ikari_kyon wrote:

hi x3 from keii&kyon's queue
15th personal mod

Hard

00:05:050 (3) - delete this? feels better without it
00:03:165 (5,6,7) - maybe use a bounce slider like 00:01:793 (2) ?
00:29:050 (x) - a note here?
00:29:736 (x) - ^
00:32:479 (x) - ^

Pangko

-yeah being a bit overmaper at taiko is not so bad at all, think about that, lazy taiko x3

00:01:108 (1) - from here can use the combo d d k k d d k k d d k k
00:04:193 (11) - then here a triple kkk for those k k
00:07:279 - d ddk
00:09:508 (37) - ddk
00:10:193 (39) - a note here
00:11:050 (40) - kkd
00:11:908 (44) - k
00:12:765 (47) - move this to 00:12:593
00:12:593 - a little don here
00:13:279 (49) - delete
00:16:536 (69) - five notes stream
00:17:241 - katsu
00:17:393 (72) - delete
00:20:307 (85) - ddd
00:20:993 (89) - move to 00:21:165
00:30:765 (138) - 3 notes stream
00:32:136 (144) - ^
00:33:508 (150) - ^
00:34:879 (156) - ^
00:40:879 (185) - from here ddd ddk dkk kkk ddddkkkkddddk k~
00:45:850 (213) - 3 notes stream
00:47:222 (219) - ^
00:48:593 (225) - 5 notes stream
00:49:365 (229) - delete it? is on a blue tick
00:51:422 - don
00:54:165 - don
00:55:622 (255) - ok from here get better
01:00:337 (284) - blue tick )=

Alace wrote:

I am sorry that i won't change anything here,can you explain what the lazy taiko diff is ?
I found the patterns which fit the music, they don't really overmapped i guess

ikari_kyon wrote:

Alace wrote:

I am sorry that i won't change anything here,can you explain what the lazy taiko diff is ?
I found the patterns which fit the music, they don't really overmapped i guess

I mean this taiko is very lazy, Im not a great taiko mapper or player but when I played this I almost get sleep, I suggest to put more streams for make it more funny to play, that is all, I like funny taiko diffs whit many streams

Shiirn wrote:

taiko
i hate people who do this with diff settings srsly.
it also doesn't even seem to bother trying to follow the song at all, but maybe i just suck at taiko.

SPOILER

Natteke wrote:

Wut? If you like hard maps, it doesn't mean every taiko map has to be hard. It perfectly fits the song in my opinion.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Pangko:
In general it's OK, but I'm with kyon. I think that BPM is high, and you can add some streams.
But I also know that it is your mapping form

ikari_kyon wrote:

Alace wrote:

I am sorry that i won't change anything here,can you explain what the lazy taiko diff is ?
I found the patterns which fit the music, they don't really overmapped i guess

I mean this taiko is very lazy, Im not a great taiko mapper or player but when I played this I almost get sleep, I suggest to put more streams for make it more funny to play, that is all, I like funny taiko diffs whit many streams

ikari_kyon wrote:

:D is ok dont mind me, Im newbie at moding and stuff so this is +1 on taiko moding experience :3

1. 00:17:050 (6) - add new combo?
2. 00:39:165 (5) - ^

1. Does not BG for drums make it?

1. OD-1
2. 00:36:593 (8) - add new combo
3. 00:47:050 (x) - add note?

1. 00:10:707 (3,4) - It is suggestion from me　
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:44:993 (1) - I do not see it behind a slider of 00:44:479　
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:13:450 (x) - add note?

1. There is no problem

• [Easy]

1. 01:13:793 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider as well as other diffs.

1. 00:05:908 (4) - It doesn't follow the music. Move it to 00:05:736 and change place with DS.
2. 00:10:022 (2,3) - IMO it's hard for normal player to read them because of the pattern which includes 3/8 length slider.
3. 00:55:965 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider.

• 
  Fine.

1. 00:30:936 (9) - Move it to x:256 y:352? (7,8,9,10,1) will be symmetry.

karenying wrote:

General
Tag 'Tenisu no Oujisama' ?
SB的想法不錯,不過好浪費,用color代碼改顏色不就好了嗎

Kiiwa's Normal
00:05:222 (3,4) - 改成這樣如何 http://puu.sh/8x0x
00:29:222 (1) - spinner擋住了slider尾...看這 http://puu.sh/8x0P
00:44:479 (1) - ^..這次擋頭

Hard
01:13:793 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡來個小跳如何,(1)newcombo

Insane最後的加速帥爆了
網王裡我喜歡不二

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for mod request~

[General]

• [Easy]

1. 01:13:793 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider as well as other diffs.

[Kiiwa's Normal]

1. 00:05:908 (4) - It doesn't follow the music. Move it to 00:05:736 and change place with DS.
2. 00:10:022 (2,3) - IMO it's hard for normal player to read them because of the pattern which includes 3/8 length slider.
3. 00:55:965 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider.

