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ririco

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ririco 2012-02-11T16:59:50+00:00

1st mod here we go >w<

[Easy]

OD and AR +1 ?

00:17:350 (2) - 1 grip up~ :3
00:24:409 (3) - ^
00:28:997 (1) - remove this NC~
00:30:938 (4) - NC ~
00:49:820 (1) - i think it will be perfect if you move it one grip up ~ :3
01:03:585 (2) - remove whistle and add a clap o.o?
01:14:173 (2) - curve this slider and remove the reverse, and add a note?

[Suzully's Normal]

01:00:056 (1) - remove NC?
01:02:350 (7) - NC and remove the NC on next slider~

seems fine to me, great work~ :3

[Hard]

00:06:232 (1) - remove the NC~

nice work @.@

[S i R i R u's Insane]

unsnapped sliders

[Vicho's Insane]

fine~

nice work Net-chan, Star and good luck :3

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-02-12T06:50:42+00:00

Change something, Thank you for mod -Sekai-

kirinoimouto22

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kirinoimouto22 2012-02-22T03:09:00+00:00

star for you
Good luck

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-02-24T05:40:41+00:00

kirinoimouto22 wrote:
star for you
Good luck

Thanks for star ^ ^

KuronumaSawako

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KuronumaSawako 2012-03-02T21:40:41+00:00

star deeesu! Netsukawa is a good mapper so star!

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-03-03T15:03:16+00:00

KuronumaSawako wrote:
star deeesu! Netsukawa is a good mapper so star!

Thanks for star n w n /

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2012-03-21T12:17:22+00:00

[general]

Settings

Missing Skin Files:
reversearrow.png
you need add sliderborder when you have skin~
when you have video/SB . you must remove letterBox during Break

[Easy]

Settings

unused green line:
01:07:820 -

mapping

00:00:204 (1) - unsnap slider end. don't use slider wnen you have different red timing sections. see~↓
00:56:526 (2) - suggest move to 00:56:703 - I think this rhythm is more tallies this song.

[Suzully's Normal]

Settings

mapping

00:19:026 (1,1) - Too far spacing for the center and too close rhythm in Normal diff. I think~
00:57:232 (1,3) - Oh~It's nazi. but see~ I try to ctrl+H to check those it's looks a kinda over pattern~ see it↓

[Hard]

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

00:59:879 (5,7) -

mapping

00:00:734 (3) - Unsnapped slider
00:39:232 (1,2,3) - spacing have a bit over... check it
01:19:114 (2,3,4) - ^

[BaKaRu's S i R i R u's Insane]

mapping

check all unsnap note and slider
00:41:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - well I have some idea to this pattern~↓ I try to reveal (1,2)'s Downbeat and (3,4,5)'s anti-jump
If you like this~<3
```
206,56,41350,5,4
295,56,41703,1,4
464,112,42056,1,2
432,112,42409,1,2
392,112,42761,1,2
```

[Vicho's Insane]

Settings

unused green line:
01:28:291 -

mapping

00:00:734 (1) - unsnap slider
00:13:026 (4,5) - uneven spacing
00:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ [00:17:261 (4,5,6,7) - too far spacing then other note in this stream]

[aabc's Taiko]

Settings

It's should remove letterBox!
suggest remove video in this diff
HP set 5?

mapping

00:33:232 (1) - d?
00:48:761 (3) - D?
00:56:879 (2,3) - remove? 打起來很詭異... 我test過後感覺這邊打起來怪怪的所以建議刪了

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

good luck~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2012-03-21T12:22:37+00:00

Unsnap มันแค่แป๊กเน็ตแก้เองไปได้เลยนะ

ส่วนที่เขาว่าก็แก้ไปได้เลยที่เดียว

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-03-22T14:40:38+00:00

S i R i R u wrote:
Unsnap มันแค่แป๊กเน็ตแก้เองไปได้เลยนะ ส่วนที่เขาว่าก็แก้ไปได้เลยที่เดียว

