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Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai

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Topic Starter
DerekMcD
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 08, 2012 at 1:28:11 PM

Artist: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai
Title: Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~
Source: Suku Suku Pon!
Tags: [CSGA]Ar3sgice Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai
BPM: 137.55
Filesize: 3958kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ar3sgice's Hard (4.75 stars, 444 notes)
  2. Easy (1.38 stars, 163 notes)
  3. Normal (3.02 stars, 250 notes)
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song is from the late 90s from a Japanese TV station from Nayoga called, TV Tokai.

TV Tokai is one of Fuji TV/FNN affiate from Nagoya, Aichi; Mie, and Gufu areas.

Read and translate this, it'll explain everything. http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%AE%AE% ... 3%E5%AD%90

Sung by one of TV Tokai's former staff and current staff.

I need any background that can fit this song.

Easy: Me
Normal: Me
Hard: [CSGA]Ar3sgice
athiota33
[General]

SPOILER
I think volume 70% is too loud
Your offset seems wrong.

[Easy]

SPOILER
00:08:008 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle? to make it consistent
00:24:975 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:28:503 (1) - Lengthen until 00:29:812,it more fit
00:31:993 (1) - Lengthen until 00:33:302
00:56:647 (1) - Lengthen until 00:57:737
00:56:647 (1) - Move to 00:56:428 and add note at 00:57:737
01:27:845 (6) - NC
01:55:770 (4) - ^
02:27:405 (1) - Move to 02:27:187 and add note at 02:28:496
02:44:640 (5) - NC
The other part not finished yet,so i'll not mod it

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:12:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider end
00:14:322 (1) - Move to 00:14:540
00:14:976 (2) - Move to 00:15:194 and unsnapped slider end
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle instead of finish? too make it consistent
00:22:394 (3) - Make this note into a slider and end it at 00:22:830
00:22:830 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:49:447 (6) - NC
00:52:938 (10) - ^
01:17:809 (2) - I don't really like this slider form
01:20:863 (5) - NC?
01:27:845 (6) - ^
02:02:752 (6) - ^
02:06:242 (7) - ^
02:13:224 (6) - ^
02:16:715 (12) - ^

That's all~ Good luck!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

kokoroanime wrote:

I need a Hard guest diff from you. Let me know if you like the song. If not, you can just mod it.

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43418

Thank you.
sure~ ^^

I think the timing needs some checking though :D
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

athiota33 wrote:

[General]

SPOILER
I think volume 70% is too loud
Your offset seems wrong.

[Easy]

SPOILER
00:08:008 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle? to make it consistent
00:24:975 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:28:503 (1) - Lengthen until 00:29:812,it more fit
00:31:993 (1) - Lengthen until 00:33:302
00:56:647 (1) - Lengthen until 00:57:737
00:56:647 (1) - Move to 00:56:428 and add note at 00:57:737
01:27:845 (6) - NC
01:55:770 (4) - ^
02:27:405 (1) - Move to 02:27:187 and add note at 02:28:496
02:44:640 (5) - NC
The other part not finished yet,so i'll not mod it

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:12:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider end
00:14:322 (1) - Move to 00:14:540
00:14:976 (2) - Move to 00:15:194 and unsnapped slider end
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle instead of finish? too make it consistent
00:22:394 (3) - Make this note into a slider and end it at 00:22:830
00:22:830 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:49:447 (6) - NC
00:52:938 (10) - ^
01:17:809 (2) - I don't really like this slider form
01:20:863 (5) - NC?
01:27:845 (6) - ^
02:02:752 (6) - ^
02:06:242 (7) - ^
02:13:224 (6) - ^
02:16:715 (12) - ^

That's all~ Good luck!
All of them are done and thank ya.
No_Gu
I can't DL the audio for this map...full-sub please..
btw If you want to do m4m.mod this map→ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42413
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

No_Gu wrote:

I can't DL the audio for this map...full-sub please..
btw If you want to do m4m.mod this map→ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42413
It's done, re-download it.

It's too late, I already modded the other one. I'll keep your beatmap in case you want to mod this. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36764
No_Gu
request from my queue. do for m4m
no source for this?
1st kiai should start at 00:07:528 .
2nd kiai sould start at 01:17:347.
3rd kiai sould start at 02:41:128
[easy]
00:34:147 (3) - move whistle to 4?
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - move clap from 2 to the end of 1
01:03:601 (1) - follow vocal here feel a little off. also fix the shape..do you like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227679
337,288,63601,6,0,B|313:340|257:348|197:340|173:288,1,200
02:02:729 (4) - a little close to 3 .use grid 4 to fix it
02:30:874 (1) - end at 02:31:965?
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:07:311 (4) - clap at the end?
I think you miss much clap in this diff.I don't know whether you think clap is noisy or you really don't know where to add..

[normal]
00:24:547 (7) - 1 grid left to follow 5
00:41:565 (5) - not stack well with 3's end
00:48:547 (5) - NC for speed down
01:11:238 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:165 (1) - clap in the end
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:09:056 (6) - NC

btw I think this offset is a little off.
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue. do for m4m
no source for this?
1st kiai should start at 00:07:528 .
2nd kiai sould start at 01:17:347.
3rd kiai sould start at 02:41:128
[easy]
00:34:147 (3) - move whistle to 4?
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - move clap from 2 to the end of 1
01:03:601 (1) - follow vocal here feel a little off. also fix the shape..do you like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227679
337,288,63601,6,0,B|313:340|257:348|197:340|173:288,1,200
02:02:729 (4) - a little close to 3 .use grid 4 to fix it
02:30:874 (1) - end at 02:31:965?
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:07:311 (4) - clap at the end?
I think you miss much clap in this diff.I don't know whether you think clap is noisy or you really don't know where to add..

[normal]
00:24:547 (7) - 1 grid left to follow 5
00:41:565 (5) - not stack well with 3's end
00:48:547 (5) - NC for speed down
01:11:238 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:165 (1) - clap in the end
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:09:056 (6) - NC

btw I think this offset is a little off.
All done. Thank you. I kinda messed up the offset...
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

yay~ :)
Added, please be patient... I have to deal with my other beatmap first...
Tony
Hey there! Sorry for late response~

[General]
Obviously, the Timing is totally off.
So here's the right one:
BPM: 137,55
Offset: 7558
don't forget to resnap all notes and all inherited timing sections.
The beatmap needs a background image. Please find one!

