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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October 31, 2017 at 12:34:41 PM

Artist: Shinsei Kamattechan
Title: Yuugure no Tori
Source: 進撃の巨人
Tags: ascendance revo mikasa ackerman Shingeki no Kyojin Attack on Titan Season 2 two Ending TV size theme dusk bird
BPM: 89
Filesize: 3030kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ascendance's Rain (2.76 stars, 190 notes)
  2. Broken Wings (3.89 stars, 230 notes)
  3. Hard (2.97 stars, 209 notes)
  4. Normal (1.99 stars, 159 notes)


Download: Shinsei Kamattechan - Yuugure no Tori
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An unsettling map for an unsettling song.

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Tags:Shingeki no Kyojin Attack on Titan Season 2 Ending TV size
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posted
01:25:910 (1) - Felt a bit too close to the edge after that hdash.
posted
Fixed above in discord

e: quick mod

normal:

01:12:427 (1,2) - Spacing is off.

hard:

00:06:359 (1,2) - Maybe don't make them perfectly parallel so it looks a bit more off?

broken wings:

00:01:303 (2) - This looks too normal.
00:03:662 (1) - ^

What has the world come to when we point out something that looks good as negative lol
Pretty ugly! (Nice concept tho)
posted
ctb

00:28:606 (3) - should be end on 00:27:764 (8) - ?

others seem fine to me, except the song is being weird

good luck~
posted
Fixed for Ascendance^

@Ascendance, all fixed, thanks!
posted

Ascendance's Rain
  1. 00:10:909 - clearly audible here, are you sure don't you wanna map it?
  2. 00:11:078 (8) - same here, I feel that you can change it into notes, 00:11:246 - deserve it imo.
  3. 00:11:078 (8,1) - hdash is necessary imo, 00:11:752 - it's the beginning of a new section and need a bit of enphasis, the diff is closer to platter than rain right now.
just minor stuff~~, great diff, call me back bro
posted
asscendance to tags

[broken wings]

00:11:078 (5,6) - 6 spacing feels too much considering how weak it is

00:37:370 (1) - emphasize this like the rest?

00:52:876 (4) - kinda small spacing compared to 00:29:955 (3) -

01:04:168 (6) - shouldn't this be a slider and 01:04:505 - a circle? atleast you followed that in the previous pattern 01:02:988 (1,2,3,4) -

01:10:741 (3) - more spacing to emphasize drum? like 01:21:191 (2,3) -

01:26:584 (3) - the only place you don't really space out snare drums, kinda weird considering it's nearing the ending, would expect something more intense

[hard]
00:32:651 (3,4,5,6,1) - lol, doesn't make sense to me, would be cooler if you reversed what you did at 00:54:224 (3,4,5,6,1) -

00:48:157 (1,2,3,4) - not sure what you're following here, mix of both vocals and drums on active/passive notes

could also avoid 00:09:056 (1,2) - gap here since you used stuff like 00:08:044 (2,3) - 00:05:348 (2,3) -

[normal]
hp drain too big I think
posted

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Ascendance's Rain
  1. 00:10:909 - clearly audible here, are you sure don't you wanna map it? Fixed
  2. 00:11:078 (8) - same here, I feel that you can change it into notes, 00:11:246 - deserve it imo. I much prefer to emphasize the held vocal here!
  3. 00:11:078 (8,1) - hdash is necessary imo, 00:11:752 - it's the beginning of a new section and need a bit of enphasis, the diff is closer to platter than rain right now. Fixed!
just minor stuff~~, great diff, call me back bro


Thank you~

@Strategas from what I see my name is already in tags lol

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Strategas wrote:

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[broken wings]

00:11:078 (5,6) - 6 spacing feels too much considering how weak it is ehm i really like this spacing. i don't think its that big of a jump, and it serves as a nice climax for the first few jumps. bigger spacing but simpler rhythm so it also helps to connect to the next section

00:37:370 (1) - emphasize this like the rest?

00:52:876 (4) - kinda small spacing compared to 00:29:955 (3) -

01:04:168 (6) - shouldn't this be a slider and 01:04:505 - a circle? atleast you followed that in the previous pattern 01:02:988 (1,2,3,4) -

01:10:741 (3) - more spacing to emphasize drum? like 01:21:191 (2,3) - i didn't space the other any differently for emphasis, I think the pattern just looks a bit more spaced, but the way you play it is the same, and players wont go into t hese patterns thinking the drum is given any special emphasis due to the spacing (which is my intention)

01:26:584 (3) - the only place you don't really space out snare drums, kinda weird considering it's nearing the ending, would expect something more intense

[hard]
00:32:651 (3,4,5,6,1) - lol, doesn't make sense to me, would be cooler if you reversed what you did at 00:54:224 (3,4,5,6,1) - i think the jumps here are pretty broken which makes them really good. also yea they don't feel like a reverse of those jumps.

00:48:157 (1,2,3,4) - not sure what you're following here, mix of both vocals and drums on active/passive notes just instruments. wanted to keep it simmple and just map white ticks here

could also avoid 00:09:056 (1,2) - gap here since you used stuff like 00:08:044 (2,3) - 00:05:348 (2,3) - this one's different since there is a note on the blue tick so i used 1/2 repeat instead. the note on 00:09:224 - isn't on the others.

[normal]
hp drain too big I think


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just an idea to play with, making NC patterns start early/late would be quite unsettling to play. It might(?) change how the song is emphasised though so just a thought
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wtf, fastest bubble
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i'm triggered by triggering patterns...
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Sinnoh wrote:

just an idea to play with, making NC patterns start early/late would be quite unsettling to play. It might(?) change how the song is emphasised though so just a thought


NC's are too closely tied with rhythm imo, and not so much with the visual aspect.
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