1. Hard (4.49 stars, 194 notes)
2. Insane (4.93 stars, 363 notes)
3. Normal (2.77 stars, 135 notes)

~Very big thx for Muya for your BG~

l3lueskyiiz wrote:

Here is you original ver. BG

Frostmourne wrote:

offset 10886

regenz wrote:

General
Suggest to increase volume alot. hitsound is hard to hear. ok

Sweet


00:16:972 (6,7,8,9,1) - this stream look ugly and veryclose can you spread it a bit more make it look pretty plz. ok
00:20:233 (5) - slider tail is under 00:19:364 (1) - hitburst i'll change this

00:25:668 (4) - forgot clap tail ? forgot what? it's clap already
01:05:125 (6,7) - half of note is under 01:04:364 (4) - hitburst i'll change this
01:13:168 (10) - this note is not follow anything. ok change
01:28:712 (4,1) - this jump is hard to see because it's under the slider and rhythm not fit please move 1 to see more clearly is better ok
01:35:016 (2) - whistle at tail nooo~
01:46:538 (1) - replace stream with this one ? i've did stream it before but it has no spin in this map then i put it at the start kiai
01:58:712 (1) - finish? ah, no
02:01:320 (1,2,3,4,5) - may be adjust volume to make it sound prettier ? how?


Hard

00:25:451 (2) - clap at end of slider ? no
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01:48:494 (1) - delete this note let player recover hand movement and it's suit for 4.5 star hard. ok
02:00:885 (5,1,2,3,4) - use mini jump and star shape ? good suggestion

Normal

00:49:146 (1) - use 1/1 return slider and put clap ? at center i'll rearrange that part
00:53:059 (1,2) - change to slider? ok
01:25:668 (3) - this long slider is not fit music ? try to split it ok
01:34:146 (5) - อ้าวเห้ย โน๊ตหาย คิดว่าเสร็จแล้ว 555555 WTF i've not finish mapped yet D:

• 00:12:842 (5) - Add a slight curve to this slider would be cuter imo :3
  00:23:059 (3) - Snap the inherit section on 00:24:690 to this slider's end?
  00:33:494 (3) - Not placed below (2) perfectly, and it's visible enough imo. Hold [SHIFT] while placing this note?
  00:37:842 (x) - Will sound nice imo if there's a note here... But it will be hard to place >_< (well, extending (5) here might work though, idk)
  00:48:277 (5) - Curve this also? (if you can curve this encircling (1), it will be much better because it comply (2)'s shape)
  00:53:059 (1) - "?" shaped slider looks well here imo than just simple curved slider:
  
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  01:13:059 (4,5) - Combining these two into a straight/crumpled slider plays well too:
  
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  01:38:712 (4) - Easy to spot this slider is not symmetrical. At least, move the midpoint a bit to the right
  01:55:668 (1) - Using red (linear) waypoint instead of bezier waypoint looks cute here too. Just a suggestion though :3

• 00:10:668 (1) - Woah, this slider's end is on the headphone on the BG o.o
  00:16:103 (6) - I prefer to make this slider facing right so it can support (7)'s curve. If you don't want, at least make this slider's end not touching (3) orz
  00:38:277 (2) - You could try to CTRL+R this slider, not something you have to do though
  00:50:016 (2) - Add whistle on slider's start also? Fits the cheerful atmosphere here imo
  01:01:755 (6,7) - Put (6)'s end a bit upward, and (7)'s end a bit downward. It will look like this:
  
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  01:10:016 (1) - Make this encircle (4)?
  01:34:146 (7,1) - Move this two one grid up if possible. idk if you want to not follow the dist. snap though
  01:48:712 (1) - Curve this to the right, or you can just copy-paste the next (2) here and press ctrl+j and ctrl+h

• 00:17:625 (1) - I think you can curve it more downward to build up more flow
  00:20:233 (5,6) - The spacing here, quite too far compared with (6,7)
  00:27:081 (2,3,4) and (6,7,8) - Alternatively you can alter these three into a repeating slider facing each other to avoid problem with stacks (:
  00:30:451 (2) - Unstack this note?
  00:36:972 (1) - Slider wave here? Plays beautiful xD
  00:46:320 (2,3) - Arrange the jump like this?
  