[Let's Try! Easy!]
HP-1. The current setting is too high for an easy.
00:07:965 (2) - finish on start. It fits the song great
00:33:710 (2,4) - move them down a bit. It's ugly to see underlapped circles.
00:49:419 (1) - this slider has a random follow point. I think you added it by mistake. please remove it http://puu.sh/eYgL
01:03:601 (1) - it's hard for a newbie player to read this. move it 1/2 earlier, on the downbeat! That makes it readable
01:05:128 (2,3) - unreadable. why not try like this:
01:07:092 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
01:08:619 (2,3) - make them a slider
01:17:347 (1) - too early after a spinner. You should end that spinner 1/1 earlier. That would make it more easy for the player to read the notes.
01:48:765 (1) - delete the spinner. does not fit at all. and the next note(slider) is so early after that spinner
02:02:729 (4) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:28:910 (3,4) - unreadable. try like this
02:30:656 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
02:32:401 (2,3) - make them a slider
02:37:638 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start
02:51:601 (6) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:58:583 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start

[Let's try! Normal]
OD+1. The current settings are like in easy lol
00:48:546 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is unrankable. D: I think you should let the default SV and make it longer.
00:56:618 (1) - It doesn't fit at all, and it's kinda unreadable. move it 1/2
01:11:237 (3,4) - distance error. Fix it please :p
01:13:855 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
01:26:073 (3,4,5) - add whistles. It fits great there
01:31:309 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:
01:48:764 (1) - delete this spinner too. I don't get the usage of it.
02:37:637 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
02:55:091 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:

The beatmap turns out pretty good. Though it needs a lot of fixes.
Good luck with it!
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

Tony wrote:

Hey there! Sorry for late response~

[General]
Obviously, the Timing is totally off.
So here's the right one:
BPM: 137,55
Offset: 7558
don't forget to resnap all notes and all inherited timing sections.
The beatmap needs a background image. Please find one!

[Let's Try! Easy!]
HP-1. The current setting is too high for an easy.
00:07:965 (2) - finish on start. It fits the song great
00:33:710 (2,4) - move them down a bit. It's ugly to see underlapped circles.
00:49:419 (1) - this slider has a random follow point. I think you added it by mistake. please remove it http://puu.sh/eYgL
01:03:601 (1) - it's hard for a newbie player to read this. move it 1/2 earlier, on the downbeat! That makes it readable
01:05:128 (2,3) - unreadable. why not try like this:
01:07:092 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
01:08:619 (2,3) - make them a slider
01:17:347 (1) - too early after a spinner. You should end that spinner 1/1 earlier. That would make it more easy for the player to read the notes.
01:48:765 (1) - delete the spinner. does not fit at all. and the next note(slider) is so early after that spinner
02:02:729 (4) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:28:910 (3,4) - unreadable. try like this
02:30:656 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
02:32:401 (2,3) - make them a slider
02:37:638 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start
02:51:601 (6) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:58:583 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start

[Let's try! Normal]
OD+1. The current settings are like in easy lol
00:48:546 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is unrankable. D: I think you should let the default SV and make it longer.
00:56:618 (1) - It doesn't fit at all, and it's kinda unreadable. move it 1/2
01:11:237 (3,4) - distance error. Fix it please :p
01:13:855 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
01:26:073 (3,4,5) - add whistles. It fits great there
01:31:309 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:
01:48:764 (1) - delete this spinner too. I don't get the usage of it.
02:37:637 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
02:55:091 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:

The beatmap turns out pretty good. Though it needs a lot of fixes.
Good luck with it!

All of them are done.
Thank you.
Shana Aisaka
Hi ~ A request from Mod Queue ~ M4M . :)

[General]
I would like you to add [CSGA]Ar3sgice's diff as fast as you can. o.o" or no one will mod his diff. (lol) =w=''

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:23:261(3) = 1 grid to right ?
00:24:133(4) = your current place x288,y192 . change to x280,y176.
01:54:646(3) = move it to 01:54:864 ?
02:55:933(4) = 1 grid down?
03:09:455(2) = slider end till 03:10:327 ?
03:18:615(4) = your current place x288,192 . change to x272,y208.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:18:899(3) = x368,y32.
00:20:644(6) = x104,y336.
02:55:060(7) = NC

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
Change the name to "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]" not "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let`s Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let`s Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]"
00:17:590(1) = remove note.


That's all... @w@'' gomen nasai...
Can't mod well because my laptop is so damn lagg!! =w=''
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ A request from Mod Queue ~ M4M . :)

[General]
I would like you to add [CSGA]Ar3sgice's diff as fast as you can. o.o" or no one will mod his diff. (lol) =w='' Don't worry, I'll warn these people to download it... But I told everyone that I will...

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:23:261(3) = 1 grid to right ?
00:24:133(4) = your current place x288,y192 . change to x280,y176.
01:54:646(3) = move it to 01:54:864 ?
02:55:933(4) = 1 grid down?
03:09:455(2) = slider end till 03:10:327 ?
03:18:615(4) = your current place x288,192 . change to x272,y208.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:18:899(3) = x368,y32.
00:20:644(6) = x104,y336.
02:55:060(7) = NC

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
Change the name to "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]" not "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let`s Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let`s Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]"
00:17:590(1) = remove note.


That's all... @w@'' gomen nasai...
Can't mod well because my laptop is so damn lagg!! =w=''

Thank you.
Takos
Hi~ >w</
Mod request from my queue
PM me if you have any questions.
All Suggestions

Overall
  • You MUST have a background image.
    Don't forget to full submit
    I think you should use consistent Kiai times, it starts at different offsets for some of the diffs
Easy
  • 00:31:113 (3) - Remove Finish and add whistle?
    01:26:074 (3,4,5) - Add whistle?
    01:54:864 (3) - ^
    01:58:354 (4) - ^
    ]02:08:822 (4) - ^
    02:12:312 (4) - ^
    02:49:826 (3,4,5) - ^
Normal
  • AR+2?
    00:31:113 (4) - Remove Finish and add whistle?
    00:34:166 (3) - ^
    00:45:071 (5) - ^
    01:02:519 (6) - This slider plays better if it ends on a white tick
    01:06:881 (6) - Add NC
    01:07:099 (1) - Remove NC
    01:17:350 (1) - Add Finish?
    01:34:799 (1) - ^
    ]02:08:822 (5) - Remove Finish and add whistle?
    02:12:312 (5) - ^
    03:05:529 (4) - NC
    03:15:998 (1) - Add Finish?
Hard
  • 00:14:537 (1,2,3) - I think you can make this more symmetrical
    00:54:668 (5,6,7,8) - These notes aren't in a straight line
    01:17:350 (2) - Add Finish?
    01:34:799 (3) - Remove Finish?
    02:05:551 (7) - Delete this note and add note at 02:05:551 (7) - ?
    02:41:102 (2) - Add Finish?
    03:19:488 (1) - Add Finish at end?
old songs ftw
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
Mod request from my queue
PM me if you have any questions.
All Suggestions

