1. Sorrow (5,39 stars, 340 notes)

LwL wrote:

hi

mod

1. 00:12:843 (4) - 00:14:199 (4) - etc. The sound you're probably mapping the slider to ends on the white tick so mapping it like this is kinda unfitting, doesn't help that as a result you're also ignoring the drums on the white tick, would fit much better if you just made these sliders end at the white tick and put a jump after rather than the current 1/4 thing with overmapped sliders.
   Yeah it was probably mapped too complicated than how it should have been - fixed
   
2. 00:15:555 (4) - probably better to end it at the whtie tick and put a circle on the red tick where it currently ends since the main melody you're mapping to (synth or guitar idk what it is) has a prominent note there so it should really be clickable. (you did this in other places)
   
3. 00:20:979 (3) - ^ Fixed for both
   
4. 00:16:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - not really a fan of overmapping personally, and imo a jump pattern would fit a lot better here (something like this maybe)
   I think this part should at least "sound" streamy, but the main sound i'm mapping should also sound jumpy, so I just half-mapped it idk why and I should have made 00:17:081 (1,2,3,4) - just like 00:16:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so that's what i did, somehow a compromise between us two :p
   
5. 00:23:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2) - The rhythm in this section seems pretty random, I can't really see what you're following here. If it's vocals 00:23:521 -, 00:24:030 -, 00:26:233 should definitely be clickable, if it's drums you shouldn't ignore all those white ticks.
   I was mapping drums but maybe I got myself charmed by the vocals - fixed
   
6. 00:27:759 (2) - snapping error? :p Though you should just use a consistent rhythm between this and 00:29:115 (2,3,4,5,6) - anyway, the stacked note under the slider works fine
   Wasn't it snapped fine? D: made it more consistent tho - fixed
   
7. 00:28:267 (4) - Inconsistent emphasis with 00:29:623 (5) - when it's musically the same and the pattern is similar as well, the latter version fits better imo.
   I litterally just ctrl+c ctrl+h 00:27:928 (3,4,5,6) - now it can never be inconsistent lol - fixed
   
8. 00:30:640 (3) - Make the sliderend clickable you've been prioritizing vocals in this section before
   Fixed
   
9. 00:31:233 (7,1) - looks bad imo just put the sliderhead in a straight line as well and it should be nicer, my sense for aesthetics is shit tho
   Fixed to fit with the previous change (00:30:640 (3) -)
   
10. 00:34:030 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - the song got a lot calmer here and you still keep up the high spacing, doesn't really make much sense.
    The guitar which is mapped in this part still sound "heavy"
    
11. 00:44:538 (1) - This doesn't really stand out much to justify the spacing, 00:44:651 (2) - is pretty strong so if you wanna do a stream jump do it to that
    You're right, i guess i'll make the first 3 notes a slider - fixed
    
12. 00:46:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really off in intensity if you compare it to similar vocal patterns in previous sections where the song was quite a bit more intense.
    Nerfed the spacing
    
13. 00:50:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this too
    Nerfed the spacing of the first notes but i still think that the last notes should stand out more than the rest since the song gains intensity on this section whereas it didn't gain intensity on the same previous section (= on 00:46:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -)
    
14. 01:02:005 (1,2,3,4,1) - pretty sure this is 1/3
    Huh? But i think it's better to keep it 1/4 anyway because it's nicer to play it like that when you hear the background sound
    
    overall feels like what rhythm you're following is often switched with no reason as far as I can see, you're often prioritizing vocals and then switching to drums when they haven't really gotten any more intense to justify them standing out, a lot of mappers follow drums primarily but be consistent with it (vocal mapping ftw tho).

Thanks for the mod~ !

NEVlR wrote:

Color code:
Agreed - Fixed/changed
Disagreed - no change

LwL wrote:

[*]00:27:759 (2) - snapping error? :p Though you should just use a consistent rhythm between this and 00:29:115 (2,3,4,5,6) - anyway, the stacked note under the slider works fine
Wasn't it snapped fine? D: made it more consistent tho - fixed It was snapped to the wrong tick I think, at least I can't imagine you intending a huge 1/2 jump to it and then low 1/1 spacing after while skipping over the first vocal of the vocals you've been basing that jump pattern on :^)

Arkanipro wrote:

pretty wide spacing for a 5.4 star map