Philippines wrote:

Thy mod is here. Hope it helps.

GENERAL

1. peppy wrote:

   Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely.

I think this is fine.

EASY

1. Approach Rate +1 No.
   
   
2. 00:26:767 - This spinner should start at 00:26:988. No No.
   
   
3. 00:45:959 - This slider doesn't go with the song well. Try this kind of pattern:
   SPOILER

   
   Ok, plays fine.
   
4. 00:55:003 - This spinner is ends too late for an Easy Diff. Try to replace this spinner by 1/1 slider instead. No.
   
   
5. 01:00:959 - Ugly slider. Move the 2nd point of the slider at x:380 y:136. If you do, it will look like this:
   SPOILER

   
   Ok.
   
6. 01:25:444 - This slider should end at 01:28:753. Also, change volume to 5% 01:28:753.

NORMAL

1. 00:12:870 - This spinner should end at 00:14:856. No.
   
   
2. 00:26:767 - This spinner should start at 00:26:988. No.
   
   
3. 01:12:870 - Move the second point of this slider one grid down. Ok.
   
   
4. 01:19:929 - This slider is already at the corner. Try to avoid this. Really? This is fine for me.
   
   
5. 01:26:988 - I think increasing the hit sound volume at the spinner's end is not bad. Maybe add 10-20%. No.
   
   
6. I'm not quite sure about the ending. I prefer you use a spinner instead.

Why? Is fine this.

HARD

1. 00:24:782 - (1,2,3) Maintain the consistency of the spacing of the previous slider. This improves better gameplay. No.
   
   
2. 00:46:400 - Move the 3rd point of the slider at x:24 y:208. No.
   
   
3. Overall Difficulty -2 / -1 Fixed -1.
   
   
4. I'm not quite sure about the ending. I prefer you use a spinner instead.

[/list]No, this is fine.

Nice mapset. Hope this gets ranked soon! 8D

winber1 wrote:

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sorry. nine days late D: aushash no problem ^^


Hard

00:05:591 (1,2,3) - i'd rather just stack this, so that it's more clear that these are 1/4 tick notes. The notes at 00:07:356 (1,2,3) are in a different phrase and i feel it makes a lot more sense to change the spacing here rather then the previous measure Hm...now I see, good idea! I hope I've done right.
00:08:900 (7) - new combo? No.
00:09:120 (8) - don't overlap with combo 1? looks a little weird imo. Ok.
00:12:429 (3,4) - this looks better imo since it's symmetric about hte y-axis http://puu.sh/fgAD I have done it otherwise.
00:16:841 (4,5) - something like this works bettter imo. http://puu.sh/fgB9 This is because you set a rhythm in the previous measure (00:15:297 (1,2,3) - ) and so I am expecting the same rhythm to happen here, except it doesn't, and it feels awkward. No.
00:48:165 (6) - you can consider adding a new combo here No.
00:55:003 (4,5) - a little awkward. I would follow the vocals here http://puu.sh/fgCD
01:01:620 - add note to follow previous pattern at 00:57:429 (1,2,3) - ? Ok.
01:05:150 - ^? ^
01:12:209 - ^? ^
01:15:738 - ^? ^
01:23:459 (8) - new combo Ok
01:23:459 (1,2) - it's a little off from the vocals. THis would be better imo http://puu.sh/fgE8 Ok.

Normal

00:44:415 (4,5) - spacing Used Dsnap.
00:45:959 (6,7,1) - these stacks can be a little confusing to beginners. Deleted 7.
00:49:709 (4) - i'd unstack this http://puu.sh/fgFj Unstacked.
01:24:341 (1) - follows vocals better if it started 1/2 tick earlier Yeah, feels better. Fixed.

--you have quite a few stacks of varying rhythm (1/2 or 1/1 tick spaced), and well it could potentially be a little confusing. It's not a big deal, but I would still just take a look at them, because if the stacks are not necessary, then it may be better to just unstack them. No no i want to stay this.


Easy

00:11:106 (1) - i like it better if this slider ended at 00:12:650, but that's just me No no feels weird.
00:18:165 (3,4) - you may consider turning this into one repeat slider so that it's easier to read. Beginners can't read spacing very well so even if it's spaced correctly it's still gonna be hard to read if you keep changingn the rhythm :/ Fixed
00:19:929 (5,1,2,3) - keep the same spacing This no longer exists.
00:53:017 (4,5) - this is a small spacing error but still it just looks neater if it was spaced correctly ? I see no problem with spacing here.
00:55:003 (1) - this spinner is too short for an Easy and the next note comes too soon. Either you get rid of the spinner or you delete a few notes after the spinner so that the player has time to recover. Obviously i would just delete the spinner cuz it sounds better that way (and then add a note in replacement of the spinner) Deleted spinner and add a note in replacement of the spinner.
01:10:223 (4) - new combo? Ok
01:11:547 (1) - remove combo? Ok.

