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Here I go!

http://puu.sh/ydVzH/7955bdb129.osu


Tried to make it a little Futkan xD
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From my modding queue~

[General]
Maybe add "breakcore" to tags? It's not really covered by the music genres

[xfrac's Futsuu]
00:18:900 (53) - Switch with 00:18:900 (53)?
00:28:500 (81) - k for pattern variety? It'd also be consistent with 00:18:900 (53).
00:38:100 (109) - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:18:300 (67) - d sounds better imo
00:19:800 (75) - d to follow the bass?
00:25:800 (114) - ^
00:32:100 (156) - d for consistency with 00:27:300 (123) and 00:36:900 (186)
00:29:250 (137,138,139,140,141,142) - kkdkkdd?
00:38:400 (198) - d?

[tasuke's Oni]
00:25:350 (52,53,54) - ddk flows better imo
00:25:650 (55) - d? I think it's a good replacement for 1/6. You also used dkk for 00:35:700 (64,65,66), which doesn't sound the same.
00:26:100 (59) - d, like you used at 00:35:700 (64)?
00:36:975 (75) - d? dkk should only be used at 00:26:100 (59,60,61) and 00:35:700 (64,65,66) imo

[Inner Oni]
00:10:500 (33,34,35,36,37) - ddkkd?

Good luck with ranking this! :)
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Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~

[General]
Maybe add "breakcore" to tags? It's not really covered by the music genres ✔ - Hm, okay.

[Muzukashii]
00:18:300 (67) - d sounds better imo ✖ - It sounds higher then past note.
00:19:800 (75) - d to follow the bass? ✖ - No, I don't want to make kkd patters for Muzu diff.
00:25:800 (114) - ^ ✖ - ^
00:32:100 (156) - d for consistency with 00:27:300 (123) and 00:36:900 (186) ✖ - There is a specific sound for this.
00:29:250 (137,138,139,140,141,142) - kkdkkdd? ✔ - Sounds nice, I like it.
00:38:400 (198) - d? ✖ - ^

[Inner Oni]
00:10:500 (33,34,35,36,37) - ddkkd? ✖ - No, i have ddkkd pattern here 00:14:100 (63) -

Good luck with ranking this! :)

Thanks for mod! :)
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Hi~

[ Overall]
  1. Currently, OD,HP setting is duplicate on some difficulty. Change OD,HP on some difficulty to make a variance on OD,HP setting.

    Current OD,HP setting
    xfrac's Futsuu / Muzukashii / tasuke's Oni / Inner Oni = 4,7 / 4,7 / 6,7 / 6,7

    You'll notice that HP is equal on all difficulty and OD is duplicate on some difficulty. Even this music is short. But the difference of OD,HP in each difficulty is still needed imo.


[xfrac's Futsuu]
Already good! :3

[Muzukashii]
00:57:375 (2,3) - Delete this might be better imo since this pitch is not a flow. It's only distinguish on 00:57:300 (1)

[tasuke's Oni]
00:05:700 - Change to d , the bg pitch which you've follow here is same to 00:04:800
00:26:100 - Change to d , the pitch is not like 00:26:175 (30,31)
00:26:850 - Change to d , in order to emphasize 00:26:925 (66) pitch.
00:37:575 - Change to d , the pitch is not like 00:37:500 (80,82)

[Inner Oni]
00:13:350 - Change to k , the pitch is like 00:13:150. Maybe we should change for consistence.
00:14:175 - Change to k , sounds similar to 00:14:250 (65,66) imo.
00:22:500 - Change to d might be better.
00:40:650 (322,323,324) - Change to k , the pitch is like 00:22:350 (134,135,136,137) imo.
00:57:300 - Make this point same as Futsuu might be better for the consistency.

Pretty nice map!
Good luck! :D
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Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~

[ Overall]
  1. Currently, OD,HP setting is duplicate on some difficulty. Change OD,HP on some difficulty to make a variance on OD,HP setting.

    Current OD,HP setting
    xfrac's Futsuu / Muzukashii / tasuke's Oni / Inner Oni = 4,7 / 4,7 / 6,7 / 6,7

    You'll notice that HP is equal on all difficulty and OD is duplicate on some difficulty. Even this music is short. But the difference of OD,HP in each difficulty is still needed imo.
✔ - Ok, I changed OD to 3-4-5-6. But I'll find out what xfrac and tasuke think about it.

[Muzukashii]
00:57:375 (2,3) - Delete this might be better imo since this pitch is not a flow. It's only distinguish on 00:57:300 (1) ✖ - This sound ends at 00:57:450 (3), so triaple is better here imo.

