This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 28 Januari 2013 at 22:32:17

Artist: 2PM
Title: Hands Up
Tags: 2nd Album XxKuroUsagixX KPOP
BPM: 125
Filesize: 5882kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:

1. B-RAB's Max (5 stars, 705 notes)
2. Hard (4,45 stars, 281 notes)
3. Lova Up (4,91 stars, 568 notes)
4. Normal (2,7 stars, 196 notes)

Download: 2PM - Hands Up
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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29/01/2012 - New Mp3 change, Changing Skin and Offset Beatmap
13/07/2012 - Changing Skin
30/08/2012 - Renaming diff, and remapped a bit XD
27/01/2013 - Ress, a little bit remap and change skin element

thanks for SB Lyric, Skin and guest diff by XxKuroUsagixX <3

Mod request via Forum PM ~

Hi Selova (:
Beforehand, there are some major things to mention:

[General]
-> .mp3's maximum bitrate allowed is 192kbps (your current one is 320kbps)
-> No SB element should exceed 800 x 600. I looked at your folder, and most of them are 1027px in width ):
-> Remove "Selova" (because it's already under creator's name) and "Korean" (because it will be added to language when this map is ranked) from the tags
-> Kiai Time should be consistent! End your last kiai as KuroUsagi did in her diff.
-> You don't even need lead-in time 0.5s for this one, just set it to 0 because there's already a long delay before the first note
-> And, finally, the skin. I highly suggest to add a black border to the hitcircle. Why? Because in harder difficulties it will be hard to tell where the circle is (especially on streams). Plus, you're using red combo-color here, with borderless hitcircle it blends with the BG much. Also, spinner-circle isn't perfectly centered.

And, here we go with the mod:

[one hand up]
-> Use proper capitalization for the diff's name (One Hand Up)

1. 00:11:960 (1) - Add new combo to this slider. Also, extend this slider by 1/2?
2. 00:18:680 (4) - Because (3) is already curved, why not curve this one too? Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:040 (4,5) - Although no hitsound is technically usable here, I prefer if you stay consistent to your whistle pattern : add whistle on (4), and on (5)'s end
4. 00:23:480 (1) - Add finish on slider's start
5. 00:27:320 (1,2,3) - Add whistle every time there's a "thud" sound here, as you did previously
6. 00:38:840 (1) - Add finish? Fits very well after the spinner imo
7. 00:42:680 (2,3,4) - Arrange like this? It flows more rather than just triangular pattern:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:45:560 (6) - Make this encircle (5)?
9. 00:54:200 - Drag break here?
10. 01:02:840 (2) - Move two grids up and face this slider upward. It really emphasizes (1) and (3)'s direction.
11. 01:18:200 (2,4) - It's not a wise idea to let (4)'s repeat cover (1)'s start. So, I suggest to face these two downward
12. 01:23:000 (3) - This one too, the slider's path is sheathing the next pattern. This is my suggestion:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:24:920 (1) - Add finish on slider's start?
14. 01:27:800 (4,5) - Sudden claps isn't a good idea >_< I suggest to remove the clap from (4)
15. 01:28:760 (1,3) - Just pointing out some minor stuffs, but you don't really need those extra waypoints in the middle ):
16. 01:50:840 (4) - Add whistle on slider's start? (because you already do so in the previous (2))
17. 02:04:280 (3) - Move one grid down (well, I guess the spacing error here is unintentional, though...)
18. 02:06:200 (6) - Also with this one. Copy-paste from (3) and ctrl-h here?
19. 02:07:160 (7) - Add new combo
20. 02:09:560 (10) - Should be stacked to (7) to make the spacing consistent
21. 02:17:720 (10) - Unreadable slider. Don't put a slider UNDER another slider. Here's a simple, beautiful way how to avoid things like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
22. 02:26:360 (1) - Finish instead of whistle here?
23. 02:29:240 (4) - Remove clap here also, to prevent sudden clapping as I mentioned before
24. 02:35:960 (7) - Spacing error (again, this couldn't be intentional though) - I suggest to replace this slider with grid lv3 instead of grid lv2
25. 02:45:080 (4,5) - Add new combo on either (4) or (5), but I highly suggest (4) though (because of the stack you used here)
26. 02:57:080 (1) - Finish on slider's start?
27. 03:01:880 (7) - New combo here. Also, sudden linear slider here breaks the flow imo... However, if you keep insisting to use linear slider, this one could work without ruining the flow:
    
    SPOILER

    

Well, the hitsound's getting more consistent through the end, though. If you keep the consistency for the entire diff, would sound much better because there's no major problem with the notes' placement.

