 90 degrees if you copy the first one)

    01:51:864 (1) - End this slider at 01:52:040
    02:11:806 (1) - Remove NC*
    02:12:159 (2) - Add NC
    02:14:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try using distance snap for streams to get the correct amount of spacing in between them. This also goes for the earlier streams, The distance varies between 0.65 and 0.90(Preferrably use tiny grid or even turning off grid snap when creating streams)

    02:33:686 (6) - NC
    03:01:745 (1,5) - Copy slider 1, select it and press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R to make a horizontal flip and reversing it.
    03:13:921 (6,7) - Here you can use the copying thing I explained earlier(I'm sure there are more sliders like this, I'll stop writing them down now. You get what I mean.

    04:31:870 (1,1) - make these sliders 1/4th longer and make them fit into the stream: http://puu.sh/o20v
    04:34:450 (3,4,1,2) - Same thing can be done here(Just a suggestion)
    04:59:943 (9,1) - Switch places, the higher sound starts at (9) right now.
    05:32:049 (1) - NC
    05:37:696 (1) - NC
    05:39:450 (3) - Remove NC
    05:43:686 (1) - Remove NC
    05:44:039 (1) - NC
    06:00:274 (5) - Try to make the corners on the slider ticks: http://puu.sh/o25t
    06:08:745 (3) - Slider till 06:09:097?

    All that's left is some work on those sliders and the spacing in the streams(And the hitsounds but that has been mentioned before).

Anyways, this map is great, hard to believe it's your first one :3
Starred it.

Keep on mapping and keep on rocking ,|m|

Good luck,
~Kyshiro

Currently my best run lol:
SPOILER

Isuck.avi
Topic Starter
mrk_old
General:

  • -Remove the following from the tags: reign of terror mrkyee rhapsody of fire.
    This is the name of the song and your name, there's no need for this to be in the tags. Done

    -You have no preview point yet(The music that starts playing when you select it or clicking the picture in your browser. I'd put it at 02:44:451 ( http://puu.sh/o28k ) Thanks for mentioning, i have read it several times in aimod but forgot it.

    -Remove the .osb from the songfolder, there is no storyboard(Yet?) (Also don't forget to do a full upload to make this change work)I will delete the osb.
Glory:

  • 01:03:865 (1) - Stack this perfectly on the end of 01:04:570 (2) Done
    01:07:393 (2) - Just a minor thing but, try to keep the end point of the slider exactly in the middle of the end circle. This way it's way easier to check whether the slider is 100% symmetrical.(Can be done with every slider ofcourse) I am grateful for this advice, resnapped some sliders

    01:14:100 (5,6,7) - In this case you can just copy the first slider and do whatever you want with it(Ctrl+H for horizontal flip, Ctrl+J for vertical flip, Ctrl+Shirt+R to rotate and ctrl+< or > to flip 90 degrees) Done

    01:15:159 (1,2,3) - Same thing here, you can rotate them to get a perfect angle (For example, you could rotate (2) 45 degrees and (3) 90 degrees if you copy the first one)Very thankfull for another good advice

    01:51:864 (1) - End this slider at 01:52:040Improves the flow, i agree
    02:11:806 (1) - Remove NC* Hmmm okay..
    02:12:159 (2) - Add NC Done
    02:14:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try using distance snap for streams to get the correct amount of spacing in between them. This also goes for the earlier streams, The distance varies between 0.65 and 0.90(Preferrably use tiny grid or even turning off grid snap when creating streams) Okay

    02:33:686 (6) - NC Done
    03:01:745 (1,5) - Copy slider 1, select it and press Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R to make a horizontal flip and reversing it. Yes, the slider issue ;D
    03:13:921 (6,7) - Here you can use the copying thing I explained earlier(I'm sure there are more sliders like this, I'll stop writing them down now. You get what I mean. yup

    04:31:870 (1,1) - make these sliders 1/4th longer and make them fit into the stream: http://puu.sh/o20v Nah, i want to keep the 2/4th slider
    04:34:450 (3,4,1,2) - Same thing can be done here(Just a suggestion) Same here ^^
    04:59:943 (9,1) - Switch places, the higher sound starts at (9) right now. I must have been deaf mapping the stream part. Changed
    05:32:049 (1) - NC Hurhurhur
    05:37:696 (1) - NC Hurhurhur
    05:39:450 (3) - Remove NC Hurhurhur
    05:43:686 (1) - Remove NC Hurhurhur
    05:44:039 (1) - NC Hurhurhur equals done :D
    06:00:274 (5) - Try to make the corners on the slider ticks: http://puu.sh/o25t I loathe the slider form you've created, but you are right. I'll try to find a more elegant solution.
    06:08:745 (3) - Slider till 06:09:097? Actually good idea
All that's left is some work on those sliders and the spacing in the streams(And the hitsounds but that has been mentioned before).

