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765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size)
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It' recommended to compress the BG a bit as they occupies quite a lot of spaces, compressing them releases ~1MB.
[Insane]
00:00:762 (1) - remove the clap like you have done later (you only used finish but not clap in other accents)
00:17:879 (2) - Comparing with 00:18:585 - the accent here is stronger, so I'll prefer a finish here.
01:18:056 (3) - remove whistle like 01:17:350 (3) -
01:22:026 (4) - the slider should only last to 01:22:291 - because you can hear a drum beat there and the melodic stream starting at 01:21:938 - actually stops at 01:22:291 - . You may want to add a single note at 01:22:467 - .
[Bakaru]
00:09:938 (3,4,5) - just a placement suggestion: you may try to put (3,4) so that (1,3,4) are on the same circle around (2) and they are in equal spacing apparently like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346130 (Then you'll have to fix the position of (5))
00:47:350 (4) - sounds weaker than previous (3) so remove whistle? (In previous notes you used to whistle on only one of the notes too)
Once I wanted to say use S:C1 to the sliders at the beginning to mute them completely, but well they are so soft now so it's not a problem lol
[Hard]
00:09:938 (5) - ... I guess there's no clap at the ending?
00:17:703 (2) - add finish at the ending like what you've done at 00:09:938 (5) -
[Normal]
00:21:938 (3) - out of screen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346142
[Easy]
00:20:129 (2) - The deflected time might cause a difficulty for newbies to play, I'll prefer a short break here.
somehow the slidertick beat can be done better in the kiai time, and holding a regular beat there is quite important, like 00:58:997 (1) - ... Without a regular beat, the rest of the hitsounds might be a bit odd.
In overall quite nicely done but one unrankable issue, when you've fixed find me.
[Insane]
00:00:762 (1) - remove the clap like you have done later (you only used finish but not clap in other accents)
00:17:879 (2) - Comparing with 00:18:585 - the accent here is stronger, so I'll prefer a finish here.
01:18:056 (3) - remove whistle like 01:17:350 (3) -
01:22:026 (4) - the slider should only last to 01:22:291 - because you can hear a drum beat there and the melodic stream starting at 01:21:938 - actually stops at 01:22:291 - . You may want to add a single note at 01:22:467 - .
[Bakaru]
00:09:938 (3,4,5) - just a placement suggestion: you may try to put (3,4) so that (1,3,4) are on the same circle around (2) and they are in equal spacing apparently like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346130 (Then you'll have to fix the position of (5))
00:47:350 (4) - sounds weaker than previous (3) so remove whistle? (In previous notes you used to whistle on only one of the notes too)
Once I wanted to say use S:C1 to the sliders at the beginning to mute them completely, but well they are so soft now so it's not a problem lol
[Hard]
00:09:938 (5) - ... I guess there's no clap at the ending?
00:17:703 (2) - add finish at the ending like what you've done at 00:09:938 (5) -
[Normal]
00:21:938 (3) - out of screen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346142
[Easy]
00:20:129 (2) - The deflected time might cause a difficulty for newbies to play, I'll prefer a short break here.
somehow the slidertick beat can be done better in the kiai time, and holding a regular beat there is quite important, like 00:58:997 (1) - ... Without a regular beat, the rest of the hitsounds might be a bit odd.
In overall quite nicely done but one unrankable issue, when you've fixed find me.
Topic Starter
Uploaded !!wmfchris wrote:
It' recommended to compress the BG a bit as they occupies quite a lot of spaces, compressing them releases ~1MB.
ok , I changed it to 800x600 if it's ok.
[Insane]
00:00:762 (1) - remove the clap like you have done later (you only used finish but not clap in other accents)
00:17:879 (2) - Comparing with 00:18:585 - the accent here is stronger, so I'll prefer a finish here.
01:18:056 (3) - remove whistle like 01:17:350 (3) -
01:22:026 (4) - the slider should only last to 01:22:291 - because you can hear a drum beat there and the melodic stream starting at 01:21:938 - actually stops at 01:22:291 - . You may want to add a single note at 01:22:467 - .
[Bakaru]
00:09:938 (3,4,5) - just a placement suggestion: you may try to put (3,4) so that (1,3,4) are on the same circle around (2) and they are in equal spacing apparently like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346130 (Then you'll have to fix the position of (5))
00:47:350 (4) - sounds weaker than previous (3) so remove whistle? (In previous notes you used to whistle on only one of the notes too)
Once I wanted to say use S:C1 to the sliders at the beginning to mute them completely, but well they are so soft now so it's not a problem lol
[Hard]
00:09:938 (5) - ... I guess there's no clap at the ending?
00:17:703 (2) - add finish at the ending like what you've done at 00:09:938 (5) -
[Easy]
00:20:129 (2) - The deflected time might cause a difficulty for newbies to play, I'll prefer a short break here.
somehow the slidertick beat can be done better in the kiai time, and holding a regular beat there is quite important, like 00:58:997 (1) - ... Without a regular beat, the rest of the hitsounds might be a bit odd.
In overall quite nicely done but one unrankable issue, when you've fixed find me.
normal: the note is still out marginally http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348329
and note that in any case the note should be inside the field, and in easy mod it's out of the screen...so better leave some space there (I guess you'll need to remap slightly rather than simple movement.)
Others are fine now.
no kd.
and note that in any case the note should be inside the field, and in easy mod it's out of the screen...so better leave some space there (I guess you'll need to remap slightly rather than simple movement.)
Others are fine now.
no kd.
Topic Starter
Change for Suzully orzwmfchris wrote:
normal: the note is still out marginally http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348329
and note that in any case the note should be inside the field, and in easy mod it's out of the screen...so better leave some space there (I guess you'll need to remap slightly rather than simple movement.)
Others are fine now.
no kd.
The slider issue is fixed and the rest is fine.
rebubbled.
p.s. I guess this is bubble #1 because the last one is popped with unrankable stuffs?
rebubbled.
p.s. I guess this is bubble #1 because the last one is popped with unrankable stuffs?
Topic Starter
Awwww , Thank you for rebubbled ;w;
long..... ;_;
Waiting for ranking...
QAQ
hmmm all looks rankable, been a long wait with it bubbled i know but here we go ^^
congrats~
Yasora wrote:
congrats~
congratz 
Good job!
Yay finally congrats \:D/
Topic Starter
oh Yeah !! >< Thank you !
Yeah Yeah ~ congrats ><
congrats~
ขอแสดงความยินดี~ OvO
Chihaya suki!JoJo wrote:
ขอแสดงความยินดี~ OvO
Topic Starter
!!!JoJo wrote:
ขอแสดงความยินดี~ OvO
Gratz Hentaiiiiii > <
congrats~~~~~~~~~ 
Topic Starter
I'm not...Thank you all ww-Sekai- wrote:
Gratz Hentaiiiiii > <
Yaaaay Net <3
oh wow i remember seeing this map in pending and look at it now. it got ranked 
. congratz 
. congratz yeeeeeeeey
congratz :3
Congrats, Net~
congratz~ :3
too long dude, too long
grats anyway :3
grats anyway :3
Love this song, great job TwT!
gratz!
finally
good job
good job
no way!
Topic Starter
Thank you guys TwT