Good luck ~~

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from queue.

[General]
- Work on your symmetery.
- Make use of the Edit menu on the osu editor.
- Work on your spacing.
-Use break time where appropriate.

[Easy] Decent (See General)

[Normal] Decent (See General)

[Hard]
00:00:518 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1 grid up. Insert a break time after this.
00:04:047 (1,2,3,4) - Move 3 grids left.
00:05:591 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid right.

This map is definely new mapper quality.

Neptunus wrote:

Hey~
General:
Is the Mp3 of this song technical modified or it was originally made fading out in the end? if there be a verson that last to the end it could be better, well, merely suggestion. Technical modified. but i think the mp3 is fine.

Easy:
to make a better diff spread, make this diff Hp Drain, approaching rate and overall diffculty +1 Ok fixed.
00:20:812 (1) - cancel the newcombo here(like what you did here 00:24:341 (2) - ) because pattern in Easy should be clear Fixed

Normal:
fine

Hard:
00:55:665 (5,6,1) - antijump, plz spacing closer then the jump looks more professional Ok
01:04:488 (1,2,3) - keep consitent spacing Ok


NICE SONG! no really errors, good luck on ranking~

1. Audio Lead-in: 2s ... i suppose that's enough~
2. add a slient sliderslide.wav?

1. actually with slidertickrate 2, some short sliders looked weird...
2. 00:12:870 (1) - i suppose the volumn 30% for finish is better
3. 00:54:782 (6,7) - stack?
4. 00:57:098 - volumn increase to 65% from here?

1. 00:14:635 - same suggestion to Easy
2. 01:08:017 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add a note at 01:09:341 - ?
3. 01:15:297 - add a note here? and no stack of 01:15:517 (2,3) - ?
   
   

1. HP-1...it drains too fast in first section, or add more combos..
2. 00:14:635 - same as other diffs
3. 00:20:812 (3) - remove it?
4. 00:23:238 - add a note here?
5. 00:39:341 (3) - move to 176:180

wmfchris wrote:

Audio lead-in like 1500/2000 would be enough. Fixed to 1500.

[Hard]
Timing and settings
Duplicated timeline: 35812, 56106 Ok.
Hitsound and arrangement
00:05:812 (3) - a whistle may fit the music here Fixed.
00:08:900 (7,8) - how about placing (7,8) symmetrical to (5,6)?, i.e., (7) (200,56), (8) (128,80) Fixed.
00:18:826 (5) - NC here instead of the coming (1), though this slider sounds a bit odd concerning the misfit with vocals (at the middle of slider) NC added in (5) and removed NC in (1).
00:26:106 (2,3,4) - avoid overlapping with neighbouring notes, try

SPOILER

Ok.
00:39:341 (3) - right 1 grid to fit the spacing Ok
00:48:606 (7,9) - just a small thought to add whistle there, echo with previous (4) No.
00:55:665 (5,6,1) - uneven spacing Oh, now i see. Fixed.
01:02:723 (6) - down 1 grid so (4,5,6) forms a straight line Fixed
01:16:841 (1,2,3) - I prefer putting them in triangle rather than (1,2) on the same position <_< Formed a triangle here
01:19:929 (7,8) - 1beat slider then a single note may fit the vocal Made something better
01:22:135 (5,1) - stack properly Ok

[Normal]
00:01:179 (2) - why whistles are gone...Added whistle here.
00:07:356 (1) - whistle at the end Ok desu~
00:10:444 (6,1) - left a bit so that it fits 1.0 spacing Well, fixed.
00:10:885 (1) - whistle at the end Fixed.
00:11:988 (2) - whistle Fixed.
00:25:665 (2,4) - place over (96,112) No.
01:34:488 - make it graduually softer since here

sounds like some hitsound is missing, but sounds fine in later part

[Easy]
AR+1 maybe Fixed
Two issues:
1) Try to avoid notes that are 1/2 beat apart, this is a 1star diff so I think better make in easy in every aspect.
2) Try to make NC every sentence as the current combo sounds too long
No fix in these two for now. Like this 1/2 beats.
No major problem there

Quite good mapset for a slow song and get some potential there, maybe we can hv a try on this map... find more mods and ask me to recheck this a bit later.

