Konnichiwa~

General
* Custom soft-hitwhistle seems noisy for me, find another one?


Storyboard
* Try reducing the SB Load. I saw there is a sections that having a over limit the SB Load. The maximum should be 5.00x. Try changing that SB, otherwise the ancient PC will go lag
03:08:753 - In SB\s2.jpg, don't fade in immediately, or the player will surprised if there is a sudden white BG while the player playing Taiko or CtB (just my opinion)


Normal
00:46:820 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:02:198 (x) - I was expecting to add notes with finish here.....
02:32:450 (1) - Add clap at tail slider?
03:04:215 (4) - Add clap?
03:06:232 (2) - ^
04:09:005 (1,1) - How about remove (1) and extend the spinner to 04:11:274 for easily for beginners?


Hard
* AR +1? If you change this, I think would be fun

02:02:198 (x) - I was expecting to add notes with finish here.....
02:27:912 (1,2) - Since this has a new combo, how about this notes is make a jump. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/211465
03:24:131 (2) - New combo here? Like others?


Sorry, you need a 8 Stars, lol. Because I am a MAT now~

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa~

General
* Custom soft-hitwhistle seems noisy for me, find another one? umm...I do not hate it. but It was said it to two people.　I want to hear the opinion of other people, too.


Storyboard
* Try reducing the SB Load. I saw there is a sections that having a over limit the SB Load. The maximum should be 5.00x. Try changing that SB, otherwise the ancient PC will go lag I tried that I reduced it. This result is reduced If I reduce it more, I want an idea ;u;
03:08:753 - In SB\s2.jpg, don't fade in immediately, or the player will surprised if there is a sudden white BG while the player playing Taiko or CtB (just my opinion) sorry... no change ><.


Normal
00:46:820 (1) - Remove new combo? ok~ fixed
02:02:198 (x) - I was expecting to add notes with finish here..... sorry, I want to make an SB look good here. but I think if say that many other people should put note here
02:32:450 (1) - Add clap at tail slider? sorry, this is intentional. I think that clap does not always have to be constant .><;
03:04:215 (4) - Add clap? ^
03:06:232 (2) - ^ ^
04:09:005 (1,1) - How about remove (1) and extend the spinner to 04:11:274 for easily for beginners? sorry, no change ><


Hard
* AR +1? If you change this, I think would be fun ok~ . However, I may change it again

02:02:198 (x) - I was expecting to add notes with finish here..... sorry, same normal
02:27:912 (1,2) - Since this has a new combo, how about this notes is make a jump. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/211465 ok. good idea! change it.
03:24:131 (2) - New combo here? Like others? ok~ fixed


Sorry, you need a 8 Stars, lol. Because I am a MAT now~

Leorda Thanks for mod ~ I wish you good luck MAT atm


and wow... lovhin456 very Thanks for many stars☆☆ ~~ >w< I got 8 stars ☆

and wow... lovhin456 very Thanks for many stars☆☆ ~~ >w< I got 8 stars ☆

no prob, this mapset really has potential :3

lovhin456 wrote:

and wow... lovhin456 very Thanks for many stars☆☆ ~~ >w< I got 8 stars ☆

no prob, this mapset really has potential :3

thanks~ >w</



I do my best !!

uh.. the only thing i've found here was that you should enable the epilepsy warning in all diffs. really cool song/mapset. have a star

Wiinter wrote:

uh.. the only thing i've found here was that you should enable the epilepsy warning in all diffs. really cool song/mapset. have a star I change it if said to MAT/BAT & other people

thanks for looking map and Star☆~

request from queue

[Normal]

Circle Size -1?

00:42:786 (4) - New combo
01:41:274 (1) - ^
01:43:290 (2) - ^
03:04:215 (4) - ^
02:48:837 (1,2) - I think this part should be a long slider because the singer hold his/her voice
03:24:887 (1,2) - Very boring cause its repeated a lot.