รับทราบ owo\

Vicho

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Vicho 2012-03-23T05:07:31+00:00

unsnapped slider fixed

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [Vicho's Insane].osu

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-03-23T05:37:59+00:00

Change some ~

riffy

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riffy 2012-03-23T08:51:26+00:00

yo~

Vicho's Insane
00:04:467 (5,6,7) - unstack (6) and (7) hard to play ><
00:06:232 (4) - i can't see (4_ because it's covered by 300 (2)
00:20:879 (2) - moce nc to (5) looks better
01:00:232 (5) - nc here. looks better

S i R i R u's Insane
01:24:056 (1) - too short. i think auto should get at least 3000 score D:

Hard
00:10:291 - place circle here
00:18:232 (3) - ^

Suzully's Normal
00:10:556 (1) - spinner here? too suddenly! i think

Easy
00:28:997 (3) - try to mak nice shape D:
00:47:350 (2) - ^ booring
01:25:379 (1) - OMG! Spinner appears too suddenly ><

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Great map! Good luck :3
I hope my mod will be usefull

aabc271

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aabc271 2012-03-23T09:23:43+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
[aabc's Taiko]

Settings
It's should remove letterBox! OK~
suggest remove video in this diff OK~
HP set 5? As I said before, I would like to keep HP 4 for my diffs > <
mapping
00:33:232 (1) - d? OK~
00:48:761 (3) - D? I think K is fine as it fits the pitch better ~
00:56:879 (2,3) - remove? 打起來很詭異... 我test過後感覺這邊打起來怪怪的所以建議刪了 Fixed, but kkk seems fine for me.
good luck~

Thx for your modding :3

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [aabc's Taiko].osu

mercury2004

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mercury2004 2012-03-23T11:32:16+00:00

Mini mod na net

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules or something that doesn't right. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
Fine all

Easy Difficulty
Fine~

Suzully's Normal Difficulty
Fine~

Hard Difficulty
fine!

S i R i R u's Insane Difficulty
るるさまkiai忘れですか？

Vicho's Insane Difficulty
01:22:026 (4) - I feel this slider do not match the song at all.

DONE!! GJ all of you Star!

If this mod proved to be not helpful. Don't kudos

Leorda

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Leorda 2012-03-29T09:26:39+00:00

Hello there

General
* You need a reversearrow.png for completing a hitcircle skin set

Easy
00:27:232 (x) - Add note here, because some beginners are click 00:27:409 (2) earlier
00:43:644 (x) - Add note here? It seems empty for me
00:55:114 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by hitbursts, and it's hard to see the path for beginners
00:59:173 (1) - I don't like if the tail slider is snap at red tick. Consider to snap at previous white tick

Suzully's Normal
00:20:526 (1) - A bit too far from spinner, I guess

Hard
00:55:114 (1) - Almost overlapped by spinner-osu, could hidden at gameplay

G a Y i R u's Insane
01:24:938 (1,2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, it's hidden for players

Vicho's Insane
00:20:350 (1,2,3) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, it's hidden for players

That's I can find, sorry

h-728

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h-728 2012-03-29T09:49:58+00:00

Nice map
It looks like having no problem especially.
Star~

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-03-29T10:03:10+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hello there

General
* You need a reversearrow.png for completing a hitcircle skin set ok now already put that skin in ~

Easy
00:27:232 (x) - Add note here, because some beginners are click 00:27:409 (2) earlier ok
00:43:644 (x) - Add note here? It seems empty for me ok
00:55:114 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by hitbursts, and it's hard to see the path for beginners ok
00:59:173 (1) - I don't like if the tail slider is snap at red tick. Consider to snap at previous white tick ok

Hard
00:55:114 (1) - Almost overlapped by spinner-osu, could hidden at gameplay ok

That's I can find, sorry nvm >w<

Thank you for mod my map <3

and Thanks for star ~ h-728

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2012-03-29T11:07:53+00:00

(ﾟДﾟ)

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [S i R i R u's Insane].osu

Suzully

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Suzully 2012-03-29T16:17:53+00:00

765PRO ALLFIXES - DONE!!!!
~~joke~~

EDIT: Fixed Kitsuneko's too. I am 鈍器 yeah.

