This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 25 marzo 2012 at 18:16:58

Artist: Yoko Shimomura
Title: Desire For All That Is Lost
Source: Kingdom Hearts II
Tags: redesignated skydevil
BPM: 132
Filesize: 1445kb
Play Time: 01:04
Difficulties Available:

1. Skydevil's Insane (5 stars, 166 notes)
2. Desire for Redesignated's Lost Memento (4,79 stars, 148 notes)
3. Easy (1,36 stars, 47 notes)
4. Hard (4,78 stars, 143 notes)
5. Normal (2,21 stars, 64 notes)

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Desire For All That Is Lost
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[Sorry for my bad english]
Firts map.
Enjoy!
Insane by Redesignated and SkyDevil. Thanks!

BPM 131,98
Offset 404
Termina il kiai time in 01:05:868 (aggiungi una nota con finish nella hard in questo punto)

Non dimenticare di resnappare tutte le note al cambio dell'offset

Chewin wrote:

BPM 131,98
Offset 404
Termina il kiai time in 01:05:868 (aggiungi una nota con finish nella hard in questo punto)

Non dimenticare di resnappare tutte le note al cambio dell'offset

Fatto, thank you

hello

[General]
- the BG size should be 1024x768 or that aspect relation.
- finish your mapset or crop the song.

[Timing]
BPM: 132,000
Offset: 402
re-snap all notes, timing points, preview time, etc.

[Hard]

- please use AR 7, the current is so painful, because of the BPM, Slider Velocity and the 0,50x slider multiplier that you have there.

00:01:313 (3) - is totally covered by 00:00:402 (1), please move to other location
00:09:496 (1) - overlaped on previous slider
00:10:405 (2) - stacking the end of this and the previous slider is nice for an [Insane] but for a [Hard] diff is not ok, please change your pattern
00:44:274 (2,3) - simmilar weird stacking, this time is the end and start of the sliders, please change the location for this
00:47:683 -oh please dont overuse the finish >v< is so weird, just use on this notes, 00:47:674 (1), 00:48:583 (6), 00:49:947 (5)... now you can see that they are every 2 white ticks, this is a common hitsounding style and is very effective and nice to ears.
00:59:503 (3) - please move this to other location is overlaped on previous 2 sliders.
01:05:868 (5) - put on centre, add new combo and add finish.
But then suddenly the map ends here, I see its on WIP, but if you are not going to map all the song please crop the song, the rankable unused lenght of the song is 20%, keep this in mind, your unused song lenght is currently 57%.

[Normal]

00:22:225 (1) - the body of this slider is covered by the hitburst of previous spinner, the player cant see where this slider is going.
00:34:500 (2,4) - clap to this 2
00:43:137 (1) - hmm is so far from the centre (where is the suposed that the player will spin the spinner.
00:47:683 - overuse of finish again
00:53:139 (3,4) - sliders on the same location, please move to other place, is so confusing for a [Normal] diff.
00:58:594 (1,2,3,4) - covered by spinner hitburst
01:00:413 (5) - covered by the 4 circles from up >v<
01:04:050 (1,2,3,4) - reverse hitcircles O_o please dont use it on [Normal] diff

[Easy]

00:05:859 (2) - dont make the end of this slider touch the start of previous slider
00:09:496 (1) - try another shape for this, the newbie player (who is suposed to play an [Easy] diff cant get why the start and end of the slider are so close, also no whistle
00:14:042 (1,2,3) - dont stack objects, again the newbie player cant get why there is 3 aproach circles appearing on the same location
00:24:043 (2,3) - weird shape, no whistle
00:28:590 (2,3,4) - no stack please
00:31:317 (1,2) - weird shape, no whistle
00:38:591 (2,3) - ↑
00:47:683 (1,2) - weird shape, also dont use 2 repeats on an [Easy] diff, oh yeah, dont overuse the finish
01:05:868 (5) - new combo

that is all, hope this help, dont forget to crop your mp3 or map the whole song >3</

ikari_kyon wrote:

hello

[General]
- the BG size should be 1024x768 or that aspect relation.
- finish your mapset or crop the song.