[Hard]

00:45:559 (1,2,3) - I think slider go better here.
01:02:954 (5) - New combo
03:04:215 (4) - ^
03:22:618 (1) - No need for new combo?
01:42:786 (2) - I think this should be at the end of 01:42:030 (1) -
01:43:290 (3,4,5) - Orz, variation please very boring when you repeat a lot.

Good luck~

kosigA~!
Very very sorry for late mod from mod queue :<
everything here is suggestion

[General]
SAKURA BIG.png is over 800x600 resolution~ please crop/resize~


[Normal]
01:25:139 (1,2,3,1) - maybe don't stack these? I think too many circles for stacking. Might be confusing
01:37:240 (1,3) - remove whistle from these 2? I think it's too much
03:04:719 (1) - make it rounder? http://puu.sh/cPAS
03:34:467 (3) - ^
very nice~ :>

[Hard]
mm maybe use AR7? I think AR7 plays very nicely for me
02:16:316 (1) - I think this spinner is loud. lower the volume?
02:22:240 (5) - maybe remove this beat? I think it's too much... or just remove the whistle
02:29:299 (5) - ^
02:34:341 (6) - ^
:> it's just my suggestions~
03:08:626 - this timing section is not being used?
04:05:727 (5) - make this more round like 03:04:719 (1)? :>
that's it... nothing major

Very nice map
star~!

Starry wrote:

request from queue

[Normal]

Circle Size -1? sorry, no change. because Hard diff is 5, even 4 thinks that there is not the problem

00:42:786 (4) - New combo ok. fixed
01:41:274 (1) - ^ sorry, no change
01:43:290 (2) - ^ ^
03:04:215 (4) - ^ ^
02:48:837 (1,2) - I think this part should be a long slider because the singer hold his/her voice sorry, no change. This part matches BGM
03:24:887 (1,2) - Very boring cause its repeated a lot. I do not think this is a lot. sorry, no change

[Hard]

00:45:559 (1,2,3) - I think slider go better here. sorry, no change
01:02:954 (5) - New combo ^
03:04:215 (4) - ^ ^
03:22:618 (1) - No need for new combo? ok~ remove NC fixed
01:42:786 (2) - I think this should be at the end of 01:42:030 (1) - what ?
01:43:290 (3,4,5) - Orz, variation please very boring when you repeat a lot. I think that there is not the problem because this pattern is only here. soryy, no change ><;

Good luck~

Starry Thanks for mod ~

hoLysoup wrote:

kosigA~! hoLySo~up!!
Very very sorry for late mod from mod queue :< no problem :3
everything here is suggestion

[General]
SAKURA BIG.png is over 800x600 resolution~ please crop/resize~ oops... thanks


[Normal]
01:25:139 (1,2,3,1) - maybe don't stack these? I think too many circles for stacking. Might be confusing many people point this out, therefore.. ok fix it
01:37:240 (1,3) - remove whistle from these 2? I think it's too much ok. fixed
03:04:719 (1) - make it rounder? http://puu.sh/cPAS ok~. I changed some designs
03:34:467 (3) - ^ ^
very nice~ :>

[Hard]
mm maybe use AR7? I think AR7 plays very nicely for me Leorda says 「* AR +1? If you change this, I think would be fun.」 but I hear the opinion of other people a little more
02:16:316 (1) - I think this spinner is loud. lower the volume? volume 50% with normal
02:22:240 (5) - maybe remove this beat? I think it's too much... or just remove the whistle ok...but I choose remove whistle
02:29:299 (5) - ^ ^
02:34:341 (6) - ^ ^
:> it's just my suggestions~
03:08:626 - this timing section is not being used? This is necessary. Because a timing varies among people, I put them in front of 1tick
04:05:727 (5) - make this more round like 03:04:719 (1)? :> ok~ fixed
that's it... nothing major

Very nice map
star~!

hoLysoup Thanks for mod & Star☆~　

here's the mod.

[General]
The combo colour 4 and 5 is quite similar, I suggest that you should interchange colour 3 and 4.