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [Suzully's Normal].osu

Last edited by Suzully 2012-03-30T03:11:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kitsuneko

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Kitsuneko 2012-03-29T17:34:49+00:00

waaaaaaaaaa
modding as your request

[General]
clear

[Easy]
(I know you are following vocal, but more simple rhythm is preferred in Easy)
00:04:997 (1) - RNC
00:07:114 (2) - NC
00:09:232 (1) - RNC
00:20:129 (2) - unsnapped, I think 00:20:173 is better
00:27:232 (2) - remove or move to 00:26:879

[鈍器's Normal]
00:00:204 (1) - 横向きの方が僕は好みかなあ上からだと右側が窮屈に感じる

[Hard]
00:47:350 (5,6) - yes, spacing
01:05:879 (4,5) - flip notes

01:13:467 (1) - RNC

[S i R i R u's Insane]
01:24:056 (1) - extend to 01:24:938, just suggestion

[Vicho's Insane]
has no errors

pro mappers

that's all from me

good luck Netsukawa chan (*'n'*)

/me runs away

Mok

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Mok 2012-03-29T21:19:13+00:00

Our m4m~ Sorry if i'm posting just now >.<

[General]
Full Submit your map, since i downloaded it today and the only diff i could got was the taiko one.

[Easy]
00:09:232 (1) - Remove NC.
00:27:232 (2) - 1/1 before.
00:49:291 - Add.
00:49:820 (1) - Remove NC.
00:50:526 (2) - Remove.
00:50:526 - Make the spinner start here, and finish at 00:54:056 with 5% of Volume.
00:57:232 (2) - Remove NC.

[Suzully]
Okay

[Hard]
00:10:291 (6) - I don't like this, try to extend the previous slider.

Dear Insaners,
THIS SONG DOESN'T NEED TRIPLETS EVERYWHERE, AND I'M GOING TO MENTION SOME I THINK AWFUL.
With love,
Mok. ♥

[Siriru]
00:09:232 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can't get this placements, it's like Catholican cross... Do you like it? I think it's not in your mapping style, so it concern me a bit ^^
00:32:703 (4,5,6) - Ugly stream.
01:24:056 (1) - Haters gonna hate this part, lol.

[Vicho] (What did you do? You can do awesomeness during Insanes)
00:12:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not needed, it isn't a good sounding stream either.
00:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^.
00:20:350 (1,2,3) - ^.
00:32:703 (3,4,5) - ^.
And most of them from this part ;w;
01:22:026 (4) - No need.

Finished, in the whole mapset is very good, i personally like this one. Hope to see it ranked soon :3 Star!

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-03-30T04:31:59+00:00

Thank you for mod ~

-Kitsuneko Change some ~ /me eats Kitsuneko

-Mok Change some too ~

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2012-03-30T12:19:24+00:00

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [S i R i R u's Insane].osu

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2012-04-02T04:46:19+00:00

request from in-game PM

[Easy]
00:00:762 (2) - I can't hear the clap sound from BGM..remove clap?
00:27:232 (2,3) - sounds not very good..at least add clap to 2?
In fact , the hitclap on and off sounds not good imo.

[Suzully's Normal]
00:21:938 (3) - a liitle out of sight...make this like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/280568
01:14:526 (2) - add clao to the beginning and whistle to the end
01:16:997 (1) - if you want to follow finish sound from BGM.make this end at 01:18:232

[Hard]
00:31:997 (2) - finish sounds not good

[SRR]
01:24:056 (1) - I really don't like this spinner..It's short and It has 1/2 note behind

[vicho]
fine

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-04-04T10:09:24+00:00

Thanks for mod No Gu !

Backstep

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Backstep 2012-04-06T15:12:02+00:00

[General]
Maybe you can make some skin element for this map D:

[Vicho's Insane]
00:19:026 (1) - spinner end at the white line ?
00:27:056 (8) - end of slider finish sound i think it's okay.
00:34:820 (X) - Add note ?

