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Tianshi-Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po)

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DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

LKs wrote:

D.N.Angel's Hard

00:28:088 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这么多集中在左上角感觉意义不大 我覺得你講這個意義也不大...你想要我怎麼改嘛...
00:37:888 (5) - 开头whistle
00:42:488 (5) - 结尾whistle
00:49:488 (8) - 换成whistle
音效部分还差点功夫 某些音量偏小

上面的都沒改...感覺沒什麼必要lol，倒是其他音效稍微修過了
謝謝MOD ~ :)

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
sorry for double post..
怎麼還在WIP...移到Pending去吧:O
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs

DarknessAngel wrote:

LKs wrote:

D.N.Angel's Hard

00:28:088 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这么多集中在左上角感觉意义不大 我覺得你講這個意義也不大...你想要我怎麼改嘛... 那我还不如直接给你重做一遍 mod的本意就是提醒性质的
00:37:888 (5) - 开头whistle
00:42:488 (5) - 结尾whistle
00:49:488 (8) - 换成whistle
音效部分还差点功夫 某些音量偏小

上面的都沒改...感覺沒什麼必要lol，倒是其他音效稍微修過了 rank以后我会打打看的
謝謝MOD ~ :)
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
good maps~~~~~popipo lol^^
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AngelEyE
61 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

我勒个去 ert大神有多少GD 我最近看的全是ert ert大神ww..
General
  1. kiai time区域略有不同 都是小于一秒的区别 感觉没必要 弄成一样就行 欸、弄成一样的咯
  2. offest 1698 fixed!



[b]Hard

fine :D..

Insane

00:38:488 (1,2,3,4) - 这样其实不太好 不太顺 换了个大跳- -
clap略有点轻 相对这歌 那用whistle？

GL thank u for modding:D
AngelEyE
61 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

mint_ong89 wrote:

good maps~~~~~popipo lol^^
wow~~~~~ thank u:D!!~
AngelEyE
61 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

DarknessAngel wrote:

sorry for double post..
怎麼還在WIP...移到Pending去吧:O
移過去啦ww
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hiiii

[General]
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/nSi4


[ERT's Easy]
00:01:798 - You don't need this green timing sections just for changing hitsound, just remove this and change your hitsound at red timing
00:44:898 (2) - Finish at repeating slider?
01:12:098 (1) - Head slider is overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, and can be hidden for beginners


[Shigure's Normal]
00:23:298 (4) - New combo for your stanza or vocal?
00:25:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:26:498 (6) - New combo for above reason
00:29:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:30:498 (2) - New combo for above reason
00:43:298 (6) - New combo?
01:00:898 (4) - Whistle+clap? why?


[Hard]
00:23:298 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players
00:34:098 (x) - Add note here for following vocal
00:39:898 (7,1) - Swap new combo please
01:25:298 (2,3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players
01:31:698 (2) - ^


[D.N.Angel's Hard]
01:21:698 (1) - Remove the whistle sound in slidertrack
01:28:098 (1) - ^


Nice job!
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Leorda wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
01:21:698 (1) - Remove the whistle sound in slidertrack
01:28:098 (1) - ^
all fixed ~
Thank for your modding ~ :)

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010
Done :)

Thank you Leorda

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [ERT's Easy].osu
AngelEyE
61 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

Leorda wrote:

Hiiii Hi:D

[General]
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/nSi4
fixed to the same kiai time

[Shigure's Normal]
00:23:298 (4) - New combo for your stanza or vocal?
00:25:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:26:498 (6) - New combo for above reason
00:29:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:30:498 (2) - New combo for above reason
00:43:298 (6) - New combo?
01:00:898 (4) - Whistle+clap? why?
fixed

[Hard]
00:23:298 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players fixed
00:34:098 (x) - Add note here for following vocal fixed
00:39:898 (7,1) - Swap new combo please fixed
01:25:298 (2,3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players fixed
01:31:698 (2) - ^ fixed
it doesn‘t make hidden with my own skin,orz, so i havet noticed that :( thank you for reminding!!! :)

Nice job! thank you for modding!:)
Livean
69 posts
Joined February 2011
Livean
from my queue thanks for your star

[general]
i played this map with double time and it feels a little weird i think is beacuse the offset is a bit wrong look http://puu.sh/ort4
i changed the offset and played with this one and in my opinion is better for the map 1710

why the storyboard folder name is "LRC" is not supposed to be "SB"? i don't know is just an observation

[ERT'sEasy]
i don't see any trouble here

[Shigure'sNormal]
01:07:310 (5,6) - i recommend you to use 4 white points for this sliders you can make it prettier (more rounded)
01:29:710 (3) - this slider is kind ugly too i know you can make it more pretty


[Hard]
SPOILER
00:28:910 (5,6) - in my opinion this sliders are ugly for this map can you make it more rounded?
00:59:310 (1) - errr... i think you can make more pretty this slider the final point is out of the slider in any case here you have a code
384,208,59310,6,0,B|416:128|380:56,1,150,8|0
01:01:310 (5) - move the middle white point 7 grids up and 2 grids left
01:03:310 (3,4) - make this 2 symmetrical
01:08:110 (2) - o.o oh gaw.. here you have 
396,76,68110,2,0,B|320:32|255:22|188:32|112:76,1,300,2|8
01:11:310 (3) - delete the extra points
01:24:910 (1,4) - make (4) symmetrical
01:28:110 (1) - delete the extra points
01:31:310 (1,2,1,2) - final points.. are out of the slider
01:34:510 (1) - ^