[Hard]
bookmarks wall lol
02:50:097 (6) - a whistle may fit here
03:09:005 (2) - down a several grids to make this symmetrical
03:12:786 (1,2,3,4) - make a better star shape like
[Normal]
:3 My first thought is that those consecutive 1/2s might be hard as the easiest diff for players, but it looks fine for me due to low BPM.

For me, it might sounds too loud to place normal whistle in the section between two kiai (softer part in the song)...

nice SB and sounding. Fix the above stuffs, find a bit more mods and find me again. >w<

wmfchris wrote:

here's the mod.

[General]
The combo colour 4 and 5 is quite similar, I suggest that you should interchange colour 3 and 4. ok~. fixed~

[Hard]
bookmarks wall lol lol Disappeared is better?
02:50:097 (6) - a whistle may fit here fixed
03:09:005 (2) - down a several grids to make this symmetrical fixed
03:12:786 (1,2,3,4) - make a better star shape like fixed

SPOILER

[Normal]
:3 My first thought is that those consecutive 1/2s might be hard as the easiest diff for players, but it looks fine for me due to low BPM. thanks

For me, it might sounds too loud to place normal whistle in the section between two kiai (softer part in the song)... ok... change it to be said to many people change soft-hitwhistle

nice SB and sounding. Fix the above stuffs, find a bit more mods and find me again. >w< >w<b

wmfchris Thanks for mod~

Halloww~
Your requested in my queue^^

[Normal]
-02:41:274 (x) - Add note?

[Hard]
-Overall Difficulity +1?

x_x Sorry, this mod was pretty much useless ._.
Its well mapped and has a nice song ^.^
Star~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww~
Your requested in my queue^^

[Normal]
-02:41:274 (x) - Add note? sorry, no change ><

[Hard]
-Overall Difficulity +1? ok. OD +1. but in addition, I may change it

x_x Sorry, this mod was pretty much useless ._.
Its well mapped and has a nice song ^.^
Star~

Thanks for mod and Star☆~

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> Source : Osu! Misao? o.o (well, idk what it is, but the "o" in osu! should be written in lower case)
-> On both diffs, drag the second break to 02:02:198.

[Normal]

1. 00:37:492 (3) - I think, if this slider fully encircles (2) with its start stacked on (1) it will flow better rather than slider wave:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:038 (2) - Move a few grids down so (1,2,3) will form an arc? Would be cute imo :3
3. 00:46:316 (3) - Although there's no whistle sound in the background, but you can add a whistle here. It sounds good also.
4. 01:02:198 (2,3,4,5) - Well, (2,3) is covered by hitburst here, and the stack even make this harder to read. I suggest to change (2,3) and (4,5) into 1/2 sliders
5. 01:04:719 (3) - End this slider in 01:05:475, and start the spinner 1/2 after?
6. 01:34:971 (2) - Move the last waypoint few grids up if you want to make it perfectly encircle (1). Not something you have to do though
7. 01:37:240 (1,2,3) - I personally don't like how this stack will look in play mode, imo 1/2 repeating slider is better
8. 01:41:274 (1) - Slightly curve this would make this part flow better imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:43:290 (2) - If you do ^, do the same thing also here, but to the different direction
10. 01:53:879 (x) - Add circle here maybe, to follow the vocal? (imo the rhythm here will be less ambiguous if this circle is added)
11. 01:55:895 (1) - Add whistle on repeat, and, preferably, on the next (2) also
12. 02:21:610 (2) - You could try to move this ~3-4 grids up, the followpoints will create flow here
13. 02:31:694 (2) - Move one grid left and down, to prevent it touching 02:32:450 (1) - don't worry though, (3)'s position won't be abrupt (:
14. 02:59:929 (2,3) - How about adding some linear curve twist here? (:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 03:30:181 (2,3,4) - Well, I experimented around this part, imo this part's flow could be improved by adding more sliders. Here's one alternative:
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 03:52:870 (3) - Maybe add standard (not C1) whistle here?
17. 04:11:274 (1) - I prefer not to put this note in the center. As this is the easiest difficulty, it will get covered by the spinner's hitburst, thus confusing newer players. (post-spinner notes in the center on harder diffs is great though)