[aabc's taiko]
*You have 3 slider velocities D:
*01:07:820 and 01:08:526 green timing is unnecessary for taiko diff.
00:07:820 (2,3,1,2) - dkdd
00:08:703 (1,1,1,2) - kkdd

Other diff, Fine (I think).

P.S. I can't help much with this map, coz it's good map

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-04-06T15:45:29+00:00

ขอบคุณมากนะครับพี่มอส แต่ต้องขอดูก่อนว่าพวกเหล่าเกสดิฟจะเปลี่ยนอะไรไหม

aabc271

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aabc271 2012-04-07T07:10:00+00:00

backstep wrote:
[aabc's taiko]
*You have 3 slider velocities D: It's actually fine to have more than 3 multipliers because they only affects the speed of notes, as seen here. Unlike solo which also affects the speed of sliders.
*01:07:820 and 01:08:526 green timing is unnecessary for taiko diff. I used them to separate the 2 kiai sections, so it's not unnecessary. While some think that the separation is unnecessary, I think it's more based on mappers' preferences as it doesn't really affect much in gameplay ~
00:07:820 (2,3,1,2) - dkdd I think the current one fits the pitch of music more :3
00:08:703 (1,1,1,2) - kkdd ^

Nothing changed, but well, thanks for your modding :3

DJPop

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DJPop 2012-04-12T05:18:46+00:00

- Remove all character's names in tags

~Easy~
00:00:204 (1) - remove
00:20:173 (2) - move to 00:20:129
01:09:938 (2) - remove finish
01:11:350 (3) - ^

~Suzully's Normal~
00:19:026 (1) - end on the same position like other diffs
01:16:997 (1) - end on left red tick

~Hard~
00:10:291 (6) - remove
00:21:409 (5) - remove claps
00:31:820 (1) - add finish
00:31:997 (2) - remove finish
00:57:232 (2) - remove claps
01:04:820 (2) - ^
01:06:056 (5) - add clap

~S i R i R u's Insane~
01:25:467 (1) - silence hitsound

~Vicho's Insane~
Fine

Suzully

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Suzully 2012-04-12T13:33:02+00:00

Almost fixed. Thanks modders!

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [Suzully's Normal].osu

Vicho

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Vicho 2012-04-13T02:51:00+00:00

some fixes~

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [Vicho's Insane].osu

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-04-13T03:11:55+00:00

DJPop wrote:
- Remove all character's names in tags
-Fixed
~Easy~
00:00:204 (1) - remove
00:20:173 (2) - move to 00:20:129
01:09:938 (2) - remove finish
01:11:350 (3) - ^
-All Fixed
~Hard~
00:10:291 (6) - remove
00:21:409 (5) - remove claps
00:31:820 (1) - add finish
00:31:997 (2) - remove finish
00:57:232 (2) - remove claps
01:04:820 (2) - ^
01:06:056 (5) - add clap
-All Fixed
~S i R i R u's Insane~
01:25:467 (1) - silence hitsound
-ลุงเขาอาจลืม, Fixed

ขอบคุณครับพี่ป๊อป

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-04-13T14:07:24+00:00

._.

[aabc's Taiko]
00:14:703 (1) - k?
00:38:526 - you know sliders = 1/4 stream :3 though it's ok atm
01:23:879 - ^

that's all, no kd

aabc271

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aabc271 2012-04-13T14:16:53+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
._. ._.