[Inner Oni]
00:13:350 - Change to k , the pitch is like 00:13:150. Maybe we should change for consistence. ✔ - Ok, changed.
00:14:175 - Change to k , sounds similar to 00:14:250 (65,66) imo. ✔ - Changed.
00:22:500 - Change to d might be better. ✖ - This sound is similar to 00:22:350 (134,135,136), so k is better for me.
00:40:650 (322,323,324) - Change to k , the pitch is like 00:22:350 (134,135,136,137) imo. ✖ - These sounds are different I think.
00:57:300 - Make this point same as Futsuu might be better for the consistency. ✖ - ^

Pretty nice map! Thank you ~
Good luck! :D

Thanks for your help! :)

@xfraczynho
@tasuke912
I changed OD to 3-4-5-6 in mapset for better spread. If you are against this, tell me and I'll return everything back.
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Protonori wrote:

[xfrac's Futsuu]
00:18:900 (53) - Switch with 00:18:900 (53)?
D: it's the same note, i think you wanted to say 00:19:200 (54) - but actually is good =/
00:28:500 (81) - k for pattern variety? It'd also be consistent with 00:18:900 (53).
oki
00:38:100 (109) - ^
oki

Tyistiana wrote:

[xfrac's Futsuu]
Already good! :3
Thanks ~
Thank you both for the mod!
TB19: Yeah it is fine, use these : D
http://puu.sh/yuefB/56b2b96ba7.osu
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Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~

[tasuke's Oni]
00:25:350 (52,53,54) - ddk flows better imo fixed. it doesn't affect the flow so much but it actually works for the consistency with the second half kiai time.
00:25:650 (55) - d? I think it's a good replacement for 1/6. You also used dkk for 00:35:700 (64,65,66), which doesn't sound the same. i don't think so. it's 1/8 btw
00:26:100 (59) - d, like you used at 00:35:700 (64)? fixed
00:36:975 (75) - d? dkk should only be used at 00:26:100 (59,60,61) and 00:35:700 (64,65,66) imo i don't get why. but ddk is not bad here

Good luck with ranking this! :)

Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~

[ Overall]
[list]
[tasuke's Oni]
00:05:700 - Change to d , the bg pitch which you've follow here is same to 00:04:800 Just because the pitch is same, it doesn't mean that one-color pattern is better than two-color-patterns. In this case dk works to emphasize next don notes.
00:26:100 - Change to d , the pitch is not like 00:26:175 (30,31) not that reason, but changed.
00:26:850 - Change to d , in order to emphasize 00:26:925 (66) pitch.
00:37:575 - Change to d , the pitch is not like 00:37:500 (80,82)
Sorry but pitch-style really doesn't fit to my mapping style.

Pretty nice map!
Good luck! :D


Thank for mods :D
http://puu.sh/yuwFr/fe218285c1.osu
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Updated.
Thanks for everyone. :)
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oh chiptune, you beautiful genre
seriously how can you people map so good ;_;

-General-
Why all HP's are 7?, Could have gone with 9,8,7,6 or something similar since the song is short
also nice offset uwu
Futsuu is at 2 stars, maybe ask frac to nerf or make a kantan (Already requested him to nerf a bit)
Muzukashii & Inner Oni have different playtime compared to Futsuu & Oni, because they have notes at 00:57:375 - & 00:57:450 - whereas Futsuu & Oni do not
Note ammount:
Futsuu-100->Muzukashii-87->Oni-54->Inner Oni
Maybe wanna buff Inner? IDK

-xfrac's Futsuu-
Quizas quieras nerfear un poco, esta en 2 estrellas, y ya me parece muy dificil para un futsuu, sugiero que te consigas un kantan xD
00:09:600 (25) - finisher quizas? enfatiza el cambio de ritmo
00:19:200 (54) - ^ enfatiza el comienzo de kiai
00:28:800 (82) - ^ para que sea consistente con la sugerencia anterior
Muy bueno su futsuu mr frac
literal estaba comiendo galletas FRAC mientras modeaba esta diff xD, eran de chocolate y estaban ricas xD

-Muzukashii-
00:08:400 (24) - Maybe k? so its consistent with 00:06:000 (17) - , and we make the variation 1 note per pattern
00:09:600 (27) - Could use a finisher to emphasize the change of rhythm
00:19:200 (70) - ^ for the start of kiai
00:27:600 - Im not sure about this pattern, maybe a bit too hard for muzu players? if so then consider deleting 00:27:825 (128) -
00:38:100 - ^ and consider deleting 00:38:325 (193) -
IDK how to mod muzukashii, but its pretty good!

