1. Challenge (4.9 stars, 282 notes)
2. Extra (5 stars, 299 notes)
3. Heavy (4.85 stars, 207 notes)
4. Light (1.28 stars, 60 notes)
5. Standard (3.43 stars, 104 notes)
6. Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 618 notes)

1. 00:14:105 (1) - add finish to the beginning?
2. 00:24:870 (3) - clap?
3. 00:31:223 (6,7,8) - doesn't look well for me, try this: http://puu.sh/dfjq
4. 00:33:164 (6,7) - I don't like how they lie under previous slider
5. 00:36:341 (8) - new combo?
6. 00:38:458 (6) - whistle?
7. 00:39:164 (1) - remove clap from here and put it to the end of 00:39:341 (3)
8. 00:41:635 (4) - remove claps from the 2nd and 4th repeats
9. 00:51:164 (2) - remove clap from the end?
10. 01:04:047 (1,2,3) - you better place them symmetrical
11. 01:07:399 (1,2) - whistle on body is too sudden, in my opinion. What if you remove it?
12. 01:16:576 (5) - I don't know why, but I don't like how does it look

spboxer3 wrote:

Hi~I'm from #modreqs

[general]

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1. Settings
2. remove letterbox In Breaks in all diff (you have letter box in Taiko diff~remove it!!)
3. remove kiai #2 in all diff! ((it's not on the Downbeat and it not obvious effect
4. reset hitsound plz!! it's really too noise and not fit in this song

Done. reset hitsounds? huh.

[light]

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  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:58:047 -

Weird. It should've been removed on a previous upload. Fixed.

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:50:635 (1,2) -

Distance snapped, but okay.

mapping

• 00:05:635 (2) - let it regular? It's not regular now~ ((use ctrl+h check it
  00:16:929 (2) - awkward slider~let it pretty plz orz done
  00:18:341 (4) - ^ and too cover in Easy diff, I think. It's too confuse for the new player in Easy diff

1. 00:33:517 (3) - NC
2. 00:36:341 (5) - NC
3. 00:39:164 (7) - NC
4. 00:47:811 (1,1) - awkward slider
5. 00:52:046 (2,1,2) - confuse spacing for this rhythm!
6. 00:58:223 (1,2,3,4) - not good pattern, it's look like unconsidered pattern
7. 01:05:988 (5) - NC
8. 01:05:988 (5,6,7) - strange rhythm~The correct rhythm look like↓
   
   photo

   
9. 01:11:635 (5) - NC
10. 01:11:635 (5,6,7,8) - same as 01:05:988 (5,6,7) -
11. 01:14:458 (3) - ^
12. 01:17:282 (1,1) - too far spacing for the center and too close rhythm in Easy diff~

[Standard]

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  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   00:58:047 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:42:693 (3,7) -

mapping

1. 00:07:752 (1) - whistle on the slider head?
2. 00:27:517 (8) - too long stream in the standard diff
3. 00:43:399 (5) - NC
4. 00:53:282 (1) - I think you can let it more beautiful
5. 00:53:282 (1,3) - too cover in Standard diff
6. 00:56:105 (3) - awkward slider~let it pretty plz
7. 00:58:223 (1) - I think you can let it more beautiful redone with a spinner as a base
8. 01:07:223 (6) - NC
9. 01:13:046 (7) - NC
10. 01:21:693 (5) - ^

fixed most

[Heavy]

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  

1. 00:42:693 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2. 01:02:458 (4,5,6) -

mapping

1. 00:18:870 (4) - let it regular? It's not regular now~ ((use ctrl+h check it
2. 00:22:576 (4) - ^ a bit depart [nazi]
3. 00:23:988 (2) - ^
4. 00:30:694 (1) - awkward slider~it can be pretty
5. 00:31:223 (3) - ^
6. 00:43:223 (5) - NC
7. 00:50:988 (2) - set on the center?
8. 00:51:693 (4) - ^
9. 01:08:811 (3) - awkward slider~

nice finds ty.

[Challange]

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  

1. 00:43:576 (9,10) -
2. 01:10:929 (3,4) -

mapping

1. 00:08:282 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - lol this... it's look like unconsidered patter on purpose, will redo if someone else wants to
2. 00:15:517 (6) - awkward slider and a bit over the windows ranked maps have these sliders, done with purpose of a small rest in the flow
3. 00:16:929 (4) - ^
4. 00:23:635 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:31:223 (6) - awkward slide~
6. 00:34:399 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - (9,1)It's not good pattern~ It's overlaps? maybe you can let (1,2,3,4,5) move to stack on (9)~ I'd be happy of a pic to understand you
7. 01:05:811 (6,8,10) - Down 1 grid (size 3)?~ because I think you can should let 01:07:223 (10,3) - on stack~

nice.