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  01:23:277 (6) - Move the endpoint upward a bit? So it will encircle (1) neater
  02:01:320 (1,3,5) - If you compare the distance between (1,3) and (3,5), the second one is actually much bigger orz

Niva wrote:

Mod request via In-Game PM ~ thank you very much >_<

[General]
-> Adding one more yellow/orange combo color (I use Red:253, Green:217, Blue:94) will make the map more colorful imo >_< ok, i'll add yellow with Red 255 Green 255 Blue 128
-> Difficulty name : Normal -> Hard -> Sweet. err, idk, maybe you can use diff names like "Sour" or something like that to replace Normal/Hard :3 i'll change it to [Insane] but it's not "Insane" or "Hard" too much orz

[Normal]

• 00:12:842 (5) - Add a slight curve to this slider would be cuter imo :3 ok xD
  00:23:059 (3) - Snap the inherit section on 00:24:690 to this slider's end? ok xD
  00:33:494 (3) - Not placed below (2) perfectly, and it's visible enough imo. Hold [SHIFT] while placing this note? ok xD
  00:37:842 (x) - Will sound nice imo if there's a note here... But it will be hard to place >_< (well, extending (5) here might work though, idk) ok, and i'll delete this note too 00:38:494 (2) -
  00:48:277 (5) - Curve this also? (if you can curve this encircling (1), it will be much better because it comply (2)'s shape) ok xD
  00:53:059 (1) - "?" shaped slider looks well here imo than just simple curved slider: nice slider suggestion xD
  
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  01:13:059 (4,5) - Combining these two into a straight/crumpled slider plays well too: ok xD
  
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  01:38:712 (4) - Easy to spot this slider is not symmetrical. At least, move the midpoint a bit to the right ok xD
  01:55:668 (1) - Using red (linear) waypoint instead of bezier waypoint looks cute here too. Just a suggestion though :3 ok xD

[Hard]

• 00:10:668 (1) - Woah, this slider's end is on the headphone on the BG o.o lol xD
  00:16:103 (6) - I prefer to make this slider facing right so it can support (7)'s curve. If you don't want, at least make this slider's end not touching (3) orz ok ok xD
  00:38:277 (2) - You could try to CTRL+R this slider, not something you have to do though i don't like to make jump on this difficult. [Sweet] is like [Hard] anyway so i've to make Hard that easy than Hard
  00:50:016 (2) - Add whistle on slider's start also? Fits the cheerful atmosphere here imo no~ xD
  01:01:755 (6,7) - Put (6)'s end a bit upward, and (7)'s end a bit downward. It will look like this: ok~ xD
  
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  01:10:016 (1) - Make this encircle (4)? oh, just 1 grid down xD
  01:34:146 (7,1) - Move this two one grid up if possible. idk if you want to not follow the dist. snap though ok xD
  01:48:712 (1) - Curve this to the right, or you can just copy-paste the next (2) here and press ctrl+j and ctrl+h ok xD

[Sweet]

• 00:17:625 (1) - I think you can curve it more downward to build up more flow nice suggestion here
  00:20:233 (5,6) - The spacing here, quite too far compared with (6,7) hmm.. i'll make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/206566 ~~
  00:27:081 (2,3,4) and (6,7,8) - Alternatively you can alter these three into a repeating slider facing each other to avoid problem with stacks (: ok~ xD
  00:30:451 (2) - Unstack this note? ok
  00:36:972 (1) - Slider wave here? Plays beautiful xD yes yes xDD
  00:46:320 (2,3) - Arrange the jump like this? nice slider suggestion again xDD
  
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  01:23:277 (6) - Move the endpoint upward a bit? So it will encircle (1) neater ok xD
  02:01:320 (1,3,5) - If you compare the distance between (1,3) and (3,5), the second one is actually much bigger orz i'll change it to star jump xD

