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ertyukjh010

ay6859 wrote:

ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來
喔這個沒關係,因為之前我已經換做轉盤了:P 只是還在等待上傳~=w=
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ay6859 wrote:

這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/ 喔喔 ww
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ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來 這個ert已經換成了轉盤沒有問題ww

Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu 嗯 好主意 其實這裡我也猶豫了很久是要break還是spinner 您是第一个吐槽这里的[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ ) fixed
[01:16:888]Spinner長一點 fixed
[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w ) fixed


Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點 都向中間移動了5格 距離小了很多了


[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap fixed

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo fixed
>

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish fixed


[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO - =

(1)跟(3)對調位置 fixed

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點 fixed

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點 fixed

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo fixed


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 > fixed


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!! T.T
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以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< ! 其實我的圖還早的很呢
Insane有如跳圖
謝謝您精彩的modding 和非常有用的建議www
Flask

ertyukjh010 wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來
喔這個沒關係,因為之前我已經換做轉盤了:P 只是還在等待上傳~=w=

原來 :D !! 對不起小的不知道然後就 ... 亂Mod了 =w=
Flask

AngelEyE wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

這邊有一些小小的建議 \w/ 喔喔 ww
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ERT's Easy
[01:11:288]Slider改短一點 ? 我覺得太長的話要接下一個silder新手打不起來 這個ert已經換成了轉盤沒有問題ww

Hard
[00:24:088]這邊的Break改成Spinner 比較有Hard的Fu 嗯 好主意 其實這裡我也猶豫了很久是要break還是spinner 您是第一个吐槽这里的[00:56:588]
把下面四個滑條都移成這樣 ( 比較有規律~A~ ) fixed
[01:16:888]Spinner長一點 fixed
[01:29:688]Spinner一樣長點 ( 跟上面一樣 w ) fixed


Insane
[00:32:088]四個滑條簡直鬼蓄 .___. 距離近一點 都向中間移動了5格 距離小了很多了


[00:36:488]這個note可不可以+Finish 不要只有Clap fixed

[00:38:688]這幾個note太混亂了 可以改成這樣嗎owo fixed
>

[01:02:088]一樣+Finish fixed


[01:07:288] 神Mapper你好 OAO - =

(1)跟(3)對調位置 fixed

[01:26:888]四個滑條一樣鬼蓄 ... (2)跟(3)距離近點 fixed

[01:31:288]不用我說了吧 ... 距離近點 fixed

[01:33:888](6)(7)移出來 躲在裡面就不像繞冤圈了 owo fixed


[01:36:088](1)~(8)改成這樣 > fixed


天啊 ... Insane太鬼蓄了 !!!! T.T
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以上是一點建議 對不起都已經做好了才來Mod >A< ! 其實我的圖還早的很呢
Insane有如跳圖
謝謝您精彩的modding 和非常有用的建議www
不客氣 :D 希望趕快Ranked xD
DarknessAngel

ay6859 wrote:

Insane鬼觸,有如跳圖
恕我吐槽...我覺得你的見識有點淺呢lol
DarknessAngel
我...做出來啦~ ! \:D/
希望你喜歡 ~

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
ertyukjh010
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

DarknessAngel wrote:

我...做出來啦~ ! \:D/
希望你喜歡 ~
哇 做的真好 我很喜歡 謝謝


ertyukjh010 wrote:

我也來更改了一點東西
嗯 我這就換好啦www
Flask

DarknessAngel wrote:

ay6859 wrote:

Insane鬼觸,有如跳圖
恕我吐槽...我覺得你的見識有點淺呢lol
lol你才知道嗎 xd

我還是覺得滿跳的
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


Easy

  1. 还好吧
Normal

  1. 00:58:488 (5) - 加个reverse
  2. 01:00:888 (4) - whistle
Hard

  1. 00:32:088 (4) - 没叠好
D.N.Angel's Hard

  1. 01:32:088 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么大的四方眺@_@
  2. 感觉还好吧
Insane

