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@Zerobladers
I didn't find it scary at all.
Also just go google Creepypastas.
I didn't find it scary at all.
Also just go google Creepypastas.
Shouldn't this have come out before halloween instead of after?
Don't challenge my authoritah
no.. not scary.
Most of the creepypastas out there are not creepy at all, lol.NoHItter wrote:
@Zerobladers
I didn't find it scary at all.
Also just go google Creepypastas.
The first part seemed like an introduction to some Knight quest or something, then poof it was just a janitor.Zerobladers wrote:
Please give constructive criticism
- Make the terms and language more fitting to a urban setting I guess.
Avoid deus ex machina.
- Why for no apparent reason does the janitor look down the well?
- How is there a secret passage under the well? Give some sort of hint that it had one.
It wasn't even scary in the first place?
- A skull is scary?
- No build-up/ no suspense?
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Oh and type in proper grammar and paragraphs.
AAHAHAHAHAHA OHHHH HMY GOD SDGHOLOLOOOLYY CRAP AHGSSG
SO SERIOUS!!! GSGFAFSQAAA
scaryie4stt story
ever read
SO SERIOUS!!! GSGFAFSQAAA
scaryie4stt story
ever read
Shit sucks, please reviseZerobladers wrote:
Please give constructive criticism
tl;dr... boh! /o/
To = "I'm going to the store."Apex wrote:
he was to concentrated on his work to even take a look at it
Too = "There's too much."
Moral of the story: Replace to with too and look quite a bit smarter.
I went outside once. It was pretty scary.
When I was young, this scarred me for life.
http://youtu.be/9D-RYNPETws?t=3m19s
Note that it starts on around 3:50 to 4:20.
http://youtu.be/9D-RYNPETws?t=3m19s
Note that it starts on around 3:50 to 4:20.
yoooooooooooooooooo
A Bosmer was murdered. The Altmer claims the Dunmer is guilty, the Dunmer says the Kahjit did it, the Orc swears he didn't kill the Bosmer and the Kahjit says the Dunmer is lying.
If only one of them is telling the truth, who murdered the Bosmer?
If only one of them is telling the truth, who murdered the Bosmer?
Oh my, Morrowind. I remember this as well as the drake one. OrcShellghost wrote:
A Bosmer was murdered. The Altmer claims the Dunmer is guilty, the Dunmer says the Kahjit did it, the Orc swears he didn't kill the Bosmer and the Kahjit says the Dunmer is lying.
If only one of them is telling the truth, who murdered the Bosmer?
then who was phone