[Hard Up]

1. 00:15:080 (5,6) - I think, it's better to move these two 1 grid up to avoid spacing confusion with (2) - well, I can understand this because you're mapping with grid lv2 though...
2. 00:19:640 (3,4,5) - Rather than straight linear sliders, you can play a lot with symmetry here. For example:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:000 (5) - You only need one red waypoint here, alter the 2nd red waypoint into bezier one
4. 00:40:280 (4) - Is the red waypoint in the end really required? Also, it's better to tilt this one a bit following (3)'s tilt angle:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:50:360 (5,6,7,8,9) - Definitely can be shaped better using grid lv.3 or lv.4:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:55:247 - Move the first waypoint 1 grid left for symmetry
7. 00:57:080 (5) - I prefer stacking this to (6), it's friendlier to read this way
8. 01:02:600 (2) - Face this slider downward, to emphasize the path to (3)?
9. 01:08:360 (2) - This note doesn't follow anything in the music imo. I highly suggest to remove this note and add an extra repeat to (1)
10. 01:35:720 (8) - 1/2 slider here instead of single note?
11. 01:36:920 (3) - I highly recommend you to add a note here to fill the blank (preferably placed 1 grid higher than (2))
12. 01:59:480 (1,2,3) - If you look carefully, (1,2)'s spacing is closer than (2,3)...
13. 02:11:000 (6) - I personally don't like how this note looks in play mode, perhaps unstack this and place it like this?
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 02:31:400 (4) - Do you really need to "overcurve" the slider like this? Standard linear curve with 1 waypoint only is more than enough imo
15. 02:41:480 (9) - This note doesn't follow anything. Few things you can do, is either moving this 1/4 earlier, OR altering (7,8,9) into a single slider
16. 02:51:080 (3) - Slider wave here?
17. 03:07:400 (2) - Not sure if this slider is unrankable, but it's better to avoid such ambiguous things :3

Although feels like Normal, it plays well (:

[Lova Up]
-> Overall Difficulty -1 ?

1. 00:08:480 (2) - I know you're trying to form a jump here, but I highly suggest to make (1,2,3)'s spacing consistent because they're equally apart on the timeline.
2. 00:10:400 (2) - Same as above
3. 00:16:160 (2) - Add whistle?
4. 00:21:080 (6) - This jump looks like it's randomly placed. Perhaps place (6) in the center, so (at least) it forms an intuitive pattern?
5. 00:25:160 (8,9,10) - Make their distance equal
6. 00:33:800 (16) - "Burai sliders" (sliders with its start placed above its end) is unrankable by now. I suggest standard slider wave here
7. 00:35:000 (1) - End spinner in 00:37:886?
8. 00:46:040 (6) - Although it's readable, but this anti-jump may shock players. At least, add a New Combo here, or just stack it to (5) start/end
9. 00:51:080 (4,5,6) - To beautify this jump, I suggest to curve (4,6) a bit and move (5) higher:
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:57:320 (6) - Move the last waypoint 1 grid right and down, to form a 45° angle here?
11. 00:59:960 (3) - Why snap this to the blue tick? Snap to the white tick (1/4 later) is much better imo
12. 01:04:880 (5,8) - Add whistle here to keep your whistle pattern as before (I like your previous one more! xD)
13. 01:11:840 (8) - New Combo, it's a new jump sequence
14. 01:13:280 (13,1) - Not stacked perfectly. Is it intentional?
15. 01:16:040 (6,7) - Unequal spacing compared to the others, orz
16. 01:19:160 (7) - Very unpredictable. Perhaps place it on the other side of (10)?
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:22:280 (5) - Unrankable slider, I suggest to change this into 2 single notes instead
18. 01:35:480 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 7 notes stream feels like overmapped imo. Delete (5)?
19. 01:40:280 (11) - Add finish to emphasize the song's cymbal sound?
20. 01:50:840 (4) - Remove 2 repeats from the slider, and move it 1/2 later. Thus, add a circle here
21. 01:56:840 (7,8,9,10,11) - Zig-zag stream here (as you mostly did before)?
22. 02:01:640 (8) - This slider moves in an abnormal way
23. 02:09:320 (7) - New combo. Also, is there any point to use 9% volume here? I don't think so...
24. 02:18:680 (1,1,1) - Don't new combo spam. It will mess up the HP Drain system.
25. 02:33:320 (3) - Delete this note? (yeah, this note pretty much felt like added for extra difficulty)
26. 02:35:120 (4) - One grid up to make it parallel to (7)
27. 02:40:040 (1,1,1) - Again with the new combo spam (and this is a bad one imo)
28. 02:54:920 (8) - Long bezier slider, imo, plays much better rather than long linear slider here:
    
    SPOILER

    

The jumps are quite random. Well, also the end somewhat feels like overmapped but they hitsounded well.