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

Easy
* This overall spacing are inconsistent. Some pattern using distance spacing 1,0x but others are over 1,0x. Use 1,0x distance spacing and fix all spacing Fixed some spacings...

00:45:959 (3) - New combo for preventing of long combo Ok desu~
00:53:017 (4) - ^ ^
00:54:782 (6,7) - This 1/2 clicks makes beginners confusing. Replace this two into a slider Fixed.


Normal
00:21:032 (x) - Add note here for following vocal? No. But I made something similar to this.
01:19:929 (6) - The tail is almost offscreen Fixed this.
01:27:429 (1) - I think this note are too far from spinner for normal diff Deleted this slider.


Hard
00:11:988 (2) - Move 2 grid right for make a triangle pattern Ok.
00:23:459 (3) - Move to 00:23:238 for following vocal? No no, looks weird for me.
01:18:385 (2,3) - End at 01:18:606 for (2), remove (3) and make a slider at 01:18:826. This for following vocal Ok desu~
01:21:032 (1) - This anti-jump looks awkward Made another thing for this...


Nice job, sent me a forum PM for recheck Ok will send.

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue
sorry for late >.<

General:

1. Audio Lead-in: 2s ... i suppose that's enough~
2. add a slient sliderslide.wav? Will provide one.

Easy:

1. actually with slidertickrate 2, some short sliders looked weird... No is fine.
2. 00:12:870 (1) - i suppose the volumn 30% for finish is better No.
3. 00:54:782 (6,7) - stack? Changed to a slider.
4. 00:57:098 - volumn increase to 65% from here?No.

Normal:

1. 00:14:635 - same suggestion to Easy No.
2. 01:08:017 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add a note at 01:09:341 - ? No, like this.
3. 01:15:297 - add a note here? and no stack of 01:15:517 (2,3) - ? No, for me this is Hard.
   [attachment=0:f10a9]5.jpg[/attachment:f10a9]
   

Hard:

1. HP-1...it drains too fast in first section, or add more combos.. Fixed.
2. 00:14:635 - same as other diffs No.
3. 00:20:812 (3) - remove it? No.
4. 00:23:238 - add a note here? No no.
5. 00:39:341 (3) - move to 176:180 Fixed.

that's all, and good luck~

1. (Easy) - Snap the repeating slider at red tick at 00:07:576 (1)
2. (Easy) - Add note at 00:49:488
3. (Easy) - Rearrange the slider at 00:56:988 (2)
4. (Easy) - Rearrange the pattern at 01:00:959
5. (Easy) - Change the pattern at 00:49:929
6. (Normal) - Add whistle at 00:10:003 (5,6)
7. (Normal) - New combo at 01:28:312 (1) to preventing of spinner bug

Leorda wrote:

IRC Modding

1. (Easy) - Snap the repeating slider at red tick at 00:07:576 (1)
2. (Easy) - Add note at 00:49:488
3. (Easy) - Rearrange the slider at 00:56:988 (2)
4. (Easy) - Rearrange the pattern at 01:00:959
5. (Easy) - Change the pattern at 00:49:929
6. (Normal) - Add whistle at 00:10:003 (5,6)
7. (Normal) - New combo at 01:28:312 (1) to preventing of spinner bug

Bubbled

1. You need to raise the volume during kiai. I can hardly hear the hitsounds.
2. Correct offset is 505 (that's -13 from your current timing). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.

1. 01:17:282 (3,1) - That jump might throw off players... The notes are spaced like there's a 2/1 gap between them. Move (1) closer to (3) ?
2. 01:17:723 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: use distance snapping for (1,2)
3. 01:21:253 (3,1) - Same as 01:17:282 -

1. Lower OD and AR by 1 so that the difficulty settings have a better spread ?
2. 00:19:929 (5,1) - Very surprising jump. The spacing makes them look like they're 2/1 apart.
3. 00:45:959 (6,1) - Spacing error here again: these look like they're 1/2 apart. Despite the new combo, this will be confusing for new players.
4. 01:08:017 (2) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:07:576 (1) - this circle's hitburst.
5. 01:15:959 (4) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:15:517 (2,3) - these circles' hitbursts.
6. 01:22:135 (2,3,4,1) - I don't really like how there are two consecutive stacks that have different timings, that might prove confusing for new players. Unstack ?

