Hi~Request from Beren XD

[General]
Fine~
调过offset??所有的绿线都需要resnap的样子..

[Storyboard]
看到神SB被吓傻了QwQ
自己刚刚学习...不mod...

[grasscarp]
-Beatmap-
00:01:465 (1) - x164 y247
02:40:345 (1) - x210 y212?
02:51:865 (1) - 稍微向右1~2个格子..?

[tutuhaha]
All fine~

[Kiiwa]
-Beatmap-
00:02:425 (2) - 调整一下~让结尾和3456构成的五角形状完美一些w
00:11:785 (4) - x62 y114
00:21:145 (1) - 用一个note代替呢..毕竟这里只有一个重音
00:27:865 (1) - x131 y244(如果改了这个下面的也请修改..
00:29:785 (1) - x256 y224
00:37:225 (4) - x128 y95
00:38:185 (2) - x354 y215
00:39:145 (3) - x294 y71
00:46:105 (3) - 这个不好看._.
00:49:225 (1) - x155 y324
00:50:905 (1) - 也不好看._.
00:52:825 (1) - x148 y194
01:00:265 (3) - 还是换成两个note吧._.
01:04:345 (1) - 不好看._.(后面也有...只是个人觉得有些奇怪=w=;
01:11:065 (4) - O.O好像这样的遮挡是不可以的来着...?
01:14:905 (3) - x152 y178
02:00:505 (3) - 遮住了..
02:13:225 (3) - x149 y156
02:37:465 (5) - x502 y319

[Beren]
-Beatmap-
00:24:985 (3) - x315 y239
00:25:945 (1) - x133 y77
00:34:585 (4) - x424 y96
00:48:025 (3) - x216 y97
00:53:545 (3) - x401 y188
02:06:745 (4) - x328 y247
02:16:585 (3,4) - x121 y296

[Overall]
=w=直接rank好了ww完全是鸡蛋里挑骨头了...
timing完全无力._. Sorry...

大概就这么多吧w star~☆

来
[General]
*标题要不要改成 short .ver 毕竟这不是完整版 不知道以后会不会有鬼畜大师做 full .ver的说 lol
*tutuhaha 悲剧了 不在 kiiwa 和 Beren的tag里面
*no kiai ? that's fine
*建议把其他难度中 没用到的节奏sb特效删掉

[Beren]
00:00:985 (1) - 我举得这个音效放在 normal-clap
00:39:865 (2) - 这节奏我不喜欢
00:42:745 (1) - ^

[grasscarp]
00:02:905 (3) - 不建议在这里遮住00:02:905 (3) 的回转箭头
00:18:265 (1) - 感觉上 apinner后接note快了点
01:29:305 (1) - 不建议在简单难度中 把spinner后接的一个点放中间 英文 spinner的圈 和 下个note的提示全在一起会误导新手


[22hhaha]
00:28:345 (2) - 去掉尾部的clap

[kiiwa]
wa wa wa 扭我i我了~


求鬼畜 ~star~

all

關於綠線 , 按F6 點第一根綠線 然後拉到最下方 按住shift點最後一根綠線 左邊填寫25 點move 就ok了

文件夾里有個Akiko Shikata - Utsusemi (Beren).osb 是多餘的?!去掉后重新fullsubmit ?! http://puu.sh/g8qY

beren

00:54:985 (1) - 在slider頭 加個SC1的whistle?
01:18:505 (4,5) - 太詭異了 (難道是因為沒地方放這slider 所以才這樣麼,還有就是要疊的話就好好疊0.0
01:19:705 (2,3,4,5) - 把節奏改成先單點 再三連?
01:31:225 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:39:865 (5,1) - 把2個note并成1個slider?
02:11:545 (2) - 這樣還不如把綠線改成0.6~0.7倍速的滑條速度
02:13:465 (2) - ^
02:39:865 (1,2,3,4) - 這間距是故意的?
02:41:545 (7) - 去掉?
02:44:305 (4) - 節奏改成slider后的三連? 或者 http://puu.sh/g8nm ?
02:48:985 (4) - 用0.7的綠線會好點 要不然容易提早放手?

kiiwa

忘記改offset了?!