Overall
  • You MUST have a background image. I am working on it, still. Unless they'll help me how to crop a BG picture into 4:3...
    Don't forget to full submit
    I think you should use consistent Kiai times, it starts at different offsets for some of the diffs
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</ Hi :)

Hard
  • 00:14:537 (1,2,3) - I think you can make this more symmetrical ok
    00:54:668 (5,6,7,8) - These notes aren't in a straight line fix
    01:17:350 (2) - Add Finish? fix
    01:34:799 (3) - Remove Finish? fix
    02:05:551 (7) - Delete this note and add note at 02:05:551 (7) - ? I don't get it... = = i think this rhythm is fine
    02:41:102 (2) - Add Finish? fix
    03:19:488 (1) - Add Finish at end? fix
old songs ftw
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
riffy
Mod request from my queue
is it really techno? D:


General
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:538, ends on 03:19:488 (Normal)
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:102, ends on 03:21:233 (Easy)
^ UNRANKABLE

Easy
00:11:047 (1) - not good for beginners
00:28:495 (1) - http://puu.sh/i0or looks better for me
00:31:985 (1) - ^
02:06:205 (1) - slider is ugly! reshape. ( http://puu.sh/i0qd looks better )
02:09:695 (1) - ^
02:16:674 (4) - not sure, that this shape is good for beginners
02:44:591 (1) - not good for beginners
03:05:529 (1) - ^

Normal
00:19:771 (4) - new combo
00:23:261 (4) - ^
00:37:219 (4) - http://puu.sh/i0sk looks better
v00:52:923 (1,2) - wtf? ugly sliders! reshape!
00:59:902 (1) - looks bad for me
01:33:054 (4) - new combo
01:53:992 (4) - not good
03:12:508 (6) - new combo

Hard
00:22:170 - circle here
03:14:253 (7) - x376 y 320
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
not bad
good luck
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

-Bakari- wrote:

Mod request from my queue
is it really techno? D:


General
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:538, ends on 03:19:488 (Normal)
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:102, ends on 03:21:233 (Easy)
^ UNRANKABLE

Easy
00:11:047 (1) - not good for beginners
00:28:495 (1) - http://puu.sh/i0or looks better for me
00:31:985 (1) - ^
02:06:205 (1) - slider is ugly! reshape. ( http://puu.sh/i0qd looks better )
02:09:695 (1) - ^
02:16:674 (4) - not sure, that this shape is good for beginners
02:44:591 (1) - not good for beginners
03:05:529 (1) - ^

Normal
00:19:771 (4) - new combo
00:23:261 (4) - ^
00:37:219 (4) - http://puu.sh/i0sk looks better
v00:52:923 (1,2) - wtf? ugly sliders! reshape!
00:59:902 (1) - looks bad for me
01:33:054 (4) - new combo
01:53:992 (4) - not good
03:12:508 (6) - new combo

Hard
00:22:170 - circle here
03:14:253 (7) - x376 y 320
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
not bad
good luck

2 kudosu? Lucky!!! But thanks for the mod, it's helpful. Few of them ignored until I'll think of what I'm gonna do.

Thank you.
AstroniX_old
hi~~here is my mod ^^

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:14:973 (2) - Make this slider end at 00:15:845
01:12:116 (2) - Too far from spinner,it is hard for the beginer to catch it
02:35:867 (2) - ^
02:57:677 (6) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

02:35:431 (2) - Add clap only at end
02:35:867 (3) - remove this note,add a slider and end at 02:36:303 with clap

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:11:920 (3) - Make this slider end at 00:12:128
00:45:507 (1) - I think this slider should end at 00:45:725 is well
01:34:908 (1) - Add a spinner and end at 1:36:543 is well
02:45:464 (4) - This slider may be a little long,short it and add a note at:2:46:118(see pic)

02:49:826 (5) - new combo

that's all.a nice map,good luck!
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

AstroniX wrote:

hi~~here is my mod ^^

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:14:973 (2) - Make this slider end at 00:15:845
01:12:116 (2) - Too far from spinner,it is hard for the beginer to catch it But how was that? Explain...
02:35:867 (2) - ^ ^
02:57:677 (6) - ^ ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

02:35:431 (2) - Add clap only at end
02:35:867 (3) - remove this note,add a slider and end at 02:36:303 with clap

that's all.a nice map,good luck!
Thank you.
Kryptogram
Hi There ! Here is my M4M >w< !

General:

- I Think that start a KIA time before the offset its a bad idea :S http://puu.sh/ikcQ

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:12:792 (4) - Make this spinner ends here 00:13:664 (x) And remove note like this http://puu.sh/ibTk
00:39:400 (2) - Make it more curve http://puu.sh/ibTS
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
01:24:766 (2) - ^
01:35:671 (x) - I think its unnescesary start the break here just add it before the spinner end http://puu.sh/ibUY
02:26:271 (5) - Add clap at the end
02:28:452 (2) - Add clap
02:31:941 (2) - ^
02:48:517 (2) - Add finish at the begin
03:02:476 (2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:42:454 (1) - Add finish at the begin
00:59:902 (1) - Follow this partner http://puu.sh/ik0d Instead of many repeats
01:17:350 (1) - Remove finish
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:23:872 (2) - Remove note for beter spread
02:24:308 (4) - ^
02:37:176 (5) - Add clap
02:41:538 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:48:517 (2) - ^
03:02:476 (2) - ^
03:09:455 (2) - ^
03:15:998 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner end here ? 03:21:233 (x)

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:07:558 (1) - Add clap at the end
00:14:537 (1) - ^
00:21:080 (4) - Add clap at the begin
00:41:145 (2) - Add clap at the begin remove clap in the end
02:36:412 (3) - Remove note ? and 02:36:303 (2) move it to ther place
02:45:464 (4) - Make a 1/1 slider and follow this partner ? http://puu.sh/ikaI

Be creative whit your sliders and good mapset ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck ! And Star !
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi There ! Here is my M4M >w< !