[Timing]
BPM: 132,000
Offset: 402
re-snap all notes, timing points, preview time, etc.

[Hard]

- please use AR 7, the current is so painful, because of the BPM, Slider Velocity and the 0,50x slider multiplier that you have there.

00:01:313 (3) - is totally covered by 00:00:402 (1), please move to other location
00:09:496 (1) - overlaped on previous slider
00:10:405 (2) - stacking the end of this and the previous slider is nice for an [Insane] but for a [Hard] diff is not ok, please change your pattern
00:44:274 (2,3) - simmilar weird stacking, this time is the end and start of the sliders, please change the location for this
00:47:683 -oh please dont overuse the finish >v< is so weird, just use on this notes, 00:47:674 (1), 00:48:583 (6), 00:49:947 (5)... now you can see that they are every 2 white ticks, this is a common hitsounding style and is very effective and nice to ears.
00:59:503 (3) - please move this to other location is overlaped on previous 2 sliders.
01:05:868 (5) - put on centre, add new combo and add finish.
But then suddenly the map ends here, I see its on WIP, but if you are not going to map all the song please crop the song, the rankable unused lenght of the song is 20%, keep this in mind, your unused song lenght is currently 57%.

[Normal]

00:22:225 (1) - the body of this slider is covered by the hitburst of previous spinner, the player cant see where this slider is going.
00:34:500 (2,4) - clap to this 2
00:43:137 (1) - hmm is so far from the centre (where is the suposed that the player will spin the spinner.
00:47:683 - overuse of finish again
00:53:139 (3,4) - sliders on the same location, please move to other place, is so confusing for a [Normal] diff.
00:58:594 (1,2,3,4) - covered by spinner hitburst
01:00:413 (5) - covered by the 4 circles from up >v<
01:04:050 (1,2,3,4) - reverse hitcircles O_o please dont use it on [Normal] diff

[Easy]

00:05:859 (2) - dont make the end of this slider touch the start of previous slider
00:09:496 (1) - try another shape for this, the newbie player (who is suposed to play an [Easy] diff cant get why the start and end of the slider are so close, also no whistle
00:14:042 (1,2,3) - dont stack objects, again the newbie player cant get why there is 3 aproach circles appearing on the same location
00:24:043 (2,3) - weird shape, no whistle
00:28:590 (2,3,4) - no stack please
00:31:317 (1,2) - weird shape, no whistle
00:38:591 (2,3) - ↑
00:47:683 (1,2) - weird shape, also dont use 2 repeats on an [Easy] diff, oh yeah, dont overuse the finish
01:05:868 (5) - new combo

that is all, hope this help, dont forget to crop your mp3 or map the whole song >3</

Thank you a lot! I'll fix as soon as possible :3

homg this kingdom hearts song yes ♥

If you'd like a difficulty that utilized the entire length of the song, let me know. ;o

The artist is actually Yoko Shimomura.

Easy:

Why doesn't Easy have any lead-in, while Normal and Hard do? I'm not sure if that's anything that can get in the way of ranking, but it feels a bit odd, personally.

Some of your sliders looked a bit odd, so I took pictures of my recommendations on where to place them. In particular, your semicircle sliders that pair into an oval looked a bit helix-like, so I smoothed them. If you were going for the helical shape, then just ignore those changes, ahaha.

00:04:040 (1) - http://puu.sh/iONY
00:05:859 (2) - http://puu.sh/iOOH
00:07:677 (3) - http://puu.sh/iOQe
00:14:951 (3) - http://puu.sh/iOQA
00:16:770 (4) - http://puu.sh/iOQM
00:22:225 (1) - adjusted the starting point of the slider so it and its end align a bit more.
00:29:499 (4) - http://puu.sh/iOR9
00:32:227 (2) - End of slider doesn't align with start of next slider.
00:33:136 (3) - http://puu.sh/iORD
00:34:954 (4) - http://puu.sh/iORZ
00:36:773 (1) - http://puu.sh/iOS6
00:38:591 (2) - rotated to make a less awkward pattern.
00:39:500 (3) - same as above
00:51:320 (1) - For all these blue sliders in the Kiai time, try replacing the ending hit-sound with a clap. (To do this, select the slider, then click the end circle; it should get a red outline. While it's selected, remove the finish, and add the clap.)
00:52:230 (2) - ^
00:53:139 (3) - ^
00:54:048 (4) - ^

Normal:

I love how the sliders you have at 00:07:674 (5), for example, look like Shadows wriggling out of the ground. /lol im a nerd ♥

Also yea, I couldn't notice anything in particular, ahaha.