00:03:600 (5) - slider尾降音量? (或者加長到00:04:320再降?)
00:30:480 - 降音量?
01:04:080 (4) - 改成2個note? 至少對於我來說相比之前 這樣會好按一些0_0
02:08:640 (1,2,3,4) - 有點眼花(combo color太接近的緣故?) http://puu.sh/g8p0 改成另一個顏色?!
02:21:120 (1,2,1) - 間距? (想要對其的話 把綠線改成0.6不就好了

後半段音效略偷懶?

tutuhaha

AR+1?其他還好

grasscarp

01:09:145 (3) - 覺得這裡用sc1的finish會更好!? 或者改成像beren那樣

大概就這樣0.0

Hi there~~mod from queue
啊～～最近华人req好多，真好～～

General:

1. 文件夹里有2个osb文件，其中一个似乎是改名前的？删掉～
2. 建议Audio Lead-in: 1-1.5s，现在感觉开始的太快了……

grasscrap:

1. 感觉AR可以+1的样子……
2. 00:17:785 - 感觉Spinner停在这里，然后后面的长白线加note会更好一点？
3. 00:29:785 (1) - 结束到后面红线？毕竟SB这里有个效果，或者后面红线上加个note？
4. 00:38:425 (3) - 能不能清掉这个的slider滚动音？确实不好听的说
5. 01:07:225 (2) - 结尾加个soft-whistle?
6. 01:08:185 (1) - 去掉finish?感觉没有必要的样子毕竟下一句就是进高潮的副歌了而且那里也有个finish
7. 01:16:345 (2) - soft-whistle?
8. 01:33:145 (1) - ^
9. 02:01:945 (1) - 去掉滚动音？
10. 02:34:105 (1) - ^
11. 02:36:985 (2) - soft-whitle?
12. 02:39:385 (3) - 去掉滚动音？
13. 02:41:305 (3) - ^
14. 02:43:225 (3) - ^
15. 02:49:465 - 这里补个note？
16. 02:52:345 (2) - 滚动音

tutuhaha:

1. tutuhaha，品质保障（大雾）
2. 和grasscrap的类似还是有很多sliderslide音的问题……似乎是因为音效不够用了才会导致这个问题的？总之能解决的话最好了，否则听起来总感觉有点违和
3. 00:30:265 (2) - 把这个缩短到00:30:505 - 来配合SB的效果？
4. 00:31:225 (3) - 删掉这个然后在结尾的长白线上补note？
5. 00:39:145 (3) - 把这个finish的音量调低点？
6. 01:37:945 (3) - 结尾改回soft音效？
7. 02:07:705 (1) - 降低点音量？

Kiiwa:

1. 00:07:465 (7) - remove whistle?
2. (nazi)00:11:785 (4) - not stacks well
3. 00:21:145 (1) - change to a note and add a break here?
4. (nazi)00:39:145 (4) - not stacks well
5. 01:34:585 - spinner stop at here?
6. 01:40:345 (1,1) - two note on one point - unrankable.
7. 01:42:265 - spinner ends here?
8. 01:44:665 (1) - i suppose it is unnecessary because u can add a hitsound to spinner directly if u wanna so
9. 02:19:945 (2,3) - it MAY be unrankable....
10. 02:32:185 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 02:33:145 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 02:59:545 - spinner finishes here?

Beren:

1. (nazi)00:25:945 (1) - 没叠好
2. 01:11:065 (6) - 把结尾改回soft?
3. 01:19:705 (2,3,4,5) - 这里建议把三连做到红线去
4. 01:31:225 (2,3,4,5) - 同上
5. 02:39:385 (6) - 结尾改soft?

差不多就这些了～～～图超赞SB也是超赞～～～star支持～～

Why hello~

General
* Your MP3 bitrate is 320kbps. Consider to change the mp3 bitrate into 192kbps
* Set the audio lead-in to 2 seconds
* This mapset have 2 osb, remove the wrong one


grasscarp
* There is some notes that too soon from spinner. Consider to remove that or move it closer, because it's difficult for beginners (e.g. 00:18:745 (1))

00:18:745 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug
00:50:905 (2) - Unsnapped tail slider
00:52:825 (2) - ^
00:53:785 (1) - This spinner is too short and it's not enough time to spin for beginners
01:33:145 (1,1) - Why 2 spinner? I prefer to remove first spinner and remap that part. You seems lazy to map, right?
01:40:825 (1,1) - ^


tutuhaha
00:16:345 (4) - New combo?
00:54:745 (T) - Increase the volume here, because I barely hear this hitsound
02:13:465 (1) - Remove new combo for combo pattern