[Taiko Oni]

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  Settings
  

1. set AR=5
   HP=5~7
   OD=5~7 ((from Taiko Rule
2. slider tick set 1
   

mapping

1. 00:30:693 (1,2,3,4) - 1/8 rhythm~ you sure? pretty sure, mostly for unique pattern, but another ask and change.
2. 00:32:105 (10,11,12,13) - ^
   
3. 00:03:870 (6) - k? k.
4. 00:21:164 (114,115,116,117,118) - kdddk?I prefer kkddk
5. 00:57:870 (200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210) - don't let it stream~ It's overmap for this part! eeven authentic taiko songs have overmaps, and this one isn't that bad imo
6. 01:18:693 (366,367,368,369,370) - kkddk? kkddk.

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

It's need more work~

1. Your hitsounds are too loud. Set volume to 70% everywhere
2. You need more finish hitsounds. Every time you hear finish in music, add finish to note / slider beginning

1. 01:15:870 (4) - add new combo

1. 00:07:752 (1,2,3) - reduce spacing and make it constant
2. 00:10:047 (4,5,6) - it's hard to read, don't do sudden jumps from white ticks to red
3. 00:18:164 (1,2) - it plays really weird. Maybe use note+slider instead of slider+note?
4. 00:19:576 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:20:458 (1,2,3) - whistles sound bad here
6. 00:23:811 (5) - remove whistle
7. 00:27:341 (3,4) - it's not easy to catch. Re-make it?
8. 00:44:635 (4,5) - remove these notes, there are too much of them so player needs a little rest
9. 00:53:105 (7) - better remove it, I think
10. 01:13:046 (2,3) - make them nice and symmetrical

1. 00:14:105 (1,2,3) - no. This spacing is too wide for 1/4, place sliders closer to note. Like.. 1x or 0.9x
2. 00:27:341 (4,5,6,7) - might be confusing to read because previos notes were 1/2
3. 00:25:929 (4) - if you wanna keep this whistle, remove it from beginning and end (leave only on slider body)
4. 00:46:752 (2,3,4) - fix spacing
5. 00:48:341 (2) - no, don't make sudden jump here

1. 00:20:282 (7,1) - even if I know there will be a jump, I keep missing it. Maybe it's because it doesn't fit music, I don't know. Ask somebody else about it
2. 00:33:164 (6,7) - why do you use sliders here instead of notes? I'd go with notes
3. 00:43:311 (6,8) - better remove these whistles, they don't fit
4. 00:43:576 (9) - add whistle to beginning here and here: 00:44:105 (12). If you like it, don't forget to do the same for the rest of the map
5. 00:49:752 (10) - remove whistle from the whole slider and add it only to its beginning
6. 00:52:576 (5) - ^
7. 01:24:517 (1) - instead of it I would map some triplets and streams here, and start spinner from 01:28:752

TicClick wrote:

General

1. Your hitsounds are too loud. Set volume to 70% everywhere
2. You need more finish hitsounds. Every time you hear finish in music, add finish to note / slider beginning

Done.

Standard

1. 01:13:046 (2,3) - make them nice and symmetrical > They are symmetrical.

Heavy

1. 00:46:752 (2,3,4) - fix spacing tried fixing it but it seems to be snapped.

Challenge

1. 00:33:164 (6,7) - why do you use sliders here instead of notes? I'd go with notes To avoid a feel of constant streams mostly. If someone else thinks it's better to change it then it'll change.
2. 01:24:517 (1) - instead of it I would map some triplets and streams here, and start spinner from 01:28:752 That's a bit of overmap; besides spinner consistency.

Also, what CDFA said. It looks much better now! Thanks!

Xgor wrote:

[General]
Please add Naoki to tags because as far as I know DE-SIRE retunes is a alias for Naoki. yessir

This doesn't really strike me as a song when kiai works on. I think it would be better if you remove it. Not sure.

01:24:341 (1) - I know this spinner kinda fits but it's really long! Can't you make it shorter I'd rather not.

That brown combo colour blends waaay too much with the BG. please change it into something else.I'll take suggestions.

[Light]
I think having beats 1/2 close together is too hard with this BPM on a easy. I would recommend you avoid that. Fixing later...

00:02:811 (1,2) - Can you please try to avoid overlapping these.
00:36:341 (1,2,1) - Align these to each other.
01:08:458 - remove the break here.


[Light/Standard]
Man... boring hitsounding... making it interesting later.