[Hard]

• 00:43:290 (1,2) - I think it's better not to stack these slider's end, but create endpoint slider jump instead:
  
  SPOILER

  

1. 00:49:089 (2,3,4,5) - Well, why not create an arc-shaped jump pattern instead here? Will flow better imo
2. 01:02:450 (4) - Suggestion, you can place this circle below (1) or (2)'s end to create a small jump actually
3. 01:25:139 (1,2,3) - Compressed streams, or square pattern, works better than stack here imo
4. 01:56:147 (2) - Add whistle on slider's end?
5. 02:20:853 (3) - Somewhat too close to (1) rather than to (5), barely noticeable though
6. 02:50:601 (1,2,3) - Rather than stack I prefer repeating slider here, perhaps encircling (6)
7. 03:06:232 (2,3) - Stack these two? Or copy-paste (2) to (3) and then press CTRL+J to make a jump here
8. 03:09:257 (3) - This repeating slider feels kinda weird imo, because you barely use triples in the map. Maybe just me though
9. 03:22:618 (4) - What happened to the second-to-last waypoint orz >_< Move it few grids down maybe?
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:34:215 (2,3) - Perhaps you can arrange this so (1,2,3,4) could form a tilted diamond pattern?
11. 03:56:652 (3) - Remove whistle? (Like what you did on 03:54:635 (3))

Well, imo most parts in Normal are mapped linearly... I think for soft songs like this it's better to use more bezier sliders. Hard is awesome though.

Good luck kosiga ~

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> Source : Osu! Misao? o.o (well, idk what it is, but the "o" in osu! should be written in lower case) nothing to do with the game. The music of the slot 「押忍！操」
-> On both diffs, drag the second break to 02:02:198. nice idea! fixed~

[Normal]

1. 00:37:492 (3) - I think, if this slider fully encircles (2) with its start stacked on (1) it will flow better rather than slider wave: sorry, no change
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:038 (2) - Move a few grids down so (1,2,3) will form an arc? Would be cute imo :3 ok.fixed
3. 00:46:316 (3) - Although there's no whistle sound in the background, but you can add a whistle here. It sounds good also. ^
4. 01:02:198 (2,3,4,5) - Well, (2,3) is covered by hitburst here, and the stack even make this harder to read. I suggest to change (2,3) and (4,5) into 1/2 sliders ^
5. 01:04:719 (3) - End this slider in 01:05:475, and start the spinner 1/2 after? sorry, no change. vocal follow this
6. 01:34:971 (2) - Move the last waypoint few grids up if you want to make it perfectly encircle (1). Not something you have to do though fixed
7. 01:37:240 (1,2,3) - I personally don't like how this stack will look in play mode, imo 1/2 repeating slider is better ok. fixed
8. 01:41:274 (1) - Slightly curve this would make this part flow better imo: ok. good :3
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:43:290 (2) - If you do ^, do the same thing also here, but to the different direction ^
10. 01:53:879 (x) - Add circle here maybe, to follow the vocal? (imo the rhythm here will be less ambiguous if this circle is added) sorry, no change
11. 01:55:895 (1) - Add whistle on repeat, and, preferably, on the next (2) also ok.fixed
12. 02:21:610 (2) - You could try to move this ~3-4 grids up, the followpoints will create flow here ^
13. 02:31:694 (2) - Move one grid left and down, to prevent it touching 02:32:450 (1) - don't worry though, (3)'s position won't be abrupt (: ^
14. 02:59:929 (2,3) - How about adding some linear curve twist here? (: ^
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 03:30:181 (2,3,4) - Well, I experimented around this part, imo this part's flow could be improved by adding more sliders. Here's one alternative: ^
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 03:52:870 (3) - Maybe add standard (not C1) whistle here? ^
17. 04:11:274 (1) - I prefer not to put this note in the center. As this is the easiest difficulty, it will get covered by the spinner's hitburst, thus confusing newer players. (post-spinner notes in the center on harder diffs is great though) ok. grid up :3