Thank you for modding, it really helped me to improve not only my map but even more my mapping skills for further maps.
Mara
Hi.

[General]
- For mother of god, do not use an anime background for a song like this. It's not cool. Try to find something that fits with the song title, or the very least, the album cover.
- You don't need The Frozen Tears of Angels-tag, since you have it in the source already Actually no, other way around. You don't need The Frozen Tears of Angels in the source, since you have it in your tags already.
- What are these other tags? Extra? That? stream? I believe that these are unnecessary.

[Glory]
01:58:570 (5) - Try to avoid unflow, even though that is a nice jump.
02:26:274 (1,2) - This looks pretty evil - replace this with a triplet?
03:05:098 (6) - One grid up (lvl4)

Nice map, but try to get a new background for the maximum badass.
Topic Starter
mrk_old

LunaticMara wrote:

Hi.

[General]
- For mother of god, do not use an anime background for a song like this. It's not cool. Try to find something that fits with the song title, or the very least, the album cover. If i am able to find a better one, i'll replace it
- You don't need The Frozen Tears of Angels-tag, since you have it in the source already Actually no, other way around. You don't need The Frozen Tears of Angels in the source, since you have it in your tags already.I keep it, so you can see the album in the selection screen
- What are these other tags? Extra? That? stream? I believe that these are unnecessary.Seems legit.

[Glory]
01:58:570 (5) - Try to avoid unflow, even though that is a nice jump. I am going to keep it that way , but thanks for your remark
02:26:274 (1,2) - This looks pretty evil - replace this with a triplet? Changed
03:05:098 (6) - One grid up (lvl4) Thanks for Nazi-modding, but this is what the map needs!

Nice map, but try to get a new background for the maximum badass.
Jenny
dat map... tbh I expected shit but that is... nice o.o
Gave some IRC advice about hitsounding, volume and such~
Kotek-

Use source "The Frozen Tears of Angels". It's better really.

Good beatmap and song, yeah~
Topic Starter
mrk_old
already done, but forgot to update it.

thanks anyway.

Further Nazi-moding appreciated and needed!

Don't hesitate to mod subjective!!
TicClick
Just saying, we don't put albums there. The "Source" field is for such things as a movie title, game title or something where the track is taken from. Album is a collection of tracks recorded under the same "name", so it can't be "real" source. I can't provide a better explanation for this, sorry.

Yeah, osu! lacks "Album" field sometimes. But for now, you need to remove album name from source and throw it to tagset instead.
Mercurial
General
About Tags: Who is that "thatguy0815"? Does he made a part of this map? If he doesn't, remove it from tags, also don't put your name "Mr kyee" on tags, you're the creator so you don't need it.
The name of the album is: , so you need to put "The" on Tags.
This genere is Power Metal, so put it too.

Artist and Song's Name

DON'T capitalize "Of", really, just put "Rhapsody of Fire . Reign of Terror"

Glory

AIBat wrote:

A LOT OF UNSNAPPED CIRCLES AND SLIDERS



Unsnapped Green Lines
01:52:746 (6) This circle is touching the HP-Bar


Wow men, you got a really nice map there. Keep going :D
Topic Starter
mrk_old
thanks
TicClick
First of all, open your diff in Notepad and change slider velocity to 2 manually:

SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047
After that, press CTRL+S in Notepad and update diff in editor with CTRL+L