Kiiwa
00:11:065 (3) - Short this slider to 00:11:305 for following vocal
00:16:320 (1) - Unsnapped object
00:16:380 (1) - ^
00:21:145 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu.png. Look at gameplay if you want to see the proof
00:27:865 (1) - Unstack this, to prevent players for expecting that this is a slider with normal speed
01:00:025 (1,2,3,1) - This pattern seems hard to read. Since you have a 1/4 clicks (1~3) and 1/1 click after 1/4 click. I suggest you to unstack it
01:08:185 (1) - Bad overlapped
01:09:625 (1) - Sudden slider w/ high speed is makes players go confusing
01:57:120 (1) - Unsnapped object
01:57:180 (1) - ^
02:01:705 (2,3) - Spread this pattern, because some players will confuse about where the hitobject should click first
02:19:945 (2,3) - ^
02:26:905 (2) - The sliderbody is overlapped by tail slider, and it's kinda confusing for players
02:27:865 (2) - ^
02:32:185 (1,2,3) - Same issue as 02:01:705 (2,3)
02:37:945 (1) - Same issue as 01:09:625 (1)
02:49:705 (7) - New combo
02:49:945 (1) - Remove new combo


Beren
00:42:745 (1) - These slider is kinda silly, because it just end at 1/8 tick. Replace this into a circle?
02:22:105 (5) - New combo for noticing that this is slow slider


Kiiwa's diff is needs more work

I like this song

Orz www,来的好晚

[grasscarp]

1. 01:03:865 (1,2,3) - 推荐有弧线度的一个三连
2. 实在找不到什么可挑的地方

[tutuhaha]

1. 00:56:665 (1,2,3) - 建议重叠，因为前面偏慢，突然一下的三连感觉很快容易断
2. 01:31:945 (5) - slider的话在01:31:945的节奏有点多余，可以的话其实01:32:185下Note也差不多了

[Kiiwa]

1. 01:07:105 (4) - 建议放在01:06:985
2. 01:16:105 - 差个音
   
   这难度的SV配上排列真心不错，尤其是双倍SV都在合适的降低难度有符合音乐，总之感觉打下来就是一条线 XD

[师傅的难度]

1. 01:30:505 (5) - 其实我觉得这个不用覆盖，可以放出来，毕竟节奏没有停止，还是向上的
2. 01:38:185 (5) - ^
   真的完全挑不出来。。。完全的一条线。。。挑的都是我玩100的两个点。。。

Hello! How do you make such lovely SB and maps ?! Forever loving how you map and SB ><

General:
- This is 3 min long and this is the short version ? lol

SB:
- That bird looks a bit weird imo, try this one instead http://puu.sh/gZUr ?

grasscarp:
- 00:33:625 >> Uh, this new combo seems a little unnecessary, remove it ?
- 01:28:825 >> Silence the spinner's end ? I think it would be better if you do this but is up to you
- 02:29:785 >> New combo then remov new combo on the next slider
- 02:47:545 >> ^

tutuhaha:
- 00:09:625 >> End (2) here and instead of the current slider that is (3) do this http://puu.sh/h6yy and notice the new combo too
- 00:12:505 >> You should start the new combo here instead of where it is now because you started new combos before with this same sound so it would make more sense
- 00:14:425 >> End (3) here and add a note on the next red tick
- 01:07:705 >> Remove whistle
- 01:38:905 >> New combo
- 02:13:465 >> ^
- 02:17:785 >> End (3) here and add a note on the next red tick

Kiiwa:
- 00:01:945 >> End (1) here, fits better imo
- 00:06:025 >> This note feels like an extra note, it doesn't feel like it should be there it doesn't provide anything to the rhythm imo so delete it ?
- 00:09:625 >> End (1) here, feels better that way imo
- 00:49:225 >> Delete this note, it doesn't seem necessary at all imo
- 01:10:825 >> I always get confused here and think that these are 2 notes >< maybe try moving this slider to a position where it doesn't cause confusion ?
- 01:11:065 >> Instead of this slider which barely follows the music well, try putting a note here and then add notes at 01:11:545 and 01:11:785
- 02:36:025 >> End (3) here, it suits more imo

Beren:
- 01:07:705 >> Remove whistle ?
- 01:16:105 >> This stream doesn't sound very good imo
- 01:18:865 >> Move (5) here ?
- 02:11:545 >> This is very tricky because unless you look really carefully this slider looks like any other short slider I suggest you make it more noticeable or try something else
- 02:13:465 >> ^

* Pretty good as always Beren

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello! How do you make such lovely SB and maps ?! Forever loving how you map and SB >< (´∀｀*)

