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General
Poii's Kantan
Futsuu
Muzukashii
Oni
Inner Oni
◾ I think the OD spread should be 3.5/4/4.5/5/6, or just lower the kantan's od to 2 like a normal set would.
◾ 00:32:644 - Make this D like the rest of the diffs.
◽ 00:41:810 - Make this K like the rest of the diffs.
◾ 00:48:644 - This is exactly identical to the pattern before it. Try deleting 00:51:977 (23) - this and placing a note after 00:52:644 (24) - this so it isn't so boring and repetitive like the first 75% of the map.
◽ 00:41:810 - Make this K like the rest of the diffs.
◾ 00:48:644 - This is exactly identical to the pattern before it. Try deleting 00:51:977 (23) - this and placing a note after 00:52:644 (24) - this so it isn't so boring and repetitive like the first 75% of the map.
◾ 00:11:977 - I know there aren't many changes, but make the ones in this diff less impactful because it's a lower diff. You can keep the 0.6, but make it only speed up to about 0.8. It's less sudden and since the kantan is fully 0.75, it will fit more to the spread.
◽ 00:17:977 - Here the same exact noises as before are mapped completely differently (kddk versus kkdd). If you're going to map pitch relevance, do it consistently.
◾ 00:33:977 - Why not map this d here as well? In lower diff especially, you should stick to mapping the first beat of each measure unless you're explicitly allowed not to.
◽ 00:43:310 - You should include some 1/2 in this section to warm up player for the kiai. Maybe one 1/2 pattern per pattern, since in the kiai there's 2 in a row every pattern.
◾ 01:04:311 (125) - Change this to k to be consistent with every other diff.
◽ 00:17:977 - Here the same exact noises as before are mapped completely differently (kddk versus kkdd). If you're going to map pitch relevance, do it consistently.
◾ 00:33:977 - Why not map this d here as well? In lower diff especially, you should stick to mapping the first beat of each measure unless you're explicitly allowed not to.
◽ 00:43:310 - You should include some 1/2 in this section to warm up player for the kiai. Maybe one 1/2 pattern per pattern, since in the kiai there's 2 in a row every pattern.
◾ 01:04:311 (125) - Change this to k to be consistent with every other diff.
◾ 00:28:644 - These 4 notes here aren't mapped kkdd like they were in the past two phrases. (this is in every diff above as well)
◾ 00:53:977 - I don't know what else to tell you than this pattern is boring. There are triples you're missing, the counter-melody that plays on the blue ticks, etc., but you still just copy pasted this boring pattern that is barely correlated to the music. Here is a suggestion of something I would map in an Oni for this song
◾ This one isn't as bad, but you're still missing a bunch of stuff in the kiai and pre-kiai that could be bettered by just listening to the music closer.