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
delte beginning bookmarks
if you use my offset you can rise the overall difficulty, in my opinion 7 is better for this diff
em... well this diff i love it is really cute and fun ^.^

[Insane]
delete beginning bookmarks
00:30:510 (1) - move red point 2 grids up and final point 2 grids right
00:30:910 (2) - ^ same here just final poin is 2 grids left
00:39:110 (4) - final point 2 grids up
00:58:510 (6,7) - i recommend you here use 4 points for each slider and make it more round with respect to the hit of the center



uffff heheh this was long hope this help you in something and thanks for your star good luck

btw excuse my poor english >.<
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Your map is looking good so far. Keep it up! 8-)
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod from queue
中文mod没错吧XD

General:
  1. 看起来一切都很好
Easy:
  1. 00:44:898 (2) - 感觉拆分成2个1/1长度的slider会更舒服一点？折返在红线上有些off的样子
Normal:
  1. 整体来说我觉得clap放在2/4比放1/3要舒服……你觉得呢？
  2. 00:36:898 - 从这里开始很长一段都没有Hit sound，感觉没有理由不放的，所以请添上吧。
Hard:
  1. 00:37:498 - 这里考虑加个note？
D.N.Angel's hard:
  1. 00:37:798 (4) - 考虑删掉？听着有点别扭
  2. 00:47:498 (5) - 同样建议删掉
Insane:
  1. 00:32:898 (3) - 建议做成1/4的折返滑条
  2. 00:37:698 (5) - 这里感觉应该去掉折返，然后把00:38:098 (6) - 向前移动到蓝线
  3. 00:47:498 (6) - 删掉吧，这里也应该是2连才对。
  4. 00:50:298 (4) - ^
  5. 01:00:298 (4,1,2) - 这里感觉应该是一个slider，都放成1/2的note虽然节奏上简化了但是听着也变得单调了……
  6. 01:03:298 (3,4) - 这里感觉应该先note再slider才对……试试看？
  7. 01:05:198 - 加个note？而且这个结尾点上的这种连续叠我个人不是很喜欢……anyway。。纯属个人口味。
  8. 01:25:098 - 这里开始的二连都不做了嘛？我觉得前面那句的二连做得很舒服啊……
差不多就这些啦Insane的话节奏感觉还略微有一点单调，既然是在跟vocal我觉得不妨充分的利用起来而不是过多的使用1/2的节奏。

总之做的不错，加油&GL :)
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010
Fixed

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [ERT's Easy].osu
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
好 AE(姥爺)我來了 好萌的歌啊
[General]
- Offset:1708


[ERT's Easy]
01:08:098 (1) - 這裏加個NC?
沒甚麼問題/w\


[Shigure's Normal]
00:20:898 (2) - clap
同樣沒甚麼問題...做得很中規中矩/_\


[Hard]
00:28:898 (5) - NC
00:30:498 (1) - slider頭加個clap?
00:32:098 (4) - ^
00:38:098 (4) - 折返點加個clap?
00:41:698 (6) - slider頭加個clap?然後NC
01:38:498 (2,3,4) - 感覺這3個鋪開會比較漂亮...
01:36:098 (4) - NC?



[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:24:898 (5) - NC
00:42:498 (5) - 加個finish在尾部?
01:10:698 (5) - NC
01:36:898 (1) - 這個NC放到01:37:698 (3) - 會好點?
這個diff玩起來好爽啊有BG的情況下我開dt都能1pcfc 神mapper就是厲害QAQ
不過這歌dt後聽起來好奇怪orz
SPOILER


[Insane]
開頭空了這麼長一段 不放note嗎?
00:20:898 (3) - 這個NC會好點?
00:34:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這串實在太違和了...這裏沒必要放stream 打的時候一串100 orz
00:41:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 跟vocal的話這裏似乎應該推後1/2
00:55:298 (1,2,3,4) - 不得不說這裏太容易理解成是2連了.../_\
01:24:098 (4) - NC
01:24:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 之前都是2連啊 /_\ 這裏突然又變成了1/2大跳 略違和(這歌放2連打起來真是舒服...
01:30:498 (4) - NC
01:32:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟上面一樣 突然變1/2
01:36:898 (1) - NC

就是這樣 AE抱抱(死
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DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:24:898 (5) - NC 加了 ~
00:42:498 (5) - 加個finish在尾部? 唔，以我來說略奇怪
01:10:698 (5) - NC fixed
01:36:898 (1) - 這個NC放到01:37:698 (3) - 會好點? OK
這個diff玩起來好爽啊有BG的情況下我開dt都能1pcfc 神mapper就是厲害QAQ
不過這歌dt後聽起來好奇怪orz
咱只是普通的Mapper OAQ，嘛，謝謝捧場 ~ >w<

SPOILER

觸啊
謝謝MOD ~ :)

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
midgety
2 posts
Joined June 2013
midgety
Hi i was wondering if you know who sung this version of vegetable juice ;D
AngelEyE
61 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

midgety wrote:

Hi i was wondering if you know who sung this version of vegetable juice ;D
She is TianShi(天時),a cover singer in China :)
midgety
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midgety

AngelEyE wrote:

midgety wrote:

Hi i was wondering if you know who sung this version of vegetable juice ;D
She is TianShi(天時),a cover singer in China :)
Ok thanks alot!
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