General:

- I Think that start a KIA time before the offset its a bad idea :S http://puu.sh/ikcQ

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:12:792 (4) - Make this spinner ends here 00:13:664 (x) And remove note like this http://puu.sh/ibTk
00:39:400 (2) - Make it more curve http://puu.sh/ibTS
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
01:24:766 (2) - ^
01:35:671 (x) - I think its unnescesary start the break here just add it before the spinner end http://puu.sh/ibUY
02:26:271 (5) - Add clap at the end
02:28:452 (2) - Add clap
02:31:941 (2) - ^
02:48:517 (2) - Add finish at the begin
03:02:476 (2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:42:454 (1) - Add finish at the begin
00:59:902 (1) - Follow this partner http://puu.sh/ik0d Instead of many repeats
01:17:350 (1) - Remove finish
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:23:872 (2) - Remove note for beter spread
02:24:308 (4) - ^
02:37:176 (5) - Add clap
02:41:538 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:48:517 (2) - ^
03:02:476 (2) - ^
03:09:455 (2) - ^
03:15:998 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner end here ? 03:21:233 (x)

Good Luck ! And Star !
Thank you so much. All of them are fixed and I'll do the General part later as I can.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
sorry that i don't have much time.. = =

-Bakari- wrote:

Hard
00:22:170 - circle here sry don't wanna add circle in my diff
03:14:253 (7) - x376 y 320 ..?
h clap

AstroniX wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:11:920 (3) - Make this slider end at 00:12:128 0v0 naww
00:45:507 (1) - I think this slider should end at 00:45:725 is well no.. listen to the song..
01:34:908 (1) - Add a spinner and end at 1:36:543 is well uhh spinner is good but I don't like 2 spinners in a row
02:45:464 (4) - This slider may be a little long,short it and add a note at:2:46:118(see pic) fixed in another way 0.0
02:49:826 (5) - new combo sure..

that's all.a nice map,good luck!

[Te][Amo] wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:07:558 (1) - Add clap at the end ?? there is one
00:14:537 (1) - ^ ^
00:21:080 (4) - Add clap at the begin finish is better i think
00:41:145 (2) - Add clap at the begin remove clap in the end added
02:36:412 (3) - Remove note ? and 02:36:303 (2) move it to ther place
02:45:464 (4) - Make a 1/1 slider and follow this partner ? http://puu.sh/ikaI wwwww
ok~

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
-kevincela-
Hi,sorry for the delay D:

[Let's Try! Easy!]


  1. 00:19:771 (2) - Flip Horizontally?
  2. 02:55:060 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe place these note to do a pattern like this?
  3. 03:14:253 (2) - Flip horizontally?

[Let's Try! Normal!]


  1. 00:14:973 (2) - Move the last waypoint 1 grid left
  2. 00:17:154 (5) - 2 grids down
  3. 00:47:688 (3) - You should put this here:
  4. 01:17:787 (2) - Move the last waypoint 1 grid left
  5. You should map this diff until 03:21:233 - ,like the other diffs.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]


  1. 00:42:018 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:42:454 (3) - Add NC
  3. 00:43:326 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 01:22:367 (6) - 1 grid down
  5. 02:46:554 (1) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

-kevincela- wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]


  1. 00:42:018 (1) - Remove NC ok
  2. 00:42:454 (3) - Add NC
  3. 00:43:326 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 01:22:367 (6) - 1 grid down it follows the music...
  5. 02:46:554 (1) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider no...
[/notice]
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
JauiPlaY
Hi
Some suggestions:

[General]
No source?

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:09:302 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
00:42:454 (1) - Add finish to the beginning?
01:01:647 (4) - New combo.
01:19:095 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
01:31:309 (1) - Finish.
02:42:846 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point.
03:03:784 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
03:19:488 (1) - Finish.

[Let's Try! Normal!]
AR+1
00:11:047 (1) - Finish.
02:28:888 (5) - ^
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point.
01:01:647 (5) - New combo.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:45:507 (1) - Sounds weird for me.
00:48:997 (1) - ^
01:28:037 (2) - Remove this one.
01:29:782 (2) - ^
01:34:799 (3) - How about to set a spinner here?
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point.

That's all.
Btw is there any relationship between the background and the song?
spboxer3
from IRC request

[general]


  • Settings
  1. unify kiai time ~ (Normal)

[Let's Try! Easy!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
mapping
  1. 00:07:557 (1,2) - 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
  2. 00:14:537 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:40:709 (3) - awkward slider~
  4. 01:17:350 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  5. 01:24:330 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:52:247 (1) - awkward slider~
  7. 02:41:102 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  8. 02:48:081 (1,2) - ^
  9. 03:02:040 (1,2) - ^
  10. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:54:668 (2,1) -
  2. 02:06:205 (1,2) -
mapping
  1. 00:18:026 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing~[nazi]
  2. 00:25:006 (1) - end at 00:25:006 (1) - ? I think you can set it on downbeat~
  3. 00:41:581 (5,1) - awkward pattern~Don't overlaps slider or note in Normal plz >"<
  4. 00:52:050 (4,1) - ^
  5. 00:52:923 (1,2) - stack slider head(1) and slider tail [nazi]
  6. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
  7. 01:24:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  8. 02:41:538 (2) - not regular pattern~ you can let it much better and same suggest 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) -
  9. 02:48:517 (2) - ^
  10. 03:02:040 (1,2) - rhythm issue~
  11. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:19:749 (3,1) -
    mapping
  2. none~

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
good luck~
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

spboxer3 wrote:

from IRC request

[general]


  • Settings
  1. unify kiai time ~ (Normal)

[Let's Try! Easy!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
mapping
  1. 00:07:557 (1,2) - 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
  2. 00:14:537 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:40:709 (3) - awkward slider~ Fixed!
  4. 01:17:350 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  5. 01:24:330 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:52:247 (1) - awkward slider~ Fixed!
  7. 02:41:102 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  8. 02:48:081 (1,2) - ^
  9. 03:02:040 (1,2) - ^
  10. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:54:668 (2,1) - Fixed!
  2. 02:06:205 (1,2) - Fixed!
mapping
  1. 00:18:026 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing~[nazi]
  2. 00:25:006 (1) - end at 00:25:006 (1) - ? I think you can set it on downbeat~
  3. 00:41:581 (5,1) - awkward pattern~Don't overlaps slider or note in Normal plz >"< Fixed!
  4. 00:52:050 (4,1) - ^
  5. 00:52:923 (1,2) - stack slider head(1) and slider tail [nazi]
  6. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
  7. 01:24:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  8. 02:41:538 (2) - not regular pattern~ you can let it much better and same suggest 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) -
  9. 02:48:517 (2) - ^
  10. 03:02:040 (1,2) - rhythm issue~
  11. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^
red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
good luck~
Thank you so much for modding and you got good suggestions. But I ignored some of it because it follows the beat.