  1. 00:26:888 (5) - 这个往前1/4拍
  2. 00:26:988 (6) - 这个往后1/4拍
  3. 00:55:388 (6,9) - spacing
  4. 01:28:088 (1) - 第二个点拉到(186,336)
  5. 01:32:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot277.jpg 这样吧
  6. 01:36:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot279-0.jpg
  7. sliders还可以拉得好一点
that's all

Good luck~
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queuehi thank u for modding
Easy

  1. 还好吧 :D
Normal

  1. 00:58:488 (5) - 加个reverse done
  2. 01:00:888 (4) - whistle done
Hard

  1. 00:32:088 (4) - 没叠好 fixed
D.N.Angel's Hard

  1. 01:32:088 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么大的四方眺@_@ 很大嘛QAQ
  2. 感觉还好吧:D


Insane

  1. 00:26:888 (5) - 这个往前1/4拍 关于这里我把节奏改成2 2 1了
  2. 00:26:988 (6) - 这个往后1/4拍 同上
  3. 00:55:388 (6,9) - spacing 先空出来吧 不知道会不会被吐槽orz
  4. 01:28:088 (1) - 第二个点拉到(186,336) fixed 可是为什么是这个点 要把girp snap 关了 才拉到的呢
  5. 01:32:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot277.jpg 这样吧 fixed
  6. 01:36:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot279-0.jpg fixed
  7. sliders还可以拉得好一点 嗯,我会再调整滑条的


that's all

Good luck~
谢谢您的 modding
SkyDevil
Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko

Shigure's Normal
00:25:699 Place at least something in this part, or else it would be empty
00:55:288 Slider 1 grid down >:U

i need to go now >w< I will finish this later

Hard
01:38:488 - Place somewhere else instead of stacking :3

D.N.Angel's Hard
00:29:688 - This part looks so bad D: Place circle 5 6 7 8 somewhere else D:
00:48:888 - ^

Insane
00:21:088 - Place this circle somewhere else :D
00:31:800 - ^
00:41:488 - Don't stack a slider under a triplet >w< Place slider somewhere else
01:23:488 - New combo here instead at the last circle?
01:25:288 - It looks pretty bad D:
01:34:488 - Put this slider farther away from the last circle :3

Anyway star for vegetable juice which i will never drink because it actually sounds kinda gross T.T
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

SkyDevil wrote:

Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko

Shigure's Normal
00:25:699 Place at least something in this part, or else it would be empty
00:55:288 Slider 1 grid down >:U

i need to go now >w< I will finish this later
OK take your time its not emergency:D
ertyukjh010

SkyDevil wrote:

Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3 It;s okay No change
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD ^
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko Well, Done
I suggest you write the time using this method
00:00:00 -
Not this ↓
00:00:00
Because it Inconvenient in the game.


Anyway, thank you for mod :)


Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [ERT's Easy].osu
SkyDevil

ertyukjh010 wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

Po pipo pipo po pi po~~

ERT's Easy
00:52:888 Don't Overlap This slider with last slider :3 It;s okay No change
00:54:488 don't overlap this with next slider XD ^
01:38:888 hmm,, Maybe Finish? Although you dont hear anything it will give some changes in taiko Well, Done
I suggest you write the time using this method
00:00:00 -
Not this ↓
00:00:00
Because it Inconvenient in the game.
[attachment=1:cc19c].png[/attachment:cc19c]

Ah okay, I will finish mod now anyway :3
Anyway, thank you for mod :)
ertyukjh010

SkyDevil wrote:

Ah okay, I will finish mod now anyway :3
:)
ertyukjh010
減少了1個overlap
因為今早有張EZ因為overlap rerank orz

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [ERT's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

ertyukjh010 wrote:

減少了1個overlap
因為今早有張EZ因為overlap rerank orz
已经上传:D
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

