Hi. If possible, try looking for a better mp3. This one is quite low-quality. Offset: 675
Be sure to resnap all notes and kiai sections.
Easy: Pretty much nothing of concern.
- 00:03:181 (2) - Why did you suddenly use this kind of slider?
Normal: Couple of suggestions. Take them if you like them.
- 00:00:681 (1) - Add a repeat.
- 00:01:514 (2) - Delete this note.
- 00:01:931 (2) - Shift this note to - 00:01:722 -
- 00:04:014 (1) - Shoften to 1/4 slider. Remove hit-finish hitsound. Then add a repeat.
- 00:05:264 (2) - Shift to - 00:05:056 - . If you like this rhythm that I suggested, then you can do this for similar parts in the song.
- 00:23:597 (6) - Minor spacing thing.
- 01:00:674 (5) - New Combo.
- 01:13:389 (5) - To be honest, these kinds of sliders are too short for you to consider using sliderpoints.
So you should probably just do a normal slider like this instead:
- 01:17:764 (6) - 2 grids right.
- 01:20:681 (3,4) - Rather you do this:
- 01:29:431 (4) - 1 grid left.
Cookiezi's Hard:Just maybe some of the slider shapes can be better. eg. - 00:23:181 (7) -
Pretty simple map, overall.
- 00:19:222 (1) - Looks off. How about this:
- 00:39:847 (4,5) - Suggestion:
- 00:40:680 (6) - Try following this example, so in the future you know how to make good curves:
- 00:41:514 (7,8) - Looks odd. I suggest that if you want the note placed there, then you should follow what I did, so the slider leads to the note:
- 00:44:014 (4,5,6) - Overlapping here isn't nice. Try this:
- 01:05:889 (1) - There isn't really a 1/4 note at this part, but you can keep this.
- 01:13:389 (8) - 6 grids right.
- 01:30:472 (1,2) - Suggestion:
- 01:31:306 (1,2) - ^ Might as well do the same here.
Cookiezi's Insane: Map is mostly symmetrical and follows an easy structure.
Nothing too bad....just, your earlier New Combo's are all wrong. lol
- 00:04:847 (3) - Hmm. Minor suggestion. Remove all the soft-hitwhistles except for the last repeat.
- 00:08:806 (6) - New Combo.
- 00:09:639 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 00:14:014 (5) - New Combo.
- 00:14:222 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 00:15:680 (9) - New Combo.
- 00:15:889 (1) - Remove New Combo & 1 grid down.
- 00:25:681 (6) - New Combo.
- 00:26:097 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 00:28:597 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 00:28:806 (10) - New Combo.
- 00:29:847 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 00:30:472 (10) - New Combo.
- 00:30:889 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 00:31:306 (1) - ^
- 00:37:556 (2) - 1 grid up.
- 00:38:806 (6) - New Combo.
- 00:39:222 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- 00:40:264 (4,5,6) - 1 grid up.
- 01:07:347 - Unsnapped inherited timing point. For kiai time, you have to make sure it is properly snapped.
That's it.