  1. Remove mr kyee from tags because a) you are uploader so you don't need your own name in tags and b) osu! search works with words that 3+ letters long
  2. 01:09:158 (1) - I hear five notes here, not three. What if you use 1/4 repeating slider instead?
  3. 01:23:629 (1) - consider adding t2o repeats here, because just a single 1/4 slider plays not really good in stream
  4. 02:08:806 (1) - starting from this moment, you put claps on 1st and 3rd ticks instead of 2nd and 4th. I advice you to use previous placement of claps to keep the rhythm constant
  5. 02:20:100 (1) - add finish here and somewhere else, where it appears in music
  6. 02:44:804 (1) - I recommend you to map through it (even something slow, I don't know) and start spinner from 02:47:627 according to vocals
  7. 03:21:686 (1) - you don't need new combo here
  8. 03:22:392 (1) - ^
  9. 03:45:339 (2) - I don't really like its shape
  10. 03:54:692 (1) - what I said about spinner before
  11. 04:16:061 (3) - it comes after slow sliders, and I don't see any warning about its speed
  12. 04:21:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - bad decision. Guitar sound is more quiet there compared to previous and next parts, so I would put some usual notes / sliders here instead of these triplets
  13. 04:30:736 (2) - it's overlapped by HP bar a little
  14. 04:31:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - slider sounds as incomplete "triplet" and this mini-stream starts from blue tick
  15. 06:00:274 (5) - are you bored or what? Also, it's unsymmetrical
Also, check snapping of green lines. Some inherited offsets are supposed to be at the same where the red ones are, but these green lines are off by few ms.

I don't really like it because of combo colours and stream spam, sorry. Not in my taste
Topic Starter
mrk_old

TicClick wrote:

First of all, open your diff in Notepad and change slider velocity to 2 manually:

SliderMultiplier:2.00000000596047
After that, press CTRL+S in Notepad and update diff in editor with CTRL+L

  1. Remove mr kyee from tags because a) you are uploader so you don't need your own name in tags and b) osu! search works with words that 3+ letters long
  2. 01:09:158 (1) - I hear five notes here, not three. What if you use 1/4 repeating slider instead? accepted.
  3. 01:23:629 (1) - consider adding t2o repeats here, because just a single 1/4 slider plays not really good in stream I like it that way
  4. 02:08:806 (1) - starting from this moment, you put claps on 1st and 3rd ticks instead of 2nd and 4th. I advice you to use previous placement of claps to keep the rhythm constantthis change was done intentionally and i think it fits in there:s
  5. 02:20:100 (1) - add finish here and somewhere else, where it appears in musicthanks done.
  6. 02:44:804 (1) - I recommend you to map through it (even something slow, I don't know) and start spinner from 02:47:627 according to vocals hmmmm.... you're right,but i also think it's okay this way. I'll try something out ;D
  7. 03:21:686 (1) - you don't need new combo here yes.
  8. 03:22:392 (1) - ^ yes.
  9. 03:45:339 (2) - I don't really like its shape accepted.
  10. 03:54:692 (1) - what I said about spinner before
  11. 04:16:061 (3) - it comes after slow sliders, and I don't see any warning about its speed changed slider vel.
  12. 04:21:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - bad decision. Guitar sound is more quiet there compared to previous and next parts, so I would put some usual notes / sliders here instead of these triplets gonna keep them
  13. 04:30:736 (2) - it's overlapped by HP bar a little done.
  14. 04:31:870 (1,2,3,4,5) - slider sounds as incomplete "triplet" and this mini-stream starts from blue tick no.
  15. 06:00:274 (5) - are you bored or what? Also, it's unsymmetrical
made it symmetrical. >Trying to find a better option.

Also, check snapping of green lines. Some inherited offsets are supposed to be at the same where the red ones are, but these green lines are off by few ms.

I don't really like it because of combo colours and stream spam, sorry. Not in my taste


thank you very much
Kashim_old_1
Aight, here are some things that I would change:

  1. 01:09:158 - 01:10:570 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) Maybe this way?

  2. 02:37:392 (3) Since every single slider in this map is angular, you should make this slider angular as well.

  3. In your Kiai's: For instance at 03:33:339 (1, 2) Maybe replace some of these with these ~

  4. 06:00:980 - 06:01:509 (1) Replace that slider with this (Soz, noticed that right after posting)
Not quite much , but still something.

Good Luck ~
Topic Starter
mrk_old

BonkuraChan wrote:

Aight, here are some things that I would change:

  1. 01:09:158 - 01:10:570 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) Maybe this way?want to keep it this way, since its the slow part.

  2. 02:37:392 (3) Since every single slider in this map is angular, you should make this slider angular as well.haven't noticed wtf.....

  3. In your Kiai's: For instance at 03:33:339 (1, 2) Maybe replace some of these with these ~ i love this sliders, no cance i change them :D
Not quite much , but still something.

Good Luck ~
Jebok_old
General
Make a sign before the game starts telling players to skip, as the entrance is long..? Like in THIS map.