[Hard]

• 00:43:290 (1,2) - I think it's better not to stack these slider's end, but create endpoint slider jump instead: ok. good form
  
  SPOILER

  

1. 00:49:089 (2,3,4,5) - Well, why not create an arc-shaped jump pattern instead here? Will flow better imo sorry, no change
2. 01:02:450 (4) - Suggestion, you can place this circle below (1) or (2)'s end to create a small jump actually ^
3. 01:25:139 (1,2,3) - Compressed streams, or square pattern, works better than stack here imo change pattern
4. 01:56:147 (2) - Add whistle on slider's end? fixed
5. 02:20:853 (3) - Somewhat too close to (1) rather than to (5), barely noticeable though change it
6. 02:50:601 (1,2,3) - Rather than stack I prefer repeating slider here, perhaps encircling (6) ok. change it
7. 03:06:232 (2,3) - Stack these two? Or copy-paste (2) to (3) and then press CTRL+J to make a jump here sorry, no change
8. 03:09:257 (3) - This repeating slider feels kinda weird imo, because you barely use triples in the map. Maybe just me though ok. change pattern
9. 03:22:618 (4) - What happened to the second-to-last waypoint orz >_< Move it few grids down maybe? wow... mistakes fixed~
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:34:215 (2,3) - Perhaps you can arrange this so (1,2,3,4) could form a tilted diamond pattern? sorry, no change
11. 03:56:652 (3) - Remove whistle? (Like what you did on 03:54:635 (3)) fixed~

Well, imo most parts in Normal are mapped linearly... I think for soft songs like this it's better to use more bezier sliders. Hard is awesome though.

Good luck kosiga ~

Niva~ Thanks for mod a lot ~

Sorry... I am very late..
When I see this map it is already
Very sorry ( I'm baka

bossandy wrote:

Sorry... I am very late.. no problem
When I see this map it is already
Very sorry ( I'm baka

yea. already

but when I was asked to mod, it was already. because mod is a little more necessary for me.

your not baka ><! and thanks

Hi Kosiga! I'm looking for some Mod4Mod and I saw your queue, so here I go

[General:]

- You have to enable the Epilepsy Warning because the StoryBoard has a lot of Flashing images
- Preview Point: I read some previous mods posts and I'm agree with lovhin to change this, because appear where the map finished already. A suggestion, maybe you can add it in 187996, because it's a Similar Lyrics

[Normal:]

00:46:820 (4): Following the music and looking that it's a Normal where the combos could be shorts, it's better if you add a New Combo here. Also fit fine because you separate that in 3 notes each combos
00:49:089 (x): I listen a little tick on the Instrumental, so, I think that it's a good Idea if you add a Note here (with whistle if it possible), also it's betterto this kind of difficulties if you start the section in White Tick
01:02:954 (3): Follow better the Music if youmake this Slider 1/2 bigger, so, this Slider have to finish in 01:03:458 (Red Tick)
01:53:879 (x): Following the Vocla, it's better if you add a note here
02:02:198 (x): The Rhytmical Break looks a bit weird here, becuase it's just in 1/2, also this flash kiai doesn't fit very well if you have this Rhytmical Break. So, listening the Instrumental, and to make fit better the Flash Kiai, I suggest you to add a Note that fit perfect with all
02:26:400 (4): Add a hitfinish at the beginning of this Slider because fit better with the music
02:30:433 (1): (^)
02:49:341 (2): Add a Whistle at the end of this Slider, if you listen the music, the instrumental sounds like that
02:56:652 (1): I think that this need an emphasis, to make that, I suggest you to add a Finish at the Beginning of this Slider
03:04:719 (1): Flow better and looks better if you make it a Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H)
03:10:265 (3): I don't like it how to play it the double Whistle, don't fit very well. So, remove it from this note, the Clap plays fine without it
03:12:282 (2): (^)
03:24:131 (1): Add a Whistle in the Reverse Arrow, fit perfect with the Instrumental
04:12:282: Try to finish the map here, in the same place as Hard diff.