[aabc's Taiko]
00:14:703 (1) - k? OK ~
00:38:526 - you know sliders = 1/4 stream :3 though it's ok atm Of course I know it's 1/4 stream, or else I won't use them www
01:23:879 - ^ ^

that's all, no kd

Thx for modding :3

Download: 765PRO ALLSTARS - CHANGE!!!! (TV Size) (Netsukawa) [aabc's Taiko].osu

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2012-04-18T11:01:34+00:00

M4M~

[overall]:

Add tags Ritsuko Haruka Ami Mami Hibiki Yukiho Miki Makoto Chihaya Iori Azusa Takane Yayoi
already Added Vicho's Insane why dont have other diffs

[Vicho'sInsane]:

AR+1?
00:24:056 (7) - combo so long Add NC
00:26:526 (6) - better to me NC
01:12:056 (6) - ^

[S i R i R u's Insane]:

01:14:085 (x) - Add note?
01:23:173 (5) - Add nc

[Hard]:

00:26:526 (3) - beginning finish?

[Suzully's Normal]:

Fine~

[Easy]:

01:24:761 (2) - SliderStart01:24:761 Repeatonetime 01:24:938 end 01:25:114 sounds better to me
If you change the thing mentioned above start spinner 01:25:291

Nice map overall.
nothing found all diffs T_T
anyway, Good luck ranked soon>w</

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-04-18T13:03:40+00:00

S o r d a wrote:
M4M~

[overall]:
Add tags Ritsuko Haruka Ami Mami Hibiki Yukiho Miki Makoto Chihaya Iori Azusa Takane Yayoi
DJPop wrote:
- Remove all character's names in tags
already Added Vicho's Insane why dont have other diffs
lolwut , what do you mean xD
[Hard]:
00:26:526 (3) - beginning finish?
-Fixed
[Easy]:
01:24:761 (2) - SliderStart01:24:761 Repeatonetime 01:24:938 end 01:25:114 sounds better to me
If you change the thing mentioned above start spinner 01:25:291
-No sorry , I think it's fine ~
Nice map overall. Thanks ~
nothing found all diffs T_T NP ~ w ~
anyway, Good luck ranked soon>w</ \>w<

Thanks =w="

DJPop

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DJPop 2012-04-18T18:11:02+00:00

On the second thought, those character's names are fine.
You can add tags Ritsuko Haruka Ami Mami Hibiki Yukiho Miki Makoto Chihaya Iori Azusa Takane Yayoi.
Don't forget their surnames

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-04-19T09:21:46+00:00

S o r d a wrote:
M4M~

[overall]:
Add tags Ritsuko Haruka Ami Mami Hibiki Yukiho Miki Makoto Chihaya Iori Azusa Takane Yayoi
DJPop wrote:
- Remove all character's names in tags
DJPop wrote:
On the second thought, those character's names are fine.
You can add tags Ritsuko Haruka Ami Mami Hibiki Yukiho Miki Makoto Chihaya Iori Azusa Takane Yayoi.
Don't forget their surnames
-Fixed

Ohh ~ , Ok Fixed

Edit : Fixed RuRu's Diff too
Edit 2 : Fixed Vicho's Diff too

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-03T00:36:56+00:00

Hi ~ Netsukawa ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[S i R i R u's Insane]

01:24:938 (1,2) - Maybe Ctrl+R much better here,because almost hidden by 押忍 likes this.
SPOILER

[Suzully's Normal]

00:20:526 (1) - Make more symmetry slider,now not symmetry.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-06-03T02:40:17+00:00

Fixed it all ~ , Thanks Rika >< ~!

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-03T02:56:02+00:00

Also pls add SliderBorder : 255,255,255 for all diff.

And use this code by normal diff.

332,200,20526,6,0,B|332:264|256:284|176:260|180:192,1,220,4|0

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-06-03T03:05:12+00:00

Added !

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-06-03T03:13:24+00:00

OK ~ everything looks fine now ~

Good luck with rank ~

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-06-03T03:14:25+00:00

Thanks Rika >w<

Kuria

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Kuria 2012-06-03T10:44:38+00:00

waiting... loading...

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-06-19T11:34:22+00:00

It' recommended to compress the BG a bit as they occupies quite a lot of spaces, compressing them releases ~1MB.

