M a n a wrote:

Hi~
Random mod

[General]

Combo colour 1 & 3 are a bit similar ><,change it with another color?

[Easy]

00:00:681 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - A bit dissapointed with the slider ><
00:54:014 - Don't make the volume 100% it's noisy IMO
00:57:347 - ^
01:00:681 - ^

[Normal]

You use too much finish sound,it's noisy...and you add finish in the wrong place.
00:55:680 (4) - Inconsistent spacing,1 grid up?
01:24:847 (3) - ^
01:29:847 (5) -

[Hard]

AR -1 or -2? AR 8 it's too fast for Hard diff ;_;
00:12:347 (1) - Add finish instead of whistle? (in the begining)
00:40:681 ~ 01:33:180 - Don't make the volume 100% it's noisy IMO

[Insane]

I don't like the way you use triplets,it makes overmapped ;_; Well,maybe it just me? (Because I'm noob ;w;")
00:52:347 (1) - Iconsistent spacing,maybe 1 grid up? or 1 grid left?

That's all~
Star~
And good luck~

wcx19911123 wrote:

yo

[General]
timing is really off imo, offset=671(-10) plz
lead-in=3000 is too huge, use 2000 plz

[Easy]
HD-1 plz, it's now too high as Easy diff
01:33:181 - remove finish, it sound really odd to me

[Normal]
00:03:597 - the finish sound really odd, and doesn't fit the song at all, remove it plz
00:04:431 - ^
00:05:264 - ^
00:06:097 - ^
00:11:514 - ^
00:14:847 - ^
00:15:681 - ^
ok, I ignore the finish from now on.. there are too many this kind of finish, they sound really odd
00:34:014 - and I don't know why here hasn't finish.. add finish here plz
patterns are fine in this diff, but the hitsounds are terrible.. I suggest to remap hitsounds in this diff..

[Cookiezi's Hard]
fine o.o

[Cookiezi's Insane]
also fine o.o

Easy and Normal need some more works imo
otherwise, the map's diff spread is bad, there is a huge difficulty distance between Normal and Hard diff. plz make Normal diff harder and make Hard diff easier, or add a new diff between the 2 diffs
good luck

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Faust wrote:

Easy:

- 00:24:004 - Actually, a spinner here would be better.done

Normal:

- 00:50:670 (5) - New Combo.done
- 00:57:337 (8) - New Combo.done
- 00:58:170 (1) - Remove New Combo.done

Taiko DS:

RESNAP ALL NOTES PROPERLY AND RE-CHECK.

Cookiezi's Insane:

- 00:23:796 (1) - Might want to move this aside, because of the previous hitbursts covering it.
- 00:44:629 (3) - - Stack nicely on the previous (8)
- 01:16:504 (2) - Kinda blocked by the previous slider.

That's about it

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Bubble owo

KagamineRinny wrote:

Wow,Cookiezi Make A Beatmap.. ._.

DeathBlood wrote:

おめでとう、私泡ついて3ヶ月だけど、ランクドしない・・・なんで12日でするのｗｗｗ