00:53:282 - 01:04:399 I don't really get why this part is easier on Standard than on Light.... should be the opposite. Hmm true. Perhaps swapping them..

[Standard]
I suggest you raise the SV to make it feel more different from Light, It would also be nice because those short sliders are kind boring. Remake it? Okay.

00:43:223 (4,1) - This feels like unneeded and just adds useless difficulty for a difficulty like standard and doesn't really make the map more fun imo
00:46:046 (3,4) - ^
00:48:870 (3,4) - ^
00:51:693 (3,4) - ^

[Heavy]
I don't think those 1/4 streams belong in this difficulty. They are much harder than the rest in the difficulty. I'll ask for some more opinions.

[Challenging]
AR 9 is quite unfitting to this song. 8 works better imo. Changed. Not much difference for me though.

00:11:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I don't get why this is harder and more streamy than the part before it that's way more insane Mapping to drums. Welp, waiting for more input on this one.

00:30:694 - 00:53:105 - I know those are following the song but I can't help that this part is much part is much harder than the rest when it's less intense than many other parts in the song.. Actually while it sounds less intense, it tries to be the most /interesting/ part of the song itself. Welp, once again, awaiting for some more input..

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Light]
00:14:811 (2,1,2) - if you could make the end of 2 line up with 1 pretty please? yes
00:16:929 (2,3,4) - while there is nothing intrinsically wrong with this pattern, it can be confusing to players who are looking for a cohesive pattern that makes sense, since the 3 is pretty clearly unrelated to the pattern as a whole and thus highly unintuitive. todo: remap that pattern
00:27:517 (4) - make this vertical
00:34:929 (2) - these would sound pretty cool ending them on the red ticks instead and would make the map more interesting for the players sounds really, really weird..
00:53:282 (1) - this combo kind of comes out of nowhere a section of the song pretty much begins at this point
00:58:223 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for an Easy shortened to 1/1
01:17:282 (1) - this spinner is a little on the short side, up to you lengthened
01:28:752 - kiai time in the middle of a spinner is kind of WTF heh.. got so many comments about it that I'll probably just remove it already

[Standard]
00:07:752 (1) - it'd be nice if you could move this a bit farther away from previous note repositioned pattern.
00:20:458 (1,2,3) - not gonna lie this is pretty awesome ty
01:15:870 (5) - the placement of this note kind of feels like you didn't put much thought into it and is rather ugly remade
01:18:693 (1,2,3) - line these up horizontally
01:21:164 (4,1) - ^
01:28:752 - again a bit of a WTF kiai

[Heavy]
00:11:635 (1,2,3,4) - nice! ty!
00:36:341 (1) - i don't think you intended to have a whistle on the slider but neither endpoint added whistle at start
00:50:988 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - really messy, hiding a lot of things with hitbursts hmm I see slider overlapping hitnotes.. perhaps that
00:58:223 (1) - stack under fading 5 nice catch
00:59:635 (6,7,8) - illegal jump unjump'd
01:19:046 (1,2,3,4) - snazzy D:?
random kiai etc
The hitsounds you have are beautiful, but I'd really like to see a few more in the areas that are a bit lacking.

[Challenge]
00:34:929 (1) - the placement of this with relation to 9 is kind of like trying to walk up the top stair of a staircase only to realize that you were already at the top of the stairs then made a full stop at 9 to restart at 1
01:05:811 (6,7,8,9,10) - could you maybe make these jumps...jumpier?
random kiai etc
This map could use more hitsounding - don't be shy from what I've seen you use them exceptionally well when you actually put them in!

CDFA wrote:

swag

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

CDFA wrote:

swag

If you have any questions, don't to be scared to PM me.

[Light]

• 00:44:988 (1,2) - This does not match the music as much as it can. It would fit a whole lot better if you gave (1) a repeat and deleted (2), like this.
• 00:49:223 (2) - The spacing here is inconsistent with the rest of the difficulty. Please move them closer and keep a consistent spacing throughout the map.
• 00:52:046 (2,1) - This kind of transition is really odd, especially in an Easy difficulty.You should remove the repeat on (2) and do something like you did in Standard.
• 01:13:046 (1) - This is a really big jump for an Easy, it doesn't really fit either. Close up this gap, please.
• 01:23:282 (1) - You're missing a clap on this note.

Fixed all.

[Standard]
* This difficulty needs a lot more claps. It's really bland in it's rhythm. Try to follow the Heavy difficulty.

