Jacob wrote:

[General]
Nothing. -

[Normal]
00:28:983 - Clap no, Im not using claps on similar patterns on my other diffs
00:29:899 - Add clap - ^
00:54:174 - Slider touches the health bar - what you suggest me to do?

[Hard]
1:26:006 - Move two grids up - spacing bla bla bla

[Insane]
Fine

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]
Jumps were quite irregular, but were readable at the same time. I guess it's fine as it is right now. - some jumps are based on osuplayer111, mafiamaster style
00:13:640 (1) - Remove Finish, or even silence it. The way it just pause sounds wonderful with the song. hmmm, removed finish
00:42:724 (2,3,4) - Can you not overlap these? It gives me a wrong idea o_o;; (like 1/4 or something like that) no, the direction of the sliders is far away from the next aproach circle appears

[Hard]
00:02:877 (2,3) - Both could have had another U-turn, but it's up to you. huh? xD please notice my engrish is bad
00:39:976 (3) - Overlapping like that is kinda noobish. Just saying. - but spacing is ok
00:47:304 (2) - ^ - dont know why, this was ok before, moved
00:53:029 (2) - ^ x
01:26:006 (2) - ^ moved a bit to left
01:38:831 (3) - ^ like these kind of mistakes are easily avoidable. It's like watching a little black dot on a perfect drawing you just drew D: >v< cant get you

[Normal]
00:13:411 (1) - Remove Finish, or even silence it. The way it just pause sounds wonderful with the song. ok as up =v=
00:59:670 (1,2,3) - Nice -

Good luck with the map!

huh? xD please notice my engrish is bad

>v< cant get you

bmin11 wrote:

huh? xD please notice my engrish is bad

both can have another arrow ("->").
no thanks x3

>v< cant get you

Those are trivial, but just avoid overlapping like that even the distance snap is okay or not.

Jacob wrote:

[Kei's Easy]
00:50:052 - This slider may be confusing for newbies Nah, I don't think so. I find that shape quite simple.
00:52:800 - This is a suggestion - try ending this slider at 00:54:632 and adding a beat at 00:55:090 (remember to fix claps) No, thank you. I tried to make a simple and easy rhythm here.
1:19:823 - May be confusing for newbies Why? It's just a slider. I don't find hard-to-read this kind of slider shapes for beginners..
1:21:655 - ^ ^
1:53:716 - ^ What? In fact, I think that this slider it's way more simple than the others you pointed out.

1. Para contrarrestar un poco el spacing relativamente grande, sugiero bajar el AR 1 tick.

1. Considerá cambiarle el nombre a [Taiko Oni].
2. 00:22:342 (1,2,3,1) - Estos 1/6 son innecesarios. No tienen nada que ver con tus patterns previos. Por favor, usá solo 1/4.