-tasuke's Oni-
whistle hitsound zzzz
00:09:600 (9) - Why not use finisher to emphasize the change of rhythm?
00:19:200 (1) - ^ but for the start of kiai too
00:28:800 (1) - ^ so its consistent with the previous suggestion if you applied it
Didn't you go a bit overboard at the Kiai? feels nearly inner level (too many 5-plets and 00:37:800 - this part is a bit too long imo)
Its very good though

-Inner Oni-
00:08:400 (24) - Maybe k? so its consistent with 00:06:000 (17) - , and we make the variation 1 note per pattern
00:09:600 (27) - Could use finisher to emphasize the change of rhythm
00:19:200 (103) - ^ & for the kiai
very well made, a bit too similar to the oni though lol

Good luck with the map!
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From that nifty queue~

xfrac's Futsuu

◾ 00:00:000 (1) - If this is gonna be mapped, I find it misleading to not map this00:00:900 - , but mapping that would be too difficult so I suggest just to not map the beat 1.
◽ 00:27:600 - Do these a d like every other diff has them as.
◾ 00:28:500 (80) - These pitches are noticeably tinnier and higher, so make this k.
◽ 00:48:000 - It's better if all of these are d, it's the same note and every other diff has spinners which are all pretty much the same thing.
Muzukashii

◾ 00:57:300 - I really think this should just be one note, playing 3 doesn't feel right especially when it's so separated from all of the other actual notes.
◽ In general it's fine, but I'm gonna bring up some stuff in the inner oni concerning this diff.
tasuke's Oni

◾ 00:27:150 - These 3 patterns in a row are a pretty large difficulty spike related to the rest of the map.
◽ 00:57:300 - I know this is a gd and all, but would it hurt that much to at least make the last note consistent.
Inner Oni

◾ 00:00:000 - This beginning is the exact same as the muzu, I would like to see some sort of progression. Inners are supposed to be mapped to a song's full potential, so placing notes places like ◽ 00:00:900 - here is appropriate and would show a better spread.
◾ 00:43:800 - The oni is more difficult here, please add some improv so it matches the oni a bit.
◽ 00:48:000 - I would like to see this note mapped as well like it is in tasuke's diff.
◾ 00:57:300 - same comment as muzu.

yuppr
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hi, from queue

[xfrac's Futsuu]

this diff is nice tho

[Muzukashii]

00:19:650 (73,74,75) - just my opinion but i think ddd is easier and flows very well...
00:25:650 (110,111,112) - ^
00:20:100 - delete, for shorter pattern. Also diff flows well imo...
00:24:900 - ^
00:26:100 - ^
00:20:250 - change to d, because kick
00:25:350 - d beacuse kick
00:26:550 - ^
00:27:000 - this kick is really low, i can barely hear it, delete?

if you accept something please apply in similars 00:28:800 - 00:38:400 - this section i guess...


[tasuke's Oni]

00:24:900 (47,48,49,50,51) - that 5plet feel really weird because 00:24:900 - this sound is really high for d. In my opinion kkdkd fit perfect with background music
00:34:500 (52,53,54,55,56) - ^
00:36:825 - add note? i hear sound and it's similar with 00:27:225 -
00:37:575 - why this is not d? the sound is considerably low compared to 00:37:500 - and 00:37:650 -


[Inner Oni]

00:22:500 - When I hear that, I feel a slight difference compared to the previous ones, change to d?
00:23:025 - why that note is not d? I think the sound is not sharp enough to be k, comparing it with 00:23:100 - 00:23:250 - 00:23:325 - which are clearly k
00:24:225 - this sound is very high imo, k?
00:33:825 - ^
00:39:300 (310,311,312,313,314) - i think this pattern sounds like dkdkd instead of ddkkd...
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Hello Black, from my queue:
Sorry for a late mod:

[Kantan]
  1. No Kantan for this map?


[xfrac's Futsuu]
  1. 00:21:300 (60, 61): Ctrl + G? Melody's pitch at note 61 is lower than note 60.
  2. 00:23:700: Remove? I don't know but I don't hear anything. In your way, I know that you have a connective on the pattern to follow the melody's pitch but I recommend you to remove that because it's confusing me
  3. 00:28:500: Same as I mentioned above


[Muzukashii]
  1. I don't want to make you angry but I think this diff is a bit overmapped. Some pattern is too long, mostly on the kiai. I suggest you removing this -
    00:21:150 - 00:23:850 - 00:28:650 - 00:36:450 I think it should be a bit better now. :D
  2. 00:57:375: The triplets are unecessary, remove this


[tasuke's Oni]
  1. 00:23:850: Pattern maybe very long, remove this?
  2. 00:33:450: Same as above I mentioned


[Inner Oni]
  1. Looks great in my sight


(´・ω・`)
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