• 00:31:576 (4,3) - These notes feel really unnecessary and they make these patterns hard to follow. Remove them.
• 00:47:458 (3) - Do not silence notes like these, they throw off players for this difficulty. Bring the volume up to at least 20%.
• 01:01:576 (2) - Add a new combo to this note to match with the combo patterns.
• 01:21:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is really unintuitive seeing as it does not follow the music. Move everything back one white tick so that it looks like this

Okay.

[Heavy]

• 00:11:635 (1,2,3,4) - Make this notes audible, they screw players up. brought to 20%
• 00:15:517 (4) - Move this down a little more, such close spacing make players hit it too early. And besides, it's cleaner this way. k.
• 00:30:694 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - It would be nice if you kept the whistle pattern here consistent. It seems all over the place which makes it sounds awful. made more consistant.

done

[Challenging]
*OD is too high, bring it down by one or two ticks. I prefer the OD to stay this way, map isn't that hard

• 00:33:164 (6,7) - These sliders don't play very well. It would be best to remove them. I prefer it this way, but okay.

[Taiko]
* You should get a taiko modder on this.

• 00:26:458 (2) - Unnecessary finish, would fit better without. removed
• 00:37:752 (2,3) - I'm pretty sure AiBAT is lying when it says these are snapped... these are actually snapped.
• 00:58:223 (9) - I think notes like this should be blue because the pitch is higher in the song. pitch doesn't really justify a kat all the time.

[Overall]

Needs a lot more work. But it is showing great potential at it's current state. Ganbatee!

• [Light]

1. 00:30:694 (1) - Ctrl+R (and then place it a bit higher, so the next slider is still snapped)
2. 00:32:105 (2) - Make it symmetrical
3. 00:33:517 (1) - ^
4. 00:40:576 (2,3,4) - Instead of placing them in a vertical line, i suggest to line them up horizontally (from right to left, obviously)
5. 00:36:341 (1,2) - Make it symmetrical
6. 00:39:164 (1) - ^
7. 00:47:811 (1,2) - ^ (Actually, you could shape those completely different, just to have some variation in your map)
8. 00:52:046 (2) - Make this slider shorter, so it ends on the white line, and then add a circle on the next white line, like that: http://puu.sh/KiUf (Still, this part feels pretty weird to play...)
9. 00:58:223 (1) - unsnapped slider. In easy diffs, use distance snap.
10. 00:58:223 (1,2,3,4) - those seem to be placed randomly... Maybe make a (simple, but good looking) shape with those? like a square or something?
11. 01:13:046 (1) - Don't. this is an easy diff, this slider would confuse every beginner, since it's so sudden
12. 01:19:046 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 4 times the same pattern of circles? Boring to play IMO

• [Standard]

1. 00:58:223 (1) - Duh, looks terrible, sorry. Make this more beautiful :3
2. 01:21:517 - I was REALLY expecting a circle here and lost my combo o.o Add one

• [Heavy]

1. 00:11:635 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the spacing or just turn those into jumps
2. 00:43:576 (4) - I think, after the triplet u should'nt add jumps, even if they're rather small. Better stick with distance snap at this point
3. 00:44:811 - Add a Circle here
4. 00:46:046 - Add a short slider or two circles
5. 00:47:635 - Same here, add a circle
6. 01:19:046 (1) - Make this slider a little bit longer so it ends on the white line (fits better with the music and, whats almost more important, flows much better while playing IMO
7. 01:20:458 (2) - ^ Same here
8. 01:21:870 (2) - ^
9. 01:23:282 (2) - ^

• [Challenge]

1. 00:08:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Pls keep consistency in spacing here. It's quite hard to see which of these are jumps, which are not, and which are simply totally unsnapped...
2. 00:12:870 (9,10) - about those two i'm actually not sure. I had some problems reading this and the next triplet, so I would suggest to change it a bit. However this might be just because I'm a slowpoke at thinking when playing osu, which is also why i cannot play Hard Rock. D:
   It's up to you, but I would definitely make this easier to read.
3. 00:15:517 (1,6) - bad slider shape
4. 00:25:223 (1,2,3) - Why aren't they shaped in a symmetrical triangle? Would look better
5. 00:26:635 (6,7,8) - ^
6. 00:33:517 (1,2,3,4,5) - This Stream looks just like your sliders in [Standard]. try to make it look better by making it symmetrical or giving it a different shape
7. 00:34:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
8. 01:08:811 - Maybe insert a short break here?
9. 01:19:047 (2) - Just like in [Heavy], I would lengthen that slider a bit, as well as the other times you did that in the end
10. 01:20:105 - Add a circle here
11. 01:21:517 - ^
12. 01:22:929 - ^

Verdisphena wrote:

Extra
Ponle mas hitsounds a esta diff :c
00:08:282 (12) - NC aqui y quitale el NC a la nota siguiente
00:09:694 (6) - Este jump es casi irreconocible segun yo, podrias arreglar el spacing o alejarlo, para que sea mas notorio
00:21:782 (3) - Eso no le va a esta parte, recomiendo ponerlo en su spacing normal
00:25:929 (7) - Slider feo :s
00:37:752 (6) - NC
01:15:958 (1) - Podrias silenciar el final del spinner
01:23:811 (6,7,8,9) - Se ve mas lindo asi http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/446740

Taiko Oni
Nada aqui, pero no me siento comodo con los 1/6 y con los streams largos, podrias cambiar esos

Challenge
Hitsounds!
00:05:105 (7) - NC aqui y quita el combo al (1) que viene despues
00:20:458 (8) - NC
00:52:046 (4) - NC para arreglar el problema del spacing

Heavy

00:43:576 (4) - NC

Standard

00:10:223 (2,4) - Spacing !
El unico problema de esta diff es que la diff es confusa y tiene algunos sliders feos

Basic

00:05:635 (2) - Spacing
No recomiendo usar solo notas, podria ser dificil para un easy, y no uses 1/2 aqui, por lo mismo

1. HP Drain 6
   　
2. 00:02:811 (1) - D
3. 00:04:576 - add k
4. 00:04:929 - add k
5. 00:26:811 (4) - d
6. 00:32:164 (3) - d
7. 00:44:987 (1) - K
8. 00:45:076 (2) - re
9. 00:47:811 (2) - k
10. 00:50:634 (3) - K
11. 00:56:105 (6) - k
12. 00:57:340 (2) - k
13. 00:58:223 (8) - k
14. 00:58:399 (9) - k
15. 00:59:634 (2) - k
16. 01:07:399 (2) - k
17. 01:08:634 (1) - k
18. 01:10:223 (10) - k
19. 01:18:781 (2) - re
20. 01:19:928 (4) - k
21. 01:20:811 (3) - k
    　
22. 01:24:341 (5) - re
    I think that remove this slider,add don,katsu note is good from enthusiasm.
    Now,I made a example that part by my selfishness.Please refer to that.
    
    
    SPOILER

    1. d d d = 1/2 rhythm
    2. dddd = 1/4 rhythm
       　
    3. 01:24:341 - d d k d
    4. 01:25:046 - k d d d
    5. 01:25:752 - k d d k
    6. 01:26:458 - d d k d
    7. 01:27:164 - ddk ddk
    8. 01:27:870 - kkd kkd
    9. 01:28:576 - kdddk d
    10. 01:29:282 - kdddk d
    11. 01:29:988 - D
    I'm sorry for my bad English skill makes you hard to understand

Cuvelia wrote:

Hi ~ , Random Taiko modding ~ .

These are all suggestion. If you don't like them , you could ignore

| d = don | k = kat | D = BIG DON | K = BIG KAT | re = remove |


[Taiko Oni]

1. HP Drain 6
   　
2. 00:02:811 (1) - D yes
3. 00:04:576 - add k no
4. 00:04:929 - add k no
5. 00:26:811 (4) - d yes
6. 00:32:164 (3) - d yes
7. 00:44:987 (1) - K no
8. 00:45:076 (2) - re big yes
9. 00:47:811 (2) - k yes
10. 00:50:634 (3) - K no
11. 00:56:105 (6) - k yes
12. 00:57:340 (2) - k no
13. 00:58:223 (8) - k yes
14. 00:58:399 (9) - k no
15. 00:59:634 (2) - k no
16. 01:07:399 (2) - k yes
17. 01:08:634 (1) - k no
18. 01:10:223 (10) - k no
19. 01:18:781 (2) - re no
20. 01:19:928 (4) - k no
21. 01:20:811 (3) - k no
    　
22. 01:24:341 (5) - re
    I think that remove this slider,add don,katsu note is good from enthusiasm. katsus are just as good at enthusiasm as dons. it's all about expresiveness ;D
    Now,I made a example that part by my selfishness.Please refer to that. I came up with something
    
    
    SPOILER

    1. d d d = 1/2 rhythm
    2. dddd = 1/4 rhythm
       　
    3. 01:24:341 - d d k d
    4. 01:25:046 - k d d d
    5. 01:25:752 - k d d k
    6. 01:26:458 - d d k d
    7. 01:27:164 - ddk ddk
    8. 01:27:870 - kkd kkd
    9. 01:28:576 - kdddk d
    10. 01:29:282 - kdddk d
    11. 01:29:988 - D
    I'm sorry for my bad English skill makes you hard to understand

good luck !! ty for your mod so much