General:
- This is 3 min long and this is the short version ? lol full is 5m lol

SB:
- That bird looks a bit weird imo, try this one instead http://puu.sh/gZUr ? ^^ fix

grasscarp:
- 00:33:625 >> Uh, this new combo seems a little unnecessary, remove it ? k
- 01:28:825 >> Silence the spinner's end ? I think it would be better if you do this but is up to you k
- 02:29:785 >> New combo then remov new combo on the next slider k
- 02:47:545 >> ^ k

tutuhaha:
- 00:09:625 >> End (2) here and instead of the current slider that is (3) do this http://puu.sh/h6yy and notice the new combo too k
- 00:12:505 >> You should start the new combo here instead of where it is now because you started new combos before with this same sound so it would make more sense k
- 00:14:425 >> End (3) here and add a note on the next red tick k
- 01:07:705 >> Remove whistle k
- 01:38:905 >> New combo k
- 02:13:465 >> ^ k
- 02:17:785 >> End (3) here and add a note on the next red tick k

Kiiwa:
- 00:01:945 >> End (1) here, fits better imo
- 00:06:025 >> This note feels like an extra note, it doesn't feel like it should be there it doesn't provide anything to the rhythm imo so delete it ? k
- 00:09:625 >> End (1) here, feels better that way imo k
- 00:49:225 >> Delete this note, it doesn't seem necessary at all imo k
- 01:10:825 >> I always get confused here and think that these are 2 notes >< maybe try moving this slider to a position where it doesn't cause confusion ? k
- 01:11:065 >> Instead of this slider which barely follows the music well, try putting a note here and then add notes at 01:11:545 and 01:11:785 k
- 02:36:025 >> End (3) here, it suits more imo

Beren:
- 01:07:705 >> Remove whistle ? k
- 01:16:105 >> This stream doesn't sound very good imo sorry i like this ;_;
- 01:18:865 >> Move (5) here ?
- 02:11:545 >> This is very tricky because unless you look really carefully this slider looks like any other short slider I suggest you make it more noticeable or try something else k
- 02:13:465 >> ^ k

* Pretty good as always Beren

thanks! i love you<3

嗯

Taiko Oni Level . 7

Download: Akiko Shikata - Utsusemi (Short Ver.) (Beren) [Kana's Taiko Oni].osu

As requested by Kana, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

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[General]

The current offset seems quite off. I suggest using 1013. Remember to resnap all notes and move all green lines in every diffs after changing ~

[Kana's Taiko Oni]

01:10:105 ( 8 ) - I suggest moving the green line to 01:10:225 so that the acceleration will not occur in between 1/4s, which is quite confusing & bad-looking ~


The map is very nice overall ~ I like it

Rating : 9.5/10 ( Hard to map but still nice + 0.5, patterns + 0.5, hitsounds +0.5, feeling of the diff +0.5 )

Star and good luck ~

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Kana, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

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[General]

The current offset seems quite off. I suggest using 1013. Remember to resnap all notes and move all green lines in every diffs after changing ~

[Kana's Taiko Oni]

01:10:105 ( 8 ) - I suggest moving the green line to 01:10:225 so that the acceleration will not occur in between 1/4s, which is quite confusing & bad-looking ~

Suggested patterns

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

01:56:665 ( 44 ) - Blue note ?

02:57:145 ( 42 ~ 45 ) - ooooo ?

Can't mod much because I'll say this is really well-mapped ~

The map is very nice overall ~ I like it

Rating : 9.5/10 ( Hard to map but still nice + 0.5, patterns + 0.5, hitsounds +0.5, feeling of the diff +0.5 )

Star and good luck ~

All fixed!! thx aabc!

Download: Akiko Shikata - Utsusemi (Short Ver.) (Beren) [Kana's Taiko Oni].osu

Everything looks good
Bubbled

thank you

好好\o.o/

Even the SB doesn't ovreload, try to reduse it(like fading the door, hiding the background).
also there's a lyrics bug in 02:19:253

no major change made so it's quick.
Offset is different in [Taiko]. please fix it D:
or give a reason why D:

fix

hopes that's fine for now D:
ranked

>///< Thank you

哦液

grats~

congrats

Grats~

Congratz~

gratz~!

Congratz

恭喜摟

Congratz!!

恭喜Rank owo

ooooooooo!

StoryBoard好好>< rank gratz /~~~~~~~

omedeto!!

wow！！！！！！！！！！！！

awwwwww, Shikata is so cool!
congrats you with this rank

congrats!这图太酷了！

love this song

Awsome beatmap!! I love the song and sb! Great job!!

o~
01:20:453 (6) - 个人原因 从来就没点中一次 orz

Awesome sb, sir!