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Heyoo. Request and something to repay Crescendo mod with.
General
I think the map could use a few more green timing sections to alter the volume as sometimes at places like 00:00:456 (1) - to 00:06:942 (1) - and 01:24:780 (1) - to 01:37:753 (1) - felt like it could be toned down by about 20%. Could add variety too to the hitsounds so they're not the same volume all the time.
I don't like to be that picky but the offset did sound better to me on 447.
I wills top here due to a kinda m4m with you as you only modded Rain and Overdose for me. So I think this is enough for now (Unless you were to continue anymore on modding my mapset).
Good luck
Heyoo. Request and something to repay Crescendo mod with.
General
I think the map could use a few more green timing sections to alter the volume as sometimes at places like 00:00:456 (1) - to 00:06:942 (1) - and 01:24:780 (1) - to 01:37:753 (1) - felt like it could be toned down by about 20%. Could add variety too to the hitsounds so they're not the same volume all the time.
I don't like to be that picky but the offset did sound better to me on 447.
Cup
I think the cup might have a few big jumps. Mainly the 1.5x ones such as 00:34:915 (2,3) - and 01:01:266 (5,1) - . Maybe reduce these to at least 1.4x ?
00:04:104 (2) - I feel this note could be deleted as from what I can tell you mainly main the choir for the introduction.
00:08:969 (4,6) - I think these 2 notes could be pushed a little more right. This is due to these sliders 00:06:942 (1,2) - 00:10:185 (1,2) - having more a glide feel to then suddenly slow down more with 00:08:564 (3,4,5,6) - and littler movements which could be a little weird to play. Try move (4,6) together to at least x:240
00:12:212 (4,6) - ^ (00:15:050 (3,4) - these play nice but I think I see you went for it to slowly increase for the next stanza. But still should be fine for previous 2 suggestions).
00:24:374 (2) - I find the reverse slider does not work so well here. I would see that this pattern works better. Or try to do something similar to 00:29:645 (3,4) -
00:51:334 (3) - I think the triplet should have some sort of movement as i personally dislike these for louder sections of the song. Perhaps move this note to x:392 ?
00:55:996 (2,3) - Alright if you're going to have these stacked notes then at least mirror them to the other ones by flipping these to the other side. It feels all too one sided if you put both on the right.
01:38:158 (2) - Perhaps just nudge a little left ? Same reason as earlier to try match the glide of the sliders but with circle notes instead. Try x:64
01:39:374 (1,2,3) - Hmmm 2 and 3 felt a bit close together imo. I would space these out a bit more like this.
01:50:320 (5,1) - oof! 1.64x distance! that's a lot man. Please reduce a bit
00:04:104 (2) - I feel this note could be deleted as from what I can tell you mainly main the choir for the introduction.
00:08:969 (4,6) - I think these 2 notes could be pushed a little more right. This is due to these sliders 00:06:942 (1,2) - 00:10:185 (1,2) - having more a glide feel to then suddenly slow down more with 00:08:564 (3,4,5,6) - and littler movements which could be a little weird to play. Try move (4,6) together to at least x:240
00:12:212 (4,6) - ^ (00:15:050 (3,4) - these play nice but I think I see you went for it to slowly increase for the next stanza. But still should be fine for previous 2 suggestions).
00:24:374 (2) - I find the reverse slider does not work so well here. I would see that this pattern works better. Or try to do something similar to 00:29:645 (3,4) -
00:51:334 (3) - I think the triplet should have some sort of movement as i personally dislike these for louder sections of the song. Perhaps move this note to x:392 ?
00:55:996 (2,3) - Alright if you're going to have these stacked notes then at least mirror them to the other ones by flipping these to the other side. It feels all too one sided if you put both on the right.
01:38:158 (2) - Perhaps just nudge a little left ? Same reason as earlier to try match the glide of the sliders but with circle notes instead. Try x:64
01:39:374 (1,2,3) - Hmmm 2 and 3 felt a bit close together imo. I would space these out a bit more like this.
