Kelly Clarkson - Because of You · forum

sixtysevenfrogs

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sixtysevenfrogs 2007-10-31T03:37:41+00:00

Hi. This is my first post here and I've decided to greet myself with a song. With the wonderful editor and awesome game(thanks peppy!), I've made Because of You by Kelly Clarkson. It's my first song and I know there is room for improvement. I think the bpm and offset are off as well.

http://osu.ppy.sh/d/148

I don't really like the beginning, but I am quite satisfied with the end though.

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Echo 2007-10-31T05:09:21+00:00

That was a good beatmap, nice placement of beats.

The crits:
- the song switches to 2/4 beat for one bar just before every chorus, which might have caused your timing problem. Technically, it wouldn't have caused a problem, but I've fixed this anyway, take a look at the new timing sections.
- at 2:33 there's a double note on top of the slider. It might have been a 1/8 note, but I wasn't too sure. I've deleted the extra beat.

Take a look at the attached osu file.

Download: Kelly Clarkson - Breakaway - Because Of You (SixtySevenFrogs) [Normal].osu

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peppy 2007-10-31T08:23:55+00:00

Well done. I don't have any complaints.

sixtysevenfrogs

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sixtysevenfrogs 2007-10-31T23:22:19+00:00

I must have added the extra note by accident. Thanks for the correction though. I knew looking for the first beat in the middle of the chorus wasn't such a good idea

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Hitoshirenu Shourai

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Hitoshirenu Shourai 2007-11-01T02:18:37+00:00

Personally, I think this would go better with soft sounds, but regardless, nicely done.

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Extor 2007-11-01T16:26:13+00:00

Have you uploaded the new version with that circle removed?
If that's the case I'll rank it now, so please, answer that. =D

sixtysevenfrogs

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sixtysevenfrogs 2007-11-01T19:33:38+00:00

Yeah, I re-uploaded it already. Thanks for the comments guys. I also considered using soft sounds but I wasn't too sure because then it would have been too soft.

Nintendonick4

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Nintendonick4 2007-11-09T23:02:26+00:00

Pretty good; I like the mapping near the middle the best. It seemed to make the most sense with the beat.

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GbL 2009-09-01T14:29:55+00:00

I cannot download this.