• Mapping-wise, seems okay.

Odaril wrote:

wow old map
request taken from #modreqs

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. You need to raise the volume during kiai. I can hardly hear the hitsounds.
2. Correct offset is 505 (that's -13 from your current timing). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.

Easy

1. 01:17:282 (3,1) - That jump might throw off players... The notes are spaced like there's a 2/1 gap between them. Move (1) closer to (3) ?
2. 01:17:723 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: use distance snapping for (1,2)
3. 01:21:253 (3,1) - Same as 01:17:282 -

Normal

1. Lower OD and AR by 1 so that the difficulty settings have a better spread ?
2. 00:19:929 (5,1) - Very surprising jump. The spacing makes them look like they're 2/1 apart.
3. 00:45:959 (6,1) - Spacing error here again: these look like they're 1/2 apart. Despite the new combo, this will be confusing for new players.
4. 01:08:017 (2) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:07:576 (1) - this circle's hitburst.
5. 01:15:959 (4) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:15:517 (2,3) - these circles' hitbursts.
6. 01:22:135 (2,3,4,1) - I don't really like how there are two consecutive stacks that have different timings, that might prove confusing for new players. Unstack ?

Hard

• Mapping-wise, seems okay.

Have to pop for the timing issue and the weird spacing in Normal and Easy. Call me back when you've fixed.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ suzutsukikanade ~ (Sorry for the later mod) No problem

M4M here ~

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file ><. Well, this is not necessary for me...
2. Your Mp3 is 453 kbps,this is unrankble,Recode for 128 or 192 pls. Is already 192kbps.
   
3. You need change Source,like this (A Channel). Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:18:813 (1) - Move to 00:19:034 will be better. Hai, fixed.
2. 01:00:725 - Add a note to here,have vocal to here. Fixed.
3. 01:23:446 (1,2) - Sudden slow for this slider,try change 0.75? No, is fine.

[Normal]

1. OD-1. Hm...fine, fixed.
2. 00:07:343 (1) - This slider a bit Hard for now,Try like this. No.
   
3. 00:08:666 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think this rhythm it's off,Try like this. I make something different
   
4. 00:16:828 (4) - This note should to here 00:17:049. No.
5. 01:07:563 (1,2,3) - Spacing error. No, spacing is good here.
6. 01:14:622 (1,2) - ^

[Easy]

1. 00:56:093 - Add a note to here,have vocal to here. No.
2. 01:19:475 (2,3,1) - Spacing error.

That's all ~ moe song ~

Good luck ~

MMzz wrote:

Easy:

00:00:505 to 00:12:416 - try useing soft hitsounds in this section, I don't think the normal hits fit in this calm part of the song. E-eto...this part have soft hitsounds...no normal hitsounds
00:53:004 (1) - consider making this 2 notes instead of the 2 beat slider, haveing the end of the slider start off the new stanza messes up new combos. You can do something like this: http://puu.sh/j1Mk instead, and add new combo to 6. No, this way is fine for me.
01:10:210 (1) - same as before, you don't want the end of a slider to start of a new stanza, so maybe put some notes there, it would fit. ^
01:13:740 (1) - ^ ^

Normal:

AR and OD -1 Ok fixed.

Same as the easy, in that opening section try useing soft hitsounds. The same as i say in easy. This part no have normal hitsounds...

You did a lot of the same as you did in the easy, with the sliders ending on new stanzas. You should watch out for that in furture mapping. Hm...will be careful in this.

Hard:

Same as the easy, in that opening section try useing soft hitsounds.



Fun map :3

1. move the 4# kiai time ends to 01:25:321. It's now set at 01:25:334
   offest is a bit off, I'd like to make it 515.
2. 00:26:985 (1) - this spinner should be end at 00:28:727, which can not access with only beat snap divisor. You may consider make it ends at the "unsnapped" point instead.

1. hitsounds has not a perfect consistency. sometimes you use a couple of whistle, then you use nothing for 10 sec.
   
2. I don't think only 1 red section is enough for the whole part from the beginning to the kiai part. it needs 2~3 green lines to adjust the volume.

