- 04:13:239 (4,5,6) - You can make a symmetric pattern out of this, y'know, if you want, cuz you like symmetry, don't you? lol

1. 00:20:071 (4) - There are a lot of sliders ending in downbeats, usually downbeats need click actions, because they usually have a stronger pitch and is the place where usually a change in the music happen, which is the case here.
2. 00:24:900 - 01:12:900 - 01:55:192 (4) - 01:59:876 (4) - 03:06:936 (9) - 03:23:326 (3) - Same as above
3. 00:33:827 (4,5) - spacing? I read this as 1/4 at first try, either stack it properly or space it further. Since it actually looks the same as 00:47:583 (2,3) -
4. 00:38:217 (2) - move this to the center of the grid? for visual purposes
5. 00:40:266 (5) - 00:42:607 (5) - missing NCs I suppose
6. 02:11:876 (6) - missing NC
7. 02:21:827 (1,2,3) - I'd use a slider to introduce the 1/3s instead, your current way will throw players off rhythm.
8. 04:03:873 (5) - missing NC

1. 00:58:412 (1) - this slider is ending in such important beat that needs a click action, since is a downbeat and it needs a click action.
2. 01:47:876 (1) - same, since you can easily notice the melody starting at the downbeat, even you used a correct rhythm at 01:57:827 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 01:56:656 (5) - missing NC? all this section is using at NC every stanza.
4. 02:05:583 (1,3) - swap NC that makes more sense with the music.
5. 02:09:534 (4) - you are missing a NC here too.
6. 02:50:839 (4) - 03:09:570 (5) - ^
7. 03:29:630 (2) - according to the music should be a NC here
8. 04:45:433 (4) - same

1. 00:43:339 (1) - again this slider is ending in the place where your NC should be.
2. Not a fan of some sliders ending at downbeats.

1. 04:03:873 (1) - remove this NC is not consistent with the previous ones.
   

1. 04:19:093 (3) - offscreen

Not a fan of some sliders ending at downbeats.

1. 04:19:093 (3) - still offscreen

1. 01:43:778 (1) - 02:11:876 (1) - 03:53:190 (6) - 04:20:264 (3) - kiai is unsnapped, this also happen at lunatic diff
   

1. 01:51:973 (1) - unsnapped
2. 04:01:532 (1) - same

1. 02:41:144 (4) - can you make the volume the same at both timing lines?
2. check aimod

1. 00:44:363 (1,2) - I believe the clap sounds should fall on the sliders' tails, so I would recommend starting the first slider on 00:43:778 - so you follow the sounds that way. Feels awkward like how it is now imo~ It is also inconsistent since other surrounding sliders on the timeline have the clap sound on the tail~
2. 02:35:290 (4) - What about adding a curve that blankets with (5) to spice up aesthetics? like this. Besides, the previous three sliders were just straight, so this would add variety~

1. 01:51:973 - I'm okay with you letting some strong beats as non-clickable, but at this difficulty level, I believe these kind of strong beats would need that clickable action for a better emphasis~ (hey, just like you did here 02:01:339 (5) - cool)
2. 02:10:704 - ^
3. 04:01:532 - ^

ezek wrote:

STD is cool~

Re-check, no kudos~

[Beginner]

1. 00:44:363 (1,2) - I believe the clap sounds should fall on the sliders' tails, so I would recommend starting the first slider on 00:43:778 - so you follow the sounds that way. Feels awkward like how it is now imo~ It is also inconsistent since other surrounding sliders on the timeline have the clap sound on the tail~
2. 02:35:290 (4) - What about adding a curve that blankets with (5) to spice up aesthetics? like this. Besides, the previous three sliders were just straight, so this would add variety~

[Lunatic]

1. 01:51:973 - I'm okay with you letting some strong beats as non-clickable, but at this difficulty level, I believe these kind of strong beats would need that clickable action for a better emphasis~ (hey, just like you did here 02:01:339 (5) - cool)
2. 02:10:704 - ^
3. 04:01:532 - ^