我勒个去 ert大神有多少GD 我最近看的全是ert

General

  1. kiai time区域略有不同 都是小于一秒的区别 感觉没必要 弄成一样就行
  2. offest 1698

ERT's Easy


第一根绿线意义何在? 直接用红线的设置
\ye/

Shigure's Normal

00:20:088 (1) - 结尾变whistle?
00:23:288 (4) - 这后面的空处没理由不下note 加上吧
00:32:888 (6) - 变成whistle
01:16:888 (4) - 这种圆还能更圆 参照欧美slider派

Hard

fine

D.N.Angel's Hard

00:28:088 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这么多集中在左上角感觉意义不大
00:37:888 (5) - 开头whistle
00:42:488 (5) - 结尾whistle
00:49:488 (8) - 换成whistle
音效部分还差点功夫 某些音量偏小

Insane

00:38:488 (1,2,3,4) - 这样其实不太好 不太顺
clap略有点轻 相对这歌

GL
ertyukjh010

LKs wrote:

ERT's Easy[/b]

第一根绿线意义何在? 直接用红线的设置
\ye/
習慣吧lol

不喜歡將紅線當作綠線用

我勒个去 ert大神有多少GD 我最近看的全是ert
我近來看到的Mod都是LKS

我也覺得近來接得多了點orz 只是莫名其妙的全都是EZ(炸
DarknessAngel

LKs wrote:

D.N.Angel's Hard

00:28:088 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这么多集中在左上角感觉意义不大 我覺得你講這個意義也不大...你想要我怎麼改嘛...
00:37:888 (5) - 开头whistle
00:42:488 (5) - 结尾whistle
00:49:488 (8) - 换成whistle
音效部分还差点功夫 某些音量偏小

上面的都沒改...感覺沒什麼必要lol,倒是其他音效稍微修過了
謝謝MOD ~ :)

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
DarknessAngel
sorry for double post..
怎麼還在WIP...移到Pending去吧:O
LKs

DarknessAngel wrote:

LKs wrote:

D.N.Angel's Hard

00:28:088 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - 这么多集中在左上角感觉意义不大 我覺得你講這個意義也不大...你想要我怎麼改嘛... 那我还不如直接给你重做一遍 mod的本意就是提醒性质的
00:37:888 (5) - 开头whistle
00:42:488 (5) - 结尾whistle
00:49:488 (8) - 换成whistle
音效部分还差点功夫 某些音量偏小

上面的都沒改...感覺沒什麼必要lol,倒是其他音效稍微修過了 rank以后我会打打看的
謝謝MOD ~ :)
mintong89
good maps~~~~~popipo lol^^
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

我勒个去 ert大神有多少GD 我最近看的全是ert ert大神ww..
General
  1. kiai time区域略有不同 都是小于一秒的区别 感觉没必要 弄成一样就行 欸、弄成一样的咯
  2. offest 1698 fixed!



[b]Hard


fine :D..

Insane

00:38:488 (1,2,3,4) - 这样其实不太好 不太顺 换了个大跳- -
clap略有点轻 相对这歌 那用whistle?

GL thank u for modding:D
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

mint_ong89 wrote:

good maps~~~~~popipo lol^^
wow~~~~~ thank u:D!!~
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

DarknessAngel wrote:

sorry for double post..
怎麼還在WIP...移到Pending去吧:O
移過去啦ww
Leorda
Hiiii

[General]
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/nSi4


[ERT's Easy]
00:01:798 - You don't need this green timing sections just for changing hitsound, just remove this and change your hitsound at red timing
00:44:898 (2) - Finish at repeating slider?
01:12:098 (1) - Head slider is overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, and can be hidden for beginners


[Shigure's Normal]
00:23:298 (4) - New combo for your stanza or vocal?
00:25:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:26:498 (6) - New combo for above reason
00:29:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:30:498 (2) - New combo for above reason
00:43:298 (6) - New combo?
01:00:898 (4) - Whistle+clap? why?