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

I like this song, because it has nice melody and soft but wonderful percussion. Same reasons here

General

1. move the 4# kiai time ends to 01:25:321. It's now set at 01:25:334
   offest is a bit off, I'd like to make it 515. Odaril say me told me that the offset is correct then this will not change
2. 00:26:985 (1) - this spinner should be end at 00:28:727, which can not access with only beat snap divisor. You may consider make it ends at the "unsnapped" point instead. No changes

Easy

sliderslide sounds really bad before the vocal comes, use silent one please Added one.

00:04:034 (1) - no need to whistle on the end Ok
00:07:563 (1) - whistle on the beginning Ok
00:11:093 (1) - remove whistle from the end Ok
00:56:975 (2) - from this point on, the volume is a bit too low and the sound of objects is foggy. maybe increase the volume to 65% Ok.

Normal

00:04:696 (2) - no whistle Ok
00:08:887 (2) - ^ ^
00:10:431 (4) - this kind of spacing may mislead some new joiners I think is fine.

Hard

01:00:725 (4) - spacing Think is fine. But fixed

hitsounds

1. hitsounds has not a perfect consistency. sometimes you use a couple of whistle, then you use nothing for 10 sec.
   
2. I don't think only 1 red section is enough for the whole part from the beginning to the kiai part. it needs 2~3 green lines to adjust the volume.

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
01:00:946 - What's this green line :3? [Same option as previous green line]Fixed
01:07:563 - ^ No.
01:24:769 - ^ Fixed

[Normal]
00:00:505 (1,2) - Just make it as 1 slider :3? Nope, this is fine.
00:04:034 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:12:637 (4) - Stacking on midterm of train might be hard on this diff imo orz I unstacked this.
01:24:769 - What's this green line :3? [Same option as previous green line] Fixed



meow :3 >w<

Gabex3 wrote:

Your welcome and good luck !

vacalia wrote:

Can I do the Taiko diff :3 ?
It's complete you can add this to your beatmap if you want <3
vaca's Taiko

bestz2541 wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
[spoilerbox]Your beatmap is easy to mod ^^
I love it <3

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:16:166 (1 , 2) - like this ? http://puu.sh/o9xa No.

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:22:784 (1) - remove new combo Ok
00:59:622 (1) - remove new combo No.
01:00:946 (2) - add new combo No.
01:09:549 (2 , 3 , 4) - like this ? http://puu.sh/o9Ao Ok.
01:23:887 (4) - add new combo No.
01:24:107 (1) - remove new combo No.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:22:122 (1) - remove new combo I think no.
00:24:990 (1 , 2 , 3) - like this ? http://puu.sh/o9Cl No because i like this jump.
00:40:872 (1) - remove new combo Ok.
01:34:034 (1) - remove new combo Ok

ˊ • ᵜ •ˋ ) ~ ♪[/spoilerbox]

ertyukjh010 wrote:

您好，想訓練自己的英文，所以用英文好了www

[General]

Audio Lead-In > 2 You must be Lead-In adjust to beyond 2000 Fixed, changed to 2000

[Easy]

00:15:284 (1) - end at 00:15:946 Fixed
01:10:210 (1) - No change in distance for EZ. Check the distance pls > http://puu.sh/q20C No
01:13:740 (1) - ^ ^

[Normal]

OD-1? No
01:26:975 - Unless green line Fixed

[Hard]

00:22:343 (2) - Completely stack Fixed, i think?
00:46:166 (3) - Why decrease a distance here? ^

That all

1. Audio lead-in for Easy is different from Normal and Hard. Extend Easy's lead in to 2 seconds.
2. Very nice song choice! Pretty calming.

Here are the two exampels:

Should look like this on the timeline...
...And like this on the mapping field.

It should look like this in the timeline:

Like so:

Agnes wrote:

Surprise mod.

[General]

1. Audio lead-in for Easy is different from Normal and Hard. Extend Easy's lead in to 2 seconds. Ok fixed
2. Very nice song choice! Pretty calming. Thanks!

[Easy]

00:11:093 (1) - (Suggestion) Shorten the sliderend to 00:11:975 (last white tick), then add a note to 00:12:416? Two pictures of the end result follow. Oh nice suggestion! Fixed!

Here are the two exampels:

Should look like this on the timeline...
...And like this on the mapping field.

00:12:637 (1) - If you do the previous suggestion, you can also move the spinner beginning closer to the (2) in the image. Ok.

It should look like this in the timeline:

[Normal]

Nothing to poke at.

[Hard]

00:05:578 (1,2,3) - The triplet kind of ruins the flow. Might be better off as two notes. Fixed.
01:09:328 (5) - (Just 'cause I'm a little anchor nazi) Adjust the sliderend's anchor to be balanced with the one in the beginning. Fixed, i think...Don't know if it match like the picture.