[B-RAB's Max]
-> Overall Difficulty 9 is murder, seriously. I suggest AR9 + OD8 instead of AR8 + OD9

1. 00:07:160 (1,2) - Add whistle for these two opening notes?
2. 00:09:320 (1,2) - If you do ^, whistle here to keep the hitsound consistent
3. 00:16:760 (5,6,7) - Rather than back-and-forth notes, I prefer something that plays more naturally here : pentagons
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:19:280 (6) - Delete this note? Feels like overmapped and it's not even following anything on the song
5. 00:26:960 (9,10,11) - I don't like how this stack looks in play mode. Repeating slider maybe?
6. 00:41:000 (7,8,1) - There are more natural ways to put this jump. For example:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:51:800 (8) - Is the jump here necessary? Plays better without it imo
8. 00:59:960 (1,2) - This part suddenly follows the bass, feels really weird imo. I suggest to keep following the vocal : 1/4 repeating slider here + a note 1/2 after
9. 01:08:120 (x) - Add note here? (I know you're following the bass again, but this time it's better. To improve the rhythm, add a circle here)
10. 01:11:240 (1,1,1,1) - Do not new combo spam (reason above)
11. 01:16:880 (7) - I suppose you're following the background rhythm here. So, here should be circle + 1/2 slider instead of 3/4 slider
12. 01:25:640 (3,4,5,6,7) - Well, zig-zag stream isn't a bad idea, but for this part I prefer arc stream. It plays more naturally imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:32:480 (7) - Delete this note? (it follows nothing on the song)
14. 01:36:320 (6,1) - Inconsistent spacing here, (1) should be moved 1 grid left. Also, move the next (3) one grid left if you follow this
15. 01:41:480 (4) - This slider is having the same length with (3), but it's 0.5x. This is not intuitive. I suggest to keep the 1.0x here, but use crumpled slider instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:44:840 (3,4,5) - Wide jump. Playable, but I prefer something easier to catch:
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:49:880 (7) - Curve to the left to get more flow?
18. 02:05:240 (1,1,1,1) - Don't new combo spam
19. 02:09:360 - What is this inherit section for? (if it is DO used, move to the spinner's start)
20. 02:23:720 (7,8,9) - Hard enough to read this back-and-forth jump, maybe alter the jump like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 02:33:920 (9) - Delete note? (it follows nothing on the song)

Well, after all, I think it's better to follow how selova did with whistles in the chorus (on his Hard Up diff) imo. Great jumps though.

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In conclusion, this is a potential map overall. Love the SB, although skin's quite confusing.
Good luck selova for this map~

Go go Depok mappers ^^

wow, banyak ^^, thanks niva, masih banyak yg harus di fix, skin mungkin diganti hit circlenya XD

fixed all :3

[General]

1. Remove '2PM' and 'Hands Up' from the TAGs, since it's already the title of the song.
2. Your background is 1600x1000, while the max is 1024x768. Please resize it.
3. Remove hit100 copy.png from your song folder.
4. Add B-RAB to all TAGs.

[Skin]

fail-background.png's dimensions must be exactly 1024x768 (currently 1027x768).
pause-overlay.png's dimensions must be exactly 1024x768 (currently 1027x768).
spinner-circle.png's dimensions must be exactly 666x666 (currently 350x350).
hit0.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 118x57).
hit50.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 79x67).
hit100.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 100x67).
hit100k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 100x101).
hit300.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 107x67).
hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 137x95).
hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 107x96).


[B-RAB's Max]

1. Please reduce the approach rate by one. It makes the map more fun~

00:23:338 (1) - Add a new combo here, since it's right behind a spinner.
00:23:578 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:738 (7) - Add new combo.
00:54:298 (8) - ^
00:55:018 (1) - Remove njew combo.
01:00:418 (2) - Place this note in the center of the screen, so the spacing with (1) and (3) will be the same.
01:42:298 (5) - Add new combo.
01:46:138 (8) - ^
01:49:978 (7) - ^
02:01:498 (10) - ^
02:02:218 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:21:418 (10) - Add new combo.