We'll see.
Leorda
Hello

General
* Inconsistent Kiai time http://puu.sh/j0NX


Let's Try! Easy!
00:52:923 (4) - New combo?
01:24:766 (2) - Make curve like 01:10:371 (1)
02:16:674 (4) - New combo?


Let's Try! Normal!

03:02:040 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think these part needs more clap hitsound


Others are fine to me
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Leorda wrote:

Hello

General
* Inconsistent Kiai time http://puu.sh/j0NX Ah... Fixed. Thank you so much for showing me this.


Let's Try! Easy!
00:52:923 (4) - New combo? Added.
01:24:766 (2) - Make curve like 01:10:371 (1) Fixed.
02:16:674 (4) - New combo? Added.


Let's Try! Normal!

03:02:040 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think these part needs more clap hitsound Added.


Others are fine to me
Thank you for modding this. You must be the first MAT who mods this. Come back for a recheck if you want to.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:45:507 (1) - Sounds weird for me. it's fine for me... it is in the music
00:48:997 (1) - ^
01:28:037 (2) - Remove this one. o.o no
01:29:782 (2) - ^
01:34:799 (3) - How about to set a spinner here?
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point. don't see timing point maybe already fixed o.o

sp3 wrote:

Overlaps~

01:19:749 (3,1) - www there is no way around... so i'd keep this
www
BurNing
1.Source is empty.I don't know why.
2.Add 1or2 new colours.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:14:101 - add a circle
00:10:611 - add a circle
00:52:923 (1) - i think use 2 slider instead will be better
02:16:674 (1) - ^
02:37:612 (1) - the spinner is asynchronous with vocal,i think add 2 circle go with "go go" and the spinner can be a little short
02:58:550 (1) - ^
Easy is all.Not bad.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:13:446 (5) - delete this circle
01:05:137 (3,4,5,1,2) - cover is a lot
01:19:095 (3) - like this:http://puu.sh/j6yN
01:23:239 (5) - delete this circle
01:24:330 (1) - use a circle instead
02:14:711 (4) - delete this circle
02:28:234 (3) - delete this circle
02:30:633 (8,1) - too closed,change like this:http://puu.sh/j6CW
02:46:990 (5) - delete this circle
03:07:928 - delete this circle
Normal is all.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:13:882 (3) - not comfortable
01:09:935 (1,2) - too closed
This diff,on the whole, it wasn't bad.
---------------------------------------
All of this ,sorry for my poor english...

M4M:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45775
popner
[Overall]

tag is [CSGA]Ar3sgice, not [csga]ar3sgice or [CSGA]aR3sGICE.
It's better to have 1 more break.


[Easy]

00:07:994 (2) - move to 00:08:212 and shorten 1/2 beat. or ↓
00:09:302 (3) - lengthen 1/2 beat.
00:14:973 (2) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
01:17:787 (2,3) - ^
02:32:378 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit 02:31:941 (2)
02:41:538 (2,3) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
03:02:476 (2,3) - ^


[Normal]

00:09:302 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit end of 00:07:994 (2)?
00:43:326 (2) - better if stack with/depart from 00:41:581 (5)
01:03:392 (x) - add a note
01:17:787 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].
01:59:226 (1) - better if stack with/depart from 01:57:481 (4)
02:27:143 (1) - 1/2 beat later, and add a note at 02:27:143 (x)
02:41:538 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].


[Hard]

01:04:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - Skip here.
01:10:698 (3) - It's not suitable for the rhythm.
01:18:005 (3) - better if not lay on 01:18:659 (1)
01:55:300 (1) - nazi - 1 grid upside.
02:00:862 (1) - not suitable for the rhythm.
03:10:764 (1,2,3) - It's too close. (or antijump)
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Kannatsuki wrote:

1.Source is empty.I don't know why. It don't have a source because it was from one of Nagoya, Aich'si/Gifu's/Mie's TV stations
2.Add 1or2 new colours. These tree colors are from the logo of the TV station in Nagoya. http://www.tokai-tv.com/ Check out.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:14:101 - add a circle No thanks...
00:10:611 - add a circle ^
00:52:923 (1) - i think use 2 slider instead will be better Nice one, but we'll see.
02:16:674 (1) - ^ ^
02:37:612 (1) - the spinner is asynchronous with vocal,i think add 2 circle go with "go go" and the spinner can be a little short We'll see.
02:58:550 (1) - ^ ^
Easy is all.Not bad.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:13:446 (5) - delete this circle No thanks...
01:05:137 (3,4,5,1,2) - cover is a lot We'll see.
01:19:095 (3) - like this:http://puu.sh/j6yN Not gonna fit.
01:23:239 (5) - delete this circle We'll see.
01:24:330 (1) - use a circle instead ^
02:14:711 (4) - delete this circle No thanks...
02:28:234 (3) - delete this circle ^
02:30:633 (8,1) - too closed,change like this:http://puu.sh/j6CW We'll see.
02:46:990 (5) - delete this circle No thanks...
03:07:928 - delete this circle ^
Normal is all.

M4M:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45775
Thank you, I'll mod it later.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Kannatsuki wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:13:882 (3) - not comfortable i think it's ok
01:09:935 (1,2) - too closed ???

popner wrote:

[Hard]

01:04:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - Skip here. what do you mean..? jump is ok
01:10:698 (3) - It's not suitable for the rhythm. ..??
01:18:005 (3) - better if not lay on 01:18:659 (1) this one is fine I think
01:55:300 (1) - nazi - 1 grid upside. changed some spacing = =
02:00:862 (1) - not suitable for the rhythm. ..??
03:10:764 (1,2,3) - It's too close. (or antijump) anti-jump i think
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

popner wrote:

[Overall]

tag is [CSGA]Ar3sgice, not [csga]ar3sgice or [CSGA]aR3sGICE.
It's better to have 1 more break.