Your mapping style really fits this song (: thank you very much >_<
Also, teach me how to hitsound this good please xD >> teach me how to find bubble before xDD

S h i a wrote:

Mod request via In-Game PM
[General]
Fine <3 <3

[Normal]
00:18:712 (3) - this slider seems broken D: and I think this part maybe better like this. ok

SPOILER

01:20:016 (6) - remove newcombo? add newcombo here? 01:21:320 (1) ok


[Hard]
00:12:625 (5) - better? ok

SPOILER

00:16:103 (6) - ^ ok
00:23:929 (1) - my suggestion D: ok

SPOILER

01:26:538 (5) - :O ok

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[Insane]
really good diff
01:19:799 (4) - new combo? ok


sorry for my noob mod. never mind lol

good map! thank you :3

Muya wrote:

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amnb9280 wrote:

Hi~

[Easy] It's [Normal] not [Easy] lol
00:40:668 (2) - Distance Snap.How about put in x:312 y:320? ah no, but fix the spacing
01:19:581 (5) - Put in x:432 y:256 fixed
01:20:016 (6) - Put in x:336 y:256 ^
01:35:233 (2) - Touch the HP bar fixed

[Hard]
00:25:885 (3) - Put in x:416 y:312 ok
01:11:755 (4) - It looks little ugly... fixed~
01:16:755 (1) - let the slider to the symmetric it symmetric already

[Insane]
00:54:799 (4) - let the slider to the symmetric it symmetric already

That all
Good Beatmap!
I give a star

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
The "data" file is in excess which carries unknown document. Remove and then full submit it. ok 0.0

[Insane]
00:11:864 (3,4) - clap on (4) instead of (3)? ok~
00:13:929 (6) - remove clap? ah, no ;w;
00:18:059 (2) - there's clapping on the music :3 add clap xD
00:19:364 (4,1) - it looks better it (3,4) points to each other. try like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/209913 ok~~

nice clapping >w< thank you

[Hard]
00:11:320 (2) - same as [Insane], remove whistle/clap here why remove whistle? orz only remove clap and add clap on 00:11:972 (3) -
00:30:451 (5) - down 1 grid to make it symmetrical because (4,6)'s not vertically placed :3 1 grid of lv4 grid is ok[/color]

Excellent sounding with nice music. They sounds pretty well. I don't have problem with the later part of the song, though there're some hitsound improvement at the early part of the song =P

Tony wrote:

You requested a mod in my mod queue! so here I am
I'm a bit late... sorry for that XD no problem~ xDD

[General]
nothing to point out!

[Normal]
OD+1. The current OD should be set in an easy difficulty! ok
00:40:016 (1) - remove the new combo to keep the pattern. ok
01:01:972 - in this point I hear a note in the song. I suggest to add a repeat on slider 01:00:668 (2) - and removing the note 01:02:190 (3) - fixed http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/211350
01:05:668 (4) - add a finish on end and remove finish from start of the slider 01:06:972 (1) - no~~
01:38:712 (4) - add a new combo to split that long pattern ok
02:02:190 (5) - add new combo to keep the pattern noo xD

[Hard]
01:05:451 (6) - this slider seems to be offscreen. Try to move it somehow? ok!

[Insane]
nothing to point out!

Awesome map with awesome hitsounds. Great job! keep going thx you >,<
Good luck~

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

1. offset need before all note i don't know. haha

[Nomal]

It's [Normal] not [Nomal] loool

1. 01:40:994 - unused green line deleted
   
2. 00:12:407 (4) - add Newcombo. because It's too long combo for Normal ok
3. 00:21:103 (x) - rhythm confuse fixed
4. 00:23:059 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:14:146 (1,2,3) - spacing fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:40:994 - unused green line delete
   
2. 01:04:799 (5,6,7) - stack [super nazi] fixed
3. 01:18:712 (1,2,3,4,5) - uneven spacing fixed

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

ok~that all
good luck