[Hard:]

-Settings:
--> Plays better if you increase by 1 Tick the HP Drain Rate, I think that in 6 it's a bit low (HP+1)

00:39:509 (1): Following the music, this note belongs to previous pattern, for this reason, it's better if you Remove this New Combo and add it on the next note (Slider in 00:40:013)
00:54:383 (1): I think that sounds fine, if you add a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider
01:41:274 (3): The Rhythm change here, maybe you can add a New Combo
02:02:198 (x): Same as Normal Diff.
02:26:400 (4): The music sounds like a finish, so it's better if you add one at the beginning of this Slider
03:18:458 (3,4): This jump is a bit unpredictable, it's better if you mantain the same distance as before, between each notes
03:22:618 (4): This Slider Speed change it's a bit unpredictable, maybe you can add a New Combo to make it more predictable

This map looks very good, I think that it's ready for bubble
Star and Good Luck with your map

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi Kosiga! I'm looking for some Mod4Mod and I saw your queue, so here I go

[General:]

- You have to enable the Epilepsy Warning because the StoryBoard has a lot of Flashing images I ask MAT/BAT
- Preview Point: I read some previous mods posts and I'm agree with lovhin to change this, because appear where the map finished already. A suggestion, maybe you can add it in 187996, because it's a Similar Lyrics not similar Llrics I prefer the point of this preview ;x;

[Normal:]

00:46:820 (4): Following the music and looking that it's a Normal where the combos could be shorts, it's better if you add a New Combo here. Also fit fine because you separate that in 3 notes each combos hm. ok fixed~
00:49:089 (x): I listen a little tick on the Instrumental, so, I think that it's a good Idea if you add a Note here (with whistle if it possible), also it's betterto this kind of difficulties if you start the section in White Tick oh. ok~ but 00:47:576 (1) - extended the slider
01:02:954 (3): Follow better the Music if youmake this Slider 1/2 bigger, so, this Slider have to finish in 01:03:458 (Red Tick) sorry, no change ><
01:53:879 (x): Following the Vocla, it's better if you add a note here ^
02:02:198 (x): The Rhytmical Break looks a bit weird here, becuase it's just in 1/2, also this flash kiai doesn't fit very well if you have this Rhytmical Break. So, listening the Instrumental, and to make fit better the Flash Kiai, I suggest you to add a Note that fit perfect with al There is no it and wants to go here. sorry...
l
02:26:400 (4): Add a hitfinish at the beginning of this Slider because fit better with the music fixed
02:30:433 (1): (^) sorry, there is not the strong tuning here ><
02:49:341 (2): Add a Whistle at the end of this Slider, if you listen the music, the instrumental sounds like that sorry, no change
02:56:652 (1): I think that this need an emphasis, to make that, I suggest you to add a Finish at the Beginning of this Slider ^
03:04:719 (1): Flow better and looks better if you make it a Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H) ok. fixed
03:10:265 (3): I don't like it how to play it the double Whistle, don't fit very well. So, remove it from this note, the Clap plays fine without it change it~ and hitsound something change~
03:12:282 (2): (^) ^
03:24:131 (1): Add a Whistle in the Reverse Arrow, fit perfect with the Instrumental ^
04:12:282: Try to finish the map here, in the same place as Hard diff. sorry, no change


[Hard:]

-Settings:
--> Plays better if you increase by 1 Tick the HP Drain Rate, I think that in 6 it's a bit low (HP+1) ok. HD +1

00:39:509 (1): Following the music, this note belongs to previous pattern, for this reason, it's better if you Remove this New Combo and add it on the next note (Slider in 00:40:013) hmm.. ok fixed
00:54:383 (1): I think that sounds fine, if you add a Whistle at the beginning of this Slider ^
01:41:274 (3): The Rhythm change here, maybe you can add a New Combo sorry, 01:43:290 (3) & 01:45:307 (3) - I want to fit in this way
02:02:198 (x): Same as Normal Diff. sorry, no change ><
02:26:400 (4): The music sounds like a finish, so it's better if you add one at the beginning of this Slider ok. fixed
03:18:458 (3,4): This jump is a bit unpredictable, it's better if you mantain the same distance as before, between each notes 03:18:332 (1) - add NC
03:22:618 (4): This Slider Speed change it's a bit unpredictable, maybe you can add a New Combo to make it more predictable ok. fixed~