[Easy]

00:07:994 (2) - move to 00:08:212 and shorten 1/2 beat. or ↓
00:09:302 (3) - lengthen 1/2 beat.
00:14:973 (2) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
01:17:787 (2,3) - ^
02:32:378 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit 02:31:941 (2)
02:41:538 (2,3) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
03:02:476 (2,3) - ^


[Normal]

00:09:302 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit end of 00:07:994 (2)?
00:43:326 (2) - better if stack with/depart from 00:41:581 (5)
01:03:392 (x) - add a note
01:17:787 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].
01:59:226 (1) - better if stack with/depart from 01:57:481 (4)
02:27:143 (1) - 1/2 beat later, and add a note at 02:27:143 (x)
02:41:538 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].

Thank you for modding. I skipped some of them because it's follows the music to me.
winber1
Ar3sgice's

00:12:574 - this note needs to be mapped imo to follow vocals better.
00:13:882 (3) - works better if you removed repeat and added a note at 00:14:319. It's easier to read and feels more correct.
00:41:145 (2,3,4) - switch notes around http://puu.sh/jS4Q
01:10:371 (2,3) - it doesn't fit very well imo. Better to use red ticks.
02:34:559 (4) - like my first suggestion. if you mapped the middle note it would sound better imo.
02:43:283 (6) - some reason i just hate the sound of this emptiness. if you are going to use a blue tick in the previous slider, then in my opinion this truly calls for something like this http://puu.sh/jS6p
03:06:838 (4) - something similar to above?


Normal

00:16:282 (3) - i would add a new combo to emphasize the music
00:25:006 (1) - much better to end the spinner at 00:27:623 - imo
01:19:095 (3,4) - turn this into a slider
01:26:074 (3) - new combo?
02:49:826 (3) - ^
03:05:093 - i'd add a note
03:10:764 (3) - new combo?

Easy

00:16:282 (3) - new combo like normal?
01:26:074 (3) - ^... and etc..
02:02:716 (1,2) - spacing seems just a tad too big.

sorry for taking so long. been kinda busy, and lazy as well. Not much to suggest.
hope this helps a bit~~
mancuso_JM_
Well, I'll try to don't be lazy anymore, Mod4Mod from my queue :P. Sorry for long delay

[General:]

- Hitsounds: The hitsounds sounds a bit low in all difficulties, try to increase at least in 10%
- Kiai Time: The last Kiai Time have to finish in 03:19:488, because it's more consistent with previous once
- Break: 01:34:908 (Break)- Drag this Break to 01:36:543, fit better with music
- BG: Maybe you can change the BG (.png) to .jpg, to occupate less space in your folder. It's easy to do, but you decide it (if you make that don't forget to do Full Submit)

[Let's Try! Easy!:]

00:11:047 (1): Following the music, this note need an emphasis. To make that, I think that you have to add a Finish hitsound in this note
00:14:973 (2): If you follow the Vocal, this Slider sounds a little off- rhythm, because the word ''Try'' starts in 00:15:191 (Red Tick), so move the start of this Slider to here and after that make it 1/2 smaller to finish in 00:15:845
00:21:516 (1,2,3,4): Those notes doesn't fit very well woth music, I know that it's an Easy pattern for New players but you also can make easy pattern with Sliders that fit better with music in this case, I suggest to make something like that:
00:28:495 (1): You start a New Section, so, it's a good idea to add a Finish hitsound at the beginning of this Slider
00:31:985 (1): (^)
00:49:433 (1): (A BIT NAZI)- It's better if you make a symetric Slider in this case. Try to make something like that:
SPOILER
1st Slider Point: x:464 y:96
2nd Slider Point: x:456 y:48
3rd Slider Point: x:392 y:8
4th Slider Point: x:328 y:48
5th Slider Point: x:320 y:96
If you make that, don't forget to Copy/Paste to make the next Slider (3)
00:55:976 (1,1): This Overlap between those Sliders looks bad, try to make another think to don't overlap the Sliders
01:24:766 (2): Two things to poke at in this Slider:
1st: This Slider doesn't look very fine to play, I think that you have to make another shape
2nd: To be more consistent, add a Finish at the beginnig of this Slider
02:55:060 (1,2,3,4): Same as 00:21:516
03:15:998 (1,2,3,4): (^)
03:19:488 (Spin): Add a finish in this Spinner, it's more consistent with other difficulties

[Let's Try! Normal!:]

- Setting:
--> The Approach Rate is a bit low in this difficulty, also it's the same as Easy difficulty, so, I suggest to increase it by 1 Tick (AR+1)

00:11:047 (1): Add a Finish Hitsound, same reason as Easy
00:28:495 (1): Two things to poke at in this Slider
1stSounds really bad, when the ball hit in Reverse arrow, this doesn't fit with music. In this case I suggest to short this Slider in 1/2, so, the Reverse arrow would be in 00:28:932, after that add a note in the Blank Space (00:29:804).
2nd: You also can add a Finish at the beginning of this Slider to emphasize the New Section
00:31:985 (1): (^). The same things as above
00:38:092 (5): Looks better if you make a Flip Vertically in this Slider (Ctrl + J) in this Slider, if you make that, move the Slider to x:192 y:136
00:50:742 (2): Following your other patterns, this note would have a Clap
00:57:721 (x): Add a note with Clap, fit perfect wit the Vocal
01:12:988 (5): The Vocal change here, so, it's better if you add a New Combo
01:34:799 (Spin): This is inconsistent with the other difficulties, becuase you map to here before the break. I think that it's better if you make consistent that, so, replace the Spinner to a Circle.
02:28:88 (6): A Combo with 9 notes is too much in a Normal difficulty, so, add a New Combo here to short this Combo, also I can listen a change in Vocal
02:32:378 (5): This rhythm change it's a bit notorial, it's better if you try to add a New Combo
02:46:336 (4): Add a Clap at the end of this Slider, to make the same pattern as Previous Kiai
02:47:209 (6): (^)
02:56:369 (x): Add a Note with clap, fit with vocal perfectly
02:56:805 (4): Add a New Combo, to be more consistent with previous Kiais Time
03:10:764 (3,4,5): Maybe you have to add Whistle in those notes, because you make that in other patterns when said ''go,go,go''

Easy/Normal: Hmm... I think that you can plays better with the Hitsounds, sometimes you can add more hitsounds, but they don't appear. I think that you need more mods to polish that, the other things are quite good

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!:]

- Difficulty Name: To be more consistent with other difficulties, you have to remove the last !, to be Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!