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:25:029 - snap to 01:25:018
02:09:320 - snap to 02:09:298
02:18:680 - snap to 02:18:658
02:42:200 - snap to 02:42:178
03:05:120 - snap to 03:05:098


[Lova Up]

00:25:498 (9) - Add NC.
00:26:698 (1) - Remove NC.
00:27:418 (5) - Add NC.
00:29:338 (13) - Add NC.
00:29:578 (1) - Remove NC.
00:31:018 (8) - Remove this circle.
00:30:778 (7) - Add one more repeat arrow to this slider.
00:33:178 (12) - Add NC.
00:34:378 (1) - Remove NC.
00:39:418 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing. Move note (4) further away from slider end (3).
00:46:138 (6) - Add NC.
00:54:298 (5) - Add NC.
00:55:498 (1) - Remove NC.
01:11:938 (1) - Make this note start 1/4 later, on the white tick following the clap sound in the music.
01:17:698 (2) - ^
01:19:258 (7) - Add NC.
01:28:858 (4) - Add NC.
01:32:698 (4) - Add NC.
01:38:458 (8) - Ugly anti-jump. Please move it further away from slider end (7).
01:48:058 (1,2,3,4) - Ugly anti-jumps with weird huge jump on the end. Please remap this.
02:01:498 (7) - Add NC.
02:20:698 (6) - Add NC.
02:52:138 (9,1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. Please make it all the same spacing.
03:03:898 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very hard to play/read on first try. Please remap.


[Drinks Up]

00:15:898 (1) - Add new combo.
00:23:938 (2) - Remove this note? I think a 1/4 note in a difficulty like this might be too hard.
00:27:778 (2) - ^
00:50:458 (5) - Add new combo.
00:52:378 (1,2) - Please snap slider (2) correctly under slider end (1), it looks a bit messy now.
01:00:538 (2,3,4) - Same goes with these sliders~
01:03:898 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:35:098 (6) - Add new combo.
02:02:938 (4,5,6) - Maybe too hard for this difficulty?
02:05:338 (6) - Add new combo.
02:34:138 (8) - ^
02:34:378 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:36:058 (7,1) - Remove the new combo from (1) and add it on (7).
02:37:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe a bit confusing. Just keep on mapping on red and white ticks, I think the blue ones make it too confusing for the difficulty.
03:09:058 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too hard? (the 1/4)
03:10:978 (7) - Add new combo.


[One Hand Up]

1. Please reduce drain rate, approach rate and overall difficulty by one, since it's the easiest difficulty.

02:41:818 (2) - Add a new combo here, since it's right behind a spinner.



Good luck on getting this ranked!

Done,,, Thanks

hello selova !

[One Hand Up]

01:07:738 (1) - end here 01:09:658
01:25:978 (2) - finish
01:36:778 (1) - end here 01:40:378 or add Circle
01:51:898 (5) - new combo
02:27:418 (2) - finish
02:37:978 (1) - end here 02:41:338
02:53:098 (6) - do so http://puu.sh/JV6G
02:58:138 (2) - finish
03:05:818 (1) - the same thing. it no need of looping

[Drinks Up]

Distance spacing ... 1.0
01:29:818 (x) - add note
01:33:658 (x) - ^
01:56:098 (2) - no no no! This circle should be here! 01:55:978 ! and this circle must be here 01:57:898 ! and 01:59:938 (2) . check all these places! this is unacceptable.
02:01:858 (1) - ^
02:03:418 (1) - ^

check out all the circles that are on the blue scale move them to the red

too bad. it is unclear when the music when the vocals . you have to do something beneath one....

nice song. good luck

Hello~
From the queue!

*and there is a gigantic mod up there so my mod wouldn't be that long XP..

[One Hand Up]
00:35:578 (1) - start spinner at 00:35:098 end spinner at 00:37:498
00:50:458 (1) - end spinner at 00:53:098
01:07:738 (1) - end spinner at 01:09:658
02:03:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about putting it so that it would be x-axis symmetry for (1,2) and (4,5)?
02:07:258 (1,2) - if you changed the one above, overlap this with the previous circles in 02:03:418 (1,4)
02:09:658 (4) - ^
02:34:138 - New combo?

O____O; too much reverse arrows..