Hard:

00:22:220 (1) - This slider looks a bit odd on its own, because of its shape. Maybe try playing with it a bit more?
00:34:947 (1) - The next slider after this one seems like it tries to create some symmetry with it, but they still look kind of awkward. I like the shape, so you might just want to try moving them. Maybe try this? (Copy the slider at 00:36:765 (1), scroll the timeline to 34:947 (1), press Ctrl+V, then Ctrl+H.) I moved them closer together so that AI Mod didn't whine about them being too far apart.


Hope some of this helps.

Ok, all fixed. Thanks :3

Sorry for Yoko ShiKomura

Bahahaha, don't beat yourself up about it. It's an easy typo. I'll be waiting for this to get approved♪♪

[General]:

You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it.

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=75882&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

use this http://puu.sh/iZEH
also, offset change to 438

please resnap green line

[Easy]:
00:18:588 (1) - end at 00:21:316
01:05:856 (1) - use soft finish?

[Normal]:
00:07:674 (5) - Hard to newbie player
00:20:402 (1) - too short spinner. same as ^. delete this note and 00:18:583 (1) - end at 00:21:311?
00:29:492 (3) - Hard to newbie player
00:40:401 (1) - end at 00:42:220
00:54:947 (5) - delete this note. 00:55:401 (1) - start at 00:54:947 end at 00:57:674
00:58:583 (1) - 1grid left
01:05:856 (1) - use soft finish?

[Hard]:
00:11:311 - too many clap really noisy. please reduce clap
00:27:674 - same as ^
00:40:402 - same as ^
00:56:879 (1) - start at 00:56:765 end at 00:58:129
00:59:492 (3) - end at 01:00:288
01:05:856 (1) - use soft finish?

oh, please move to pending

Thanks a lot! I'll move to Pending when I'll get Redesignated's guest diff

Since I can't seem to PM it to you, here's the draft of my Insane difficulty. yay for rapidly escalating difficulty level

I think you should be able to just drop it into the song folder with the other .osu files.

Download: Yoko Shikomura - Desire For All That Is Lost (RikiH_) [Redesignated's Lost Memento].osu

Thank you, I'll add it as soon as possible

I am an idiot, please ignore everything that I say ever ( ﾟдﾟ)

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Desire For All That Is Lost (RikiH_) [Desire for Redesignated's Lost Memento].osu

Lol. One mod more and I'll move to pending

Heres my mooodd

Easy
00:22:259 Grab the end of the slider, and put it 2 grids down
00:25:896 Whole slider 2 grids right

Normal
00:45:892 Put both sliders one grid to the right x3
00:48:165 to 00:51:006 I think it sounds better if you replace the finish sounds with clap
00:58:619 to 01:05:438 The Finshsounds make it sound so weird o.o

Hard
00:03:506 4 grids right, 3 grids up XD
00:24:074 No new combo needed
00:30:438 Put this slider somewhere else, it looks so weird here owo

Desire for Redesignated's Lost Memento
00:04:040 to 00:05:291 I can't read this part at all, make something else out of this >w<
00:05:859 to 00:07:109 ^
00:07:677 to 00:11:087 ^
00:16:770 Spacing, and awkward slider
00:27:112 Non-readable part
00:33:136 Spacing
00:34:045 This part is so weird @_@ Or you need to stack them all, or you need to have some spacing in it
00:34:954 to 00:38:423 non-readable part
00:49:502 to 00:50:866 ^
00:56:377 dafuq???? This is something you cant do in a stream @_@ remove those 1/6 circles
00:59:558 ^

Okay i thought about asking to make a guest diff but im not sure if you want to accept after you see the criticism at hard @_@
But im still gonna ask: Can i make a guest diff insane?