Like so:

01:12:637 - (Suggestion) Add a note here? Yes!


Very nice mapset. Hope this mod helps you.

JauiPlaY wrote:

HI~
Just some suggestions:

[General]
There is an useless .osb file in your folder. O.o really? I was sure I had deleted this.
Why didn't you add kiai time? Abusing kiai burst may be unrankable. Ok ok I'll add kiai.

[Easy]
00:05:578 (2) - I'm afraid I didn't hear any rhythm from the song. Eh? this follow rhythm! You really didn't hear the rhythm here?
00:12:637 (1) - I suppose a note here and the move the spinner to 00:12:747.
00:26:754 (1) - Similar as above.
01:04:034 - Kiai burst abusing.
01:21:681 (4) - New combo.
01:25:210 - Kiai burst abusing.
01:25:210 (1) - Ends on 01:27:416.
Fixed all i think.

[Normal]
By using AIMod, spacing issues on a normal diff? Fix them. Thx for point this, fixed some.
00:05:578 (1) - Same as Easy. Same as easy
00:12:857 (1) - Move to 00:12:747. Ok
00:15:505 (1,2) - Sounds weird. No, i think is fine
00:26:755 (1) - Same as Easy. O
01:25:431 (1) - Move to 01:25:321.
Also remove those abused kiais.

[Hard]
00:05:578 (1,2) - Same as Easy. Same as easy
00:12:857 (1) - Move to 00:12:747. Ok
00:26:975 (1) - Move to 00:26:865. Ok
Also remove those abused kiais. Well i think the new kiai is fine now. /color]

Btw I don't know if those slienced sliders/circles in your ending are rankable.You should ask some MATs/BATs about this stuff. I hope so because I really want to keep this.
Good luck.

Unknownable wrote:

Hello...
Modding from My Queue

[General]
Put Lucky Star into Tags? ¬¬

SPOILER

Look at the AudioLeadIn... LoL Will fix this.

[Easy]
Looks Fine

[Normal]
00:09:107 (2) put whistle at the end of slider
00:26:093 (3) Whistle?
00:44:843 (5) put Whistle in the beginning and middle of slider
00:51:681 (3) put whistle at the end of slider
00:52:122 (4) ^

[Hard]
00:51:902 (2) Whistle?
00:52:343 (4) ^

Good Luck ~(^.^~)

1. I think this is a [Short Ver.] ( it's faded out at the end... )
2. Map the same parts in all diffs u.u

1. [Graphic]
   
   1. Same issue as Normal, the after break part is well-ordered, but the starting part not....
   2. Curvy sliders flows better than shaped in soft songs

1. [Rhythmn]
   
   1. 00:08:666 (2) - Better you add the note for readabily reasons
   2. 00:09:549 (x) - Add a note here... players won't hit the next notes if you don't map this note
   3. 00:12:527 (1) - Make it start in 00:12:857 and add a note here
   4. 00:17:710 (1) - play better like two slider, with one starting the red tick before
      
   5. 00:24:769 (1) - ^
   6. 01:19:696 (5) - Will be more intuitive if you move it in 01:19:475 (5)
2. [Graphic]
   
   1. 00:00:505 (1,2,1,2) - put the first two like the image there and mirror the last two
      
      SPOILER

      
   2. 00:05:578 (1) - Put this at the center
   3. 00:07:343 (1) - Put it like this
      
      SPOILER

      
   4. As you see, you can order notes better in the starting part.... the part after the break is better ordered too

1. [Rhythmn]
   
   1. 00:05:578 (1,x,2) - make this an 1/4 stream, and move it in the center? (play better)
   2. 00:12:637 (1) - Make it start on the next white tick(00:12:857), and add a note here
   3. 00:15:946 (x) - if you're mapping to the voice, add this note
   4. 00:17:049 (5) - As you did end with the bell-like sound (00:16:387 (4)), move it in 00:17:269?
   5. 00:23:446 (3) - I do think it's better you follow voice there(the last slider and something before...)
2. [Spacing]
   
   1. 00:23:887 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Flow BAD, no discernible reasons for this in music, neither in graphic.... just... why?
3. [Graphic]
   
   1. Too squared... try to make it more curvy? In such a soft song, curves flow better than shapes
   2. Many avoidable antiaestethic overlaps

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

no remap needed actually >.<