[Drinks up]
00:12:058 - End the slider with three repeat arrows at 00:13:018
01:09:418 (3) - If possible, perfect overlap with the end of the slider in 01:07:738
01:27:898 - add note?
01:56:098 (2) - move to 01:55:978 ?
01:58:018 (2) - move to 01:57:898 ?
01:59:938 (2) - move to 01:59:818

Because I do not have a good skill to mod Insane maps (4.5 stars or more), I'll stop here

Good luck!
Great song, great beatmap, let's go for rank!

thanks, i will fix it later

General

-You better change the name of the background image and you put BG
-The size of Background is 1024x768,800x600 and SB:640x480 anothers

[One Hand Up]

00:12:058 (1)The whistle has to go just at the beginning and end
of the slider so that there is an unpleasant sound
when the drag of the ball


00:13:978 (2) - Remove the Whistle in the all slider only
at the beginning of the slider add whistle
- unsymmetrical patters for example:

can improve making it more symmetrical for example:


00:15:898 (1) - Add Finish
00:23:578 (1) - improves the manner OF THE SLIDER example :


This way you can give:


00:25:498 (2) - ^ Form of Slider (unsymmetrical patters)
00:27:418 (1) - ^
00:28:858 (2) - ^
00:29:818 (2) - ^

00:42:298 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:778 (2) - NC

01:02:458 (1) - Add Whistle in the finish of the slider
01:03:178 (2) - Add whistle in the reverse arrow
01:03:898 (3) - Add Whistle in the beginning of the slider
01:04:858 (4) - Add Whistle
01:05:338 (5) - Remove Whistle
01:05:818 (6) - Add Whistle in the beginning of the slider
01:06:778 (7) - Add whitle in the slider,not in the reverse arrow

02:08:218 (3) - unsymmetrical patters

03:08:698 (1) - Remove Finish

I'm sorry but only modding easy and normal for the time


Good Luck !

done, thanks...

[Mod Request]
Haii ;3

[Genera;]
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[One Hand Up]
01:51:898 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this? ;3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377407
02:41:818 (1,2) - Le shape :33! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377410

[Drinks up]
00:08:218 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377411 Shape :c
00:14:098 (2,3,4) - The lyrics fits to this - http://puu.sh/KpC7
00:18:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/KpDh
00:51:898 (6) - Place at X:256 Y:96

[Love up]
00:53:098 (3) - Unrankable Slider DDDDD:
01:35:818 (4) - Clap
01:36:058 (5) - Remove clap
01:39:418 (5,6) - Clap
01:39:778 (8) - Clap
02:41:338 (7) - Clap at the end of the slider

[B-RAB's Max]
Perfect ;3

[Comments]
Awesome song and good Beatmap ;'3 good luck ranking it!

Heyho from lazymans mod queue

One Hand

00:25:018 - move the following slider to this position
00:46:618 - ^
02:26:458 (1) - For an easy map the slider way to fast after the spinner.

Drinks Up

00:13:498 - insert circle here
00:13:738 - insert slider here till 00:13:978 -
01:27:898 - maybe like this :

Lova Up

00:08:218 -more like that?
00:10:138 - ^

better try to remap till 00:15:658 - that part seems very weird to me

01:12:658 (4) - delete that note
03:06:538 - maybe try to use more sliders from there on my fingers rly hurt till end

Otherwise rly cool map i rly love that diff


B-RABs MAX

Only response to this: My Finger hurts but im happy

thanks :3

From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.

[General]
Your background is 1024*640, it should be 800*600 or 1024*768.

AIBat v3.0 wrote:

Unused Image Files scorebar-ki2.png

[One Hand Up]
00:25:018 - Add note
00:26:938 - Add note
00:40:858 - Add note

[Drinks Up]
00:13:258 (1) - End at 00:13:618 -
00:15:178 (5) - End at 00:15:538 -
00:43:258 - Add note
00:48:298 - Add note
01:27:898 - Add note
01:29:578 (2) - Del and add slider, end at 01:30:538 -
02:28:138 - Add note
02:30:538 - Add note

[Lova Up]
00:09:418 (4) - End at 00:09:778 -
00:11:338 (4) - End at 00:11:698 -
00:13:258 (4) - End at 00:13:618 -
00:15:178 (8) - End at 00:15:538 -
00:18:298 (6) - Remove
From 02:09:418 - to 02:18:778 - Hitsound volume is too low you should up it a little.
02:33:658 (4) - Remove

[B-RAB's Max]
00:23:338 (1) - This note is after a spinner but haven't New combo, you should add one
The KIAI time start at 00:23:338 on this diff, it start at 00:23:578 on other diffs, maybe change?
01:08:698 - Add note
03:11:578 (15) - New Combo
03:11:938 (1) - Remove New combo

Good luck with your map

thanks :3.......
about BG it good too with the letterbox

From my modding queue.
OMG! The background picture its in the incorrect size, you MUST change it, also you can use this one:
One Hand up
00:12:058 (1) - Looks better like this: 00:22:618 (5) - ^ 00:32:218 (2) - Ugly slider
00:34:138 (5) - ^
01:25:978 (2) - Looks better like this: 01:26:938 (3) - ^ 02:48:298 (5) - Looks strange, you should change it.