- Settings:
--> The Overall Difficulty looks a bit low, try to increase it by 1 Tick (OD+1)
--> The Lifebar reduce a bit low when you fail in some notes, so, try to increase the HP Drain Rate by 1 Tick too (HD+1)
--> Also, If you're not going to make an Insane difficulty, try to Increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick, because the patterns looks more readable (AR+1)

00:40:709 (1,2): I don't like how to work that, try to make something like that:
00:54:668 (5): I perceive a Vocal Change, so, it's better if you add a New Combo here.
01:24:111 (4): (NAZI)- Move this note 1 grid left (Grid Level 3) to occupate the same position as previous (6)
01:34:799 (3): Add a Finish Hitsound, fit fine with the end of this Section

Nice diff in General, the problem are the settings that look a bit low, otherwise looks fine.

Well, That's all. Nice map in General :P
Good Luck with your map ;)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

winber1 wrote:

Ar3sgice's

00:12:574 - this note needs to be mapped imo to follow vocals better. inside slider..?
00:13:882 (3) - works better if you removed repeat and added a note at 00:14:319. It's easier to read and feels more correct. tried, it makes the pattern ugly ..
00:41:145 (2,3,4) - switch notes around http://puu.sh/jS4Q i see, fixed.
01:10:371 (2,3) - it doesn't fit very well imo. Better to use red ticks. it follows the song ^^
02:34:559 (4) - like my first suggestion. if you mapped the middle note it would sound better imo. no I don't like it
02:43:283 (6) - some reason i just hate the sound of this emptiness. if you are going to use a blue tick in the previous slider, then in my opinion this truly calls for something like this http://puu.sh/jS6p sorry I don't like it = =
03:06:838 (4) - something similar to above?

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!:]

- Difficulty Name: To be more consistent with other difficulties, you have to remove the last !, to be Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard! well that one ! is not so important, also the name is longer... but consistency is good anyways @kokokoanime change if you like

- Settings:
--> The Overall Difficulty looks a bit low, try to increase it by 1 Tick (OD+1)
--> The Lifebar reduce a bit low when you fail in some notes, so, try to increase the HP Drain Rate by 1 Tick too (HD+1)
--> Also, If you're not going to make an Insane difficulty, try to Increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick, because the patterns looks more readable (AR+1) it's just a Hard diff ._. I think it's fine, maybe I'll change if someone else says that. For approach rate, ar7 looks slow in streams, but ar8 looks fast in parts with no streams =.=

00:40:709 (1,2): I don't like how to work that, try to make something like that: yea.
00:54:668 (5): I perceive a Vocal Change, so, it's better if you add a New Combo here. ok
01:24:111 (4): (NAZI)- Move this note 1 grid left (Grid Level 3) to occupate the same position as previous (6) ok
01:34:799 (3): Add a Finish Hitsound, fit fine with the end of this Section

Nice diff in General, the problem are the settings that look a bit low, otherwise looks fine.

Well, That's all. Nice map in General :P
Good Luck with your map ;)
Thanks for modding ^^

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
Hinsvar
Oh hi. Guess I'll just go straight to the mod.

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. The kiai time is already flashing from the zeroth second on all diffs, while it was clearly set to the beginning of the offset. Funny. Well, don't really care about this one anyway :P
  2. Increase the volume on all diffs by 20%?
>Let's Try! Easy!
  1. Can't believe I SS'd this with only my mouse (I'm typically a mouse-keyboard player) (lol) Well, it's Easy after all...
  2. This diff only has two kiai times while the other has three. What. Insert the last kiai time here, please ;)
  3. 00:07:557 (1) - Clap?
  4. 00:42:018 - Add a note (circle) here and give it Whistle?
  5. 00:45:071 (3) - Whistle?
  6. 01:10:371 (1,2) - Whistle at the end?
  7. 02:34:122 (1,2) - ^
>Let's Try! Normal!
  1. 00:07:557 (1) - Clap?
>Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!
  1. 00:47:688 (1,2,3) - This is a good chance to make a jump, and yet you made an anti-jump... :roll: Whatever; anti-jump works better, actually.
  2. 01:04:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't know, but this star seems a bit random.
Uh... maybe just that. Can't stretch this for too long :P

Good luck on the way 8-)
kosiga
hi~ kokoroanime :)

Japanese notation title: Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ is correct. maybe xD

But, I think that there does not need to be it :D

Add the tag How is this? ...Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai

no kudosu and Good luck~ ;)
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

kosiga wrote:

hi~ kokoroanime :)

Japanese notation title: Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ is correct. maybe xD

But, I think that there does not need to be it :D

Add the tag How is this? ...Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai

no kudosu and Good luck~ ;)

Thank you. BTW, could you mod this beatmap plz?
kosiga

kokoroanime wrote:

Thank you. BTW, could you mod this beatmap plz?
yea.

Please wait for a while :3

i will mod this map ;)
kosiga
Hi~ kokoroanime :)

