Xiang Xiang - Lao Shu Ai Da Mi · forum

DawnII

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DawnII 2008-10-12T16:04:25+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, October 29, 2008 at 6:15:32 PM

Artist: Xiang Xiang
Title: Lao Shu Ai Da Mi
BPM: 136
Filesize: 18054kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:

Baby Mouse (1.46 stars, 179 notes)
Fat Mouse (3.16 stars, 300 notes)
Rice Grubbing Rat (4.54 stars, 432 notes)

Download: Xiang Xiang - Lao Shu Ai Da Mi
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老鼠爱大米 - Xiang Xiang

I was originally going to do Yang Chengang's version, but it got a bit wonky later on. As always, I will love any feedback.

Edit 1: Did a little more work on [Rice Grubbing Rat].
Edit 2: Finished [Rice Grubbing Rat].
Edit 3: Tweaks made. Moved to Pending.
Edit 4: Fixed with some of Ash's suggestions.
Edit 5: Mapped [Fat Mouse] to the end.
Edit 6: Added storyboard to [Rice Grubbing Rat]. Fixed minor spacing issues.
Edit 7: Made a slider in [Rice Grubbing Rat] less confusing. Changed offset to 16,870.

Lyrics:
When one day I hear your voice
I have some special feeling
Let me always think, I don't wanna forget you.
I remember every day,
You are always on my mind.
Even though I just can't think about you...

If one day in the future,
this love will become true.
I will never change my mind and will love you forever.
I don't care how fool it is,
I will let my dream come true.
I will tell you something I wanna let you know, I let you know...

CHORUS:

I love you, loving you, as the mouse loves the rice.
Even if every day has a storm, I will always by your side.
I miss you, missing you
I don't care how hard it is,
I just want you to be happy;
Everything, I do it for you

Last edited by DawnII 2008-10-29T22:16:34+00:00, edited 14 times in total.

ash

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Joined June 2008

ash 2008-10-13T02:39:24+00:00

[Baby Mouse]

00:37:60 (1,2,3) - consider moving this entire combo all the way to the right of the grid (level 1); technically it's incorrect spacing but special rules apply to new combos
03:21:27 (3) - move the slider end a little bit away from 4, because it's too close; in grid level 3, you could just move the beat up 2 squares or so

[Fat Mouse]
00:39:80 (4) - consider moving down a square in level 1, because it's too close to the next circle; technically incorrect but special rules for new combos again
01:11:57 (9) - suggestion: make it just a circle
01:13:11 (2,3) - move up 1 square in level 3 grid
01:13:33 (3) - after doing above, move up 1 square in level 3 grid
01:23:48 (6) - move slider end closer to the next circle (spacing)
01:30:98 (3) - move 3 squares right in level 3 grid
02:04:51 (4) - spacing (too close)
02:12:23 (2) - spacing (too close)
02:57:01 (1,2) - move 1 square left + up in level 3 grid (adjust slider shape accordingly)
03:26:57 (1,2) - move ONE of these beats 1 square apart from the other, or, if you want to maintain symmetry, make them stack (feel free to ignore this... seriously)

[Rice Grubbing Rat]
00:36:27 (7) - move 1 square down (level 3)
01:02:74 (3) - spacing (move 1 square down); 01:03:63 (5) - needs to be moved too, therefore 4 will have to move too
after this point i'm going to stop being a spacing demon

this is a REALLY well-made map, but some beats were one square too close, or one square too far (in level 3, of course), but really, it's not excruciatingly important, because the spacing was essentially correct throughout
everything you really don't have to do (by looking at my own modding) is sized down to size 50

if I were a BAT I would star this; I would bubble it if you mapped the two easiest difficulties to the end

please map the other two to the end please

<Ash> also dawnII imo it doesn't need the double BPM thing at the end
<Ash> o 3o

DawnII

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DawnII 2008-10-13T23:16:53+00:00

Fixes have been made, more mapping has been done, yadda yadda.

Posting as insurance for Ash.

ash

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ash 2008-10-13T23:17:57+00:00

^^'

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