This map looks very good, I think that it's ready for bubble
Star and Good Luck with your map

mancusojuanmattos Thanks for mod & star~☆

[General]
imo a flashy warning is needed, but you may need more opinions

[Hard]

[Normal]
01:05:475 - same as Hard
01:33:711 (1) - remove whistle at the beginning?
02:02:198 - add a note?

a bit long but it's fine in overall, btw I still recommend you to soften the whistle sound a bit <__<, about hitsuond arrangement I'm not really sure, better ask a bit more opinions -w-

These suggestions are helpful and if you don't like it, don't fix it and move on to a next one.

~Hard~

00:51:610 (8) - x:256 y:161.
00:58:416 (2) - x:125 y:193.
01:26:652 (2) - x:257 y:230.
01:30:685 (2) - x:167 y:31.
03:21:610 (2) - x:127 y:237.

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
imo a flashy warning is needed, but you may need more opinions hmm...okay.. added

[Hard]

SPOILER

01:05:727 - not really understand why you are making it gradually softer, anyway mute the whole slider instead of gradual change would be nice ._. fixed
01:25:895 (1,2) - stack properly fixed ?
01:31:694 (4,2,4) - In this sentence you keep on using normal-whistle regularly, the point it that whistle fits well at the end of every sentence, but it may not work well in the middle. I prefer keeping this sentence quiet...
01:39:761 (2) - whistle at beginning?
01:41:274 (3) - NC would be better in case this is a new sentence of the lyric fixed
01:48:837 - being nazi on hitsound -w- The loudness change is quite obvious (60->70%) and it gives a feeling that this is an accent. In fact the vocal pitch and loudness remains the same so remains at 60% will be fine. (i.e. you can delete the timing line)
01:49:845 - sometimes you may want a whistle-sliderslide like here~
01:53:122 - these two combos are still in the same section so in order to maintain uniqueness use that normal whistle -w-
02:02:198 - how about adding one here? hmm... It is said to be better placed in a lot of people, and then placing a note here ;x;
02:22:366 (6) - remove whistle fits with music
02:29:425 (6) - ^
02:30:433 (1,2,3) - I highly recommend you to change the pattern a bit because (1,2) is 1/2 separation while (2,3) is 1/1 separation, but both of them is in zero spacing which misleads players. ok. change pattern
02:31:694 (3) - remove whistle?
02:39:005 (1) - move to around (200,36) so that (1,2,3) would look like equilateral triangle? fixed
02:58:416 (1,2) - stack -w- fixed -w-?
03:20:853 (1,2,1) - ^ stack well ^
03:35:979 (1,2,3,4,1) - [Nazi again] move (1,2,3,4) so that they can form a regular pentagon ok. change it
03:56:400 (2,3,4,5) - a xxx x pattern may fit better change it

[Normal]
01:05:475 - same as Hard fixed
01:33:711 (1) - remove whistle at the beginning?
02:02:198 - add a note? fixed

a bit long but it's fine in overall, btw I still recommend you to soften the whistle sound a bit <__<, about hitsuond arrangement I'm not really sure, better ask a bit more opinions -w-

I have reviewed all of the hitsound. ( to soften the whistle , change custom sound clap , to put simple patterns )
I think that made ​​it easier to hear more before :3

wmfchris Thank you for mod~

kokoroanime wrote:

These suggestions are helpful and if you don't like it, don't fix it and move on to a next one.

~Hard~

00:51:610 (8) - x:256 y:161.
00:58:416 (2) - x:125 y:193.
01:26:652 (2) - x:257 y:230.
01:30:685 (2) - x:167 y:31.
03:21:610 (2) - x:127 y:237.

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.

all fixed

kokoroanime thank you for mod ~

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