Drinks up
00:25:258 (6) - Change it, looks bad...
02:32:458 (6) - Looks better like this: 02:55:978 (6) - Looks bad, change it.
03:11:578 (8) - Looks better like this:
Lova Up
00:53:098 (3) - UGLY!

The other diff looks fine but it has some strange some strange sliders too. You should take a look at this viewtopic.php?p=534844 and good luck.

Yo


[General]
* Your diff name are hard to tell for player which is normal diff or hard diff. I suggest you to included the difficulty name inside the diff name


[Skinning]
* Your lighting.png are too distracting for players. Make it 50% transparent, please
* The spinner-clear, spinner-osu, and spinner-spin are waaay too minimalist. Make it more interesting please


[One Hand Up]
01:25:978 (2) - Make a same slider as 01:26:938 (3) to make better slider shape?
01:35:578 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody, it's annoying


[Drinks Up]
00:45:418 (9) - Make this slider symetric? (Nazi)
00:58:378 (7,1) - Swap new combo for your combo pattern
01:39:418 (5) - Too much 1/4 repeating slider are not allowed for normal diff
03:07:018 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern


[Lova Up]
00:13:978 (5) - New combo?
01:01:978 (1) - Make this slider linear? (Nazi)
01:37:978 (7) - Make this slider symetric? (Nazi)
02:33:538 (3,4,5,6) - Move further away from previous notes. Otherwise, players will likely confusing while gameplay
03:13:498 (4) - New combo?


[B-RAB's Max]
00:41:578 (1) - 0,5x slider after jump pattern makes players are very confusing
01:13:258 (2) - New combo?
02:07:498 (4) - ^


Good luck~

thanks, update later~

Mod request from (●ゝω)ノヽ(∀＜●) Kiiwa & Beren's Queue


[General]
ok


[Easy]
01:25:498 (1) - remove finish
01:25:978 (2) - ^
01:26:456 (2) - ^
02:26:938 (1) - ^
02:27:418 (2) - ^
02:27:898 (2) - ^


[Normal]
00:55:498 (3) - end at 00:55:978
00:56:458 (4) - remove to 00:56:218
00:56:938 (5) - add note
00:57:418 (7,1) - ^
01:00:058 (1,2,3,4) - end at red line plz


[Hard]
01:14:698 (4) - like this http://puu.sh/YEgO
02:55:018 (8) - spacing


[Insane]
00:47:338 (6) - 0.5x?
00:56:218 (1) - add finish
00:58:138 (1) - ^
01:00:058 (1) - ^
01:07:738 (1) - end at 01:08:218
01:42:298 (5) - add clap
01:57:658 (1) - add finish
01:59:578 (1) - ^
02:01:498 (1) - end use volume20%
02:03:418 (1) - add finish
02:05:338 (1) - ^
02:07:258 (3) - ^

good luck

it's Easy, Hard, Insane, Insane 2

thanks for mod~

Nath Nath's Max

01:00:058 (1) - geser ke kanan 1 x, 01:00:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - geser ke kiri 1 x , biar combo hit burstnya pas di tgh tgh ama simetris sedikit
01:00:298 - 01:00:538 - kasi circle, stream triplet biar pas ama lagu, jump tick biru susah d tebak

Lova Up

remove every slider whistle hitsound before 1st kiai start
00:30:778 (7) - ctrl + r
00:53:098 (3) - i suggest using slow SV
00:55:738 (4) - ctrl + r
01:09:898 (2,3) - try move, very bad hiding in (4) slider when playing
03:03:898 (6,7,8,9) - confusing, better (7) stack with (6)
03:05:578 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - spacing please, it was very close

Drink Up

this is normal diff???? it was overmapped for normal diff

01:40:378 (6) - dont stack


One hand

too many random breaktime, but its fine

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edit :

selova wrote:

it's Easy, Hard, Insane, Insane 2

thanks for mod~

better difficult spread : normal , hard, insane, insane or easy normal hard insane

well, i should remapped easy to normal, and renaming difficulity

thanks for mod~

From ★ ~ K & D Modding Queue ~ ★
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Ini Normal

00:33:178 (3,4,5) - This could be too hard for Normal!
01:28:858 (1) - This slider looks boring. Maybe add a curve or something?
01:30:778 (3) - Same here as above
01:51:898 (1) - Make this more symmetrical
01:53:818 (3) - OMG. What is this?

