[Life]
00:09:793 - would add notes on this sound /
ok00:11:126 - ^ and so on/
^00:35:459 - add note here /
no00:36:459 - ^/
no00:37:126 (37126|1,37126|2,37459|1,37459|0,37793|2,37959|1,38126|0,38126|2,38459|2,38459|1,38793|1,38793|0,39126|2,39293|1,39459|0,39459|2) - change it a little same pattern twice in a row
actually it's a of times in a row remember that it can also go this way /
ok[NM]
00:16:626 (16626|2,16626|3,16793|0,16793|1) - these can also be placed like this and still make sense
http://prntscr.com/hdhlsn/?no00:20:626 (20626|3,20626|2,20793|1,20793|0) - also you do this in the same direction many times in a row/
^[EZ]
00:11:126 - would change it to look like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9594085 just because it would feel weird to skip out on the sound compltely/
OK00:33:126 - ^/
^i only mentioned mistakes once or twice make sure to check through