[Hard]

• 
  Fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:30:936 (9) - Move it to x:256 y:352? (7,8,9,10,1) will be symmetry.

Nice mapset! I couldn't find a big issue.
Good luck~

MoodyRPG wrote:

General
Clean

Easy
Ok

Normal
01:13:793 (1) - Remove new combo?

Hard
01:13:793 (4) - Maybe new combo? FIX

Insane
Ok

Good work

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi.

[General]
- I might advise using Tick Rate 2 on all difficulties here to make the sliders feel less empty and have HP recover appropriately during them. I guess the exception to this would be [Luka's Easy], where the slider velocity is set to a point where it causes ticks to disappear.
- [Insane] and [Hard] were made pretty well, couldn't find any outstanding flaws. So yeah, good job.

[Insane]
00:34:708 (3) - This overlaps with the HP bar a bit, which isn't really a big problem but it shouldn't be too hard to move it down.

[Hard]
- It's good.

[Kiiwa's Normal]
- Hm, have you read the slider guide? Some of your arcs are noticeably asymmetrical. You may also want to try to make smoother sliders. For example, you could smooth out this curve and make it more like this. Going through and changing all those sliders would be a bother, so they're okay for now. In the future, though, making pretty sliders is always nice.
00:18:936 (2) - Goes into the score numbers a bit, might look nicer if you try to avoid that.
00:22:365 (4,1) - I don't really like sliderend stacking on easier difficulties, especially since (1) comes 1/1 after (4), which could be confusing for people who might expect that they have to hit it earlier. Or something like that. I also feel like those patterns don't really "flow" well, as you're forced to stop moving your cursor and then have to wait to hit a note stacked under a slider. Anyway, perhaps unstack these, or perhaps not. If you care, there are also similar disturbances in the following locations.
00:34:708 (3,4) - ^
00:45:679 (2,3) - ^
00:57:336 (3,4) - ^
01:05:050 (2,1) - ^
01:11:050 (2,3) - ^
01:11:050 (2,3,1) - The slight overlap here is sort of unappealing, try to avoid it.

[Luka's Easy]
01:08:307 (1,2) - There aren't any other kicksliders like this in the difficulty, so it might be a bit disorienting for the player to have them here. Perhaps rearrange these a bit.

So yes, most everything was nice here, just a few things to sort out. Afterwards please PM for a re-check and I'll get to you as soon as I can, so thanks and bye.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Luka's Easy]
Some part could be made more prettier by using curved patterns ( you did use them in the 2nd part in a good manner however )
I guess that's not useful, like this sliders are better than like this
00:09:679 (x) - I think a circle here stay really good from how you mapped the rest, don't worry : it will remain an easy anyway
00:10:365 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/a8JJ , for me you could make this pattern better , you can curve it or even order in a more prettier manner
00:18:250 (1) - Valid for other as well curved like this seem better, while it not change the pattern that much...
00:20:993 (1) - A NC here seems more logical than here at 00:22:365 (1),
00:23:736 (4) - New Combo
00:43:965 (4) - I come when i did substitute this with a 1/2 long slider ( from that point to the red line ), as you here, do a triangle with 00:43:279 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/a8Mh
00:44:993 (1,2) - I suggest rape this pattern. It give a reason for that part gorgheggio to exist!

00:55:965 (1,2,3,4,5) - Substitute with that same pattern with a different placement :3

Guess i should've done a by-zone modding, anyway it isn't that long... the map was good minus some graphics majorly

[Kiiwa's Normal]
00:08:650 (3,4) - I suggest a little change :3

00:17:908 (x) - I know someone just said (i don't readed the mods...) that notes after spinner are nono. But if deleting a note after spinner in a normal means deleting a really easy-to-take note... it's still OK. So add an Hit Circle

Other than that, the difficulty felt really, the two of those are simply suggestion.

[Hard]
You really did became much better than the first time i modde a map of yours :3
00:34:708 (3) - A tad curved, to follow the curve formed with the circle after :3


Any more than this would be really shameless :3

[Pangko]
You can just ignore this as i'm not a Taiko modder(neither player...)
00:01:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - dk dk kd kd or dd dk dk kk, just a more variying pattern ;3
00:36:593 (163) - you can make it a k(not K) ...
00:54:936 (252) - simply move this in 00:54:850 (252) -
00:55:279 (253) - simply move it in 00:55:108 (253) -
01:14:307 (31) - a K ?,?

[Insane]
00:00:765 (x,x,x,x) - you can map this 1/4 stream ? =口=.....
00:43:622 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like this jump-pattern that much, try some shapes? (diamond? traingle with return?) or maybe a zig zag with a crescendo in the spacing ( 1.2x -> 1.3x -> 1.6x/1.4x -> 1.6x -> 2.0x ) as the music DO suggest :3

Deserved Star :3