PLEASE make this more symmetrical like this:
or at least a normal arc:
02:30:298 (1) - Add a curve or make it more special not so boring.
02:32:218 (3) - Same as above
02:36:298 (4) - Move this circle to 02:36:178 it fits better.
02:43:738 (3) - Same as 01:53:818 (3)

That's it ~
Ask me Ingame if you have any questions

thanks for mod :3

...I didn't expect someone to map this, TBH

Anyway, here's a mod.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>General

1. The offset is supposed to be 538, which is the moment the first heavy (beginning-of-the-stanza) beat in the song appears. You wouldn't need to resnap anything after this, though.

>Ini Normal

1. ...What's with the name of the diff? Simply using "Normal" will do. We Indonesians can understand what does this phrase mean, but foreigners...
2. I personally dislike how most of the sliders are curved, like 00:10:618 (3), 00:20:698 (3), and 00:25:498 (3). If possible, use something similar to 00:17:098 (4). This applies to the rest of the diff AND the mapset, including the guest diff, so don't complain if I'm not mentioning most of them.
3. 00:22:618 (6,1) - What's with this overlap? I can usually understand patterns like this, but this one... Maybe make it so that (6)'s end perfectly overlaps (1)'s second tick (right in the middle of (1))?
4. 01:05:818 (6) - NC? I think the current combo is too long, and there's no reason for it to be like that.
5. 01:26:698 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once to follow the vocal?
6. 01:34:378 (3) - ^
7. 02:28:138 (3) - ^
8. 02:36:058 - Add a note/circle to follow the vocal here?
9. 02:57:178 (1) - Remove the Finish at 02:57:658? I'm sure enough there's no need of a Finish.
10. 03:06:538 (2) - Same as 01:26:698 (3).

>Drinks Hard

1. The diff's name doesn't really make sense, IMO. It might be just me, though.
2. 00:25:258 (6) - Same as Normal's 01:26:698 (3) (Okay, I won't mention this anymore I guess. Just take a look at things that are similar to this).
3. 00:25:258 (6) - NC? Reason's the same as Normal's 01:05:816 (6) (From now on, if I mention NCs and you need the reason, see this, unless I write something different).
4. 00:28:378 - Add a note here to follow the vocal?
5. 00:29:098 (7) - NC?
6. 00:34:138 (6) - ^
7. 01:33:418 (2) - Move the redpoint to (288,224)? (2) will encircle 01:33:178 (1) better. I think it's a good change.
8. 02:41:818 (1) - Use this? Looks better, IMO.
   

   388,132,161818,6,0,B|452:180|424:276,1,150,0|2

>Lova Up

1. Err... I think there are too many random/weird jumps like 01:20:458 (1,2,3,4), and the frequent spacing changes doesn't really go well here, IMO. Also, there are a lot of unnecessary triplets and short 1/4 streams (5-notes ones) on the kiai times, making the rhythm very, very weird. You should take a look at them.
2. 00:30:298 (6,7,8) - I think that the rhythm is supposed to be like this (the two tall white ticks, or whatever they're called, are placed at 00:30:538).
3. 00:47:338 (1,2) - Avoid stuff like this if you can. I actually thought that (2) is 1/4 beats after (1), while it's actually 1/2. Simply stacking (2) below (1)'s end should do.
4. 01:12:538 (3,4) - Stack above 01:12:778 (5)? A pattern like this doesn't work well, based on my experience.
5. 01:12:778 (5) - Just use 01:11:098 (7) for this, and Ctrl+R that.
6. 01:22:378 (5) - NC to denote the jump? Also, I don't really like how it's placed now, because the flow is pretty bad, so Ctrl+J?
7. 01:25:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Okay, this diff actually has parts that are awesome enough to pay for some of the errors here.
8. 01:32:098 (2,3) - Use 0.8x DS? There's no reason to not make the spacing consistent here.
9. 02:10:378 (5,6) - Ctrl+R? This is to make the spacing on the square pattern consistent. It feels weird right now...
10. 02:23:818 (5) - NC? It's weird to place anti-jumps and normally-spaced notes on the same combo.
11. 02:40:138 (2,3,4) - Uh... The flow here is weird. Maybe straighten the circles' formation?
12. 02:40:858 (6,7) - I don't recommend to stack (7) below (6). Just use 0.8 DS, and place (7) in front of (6) (in other words, make (6)'s tail/end point (7)'s head/beginning).
13. 02:50:938 (6) - This is supposed to be only 1/4, based from the music.
14. 02:53:098 (4) - Supposed to be a 1/2 slider. Same reasoning with the suggestion above.
15. 02:54:778 (7) - Make this a 1/4 slider to follow the song?
16. 02:55:018 (8) - Begin from 02:55:258. There's nothing to follow at the beginning of this slider.

