Hey There \o/
From
my modding queue:
I really like the song
Had a fun time modding this!
Cry ---00:23:898 - If you move it up like
this it feels nicer
00:28:248 (1) - This one is a little close to the slider before it
00:29:448 (7) - There is a snare there in the background that gets kinda lost if you dont put a note on it. So i'd suggest you place a circle here (00:29:298) and a slider from 00:29:448 - 00:29:598.
00:37:698 - This break is really hard to read, since the triple is really close to the (5). This can easily be fixed by placing a circle there
00:44:748 (7,8) - Not a bad jump, but the way it overlaps with (5) looks kinda unpleasant. Try placing them like
this.00:47:148 (4) - Consider placing a NC here to not end up on an 11 counter
01:01:248 - While a break here fits well in the song, it makes the next (1) really hard to see. I'd place a circle there and place it somewhere on the right part of the jump section
01:09:948 (1) - Why New Combo?
01:10:848 (5,6,7) - These are not properly stacked.
01:12:048 (9) - Make this a New Combo and not 01:12:948 (1,1,1) because there is no connection between them anyway because they're so
close to each other. Also, try to add some
zigg-zagg variation to it
It helps the flow
01:44:898 - Same problem as earlier. It feels weird to stop there
01:54:648 (5,6,7) - These are not properly Stacked either. The (5) is a little bit further apart from the (6) than the (7) is. Its small details like this which will make your map look professional.
01:57:648 (1,1,2) - You
can introduce this part with circles. However, you need to really show which notes are when to hit! You can do that by adjusting the spacing like
this. Otherwise this part will be very irritation for a lot of players.
02:08:448 - Same problem as earlier. Either place a note in the break or think of another way to make the (1) pop out more
02:17:148 (1) - Why new combo here?
02:18:048 (5,1,2) - Again the triples xD
02:18:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Wouldnt a more spaced stream feel better here? Its in the chorus and even Kiai Mode. You can make it harder
02:21:648 (1) - This seems too far away from (4)
02:26:448 - Insert Break Time here to prefent HP from draining
02:32:898 (1,2) - This is too hard to make out. Try placing a slider at (1) and put the velocity to 0.5! Its nicer that way
02:43:998 (3) - This break is hard to make out too... Either let the slider start at 02:43:848, or think of another way to make this easier to read for people who don't know the song. It's kinda hard to place a note on an improvised vocal like this one :/
02:55:698 (1,2,3,4) - These look like they have to be hit like the ones you placed here 02:53:448 (1,2). You shouldnt make them look the same. Maybe move them apart so they dont touch anymore
03:11:448 (5) - This one looks like its too far away from (4)
03:21:049 (5) - ^
Really fun map tho! Just make sure that people who don't know the song will be able to read it
Good Luck!