Glory
01:07:393 (2) - 5 grids to the right?
01:18:423 - No new combo
01:18:687 - New combo
01:42:687 (4) - 1 grid up. I would also ctrl+r but that's up to you
02:31:392 (3,4) - Those two notes aren't spaced too nicely. I think it would be better if you'd put 1,2,3 as a isosceles triangle, so the lengths from 1 to 3 are the same as from 2 to 3. And then place (4) so that 1 to 4 side length is the same as 2 to 4 side length. It seems a bit off currently, especially the (4).
03:04:568 - New combo here
03:15:686 - New combo
03:16:392 - No new combo
05:09:281 (7) - Place it somewhere nicer, like to the right of (6)?
05:13:635 (11) - 1 grid up
05:40:862 (3) - Is this even grid snapped..? Place it on the same x and y as (2) at 05:39:980.
Topic Starter
mrk_old

Jebok wrote:

General
Make a sign before the game starts telling players to skip, as the entrance is long..? Like in THIS map.

Glory
01:07:393 (2) - 5 grids to the right? done.
01:18:423 - No new combo changed
01:18:687 - New combo okay
01:42:687 (4) - 1 grid up. I would also ctrl+r but that's up to you grid playcing was okay. Ctrl+r'd this
02:31:392 (3,4) - Those two notes aren't spaced too nicely. I think it would be better if you'd put 1,2,3 as a isosceles triangle, so the lengths from 1 to 3 are the same as from 2 to 3. And then place (4) so that 1 to 4 side length is the same as 2 to 4 side length. It seems a bit off currently, especially the (4). yes.
03:04:568 - New combo here no
03:15:686 - New combo no
03:16:392 - No new combo no
05:09:281 (7) - Place it somewhere nicer, like to the right of (6)? wtf it moved by itself, it was on the right....
05:13:635 (11) - 1 grid up okay
05:40:862 (3) - Is this even grid snapped..? Place it on the same x and y as (2) at 05:39:980. changed
Zapy
SPOILER
01:11 <Zapy> : add a finish
01:11 <Zapy> : 01:02:452 (5) -
01:11 <Zapy> : and here
01:11 <Zapy> : 01:05:276 (3) -
01:11 <Zapy> : 01:05:276 (3) -
01:11 <Zapy> : 01:06:688 (1) -
01:11 <Zapy> : this end 01:07:394 (2) - too
01:12 <mrkyee> : done
01:13 <Zapy> : 01:13:570 (1,2,3,4) -
01:13 <Zapy> : they don't play pretty well with the triplets you've placed before them
01:13 <Zapy> : i'd do something like
01:13 <mrkyee> : i had triplets before
01:13 <mrkyee> : but changed them to double xD
01:14 <Zapy> : i'd do it like this http://puu.sh/pCFg
01:14 <mrkyee> : nothing against you
01:14 <Zapy> : but uh
01:14 <mrkyee> : but that's even worse than the doubles
01:14 <mrkyee> : xD
01:14 <Zapy> : you really need to add more finish hitsounds
01:14 <Zapy> : i think it fits better
01:14 <Zapy> : it's up to you
01:14 <Zapy> : you can reject anything i say
01:15 <mrkyee> : i think i rebuild the old triplets in it
01:15 <Zapy> : the stream sounds a bit dull without finishes
01:15 <Zapy> : D:
01:15 <mrkyee> : iyes
01:15 <mrkyee> : i realised it
01:16 <Zapy> : just place one to 01:22:217 (1) - 01:23:629 (1) - 01:25:041 (1) -
01:16 <Zapy> : etc
01:16 <mrkyee> : i also kow how to place
01:16 <mrkyee> : yeah
01:16 <mrkyee> : was my idea
01:16 <mrkyee> : i surely need some finish hitsounding
01:17 <Zapy> : 01:37:041 (1,2,3,4) -
01:17 <Zapy> : ctrl+r, rotate 90 clockwise
01:17 <Zapy> : plays so much better
01:18 <Zapy> : and redo the hitsounds on that combo since ctrl+r messes them up
01:18 <Zapy> : 01:41:982 (3) - shorten by 1 arrow and add a note instead
01:18 <Zapy> : 2 repeats are unexpected but i'm not so sure about in that
01:19 <Zapy> : well i'dd a note here 01:44:805 -
01:19 <Zapy> : and make the spinner start 1/4 right after it
01:20 <mrkyee> : o0
01:20 <mrkyee> : w8
01:20 <Zapy> : make sure to make it end 1/4 earlier as well if you decide to do it