>B-RAB's Max

1. 00:08:218 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ...Weird. The 3/4s here are very, very hard to catch. It took me a few tries to be able to FC this part. Try to play this section first. If you don't feel anything wrong, well, I guess it can't be helped.
2. 00:19:618 (8) - This place has no beats (aka overmapped), and I think you should remove this.
3. 00:24:418 (6) - ^ (Look out for parts that are similar like this. I won't point out things like this anymore.)
4. 00:24:898 (9,11) - ^ (^)
5. 00:27:058 (9,10,11) - Use a repeating slider instead? I think you're trying to follow the vocal here, and that's the best way to do it, IMO. (^)
6. 00:30:298 (1,2) - Convert them into a slider. (Reason: ^) (^ - aka the "parts that are similar like this" stuff still applies here.)
7. 00:45:418 (4) - I really don't recommend changing the slider's speed without using NC (This comment applies to the parts that are similar to this).
8. 01:05:098 (8) - I recommend an NC here to emphasize the jump.
9. 01:07:738 (1,2) - Just space these notes normally. Don't make an anti-jump here, since there's no reason for it.
10. 01:11:338 (1,1,1,1) - Remove the second and fourth NCs. I'm sure enough it's okay to keep a symmetrical pattern in the same combo.
11. 01:42:298 (5) - NC?
12. 01:53:578 (7) - ^ (This is to denote a new pattern.)
13. 02:05:338 (1,1,1,1) - Same as 01:11:338 (1,1,1,1).
14. 03:00:058 (9) - NC?
15. 03:01:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uh... Actually, I don't really recommend a pattern like this.
16. 03:10:138 (8) - NC?

Okay, enough. If I point out every badly shaped slider and every single spot with a bad flow or pattern, this is going to be too long. Just review your diffs by yourself, or ask for modders who are more patient and dedicated than me if you want to get more stuff explained. What I've pointed are some of the more severe problems.

That's it. Get more modders here. I believe that with enough dedication to this mapset, it can be a good map at the very least, and might even get ranked

Good luck on the way

i'm mostly mapped on instrumental than vocal,

thanks for mod :3

Hi again : P

sorry for delay, forgot about my modding queue last week lol

[Normal]
00:15:418 (1) - New combo
00:23:578 (1) - Delete 2nd and 4th slider point, extend the slider so it's as long as it was, make it look like a part of a circle around (2)
00:25:498 (3) - Copy-paste (1), turn by 180° and try to make it look as a finished circle as much as possible (Don't forget to keep combo)
01:13:018 (5) - Move to x:432 y:208
01:13:498 (1) - Move to x:364 y:292
01:49:018 (2) - Use the design of this combo's (1)
02:17:818 (4) - Use the design of this combo's (3) and flip it horizontally
02:52:138 (5) - Use the design of (4)

[Hard]
00:15:178 (6) - Use design of (2)
00:29:098 (1,2) - Change rythm to http://puu.sh/23on5
01:34:138 (7) - New combo
01:34:618 (1) - If you did the above change, keep combo
02:38:938 (3,4) - Use design of (1)

[Lova Up]
02:49:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I can't really hear the rythm that this part is following.
03:13:498 (1) - keep combo

[B-RAB's Max]
Not that I didn't find anything, but I can't really mod insane insane's because I can't even play them


good luck getting this ranked!

*vanishes*

thanks for mod :3

Hi there, I'm from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫. My modding was requiered, that's why I'm here.

General



Normal



Hard



Lova Up



Thing Thing's Max




That's all what I got, B-RAB's Max is filled with steams and triples... so meh. Good luck.

update later~~...

+ a Newbie modder trying >.> well...

[General]

That's OK ^^

[Normal]

Very good Easy to get SS

[Hard]

01:32:458 (1) - As Mercurial said and I checked it, you could put a slider + a cicrcle in its head, then you can remove the new combo from the slider and set new combo in the circle ^^ (where new voice phrase begins)



[Lova Up]

The name could be Hard Up or Hard + ^^ (well, it's just a Newbie modder's suggestion ~.~ feel free)

The diff itself is Very good (:

[B-RAB's Max]

Very good and challenging (:


It's a great song ^^ its rythm is fully able to allow Cookiezi-challenging Insanes

Good luck with your map ^^

Att.
Fiszpan Porcel

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