[Hard]
00:23:298 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players
00:34:098 (x) - Add note here for following vocal
00:39:898 (7,1) - Swap new combo please
01:25:298 (2,3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players
01:31:698 (2) - ^


[D.N.Angel's Hard]
01:21:698 (1) - Remove the whistle sound in slidertrack
01:28:098 (1) - ^


Nice job!
DarknessAngel

Leorda wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
01:21:698 (1) - Remove the whistle sound in slidertrack
01:28:098 (1) - ^
all fixed ~
Thank for your modding ~ :)

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
ertyukjh010
Topic Starter
AngelEyE

Leorda wrote:

Hiiii Hi:D

[General]
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/nSi4
fixed to the same kiai time

[Shigure's Normal]
00:23:298 (4) - New combo for your stanza or vocal?
00:25:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:26:498 (6) - New combo for above reason
00:29:698 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason
00:30:498 (2) - New combo for above reason
00:43:298 (6) - New combo?
01:00:898 (4) - Whistle+clap? why?
fixed

[Hard]
00:23:298 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players fixed
00:34:098 (x) - Add note here for following vocal fixed
00:39:898 (7,1) - Swap new combo please fixed
01:25:298 (2,3) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, can makes hidden for players fixed
01:31:698 (2) - ^ fixed
it doesn‘t make hidden with my own skin,orz, so i havet noticed that :( thank you for reminding!!! :)

Nice job! thank you for modding!:)
Livean
from my queue thanks for your star

[general]
i played this map with double time and it feels a little weird i think is beacuse the offset is a bit wrong look http://puu.sh/ort4
i changed the offset and played with this one and in my opinion is better for the map 1710

why the storyboard folder name is "LRC" is not supposed to be "SB"? i don't know is just an observation

[ERT'sEasy]
i don't see any trouble here

[Shigure'sNormal]
01:07:310 (5,6) - i recommend you to use 4 white points for this sliders you can make it prettier (more rounded)
01:29:710 (3) - this slider is kind ugly too i know you can make it more pretty


[Hard]
SPOILER
00:28:910 (5,6) - in my opinion this sliders are ugly for this map can you make it more rounded?
00:59:310 (1) - errr... i think you can make more pretty this slider the final point is out of the slider in any case here you have a code
384,208,59310,6,0,B|416:128|380:56,1,150,8|0
01:01:310 (5) - move the middle white point 7 grids up and 2 grids left
01:03:310 (3,4) - make this 2 symmetrical
01:08:110 (2) - o.o oh gaw.. here you have
396,76,68110,2,0,B|320:32|255:22|188:32|112:76,1,300,2|8
01:11:310 (3) - delete the extra points
01:24:910 (1,4) - make (4) symmetrical
01:28:110 (1) - delete the extra points
01:31:310 (1,2,1,2) - final points.. are out of the slider
01:34:510 (1) - ^

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
delte beginning bookmarks
if you use my offset you can rise the overall difficulty, in my opinion 7 is better for this diff
em... well this diff i love it is really cute and fun ^.^

[Insane]
delete beginning bookmarks
00:30:510 (1) - move red point 2 grids up and final point 2 grids right
00:30:910 (2) - ^ same here just final poin is 2 grids left
00:39:110 (4) - final point 2 grids up
00:58:510 (6,7) - i recommend you here use 4 points for each slider and make it more round with respect to the hit of the center



uffff heheh this was long hope this help you in something and thanks for your star good luck

btw excuse my poor english >.<
BeatofIke
Your map is looking good so far. Keep it up! 8-)
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod from queue
中文mod没错吧XD