01:20 <Zapy> : and maybe make the spinner end at 01:47:628 - ?
01:20 <mrkyee> : changed 01:37:041 (1,2,3,4,3) -
01:20 <Zapy> : thus add a note at 01:48:334 -
01:21 <mrkyee> : nah i just keep the spinner that long
01:21 <mrkyee> : don't want to put a circle at the end of a spinner
01:21 <mrkyee> : and then having a gap till the next part starts
01:21 <mrkyee> : its not even like a break
01:22 <mrkyee> : just a 1.2 sec gap
01:22 <Zapy> : mm
01:22 <Zapy> : 01:52:217 (2,3) - could work better like you've done with the others before
01:22 <Zapy> : that is right after the slider
01:23 <mrkyee> : but then i would have to add a note
01:23 <mrkyee> : let me consider that
01:23 <Zapy> : new combo on this 02:01:747 (5) -
01:23 <Zapy> : you would not
01:24 <Zapy> : just do it like you've done the other combos before
01:24 <mrkyee> : ah okay
01:24 <mrkyee> : yes
01:24 <mrkyee> : i know wh
01:25 <mrkyee> : hmm
01:25 <mrkyee> : i've done shit on this part
01:25 <mrkyee> : 02:01:747 (5) - a new part of the music starts
01:25 <mrkyee> : but im still in an old pattern
01:25 <mrkyee> : have to rethink smth
01:26 <Zapy> : 02:23:804 (2) -
01:26 <Zapy> : could be a bit closer to the slider
01:26 <Zapy> : like you've done with these
01:26 <Zapy> : 02:29:098 (1,2) -
01:26 <Zapy> : that is 1.0-1.1x snap
01:27 <mrkyee> : changed
01:28 <mrkyee> : spacing fauil changed 02:34:215 (5) -
01:28 <Zapy> : probably 03:10:921 (2) - ctrl+r?
01:29 <mrkyee> : even if
01:29 <Zapy> : + i'd fill the gap between 02:41:275 (7,1) - with notes
01:29 <mrkyee> : i'd change 03:10:215 (1) -
01:29 <mrkyee> : bevause of the jump that follows
01:29 <Zapy> : hm?
01:30 <mrkyee> : would match
01:30 <mrkyee> : the direction of mouse
01:30 <mrkyee> : if i ctrl+R 03:10:215 (1) -
01:30 <mrkyee> : would be better
01:30 <mrkyee> : hmm didi it
01:30 <Zapy> : i really do the modding considering map's flow
01:30 <Zapy> : i'd stick to rotating the following slider instead
01:30 <mrkyee> : okay
01:31 <mrkyee> : done :>
01:32 <Zapy> : i really would map every 1/2 beat in this section
01:32 <Zapy> : 03:43:574 (1) -
01:33 <Zapy> : and not to the lyrics
01:33 <mrkyee> : so less sliders more circles
01:33 <Zapy> : no
01:33 <Zapy> : keep the sliders
01:33 <Zapy> : but fill the gaps with notes
01:33 <mrkyee> : but?
01:33 <Zapy> : like
01:33 <Zapy> : 03:48:339 (3,1) -
01:33 <Zapy> : 03:45:692 (5,1) -
01:33 <mrkyee> : ah thats what you mean
01:33 <Zapy> : if you map them and place hitsounds it feel better imo
01:34 <mrkyee> : okay i'll write that down
01:34 <mrkyee> : because i will go offline in a few minutes
01:34 <mrkyee> : have to go to work tomorow...
01:34 <Zapy> : i'll post this in your thread anyway
01:34 <mrkyee> : screw my boss!
01:34 <mrkyee> : and once again
01:35 <mrkyee> : o love you!
01:35 <Zapy> : :p
01:35 <mrkyee> : damn...
01:36 <Zapy> : is the song from some anime=?
01:36 <Zapy> : considering the bg
01:38 <Zapy> : and ughh
01:38 <Zapy> : it's otherwise fine, just add some finishes
01:38 <Zapy> : and i'd map it completely till the end
01:38 <Zapy> : make the break start at 06:09:450 -
01:39 <Zapy> : and place the anime's/vn's name to "Source" instead if it's from one
01:39 <Zapy> : anyway i'm done
01:39 <Zapy> : nice map
01:39 <Zapy> : otherwise

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Kagesaki
Star
Topic Starter
mrk_old
thanks Kagesaki :>
Stefan
boobs (Ich hab nicht viel gefunden. Und das was ich gefunden hab, ist auch nicht soo useful. Alles in Allem ist die Map recht gut. Aber du bist nicht fertig, oder? Weil nach 06:08:744 es immer noch weiter geht.)

