Hi breeze, random mod. I hope this can help you
[Normal]
00:00:969 (1) - Don't use 5% volume because it's unrankable. Just start the increase of volume with 10%
00:00:969 (1) - Still here, use finish on this slider's tail, it sounds very good since a new rhythm starts and you reach the 80% volume
00:14:782 (4) - Mh, since there should be a clap on 00:15:220 what about to make this rhythm adding the clap on it?
00:32:332 Not important but unsnapped green line
00:34:514 (1) - Placing this circle in the grid's center makes it become very confusing for the spinner-approachcircle of 00:32:322 (1). It's really hard to read for beginners, and since this is the easiest diff of your mapset you really should fix it
00:48:546 (1) - The same ^
01:23:188 (1) - How you can see from:
http://puu.sh/MP9y this slider is asymmetric. This is the right code:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386415220,328,83188,6,0,B|136:288|136:104|320:104|352:336|152:312|112:192,1,420,2|0
01:39:193 (3) - Nazi but snap the penultimate waypoint.
01:47:305 (2) - Add finish on this slider's end
02:00:899 (4) - Too loud these finishes omg @.@ Use 80% volume instead plz
02:05:284 (1) - Still asymmetric slider here. Making it symmetric would improve the flow of your map:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386417304,132,125284,6,0,B|272:176|328:248|352:208|336:160|264:224|288:280,1,180
02:11:642 (1) - This part is a bit hard for the easiest diff ç.ç What about to remove this circle to make it easier?
02:14:931 (3) - Still not good slider's shape here. Use this code instead:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386418440,56,134931,2,0,B|472:96|440:152|440:152|416:140|440:128|440:128|472:176|436:224,1,240
02:26:332 (1) - Dno't you think that this rhythm would be better? And easier to play.
02:33:348 (1) - Ugly slider:
392,64,153348,6,0,B|304:48|320:24|320:24|328:56|248:48,1,180,2|0
02:43:872 (5) - New combo and remove from 02:46:503 (1)
03:54:470 (3) - Yes i'm really bothering but.. this shape flows better:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386427180,172,234470,2,0,B|140:144|60:144|24:200|28:280|44:320|124:340|156:312|168:260|120:224,1,360
04:03:240 (1) - Same of 00:34:514 (1)
[Hard]
00:00:969 (1) - Same of Normal
01:03:894 (1,2,3,4) - Wrong spacing. You can keep a consistency spacing in this way too:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386437 <-- every circle is distant 0,60x from the other one (prev. and next)
256,356,63894,5,2
256,248,64332,1,2
256,140,64771,1,2
256,32,65209,1,2
01:50:375 (4) - Improve this blanket:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/38643956,176,110375,2,0,B|24:216|52:312|128:316,1,180,0|8
01:53:883 (2) - overlap better this slider's tail with 01:52:568 (4)'s head?
03:26:077 Reduce this break till the previous long white tick
04:26:919 (8) - New combo
Good luck with rank :3/