Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ame

Asuka_-

Joined February 2016

Topic Starter

Asuka_- 2017-10-20T18:01:29+00:00

Mir wrote:
Insane
- 00:57:702 - Could be a 1/4 slider cuz the sound here is pretty strong and since you don't really capitalize on it with stopping movement you could probably make a different rhythm to compensate.yea, nice point. i can do that your sugested, but i want to keep here for now xd. because i think now looks clear. ><
- 00:58:039 (1,3) - These are overlapped so little I nearly misread them on sightread, probably do something more like this https://i.imgur.com/H1oxY9z.png so it's not as surprising. Since you didn't really introduce overlaps like this earlier it only makes sense to have them as intuitive as possible.
i see, okay applied!
- 01:08:320 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This stream felt a little too intense and I don't really think there's anything on 01:08:320 (2,3) - so you could probably just delete 3 and have a 5 note stream at the same spacing? You can do something like https://i.imgur.com/WEkbZVR.jpg if you really want to but that would be a pretty major change. Up to you what you really want to do but I felt the stream was a bit too strong here compared to the rest of the kiai.
As you said, certainly the part here was stronger than the other parts in kiai.
However, since I want to pick up (3)'s bass drum as clickable,so I kept the number of stream and narrowed the distance of stream.
I think that it was probably resolved that it was too strong~.

Thanks~!!! (easy updated)
Since I have not given up speed rank yet, i would like to ask recheck at a later date if you dont mind.

Last edited by Asuka_- 2017-11-10T09:18:05+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Suimya

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Joined February 2011

Suimya 2017-10-21T15:48:45+00:00

I will check the mods soon, I'm kinda busy right now ></

Sorry Asuka ;w;

Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-21T16:21:35+00:00

okay, no problem~ ^^ ♪

Momochikun

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Momochikun 2017-10-23T00:27:23+00:00

Mir wrote:
Mochi's Hard
- 00:03:769 - Might be nicer as a circle here to differentiate between the double chime melody thing on 00:03:432 (4) - well i would prefer to keep the symmetrical pattern if its not a big deal
- 00:08:657 (1,2) - You could make the 2 lead from the 1 a bit better like if you blanketed it around 00:07:814 (4) - i wanted to keep the stack pattern, dont want blanket
- 00:32:758 (3,4) - 3 gets way more emphasis than 4 does yet 4 is way stronger? Buffing 3>4 and nerfing 2>3 would be cool here imo alright
- 00:38:826 (7) - Really out of place imo - different slider, flow change on a relatively weak beat, and it's not even blanketed nicely over 00:38:151 (5), and it ends on a downbeat. If you wanted to, you could ctrl+g 00:38:826 - and make it a 1/1 reverse which would fix the flow change thing and the downbeat thing and the blanket thing if you blanketed it nicely. changing stuff
- 00:43:797 - You could put a note if you wanted to.
- 00:48:095 (3,2) - You could avoid this overlap and maybe do something to make 00:47:758 (2,3,1,2) - not look like you intended for this https://i.imgur.com/FyaD3zD.png and ran out of space nah i intend this though, i would like to make (2) same shape as (1) but making it spaced would be too far, so i make it overlapping instead
- 00:59:893 (2,3,2) - I think not overlapping 01:00:399 (3,2) - would do well to separate the downbeat cuz atm it looks like they should be the same pattern which isn't what you or the song has been doing. changed the next combo
- 01:32:421 (3,4,5) - I think this might confuse players especially introduced so late into the map. Could either raise stack leniency or manually stack it some other way. Similarly I don't think 01:31:578 (1,2) - are that nice stacked like they are, since I don't really think you ever stacked like this before and I'm wondering why you decided to all of a sudden. nah i think manual stacking would make things even worse, also i did stack like this before and i do like it tbh
- 01:39:163 (3,4,5,6,1) - You can tidy this up a little bit especially 01:39:163 (3,1) - im bad at this lol

Good luck!