01:50:320 (5,1) - oof! 1.64x distance! that's a lot man. Please reduce a bit
Salad
00:27:212 (7,1) - I honestly think the jump should be the last one in this stanza at 00:29:645 (2,3) - instead. Seems weird having the jump randomly here and it's a bit unexpected imo. If you're having trouble you can easily slant 00:29:645 (2) -'s end towards the right more and make 00:31:266 (3) - jump left then.
00:31:266 (3) - Also speaking of these note. maybe it should be a slider like the rest of the previous notes ? that way you can jump the next note after this then. Like you did in the higher diffs.
00:50:523 (6,7) - This is easily catch-able. Increase distance please.
00:50:726 (7) - On every other diff this note is the NC but not the salad.
01:05:118 (8,1) - I think you can increase distance a bit here for the kiai. Because places like 00:52:145 (6,1) - are a little bigger and they're not AS big as the kiai start jump.
01:09:983 (4,1) - Same as before. Dunno if to jump or walk this one. Probably increase distance.
01:12:415 (5,6,7,8) - 3 stacked.... okay... but 4 stacked with the tiniest slant doesn't feel right. Try this instead. (lel it looks like a "?")
01:34:915 (2,3) - and 01:35:726 (4,5) - felt a bit too close together here. Perhaps space out a bit more?
Not a bad salad at all
00:31:266 (3) - Also speaking of these note. maybe it should be a slider like the rest of the previous notes ? that way you can jump the next note after this then. Like you did in the higher diffs.
00:50:523 (6,7) - This is easily catch-able. Increase distance please.
00:50:726 (7) - On every other diff this note is the NC but not the salad.
01:05:118 (8,1) - I think you can increase distance a bit here for the kiai. Because places like 00:52:145 (6,1) - are a little bigger and they're not AS big as the kiai start jump.
01:09:983 (4,1) - Same as before. Dunno if to jump or walk this one. Probably increase distance.
01:12:415 (5,6,7,8) - 3 stacked.... okay... but 4 stacked with the tiniest slant doesn't feel right. Try this instead. (lel it looks like a "?")
01:34:915 (2,3) - and 01:35:726 (4,5) - felt a bit too close together here. Perhaps space out a bit more?
Not a bad salad at all
Platter
There's a lot of times where it is uncertain if you are to dash or not on this diff. Specially with large spacing between notes such as here for e.g. 00:07:618 (3,4,5) - And I mean there is a LOT of them.
00:01:874 (6,1) - Can catch without dashing and I presume this was meant to be a dash.
00:02:279 (2) - Seemed a little more cramped then 00:00:658 (2) -. Move left a bit ?
00:27:820 (9,1) - Bit of a random hyper in the middle of this section... you didn't add it on 00:21:131 (2,3) - so why have one here? I suggest to remove it and have a dash instead.
00:32:888 (1,2) - PLEASE CTRL + H these 2 together. The wait is not that great and shows no emphasis.
01:38:158 (2,3,4) - OOF! what a flow stopper ;-;. I would slant these in the direction you prefer. So it's at a slant like 01:38:969 (6,7,8) -
01:39:071 (7) - I don't hear a sound on this one.
01:43:428 (3,4) - Maybe a hyper here ? I find it would fit it.
00:01:874 (6,1) - Can catch without dashing and I presume this was meant to be a dash.
00:02:279 (2) - Seemed a little more cramped then 00:00:658 (2) -. Move left a bit ?
00:27:820 (9,1) - Bit of a random hyper in the middle of this section... you didn't add it on 00:21:131 (2,3) - so why have one here? I suggest to remove it and have a dash instead.
00:32:888 (1,2) - PLEASE CTRL + H these 2 together. The wait is not that great and shows no emphasis.
01:38:158 (2,3,4) - OOF! what a flow stopper ;-;. I would slant these in the direction you prefer. So it's at a slant like 01:38:969 (6,7,8) -
01:39:071 (7) - I don't hear a sound on this one.
01:43:428 (3,4) - Maybe a hyper here ? I find it would fit it.
I wills top here due to a kinda m4m with you as you only modded Rain and Overdose for me. So I think this is enough for now (Unless you were to continue anymore on modding my mapset).
Good luck