General:
  1. 看起来一切都很好
Easy:
  1. 00:44:898 (2) - 感觉拆分成2个1/1长度的slider会更舒服一点?折返在红线上有些off的样子
Normal:
  1. 整体来说我觉得clap放在2/4比放1/3要舒服……你觉得呢?
  2. 00:36:898 - 从这里开始很长一段都没有Hit sound,感觉没有理由不放的,所以请添上吧。
Hard:
  1. 00:37:498 - 这里考虑加个note?
D.N.Angel's hard:
  1. 00:37:798 (4) - 考虑删掉?听着有点别扭
  2. 00:47:498 (5) - 同样建议删掉
Insane:
  1. 00:32:898 (3) - 建议做成1/4的折返滑条
  2. 00:37:698 (5) - 这里感觉应该去掉折返,然后把00:38:098 (6) - 向前移动到蓝线
  3. 00:47:498 (6) - 删掉吧,这里也应该是2连才对。
  4. 00:50:298 (4) - ^
  5. 01:00:298 (4,1,2) - 这里感觉应该是一个slider,都放成1/2的note虽然节奏上简化了但是听着也变得单调了……
  6. 01:03:298 (3,4) - 这里感觉应该先note再slider才对……试试看?
  7. 01:05:198 - 加个note?而且这个结尾点上的这种连续叠我个人不是很喜欢……anyway。。纯属个人口味。
  8. 01:25:098 - 这里开始的二连都不做了嘛?我觉得前面那句的二连做得很舒服啊……
差不多就这些啦Insane的话节奏感觉还略微有一点单调,既然是在跟vocal我觉得不妨充分的利用起来而不是过多的使用1/2的节奏。

总之做的不错,加油&GL :)
ertyukjh010
Skystar
好 AE(姥爺)我來了 好萌的歌啊
[General]
- Offset:1708


[ERT's Easy]
01:08:098 (1) - 這裏加個NC?
沒甚麼問題/w\


[Shigure's Normal]
00:20:898 (2) - clap
同樣沒甚麼問題...做得很中規中矩/_\


[Hard]
00:28:898 (5) - NC
00:30:498 (1) - slider頭加個clap?
00:32:098 (4) - ^
00:38:098 (4) - 折返點加個clap?
00:41:698 (6) - slider頭加個clap?然後NC
01:38:498 (2,3,4) - 感覺這3個鋪開會比較漂亮...
01:36:098 (4) - NC?



[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:24:898 (5) - NC
00:42:498 (5) - 加個finish在尾部?
01:10:698 (5) - NC
01:36:898 (1) - 這個NC放到01:37:698 (3) - 會好點?
這個diff玩起來好爽啊有BG的情況下我開dt都能1pcfc 神mapper就是厲害QAQ
不過這歌dt後聽起來好奇怪orz



[Insane]
開頭空了這麼長一段 不放note嗎?
00:20:898 (3) - 這個NC會好點?
00:34:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這串實在太違和了...這裏沒必要放stream 打的時候一串100 orz
00:41:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 跟vocal的話這裏似乎應該推後1/2
00:55:298 (1,2,3,4) - 不得不說這裏太容易理解成是2連了.../_\
01:24:098 (4) - NC
01:24:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 之前都是2連啊 /_\ 這裏突然又變成了1/2大跳 略違和(這歌放2連打起來真是舒服...
01:30:498 (4) - NC
01:32:898 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 跟上面一樣 突然變1/2
01:36:898 (1) - NC

就是這樣 AE抱抱(死
DarknessAngel

AmamiyaYuko wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:24:898 (5) - NC 加了 ~
00:42:498 (5) - 加個finish在尾部? 唔,以我來說略奇怪
01:10:698 (5) - NC fixed
01:36:898 (1) - 這個NC放到01:37:698 (3) - 會好點? OK
這個diff玩起來好爽啊有BG的情況下我開dt都能1pcfc 神mapper就是厲害QAQ
不過這歌dt後聽起來好奇怪orz

咱只是普通的Mapper OAQ,嘛,謝謝捧場 ~ >w<

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觸啊
謝謝MOD ~ :)

Download: Tianshi - Vegetable Juice (Po Pi Po) (AngelEyE) [D.N.Angel's Hard].osu
midgety
Hi i was wondering if you know who sung this version of vegetable juice ;D
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AngelEyE

midgety wrote:

Hi i was wondering if you know who sung this version of vegetable juice ;D
She is TianShi(天時),a cover singer in China :)
midgety

AngelEyE wrote:

midgety wrote:

Hi i was wondering if you know who sung this version of vegetable juice ;D
She is TianShi(天時),a cover singer in China :)
Ok thanks alot!
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