Thanks for modding

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351,41,79191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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374,260,82814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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252,154,84837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,271,85005,6,0,P|98:230|109:145,1,140,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,74,85511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,74,85679,2,0,P|208:87|303:97,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,251,86354,6,0,P|299:237|208:226,2,140,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,293,87196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,223,87365,2,0,P|476:182|465:149,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,84,87702,6,0,P|364:117|356:151,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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117,144,89556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,89893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,34,89977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,20,90061,1,4,0:0:0:0:
375,37,90230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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132,250,91410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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420,128,92590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Asuka_-

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Asuka_- 2017-10-24T00:23:55+00:00

hard updated

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Asuka_- 2017-10-27T12:51:14+00:00

発売日おめ

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Asuka_- 2017-11-10T09:13:41+00:00

Mir wrote:
Sekai's Normal
- 01:01:915 (1,2) - Weird to follow vocals with this then ignore 01:02:590 - to map drums right after. Would suggest to map the red tick.
- 01:10:005 (3) - There's nothing on the red tick so important for this slider. The downbeat has way more stuff on it. I think it would be nicer if you put the slider to start there instead of on the red before it.

Overall the kiai feels like it switches between vocals and drums very liberally and I think that might be a bit troublesome for newer players to get their heads around. It might be nicer if you decided to stick to either drums or vocals rather than switch between both. Drums seem like the more obvious choice with vocals as a heavy secondary but you do you. I just think the kiai's rhythm could use some work.

i tried fixing because Sekaii is so busy right now (we talked on forum-pm).

he has followed drum in chorus (before kiai part), so i decided follow drum which as you said in kiai part.
should be fine now i guess!! (i have no confidence because my style is following vocal in normal diff lol)

thanks!!

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Mir 2017-11-10T15:23:29+00:00

Provide a valid metadata link and you can get me to bubble. Changes seem fine.

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Asuka_- 2017-11-10T15:44:21+00:00

@Mir thanks!!

meta t/653303/start=1

Title: クライングハート
Romanised Title: Crying Heart
Artist: アイリス・ディセンバー・アンクライ(花園めい)、ノエル・ザ・ネクストシーズン(雨場つかさ)
Romanied Artist: Iris December Uncry (Hanazono Mei), Noel the Nextseason (Ameba Tsukasa)
Source: ノラと皇女と野良猫ハート2 -Nora, Princess, and Crying Cat.-

ref screen captures (all official)

(from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP-OG3vm9h8& (Title, Tirle Unicode)

(from http://harukaze-soft.com/nora2/ (Sourse)

couldnt good capture >< (ディセンバー = "December" in japanese, so it should be fine.)

(from http://harukaze-soft.com/nora2/ (Artist, Artist Unicode)

Mir

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Mir 2017-11-10T16:38:23+00:00

all good

metadata is ^

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Asuka_- 2017-11-10T16:39:35+00:00

@Mir thanks~!

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Garden 2017-12-13T04:53:10+00:00

easy:
01:00:736 (4,1) - could swap nc

normal:
00:08:994 (2) - what is this even mapped to?
00:11:522 (2) - similarly, https://puu.sh/yFlrF/5fca686845.png would be enough
00:32:084 (3,4) - better if this is unstacked cuz most stacks are introduced as 1/2 gap
01:41:185 (1) - maybe make ending time consistent with other difficulties?

and some hitsounding suggestion (checked in insane, can probably apply to other diffs):
00:07:983 - should have a finish like 00:07:309 - ?
00:31:241 - random finish at the slider tail lol
00:51:129 - 00:52:646 - 00:53:826 - 01:06:129 - 01:07:309 - 01:07:983 - 01:16:915 - 01:18:264 - 01:18:769 - 01:34:275 - 01:41:017 - are also some potentially good spots for finishes

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Asuka_- 2017-12-13T12:17:01+00:00

Yasaija 714 cant log into osu now (his pc has been broken ;w;) ,so i try to fix.
Sekaii is still busy now, so im entrusted with checking & fixing.

Garden wrote:
easy:
01:00:736 (4,1) - could swap nc ok

normal:
00:08:994 (2) - what is this even mapped to? >< mapped with 3/4 reverse
00:11:522 (2) - similarly, https://puu.sh/yFlrF/5fca686845.png would be enough okay
00:32:084 (3,4) - better if this is unstacked cuz most stacks are introduced as 1/2 gap ok~
01:41:185 (1) - maybe make ending time consistent with other difficulties? fixed!!

and some hitsounding suggestion (checked in insane, can probably apply to other diffs):
00:07:983 - should have a finish like 00:07:309 - ?
00:31:241 - random finish at the slider tail lol
00:51:129 - 00:52:646 - 00:53:826 - 01:06:129 - 01:07:309 - 01:07:983 - 01:16:915 - 01:18:264 - 01:18:769 - 01:34:275 - 01:41:017 - are also some potentially good spots for finishes

ok applied to Easy, Normal, Insane. (Hard: all finishes where you pointed out were applied already.)

Thanks~!!>< ready!!