01:19:393 (1) - Ganz ehrlich: Warum ist dieser unnötige Spinner da? Der Part hier lohnt sich zu mappen. Ich wäre dafür, den Spinner zu entfernen und ein wenig was reinzumappen, da der Spinner komplett aus'm Konzept rausgeht.
02:06:159 (8) - NC setzen.
02:06:511 (1) - NC entfernen.
03:02:451 (5) - NC setzen. (Sieht dann wie 02:58:921 (1,2,1,2,3) aus)
03:06:510 (1) - Ich würd da lieber NC entfernen.
03:06:862 (2) - NC setzen.
03:07:921 (1) - wie 03:06:510 (1)
03:08:274 (2) - wie 03:06:862 (2)
03:43:574 (6) - NC setzen.
03:44:809 (14) - NC setzen.
03:45:162 (1) - NC entfernen.
04:14:287 (5) - ist ziemlich knapp an der HP-Bar. Sieht unschön aus und sollte bisschen weiter weg platziert werden.
04:16:061 (3) - Finish hört sich sehr seltsam an. Würd ich nicht da machen.
04:21:948 (1) - Whistle am Startpoint setzen und vom Mittelpunkt entfernen.
04:28:317 (9) - Whistle setzen.
04:49:934 (9) - Clap am Startpoint setzen.
05:06:469 (1) - Whistle auf den Startpoint.
05:27:806 (1) - Mach den symmetrisch. :<
05:30:637 (7) - ^
Flower
iroseka's mod from tha queue
The diff is a bit beyond my ability so here are only suggestions. Take it or ignore it :D

01:13:570 (1,2,3,4) - Not on the rhythm I think this is better

01:16:217 (4) - Remove clap?
01:17:276 (1) - Remove clap?
01:17:629 (2) - Add clap?
01:21:158 (4,9) - This two add clap
01:22:217 (1) - Here, this stream. I can't pass the section, but I feel the sound is a bit too dull. Maybe you can add some more claps at some points.
02:07:923 (4) - Don't understand the slider here. You can make it half a beat longer or replace it with whatever else.
02:25:745 (3) - Slider shape. Respond to the notes before it.
04:18:964 (1) - and the stream after it: the sound flow is a quick (like 1/6?) portamento while the players will feel lack of rhythm sense. Increase hitsound volume
Time section 05:27:806 (1) - 05:39:098 (1) - Soft

Maybe I will hand in a GD in a few weeks... maybe
Topic Starter
mrk_old
I appreciate your effort for these mods, they were very helpfull. I know it was a torture going through this maps, thank you :D

TNG's Mod
01:19:393 (1) - Ganz ehrlich: Warum ist dieser unnötige Spinner da? Der Part hier lohnt sich zu mappen. Ich wäre dafür, den Spinner zu entfernen und ein wenig was reinzumappen, da der Spinner komplett aus'm Konzept rausgeht.Hab nach mehrmaligen durchgucken keine besseres pattern gefunden und es so gelassen
02:06:159 (8) - NC setzen.Done
02:06:511 (1) - NC entfernen.Done
03:02:451 (5) - NC setzen. (Sieht dann wie 02:58:921 (1,2,1,2,3) aus)Done
03:06:510 (1) - Ich würd da lieber NC entfernen.Done
03:06:862 (2) - NC setzen.Done
03:07:921 (1) - wie 03:06:510 (1)Done
03:08:274 (2) - wie 03:06:862 (2)
03:43:574 (6) - NC setzen.Done
03:44:809 (14) - NC setzen.Done
03:45:162 (1) - NC entfernen.Done
04:14:287 (5) - ist ziemlich knapp an der HP-Bar. Sieht unschön aus und sollte bisschen weiter weg platziert werden.Done
04:16:061 (3) - Finish hört sich sehr seltsam an. Würd ich nicht da machen.Pff Changed :D
04:21:948 (1) - Whistle am Startpoint setzen und vom Mittelpunkt entfernen.Hab die Whistles ganz raus gemacht
04:28:317 (9) - Whistle setzen.Same
04:49:934 (9) - Clap am Startpoint setzen.Done
05:06:469 (1) - Whistle auf den Startpoint.Siehe oben
05:27:806 (1) - Mach den symmetrisch. :<Done
05:30:637 (7) - ^Done

