Hai ligy, from Elly's and Musty's Modding Queue.
[General]Is it just me or the mp3 is cut?
[Easy]00:26:149 (1) - I think here you should add a finish at the beginning of the slider because of the melody
00:32:002 (1) - ^
01:58:344 (4,1) - This kind of spacing is really confusing for beginners
02:33:466 (1) - Remove new combo because the rhythm you follow isn't finished
02:58:435 (T) - Remove this useless timing section ( only if you want )
Nice Easy, just minor issues
[Normal]00:26:149 (1) - You should add a finish at the beggining of this slider because of the melody
00:29:075 (1) - Here too
00:32:002 (1) - ^
00:34:929 (1) - ^
00:37:856 (1) - ^
00:45:905 (5,1) - omg, this pattern is really HARD to read for beginners i was suprised about this too >>
01:12:978 (1,2,1) - This pattern is kind of problems because of readability essentially. Try to arrange them like this?
http://puu.sh/dAAn01:21:758 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about this pattern too it seems more readable like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22141301:24:319 (3,1) - This anti-jump is not even readable for beginner players try to arrange the spacing?
02:34:929 (1,2,1) - exactly the same as 01:12:978 (1,2,1) -
02:40:051 (4,5,6,1) - Because of the low approach rate, it really confuses me i would prefer something like this :
http://puu.sh/dABq02:58:435 (T) - Remove this useless timing section ( only if you want )
Nice Idea with this difficulty more minor issues than the Easy but it's great overall !
[Hard]The 4 first inherited sections are useless, because there is a spinner and a spinner can't have a lower speed
00:26:149 (1) - You should add a finish at the beggining of this slider because of the melody
00:29:075 (1) - Here too
00:32:002 (1) - ^
00:34:929 (1) - ^
00:37:856 (1) - ^
00:49:563 (1) - Grid Lv3 down 1 grid
01:00:905 (3,1) - Confusing Spacing
01:03:831 (8,1) - ^
02:16:270 (3,4) - Random Spacing is confusing
02:57:978 (3,4,5) - Don't really like it it would be fine if you make a consistent pattern like this :
http://puu.sh/dADw or something similar not overalaped
02:58:435 (T) - Remove this useless timing section ( only if you want )
Nice Hard, nice idea to map with a low SV i really enjoyed it
[Insane]Maybe OD+1?
02:01:088 (5,6,7) - I don't like this spacing change fastly
02:14:990 (2) - This note is better placed here :
http://puu.sh/dAEFOk Really fine difficulty
[Ono's Taiko]HP-1 and it would be fine~.
[Lunatic]01:36:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - I think so many MAT/BAT will told you about this part because it's the only standard diff who you make something here and then you put a break, try to make breaks at same timing in each diffs and the same count of breaks ( on each diffs too )
So the break here 01:48:100 should be mapped and the notes i told you should be removed. ;3
i hope you understand what i mean, btw awesome Lunatic, having fun and enjoyed it a lot!
Keep your great work !