1. Hard (2.91 stars, 268 notes)
2. Insane (4 stars, 368 notes)
3. Normal (1.82 stars, 182 notes)

PeterEU wrote:

Hi from my queue i just want to say that you are better at mapping than me so my mod can be useless but here we go

General

Why combo colours are default? not anymore

Normal

00:06:111 (5) - this slider looks weird for me but i might be wrong would do that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246887 or at least something similar made it angled
00:10:171 (5,6,7) - well straight jumps i would make them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246893 I used them like this consistently so I'd rather keep
00:16:036 (3) - straight slider would be better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246912 but idk sure
00:18:855 (1) - isn't this spinner starting too early welp beginners could get more confused moved 1/4 later
00:47:164 (3) - maybe NC but idk nah, no reason to
01:16:487 (4) - maybe you should make blanket here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246934 I think the movement will be too weird for beginner with blanket and so many repeats

Hard

00:09:720 (1) - for me NC is unnecessary here removed nc at 00:10:171 - instead
00:39:946 (3,1) - yeah i can't understand NC here i would NC this like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246960 but not sure
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246960 isn't this ending too late 01:39:946 (1,2) are visible too early I'm just following new combos on downbeats, as it seems the most correct musically
01:48:517 (5,1,2) - ohh im again confused with combos i would NC this like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246984 ^

Insane

00:09:720 (1,2) - would combo them like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9246993 following downbeats as they are strong and nc emphasizes it well

sorry if my mod is useless

1. 00:09:720 (4) - drum sample on tail like 00:13:329 (5) - ?
2. 001:12:878 (4) - ^
3. 01:27:314 (5) - whisle on tail maybe, seems you used it for that sound later aswell like 01:34:081 (5) -
4. 01:48:968 (4) - drum sample tail
5. 01:53:479 (7,8) - could place this against the wall and rotate by 5 so 01:53:028 (6,7,8,1) - plays a bit more flowy

1. 01:13:104 (2) - drum sample
2. 01:14:682 (1,2,3,4) - could rotate 1 by -10 and then stack 3 under the tail to avoid the ds change in the combo while it still being visually structured with the next combos too like
   
3. 00:02:502 (1,2,1,1,2,3) - 01:41:750 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - bit inconsistent NC

Monstrata wrote:

General

Insane ends on the downbeat at 02:07:013 - , but your Hard and Normal for some reason end 1/6 of a beat later which doesn't seem intentional at all. made insane 1/6 instead, there's some ding sound on that tick

Insane

00:17:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - They just look too close together xP. Feels like a claustrophobic pattern lol it was a weaker version of 01:35:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - , but I just made it like 01:56:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - instead
00:35:660 (2,3) - Really big jump out of nowhere that doesn't fit with the spacing you've been using. Evel Ctrl+G'ing 3 would be better. changed first slider direction instead
00:44:457 (3) - Ctrl+G gives a mroe interesting flow, and its less sharp with the angle from 6>1 don't think flow matters here since movement is already stopped at the stack, but did anyway
00:59:570 (2,2) - These two circles sound quite overmapped compared to the previous two xP. I like how it follows the vocals, the 2s are pretty much just filler here
01:03:179 (2,2) - ^
01:16:938 (4) - better to NC them. The current NC looks kinda bad because the spacing clearly changes so the current combo feels disjointed visually. ok
01:24:607 (1,2,1,2) - No streams or anything? Compare it to 01:10:171 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - yea, this part has stronger 1/2 sounds imo
01:31:374 (4) - Same
01:35:209 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This spacing is good though.
01:51:675 (3) - Ctrl+G is more interesting imo tried it before, but sticked with having better flow instead

and maybe try this for circle 4?

nah want spacing for the downbeat

Hard

00:16:036 (3,4,5,1) - The stack kinda messes up your visual structure so adjust with that in mind. fixed
00:35:773 - This break isn't intentional so resnap it or remove it tried?
01:56:412 (2,3) - I think Ctrl+G'ing is easier cuz if you consider the slider movement of slider 4, the angle from 1>2 won't feel as sharp. yes

Normal

Fine

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Should be all. Metadata reference?
original title 24th track: https://i.imgur.com/NFtHtnp.jpg
romanised title: the audio file that came with the scan had this translation https://i.imgur.com/2fxlAMy.png
original artist: no idea, but it's the most commonly used everywhere
romanised artist: https://i.imgur.com/lHusa9W.png "Kaga" only for simplification seems to be used everywhere