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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 12 septembre 2018 at 18:55:08

Artist: Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O)
Title: Harumachi Clover
Source: OneRoom
Tags: tv size one_room カントク kantoku
BPM: 142
Filesize: 865kb
Play Time: 00:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2,55 stars, 58 notes)
  2. Easy (1,16 stars, 24 notes)
  3. Hard (3,3 stars, 89 notes)
  4. Insane (2,9 stars, 42 notes)
  5. Normal (1,63 stars, 47 notes)


Download: Hanasaka Yui(CV: M.A.O) - Harumachi Clover
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Easy made by me
Normal made by me
Advanced made by me
Hard made by me
Currently making a Insane
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Insane

Song Setup : Circle size would better with 4 - 4.5
: Approach Circle would better with 8 so its more readable

Timing : BPM offset better in 00:00:052
: add kiai mode at 00:14:841 - 00:29:207

Compose : 00:00:263 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This jump is more interesting if they placed in different place
and maybe you can try some triangle or square jump

: 00:03:643 (4) - The end circle its better at 00:03:855

: 00:04:066 (5) - maybe you can add one more circle or change it to a slider that end at 00:04:277

: 00:07:024 (8) - The end circle its better at 00:07:235

: 00:07:446 (9) - maybe you can add one more circle or change it to a slider that end at 00:07:658

: 00:09:559 (9) - The end circle its better at 00:09:770

: 00:09:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can try better shape for this jump or make it straight with same spacing

: 00:14:207 (7) - The end circle its better at 00:14:418

: 00:17:165 (3) - The end circle its better at 00:17:376

: 00:18:010 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is too big, maybe you can try to reduce the jump because the spacing is bigger than any jump

: 00:20:545 (8) - The end circle its better at 00:20:968

: 00:21:179 - add circle here, so it sounds better

: 00:22:447 (1,2) - spacing is to big

: 00:24:770 (7) - the reverse arrow should be at 00:25:193, it sounds better

: 00:27:728 (5,6,7) - make this jump more straight down

: 00:28:362 (1) - Spinner end is better at 00:29:313

Sorry bad English .. and just an advice .. see other maps to improve your map ;):D you'll be a great mapper soon
posted

beenscared wrote:

Insane

Song Setup : Circle size would better with 4 - 4.5
: Approach Circle would better with 8 so its more readable

Timing : BPM offset better in 00:00:052
: add kiai mode at 00:14:841 - 00:29:207

Compose : 00:00:263 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This jump is more interesting if they placed in different place
and maybe you can try some triangle or square jump

: 00:03:643 (4) - The end circle its better at 00:03:855

: 00:04:066 (5) - maybe you can add one more circle or change it to a slider that end at 00:04:277

: 00:07:024 (8) - The end circle its better at 00:07:235

: 00:07:446 (9) - maybe you can add one more circle or change it to a slider that end at 00:07:658

: 00:09:559 (9) - The end circle its better at 00:09:770

: 00:09:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You can try better shape for this jump or make it straight with same spacing

: 00:14:207 (7) - The end circle its better at 00:14:418

: 00:17:165 (3) - The end circle its better at 00:17:376

: 00:18:010 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is too big, maybe you can try to reduce the jump because the spacing is bigger than any jump

: 00:20:545 (8) - The end circle its better at 00:20:968

: 00:21:179 - add circle here, so it sounds better

: 00:22:447 (1,2) - spacing is to big

: 00:24:770 (7) - the reverse arrow should be at 00:25:193, it sounds better

: 00:27:728 (5,6,7) - make this jump more straight down

: 00:28:362 (1) - Spinner end is better at 00:29:313

Sorry bad English .. and just an advice .. see other maps to improve your map ;):D you'll be a great mapper soon
Thanks for your help! I'm gonna make the changes whenever I can. :p
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