[Insane]
00:00:762 (1) - remove the clap like you have done later (you only used finish but not clap in other accents)
00:17:879 (2) - Comparing with 00:18:585 - the accent here is stronger, so I'll prefer a finish here.
01:18:056 (3) - remove whistle like 01:17:350 (3) -
01:22:026 (4) - the slider should only last to 01:22:291 - because you can hear a drum beat there and the melodic stream starting at 01:21:938 - actually stops at 01:22:291 - . You may want to add a single note at 01:22:467 - .

[Bakaru]
00:09:938 (3,4,5) - just a placement suggestion: you may try to put (3,4) so that (1,3,4) are on the same circle around (2) and they are in equal spacing apparently like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346130 (Then you'll have to fix the position of (5))
00:47:350 (4) - sounds weaker than previous (3) so remove whistle? (In previous notes you used to whistle on only one of the notes too)
Once I wanted to say use S:C1 to the sliders at the beginning to mute them completely, but well they are so soft now so it's not a problem lol

[Hard]
00:09:938 (5) - ... I guess there's no clap at the ending?
00:17:703 (2) - add finish at the ending like what you've done at 00:09:938 (5) -

[Normal]
00:21:938 (3) - out of screen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346142

[Easy]
00:20:129 (2) - The deflected time might cause a difficulty for newbies to play, I'll prefer a short break here.
somehow the slidertick beat can be done better in the kiai time, and holding a regular beat there is quite important, like 00:58:997 (1) - ... Without a regular beat, the rest of the hitsounds might be a bit odd.

In overall quite nicely done but one unrankable issue, when you've fixed find me.

Suzully

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Suzully 2012-06-20T09:03:55+00:00

Fixed, thanks chris

http://puu.sh/CgSI

Fumika

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Fumika 2012-06-21T09:39:22+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
It' recommended to compress the BG a bit as they occupies quite a lot of spaces, compressing them releases ~1MB.
ok , I changed it to 800x600 if it's ok.

[Insane]
00:00:762 (1) - remove the clap like you have done later (you only used finish but not clap in other accents) ok
00:17:879 (2) - Comparing with 00:18:585 - the accent here is stronger, so I'll prefer a finish here. ok
01:18:056 (3) - remove whistle like 01:17:350 (3) - ok
01:22:026 (4) - the slider should only last to 01:22:291 - because you can hear a drum beat there and the melodic stream starting at 01:21:938 - actually stops at 01:22:291 - . You may want to add a single note at 01:22:467 - . ok

[Bakaru]
00:09:938 (3,4,5) - just a placement suggestion: you may try to put (3,4) so that (1,3,4) are on the same circle around (2) and they are in equal spacing apparently like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346130 (Then you'll have to fix the position of (5)) ok
00:47:350 (4) - sounds weaker than previous (3) so remove whistle? (In previous notes you used to whistle on only one of the notes too) ok
Once I wanted to say use S:C1 to the sliders at the beginning to mute them completely, but well they are so soft now so it's not a problem lol

[Hard]
00:09:938 (5) - ... I guess there's no clap at the ending? ok
00:17:703 (2) - add finish at the ending like what you've done at 00:09:938 (5) - ok

[Easy]
00:20:129 (2) - The deflected time might cause a difficulty for newbies to play, I'll prefer a short break here. ok, deleted.
somehow the slidertick beat can be done better in the kiai time, and holding a regular beat there is quite important, like 00:58:997 (1) - ... Without a regular beat, the rest of the hitsounds might be a bit odd. ok, changed.

In overall quite nicely done but one unrankable issue, when you've fixed find me.

Uploaded !!

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2012-06-21T12:43:10+00:00

normal: the note is still out marginally http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348329
and note that in any case the note should be inside the field, and in easy mod it's out of the screen...so better leave some space there (I guess you'll need to remap slightly rather than simple movement.)

Others are fine now.

no kd.

Fumika

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Topic Starter

Fumika 2012-06-21T13:16:07+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
normal: the note is still out marginally http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348329
and note that in any case the note should be inside the field, and in easy mod it's out of the screen...so better leave some space there (I guess you'll need to remap slightly rather than simple movement.)

Others are fine now.

no kd.

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