from m4m queue~

here my mod~

[General]
  1. Song folder - You have two osb.file ><. remove it ! >:(
  2. KIAI TIME - opening KIAI TIME - to put Timing Points are not well :? remove Timing Points KIAI TIME. and add Inherited Points to 00:07:994( but Hard diff it is better for 00:07:558 ). and 2nd KIAI TIME(01:17:350) move to 01:17:787, 3rd KIAI TIME(02:41:102) move to 02:41:538 ( Do not move Hard diff.Hard diff is good as now ) because Easy,Normal diff establishes a strong sound at the position.
[Let's Try! Easy!]
  1. 00:15:191 (2) - finish is unnecessary if you match it with vocal. But it is recommended that you move to 00:14:973 the beginning, put it there to finish
  2. 00:42:454 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  3. 01:31:309 (1) - add finish
  4. 01:56:173 - green line has two overlapping. plz remove one
  5. 02:06:205 (1) - remove clap to start of the slider.
[Let's Try! Normal!]
  1. 01:06:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Suggestion of the hitsound: (01:03:392 (1) - add finish), 01:06:881 (1) - add finish instead to whistle, 01:08:626 (4) - remove finish, 01:09:935 (6) - add whistle instead to finish, 01:10:371 (1) - add finish
  2. 01:34:799 (5) - add finish
  3. 02:28:016 (1) - remove NC and 02:28:888 (4) - add NC is better
  4. 02:55:933 (3,4) - I think it is better to change slider. ( same as 03:16:870 (3) )
  5. 03:05:529 (4) - add NC ( same as 02:44:591 (1) )
[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard]
  1. 00:44:199 (5) - add NC and 00:45:507 (1) - remove NC and 00:45:944 (2) - add NC. I think it is better to match with vocal or downbeat
  2. 00:52:705 (1) - remove NC and 00:52:923 (2) - add NC
  3. 00:59:466 (1) - remove NC and 00:59:902 (2) - add NC
  4. 01:01:429 (1) - remove NC and 01:01:647 (2) - add NC
  5. 01:06:445 (1) - remove NC and 01:06:881 (2) - add NC
  6. 01:09:935 (1) - remove NC and 01:10:371 (2) - add NC
  7. 01:10:371 (2,3) - If you wish to use the rhythm like this here, 01:11:243 (5,6,7) - Should be done at the same rhythm, such as here. The different rhythm is only one place I feel a little strange :( But I would recommend to make a normal rhythm of both ><
  8. 01:53:992 (5) - add NC and 01:55:300 (1) - remove NC and 01:55:736 (2) - add NC
  9. 01:57:481 (6) - add NC and 01:57:808 (1) - remove NC
  10. 02:00:862 (1) - i think this pattern does not match here. 02:00:753,02:00:862,02:00:971 - add note is better IMO
  11. 02:20:164 (9) - add NC and 02:20:818 (1) - remove NC
  12. 02:30:633 (8) - add NC and 02:31:287 (1) - remove NC
  13. 02:53:315 (5) - use 02:51:571 (5) - copy slider( Ctrl+C,V,H,J ) because does not match the flow of the slider.
  14. 02:58:550 (1) - spinner end 03:00:295 ?
  15. 03:01:167 (1,2) - remove finish and 03:02:040 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. is better IMO
  16. 03:15:998 (5) - add NC and 03:16:870 (1) - remove NC
nice.

Good luck~ :oops:
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Changed a few new combos, don't like streams with different color though

01:10:371 (2,3) follows vocal i think

The osz file name is too long now, I think? makes it unable to load :o

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!].osu
Mythol
M4M

[General]
-5 offset?

[Easy]
00:14:973 (2) - Extend to white tick?
01:20:404 - I think a note should be here.
02:44:155 - ^
02:44:591 (1) - Replace with 1/1 slider?
03:05:093 - Same as the 2 previous suggestions.

[Normal]
00:11:047 (1) - 1/2 slider?
01:12:116 (4) - 1/1 slider?
01:20:404 - Note
02:42:846 (3,4) - I liked the slider you had here in previous choruses.. I think its fine to use it again since it sounds alot better than this, even though its repetitive...
03:05:093 - Note

[Hard]
00:13:882 (3) - One repeat is enough..
00:25:333 (1) - Replace with a note?
00:26:751 (3) - This should stop at the red tick, and the 4 should start at the blue. Also extend 4 to 00:27:405. Listen at 25% playback~
01:02:956 (5) - You should move this so the end of the repeat leads into the next slider.
01:06:445 (1) - ^
01:10:371 (2) - Note instead.
01:16:914 (1,2) - Like thisssssss for the ones above^ :P
02:14:929 (9) - Change to 1 repeat, and add 2 notes after or a slider? Personally, I hate multiple repeats. ><
02:18:419 (1) - Shorten to a 1/1 repeat, and add a note?
02:26:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete 3 and 4, move 5 to where 3 was, and add a note on the empty red tick? The stream doesn't fit very well.

Good luck~
ziin
*yawn*
[general]
-20 offset. It's so late it's like pulling teeth.

[easy]
01:55:736 (1) - watch your spacing on these. when you're really close to the next note, it's easy to tell the difference between 0.8x and 0.76x
02:06:205 (1) - this doesn't fit. use 1/1 or 2/1 here
02:09:695 (1) - ^
02:16:674 (1) - can you put a little bit more effort into your sliders? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289735
02:21:472 (2) - spacing. Consider not using grid snap.

[normal]
00:31:985 (1) - this overlaps (3) when it doesn't need to
01:12:116 (4) - with just the tiniest bit of effort, you can really make your sliders better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289740
01:32:617 - this is normal, you can put a note here
03:05:529 (1,1) - make your new combos consistent with how you did it before.

[ar3sgice]
00:12:356 (4) - shorten 1/2, add a circle with new combo where the end of (4) was.
00:51:178 (3,5) - you can make it so that the circles don't overlap the slider tracks.
01:10:371 (2) - (3) can be a slider, but this one really shouldn't be.
01:12:116 (1) - the end of this is off of the grid, which I consider unrankable.

star because it's about time you get something ranked.
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

ziin wrote:

*yawn*
[general]
-20 offset. It's so late it's like pulling teeth. I'll get to it as I can.

[easy]
01:55:736 (1) - watch your spacing on these. when you're really close to the next note, it's easy to tell the difference between 0.8x and 0.76x Fixed.
02:06:205 (1) - this doesn't fit. use 1/1 or 2/1 here Fixed.
02:09:695 (1) - ^ ^
02:16:674 (1) - can you put a little bit more effort into your sliders? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289735 Fixed.
02:21:472 (2) - spacing. Consider not using grid snap. Fixed.

[normal]
00:31:985 (1) - this overlaps (3) when it doesn't need to Fixed!
01:12:116 (4) - with just the tiniest bit of effort, you can really make your sliders better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289740 Fixed, but in a way I wanted because it fits perfect for that.
01:32:617 - this is normal, you can put a note here You're right, added.
03:05:529 (1,1) - make your new combos consistent with how you did it before. Fixed!!

star because it's about time you get something ranked. And get something bubbled first.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
You changed your name orz..

Fixed first 3 in Mythol's and the unrankable stuff in ziin's mod

02:18:399 (1) - i like this style.

Also you may want to change the map's title shorter, it doesn't load if you download as .osz with the full name.

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ (Koro McAlpine) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!].osu
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