SkyDevil wrote:

Heres my mooodd

Easy
00:22:259 Grab the end of the slider, and put it 2 grids down
00:25:896 Whole slider 2 grids right

Normal
00:45:892 Put both sliders one grid to the right x3
00:48:165 to 00:51:006 I think it sounds better if you replace the finish sounds with clap
00:58:619 to 01:05:438 The Finshsounds make it sound so weird o.o

Hard
00:03:506 4 grids right, 3 grids up XD
00:24:074 No new combo needed
00:30:438 Put this slider somewhere else, it looks so weird here owo

Desire for Redesignated's Lost Memento
00:04:040 to 00:05:291 I can't read this part at all, make something else out of this >w<
00:05:859 to 00:07:109 ^
00:07:677 to 00:11:087 ^
00:16:770 Spacing, and awkward slider
00:27:112 Non-readable part
00:33:136 Spacing
00:34:045 This part is so weird @_@ Or you need to stack them all, or you need to have some spacing in it
00:34:954 to 00:38:423 non-readable part
00:49:502 to 00:50:866 ^
00:56:377 dafuq???? This is something you cant do in a stream @_@ remove those 1/6 circles
00:59:558 ^

Okay i thought about asking to make a guest diff but im not sure if you want to accept after you see the criticism at hard @_@
But im still gonna ask: Can i make a guest diff insane?

Thanks for your modding!

And yeah, don't worry, you can make a guest diff if you want :3

I don't know what got me but i made one of the worst streams i ever could make O_O (i fked up this song sorry Q_Q)

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Desire For All That Is Lost (RikiH_) [Skydevil's Insane].osu

SkyDevil wrote:

Desire for Redesignated's Lost Memento
00:04:040 to 00:05:291 I can't read this part at all, make something else out of this >w< It's not any worse than a lot of other Insane difficulties do. I find it pretty easy to read, too, if you pay attention to the music. Besides, I thought you didn't need to ensure sight-reading anymore? :/
00:05:859 to 00:07:109 ^
00:07:677 to 00:11:087 ^
00:16:770 Spacing, and awkward slider I ran out of ideas for that slider and then kind of forgot to fix it, orz. I'll change it soon.
00:27:112 Non-readable part Although this still seems pretty easy to me if you're listening, I could probably make it a bit more interesting if I change the slider design.
00:33:136 Spacing Moved them a bit further to the left.
00:34:045 This part is so weird @_@ Or you need to stack them all, or you need to have some spacing in it Added some spacing. Don't know why I thought it was a good design choice to place them there, really. >>
00:34:954 to 00:38:423 non-readable part Also in time with the music.
00:49:502 to 00:50:866 ^ In time with music, supposed to be a particularly difficult part of the song.
00:56:377 dafuq???? This is something you cant do in a stream @_@ remove those 1/6 circles Gah, yea. It annoys me a lot to have to change this, since the piano plays too quickly and staggered-ly to perfectly match the hit-objects at the ticks using standard BPM, but it's unrankable, so I'll fix that.
00:59:558 ^

Thanks for the feedback♪♪

SkyDevil wrote:

I don't know what got me but i made one of the worst streams i ever could make O_O (i fked up this song sorry Q_Q)

Ahahahahah the final stream is epic.
I added your diff, thanks :3

RikiH_ wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

I don't know what got me but i made one of the worst streams i ever could make O_O (i fked up this song sorry Q_Q)

Ahahahahah the final stream is epic.
I added your diff, thanks :3

oh yay x3 Star~~ oh and btw put SkyDevil then in tags XD

SkyDevil wrote:

oh yay x3 Star~~ oh and btw put SkyDevil then in tags XD

Thanks for the star! Maybe tomorrow I'll update the map and I'll put SkyDevil in tags.

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

It's still need more work lol
good luck!!

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

It's still need more work lol ~I know.
good luck!! ~Thank you [/quote]

Download: Yoko Shimomura - Desire For All That Is Lost (RikiH_) [Skydevil's Insane].osu