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Protonori wrote:
From my modding queue~
[General]
Maybe add "breakcore" to tags? It's not really covered by the music genres ✔ - Hm, okay.
[Muzukashii]
00:18:300 (67) - d sounds better imo ✖ - It sounds higher then past note.
00:19:800 (75) - d to follow the bass? ✖ - No, I don't want to make kkd patters for Muzu diff.
00:25:800 (114) - ^ ✖ - ^
00:32:100 (156) - d for consistency with 00:27:300 (123) and 00:36:900 (186) ✖ - There is a specific sound for this.
00:29:250 (137,138,139,140,141,142) - kkdkkdd? ✔ - Sounds nice, I like it.
00:38:400 (198) - d? ✖ - ^
[Inner Oni]
00:10:500 (33,34,35,36,37) - ddkkd? ✖ - No, i have ddkkd pattern here 00:14:100 (63) -
Good luck with ranking this!
Tyistiana wrote:
Hi~
[ Overall]✔ - Ok, I changed OD to 3-4-5-6. But I'll find out what xfrac and tasuke think about it.
- Currently, OD,HP setting is duplicate on some difficulty. Change OD,HP on some difficulty to make a variance on OD,HP setting.
Current OD,HP setting
xfrac's Futsuu / Muzukashii / tasuke's Oni / Inner Oni = 4,7 / 4,7 / 6,7 / 6,7
You'll notice that HP is equal on all difficulty and OD is duplicate on some difficulty. Even this music is short. But the difference of OD,HP in each difficulty is still needed imo.
[ Muzukashii]
00:57:375 (2,3) - Delete this might be better imo since this pitch is not a flow. It's only distinguish on 00:57:300 (1) ✖ - This sound ends at 00:57:450 (3), so triaple is better here imo.
[ Inner Oni]
00:13:350 - Change to k , the pitch is like 00:13:150. Maybe we should change for consistence. ✔ - Ok, changed.
00:14:175 - Change to k , sounds similar to 00:14:250 (65,66) imo. ✔ - Changed.
00:22:500 - Change to d might be better. ✖ - This sound is similar to 00:22:350 (134,135,136), so k is better for me.
00:40:650 (322,323,324) - Change to k , the pitch is like 00:22:350 (134,135,136,137) imo. ✖ - These sounds are different I think.
00:57:300 - Make this point same as Futsuu might be better for the consistency. ✖ - ^
Pretty nice map! Thank you ~
Good luck!
Protonori wrote:
[xfrac's Futsuu]
00:18:900 (53) - Switch with 00:18:900 (53)?
D: it's the same note, i think you wanted to say 00:19:200 (54) - but actually is good =/
00:28:500 (81) - k for pattern variety? It'd also be consistent with 00:18:900 (53).
oki
00:38:100 (109) - ^
oki
Thank you both for the mod!Tyistiana wrote:
[ xfrac's Futsuu]
Already good! :3
Thanks ~
Protonori wrote:
SPOILERFrom my modding queue~
[tasuke's Oni]
00:25:350 (52,53,54) - ddk flows better imo fixed. it doesn't affect the flow so much but it actually works for the consistency with the second half kiai time.
00:25:650 (55) - d? I think it's a good replacement for 1/6. You also used dkk for 00:35:700 (64,65,66), which doesn't sound the same. i don't think so. it's 1/8 btw
00:26:100 (59) - d, like you used at 00:35:700 (64)? fixed
00:36:975 (75) - d? dkk should only be used at 00:26:100 (59,60,61) and 00:35:700 (64,65,66) imo i don't get why. but ddk is not bad here
Good luck with ranking this!Tyistiana wrote:
SPOILERHi~
[ Overall]
[list]
[ tasuke's Oni]
00:05:700 - Change to d , the bg pitch which you've follow here is same to 00:04:800 Just because the pitch is same, it doesn't mean that one-color pattern is better than two-color-patterns. In this case dk works to emphasize next don notes.
00:26:100 - Change to d , the pitch is not like 00:26:175 (30,31) not that reason, but changed.
00:26:850 - Change to d , in order to emphasize 00:26:925 (66) pitch.
00:37:575 - Change to d , the pitch is not like 00:37:500 (80,82)
Sorry but pitch-style really doesn't fit to my mapping style.
Pretty nice map!
Good luck!
Thank for mods
http://puu.sh/yuwFr/fe218285c1.osu