iroseka's Mod
01:13:570 (1,2,3,4) - Not on the rhythm I think this is betterI know what you mean, but it fits into the movement flow the way it is.
01:16:217 (4) - Remove clap?Done
01:17:276 (1) - Remove clap?Nope
01:17:629 (2) - Add clap?Nope
01:21:158 (4,9) - This two add clapDone
01:22:217 (1) - Here, this stream. I can't pass the section, but I feel the sound is a bit too dull. Maybe you can add some more claps at some points.Got nearly every 3 circle a clap and also finishes, i think it's enough.
02:07:923 (4) - Don't understand the slider here. You can make it half a beat longer or replace it with whatever else.Half beat longer doesn't fit in the music and using the normal sliderveolicty would result in a long slider and disturb the aesthetic. I have to think of something better, but haven't changed it yet
02:25:745 (3) - Slider shape. Respond to the notes before it.Done
04:18:964 (1) - and the stream after it: the sound flow is a quick (like 1/6?) portamento while the players will feel lack of rhythm sense. Increase hitsound volumeRun through it many times and it's 1/4 and i'll also keep the sound volume
Time section 05:27:806 (1) - 05:39:098 (1) - Soft Thanks for the advice. Increased sound volume from 30% to 50% and changed to soft hitsounds in this part

Maybe I will hand in a GD in a few weeks... maybe
Roxas
Only a thing

01:23:276 - If you do as the screenshot? I think it's better (repeat this every 13th beat of new combo in the stream)
Topic Starter
mrk_old
After an osu field research, i tend to stick to the old one. :D
nanda2009
Hello from my modding queue ~

Since this is a APP map, I guess there's only little thing to change.

and when modding your map, I suddenly missed happy30 . _ .

[Glory]
  1. 01:19:393 (1) - add clap?
  2. 02:07:923 (4), 03:17:803 (4), 05:55:146 (6) - It's quite suprising, when suddenly a slow slider speed appear. Maybe make an warning SB
  3. 02:22:216 until 02:47:627 - add kiai time?
  4. 02:44:804 (1) - - add finish, but make sure you make inherited point at 02:47:627 's hitsounds volume to 70%
  5. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:21:948 (1) - make this 1/8 slider? and make it repeated 6 times. It'll follows the music better imo
    SPOILER
    Timeline :

    > It's 6 times repeated.

    Slider Shape :
  6. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:28:398 (1) - ^
  7. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:59:943 (1) - ^
  8. [optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 05:06:469 (1) - ^
  9. 06:08:744 (3) - delete clap?

thx~
Topic Starter
mrk_old
Thank you very much for your mod :D

nanda2009's mod
01:19:393 (1) - add clap? hmkay
02:07:923 (4), 03:17:803 (4), 05:55:146 (6) - It's quite suprising, when suddenly a slow slider speed appear. Maybe make an warning SB changed slidervel.
02:22:216 until 02:47:627 - add kiai time? nope
02:44:804 (1) - - add finish, but make sure you make inherited point at 02:47:627 's hitsounds volume to 70% no, the soundless spinner was done on purpose.
[optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:21:948 (1) - make this 1/8 slider? and make it repeated 6 times. It'll follows the music better imo
SPOILER (click to toggle) naaah, doesn't fit.
[optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:28:398 (1) - ^
[optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 04:59:943 (1) - ^
[optional] [maybe a bit too hard, or a bit nazi..] 05:06:469 (1) - ^
06:08:744 (3) - delete clap? no. but thanks to you i found there a finish, where it shouldn't be and deleted it.
HanzeR
Very fun map! <3 Rhapsody

Just some veeerrrrrrrry small things because I think this map is otherwise perfect

Background - resize to 1024x768

02:14:452 - unsnapped green line
02:20:099 - ^
02:22:217 - ^
03:13:040 - ^
03:46:045 - nc
04:08:809 unsnapped green line
04:18:964 -^
05:50:382 - 2 unnecessary green lines
05:13:795 - ^
06:08:744 - unsnapped green line

Just in the future.. remember to resnap all timing sections after you change offset--at least I think that's what happened. Not a big deal though. Anyways good luck!
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